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话题写作培优册
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(传统节日和习俗介绍;文化活动介绍;传统艺术介绍)
【教材单元链接】
人教版
九全 Unit2节日 九全 Unit5中国制造的事物 九全 Unit10风俗习惯
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开头句
1.TheSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportant
festivalsinChina,andeveryChinesefamilycel
ebratesit.
2.AsoneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals,ithas
beenenjoyinggreatpopularityinourcountry.
3.OnMay19,ourschoolorganizedmanytradition
alculturalactivities.IwashappythatIlearned
alot.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
角度1 传统节日和习俗
★AstheDragonBoatFestivalwascoming,I
decidedtomakeaXiangBaoforyou.Peoplein
China,especialychildrenwearitatthefestival.
Webelieveitcanbringusgoodluck.Tomakeit,I
preparedsomestringsandasmalbagthatlooks
likeazongzi.Ialsocolectedsomeleavesofaspe
cialplantcaledAiCao.Then,IputAiCaointo
thebagandtieditwiththestrings.
角度2 传统艺术
★BeijingOperacomesfirst.AsoneofChi
nesenationaltreasures,BeijingOperacomesfrom
“Huiban”andithasthreeparts,includingsinging,
dancingandspeaking.Itsfuloffamousstoriesand
itislovedbyChinesepeopleofalages.
★SugarpaintingisaformoftraditionalChi
nesefolkhandwork.Asitsnamesuggests,itisa
paintingmadeofsugar.Sugarpaintingisbothsugar
andpainting,sopeoplecannotonlywatchitbut
alsoeatit.Itisoftenmadeindiferentshapeslike
dragonsandbuterflies.AsasymbolofChinese
culture,sugarpaintingislovedbypeopleofal
ages.Besides,itisalsowelcomedinmanyforeign
countries.
角度3 文化活动
★Firstly,weenjoyedlocaloperas.Thoughwe
didntwatchoperasmuch,thewonderfulperform
anceatractedusdeeplyandwefeltthebeautyof
traditionalculture.Next,wevisitedthemuseum,
wherewelearnedalotoftraditionalcultureandhow
tomaketea.
★OurschoolheldthefirstHanCostumeFesti
valattheschoolhalonSeptember15th,2024.At
thebeginningofthefestival,somestudentsintro
ducedafewHancostumes.Theircolors,materials
andstylesweresofantasticthatwefelinlovewith
theHanCostumeatonce.Then,weenjoyedasuc
cessfulfashionshowontheHanCostume.Atlast,
therewasaclothingdesigncompetitioninorderto
enrichstudentsactivitiesafterclass.
结尾句
1.Theseactivitieshavenotonlyhelpedmehavea
beterunderstandingofourculture,butalsoleft
alastinginfluenceonmyheartandmind.
2.Now,Irealyunderstandthebeautyoftradition
alChineseculture.Improudofmycountry.
3.Bylearningthoseskils,studentscanlearnmore
aboutChinasrichculture.Atthesametime,
learningitcanhelpstudentsdevelopasenseof
nationalpride.
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众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版)
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为了坚持讲好中国故事,传播好中国声音,你校英文刊正在开展以“TelTraditionalChineseSto
riesWel”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享一个你熟悉的中国传统故事
(如:YuGongMovesMountains愚公移山;TheRabbitandtheTurtle龟兔赛跑;LookattheSkyfromthe
BotomofaWel坐井观天。),并谈谈你从中得到的启示。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:讲述传统故事时以 为主,介绍这个故事带给自己的启发时用 ;
③人称:介绍传统故事里的主人公时用第 人称,介绍“我”从故事中学到的道理时用第
人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 表明写作意图:引出要介绍的传统故事
参考句型:①playanimportantrolein爥;②wouldliketodosth.
例:中国传统故事在中国文化中扮演着重要的角色。(汉译英)
第二段 具体阐述传统故事内容
参考句型:①so爥that爥;②catchupwithsb./sth.;③insistondoingsth.
例:Theturtleinsistedonpulinghimselfslowlytotheend.Theturtlewasquitetired.
(用though引导的让步状语从句升格句子)
第三段 结语:受到的启发
参考句型:①remindsb.+that从句;②Astheoldsayinggoes,爥;③takesth.seriously;
④notonly爥 butalso爥
例:Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslyinmystudy.Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslyin
mylifeinthefuture.(用notonly爥butalso爥升格句子)
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话题写作培优册
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
TelTraditionalChineseStoriesWel
TraditionalChinesestoriesareimportantin
Chineseculture.Now,Idliketointroducea
storycaledTheRabbitandtheTurtle.
Onedayarabbitandaturtlehadarace.
Firstly,therabbitranveryfast.Hequicklyleft
theturtlefarbehind.Thenhethought,“IfI
haveasleepnow,theturtlecantcatchupwith
me,either.”Thenheslept.However,thetur
tlekeptgoingslowlytotheend.Lastly,the
turtlewonthegame.
Fromthisstory,IthinkIshouldtakeeach
taskseriouslyinmystudyandlife.
TelTraditionalChineseStoriesWel
TraditionalChinesestoriesplayanimportantrolein
Chineseculture.Now,Idliketointroduceawelknownstory
caledTheRabbitandtheTurtle.
Onedayarabbitandaturtlehadarace.Atfirst,the
rabbitransofastthathequicklylefttheturtlefarbehind.A
momentofpridewentthroughhismind,“IfIhaveasleep
now,theturtlecantcatchupwithme,either.”Thenhe
slept.However,theturtleinsistedonpulinghimselfslowly
totheend,thoughhewasquitetired.Atlast,theturtlewon
thegame.
Thestoryremindsmethatsomethingwhichseemsim
possiblecanbeachievedifsomeoneputsalhisefortinto
it.AndIthinkIshouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynotonlyin
mystudy,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture.
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一、句子升格练习
1.MyfavoritefestivalistheWaterFestival.Ithas
beenhandeddownasanationalcustom for
hundredsofyears.(用which引导定语从句)
2.Peoplecansplashwateroneachothertoexpress
theirbestwishes.IliketheWaterFestival.(用
because引导原因状语从句)
3.Theroundmooncakesandafulmoonaresym
bolsofbeingtogether.(用 Peoplebelieve+宾
语从句引导)
4.Thespiritisstilthesame.Peoplecelebratethe
holiday.(用 nomaterhow引导让步状语从
句)
二、书面表达
你校英文刊正在开展以“MyFavoriteFesti
val”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向
专栏投稿,分享一次你记忆深刻的节日庆祝经历
(如:TheWaterFestival泼水节,MidAutumnFes
tival中秋节,SpringFestival春节等),或分享一下
你最喜欢的传统节日及节日里的活动。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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云南英语(课标版)
Lastmonth,ourteacheraskedustomakeabook
report.Ourteammembersdecidedtoworktogethertodothe
task.Ilikereadingnovelsandalwayshaveabeter
understandingofthecharacters,soIoferedtopickoutthe
excitingpartsofthenovel.MyfriendAmysearchedforsome
informationaboutthewriterwhileothermembersreadsome
reviewsonline.Throughtheteamwork,thereportgotgreat
success.
Fromthisexperience,Ibelievethatworkingtogethernot
onlybringsushappinessbutalsoleadsustosuccess.
说明文范文
ManyHandsMakeLightWork
ThereisanoldsayinginChina,“Unityisstrength.”It
telspeopletheimportanceofteamwork.Bydiscussingwith
membersintheteam,wecancomeupwiththebeterideas.
Buthowtobeagoodteammember?Herearesomeadvicefor
you.
First,thereisnodoubtthatcommunicationcanhelpus
knowmoreaboutourteammates.Weshouldlistentoother
peopleactivelyandexpressourselvesbravely.Second,work
togetheronprojects.Wheneverybodyaddsfuel,theflames
risehigh.Finaly,trustyourteammates.
Alinal,teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdaily
life.Letsworktogethertocreateabrighterfuture.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③三;一
二、第一段 TraditionalChinesestoriesplayanimportantrole
inChineseculture.;第二段 Theturtleinsistedonpuling
himselfslowlytotheend,thoughhewasquitetired.;第
三段 Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynotonlyinmy
study,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.MyfavoritefestivalistheWaterFestival,whichhas
beenhandeddownasanationalcustomforhundredsof
years.
2.IliketheWaterFestivalbecausepeoplecansplashwater
oneachothertoexpresstheirbestwishes.
3.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandafulmoon
aresymbolsofbeingtogether.
4.Nomaterhowpeoplecelebratetheholiday,thespiritis
stilthesame.
二、记叙文范文
MyFavoriteFestival
MyfavoritefestivalistheWaterFestival,whichhas
beenhandeddownasanationalcustom forhundredsof
years.IliketheWaterFestivalbecausepeoplecansplash
wateroneachothertoexpresstheirbestwishesandhopeto
washawaydiseases.
Duringthefestival,wecanwatchtraditionalcelebra
tionssuchasdragonboatracing,raising,watersplashingand
soon.DaiandWapeoplealsodresseduptocelebratethe
WaterFestivalwithtourists.
说明文范文
MyFavoriteFestival
WheneverIamaskedaboutmyfavoritefestival,Itel
peoplethatitisMidAutumnFestival.Itsbecausethefesti
valbringsfamiliestogether.
Eatingmooncakesisthemostimportanttraditionofthis
festival.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandaful
moonaresymbolsofbeingtogether.Intheevening,families
havedinnertogetherandthengoouttoadmirethefulmoon.
Besides,myfamilyandIareusedtogoingonatrip.Itofers
usagoodchancetorelaxbecausepeoplearesmalerthanon
otherpublicholidays.
Nomaterhowpeoplecelebratetheholiday,thespiritis
stilthesame.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Somesmartlightscanworkbythemselvesifpeo
plegiveorderstothem.;第二段 Somestudentsdepend
onsmartproductssomuchthattheywillosetheirabili
tiestodothingsbythemselves.;第三段 Ifweusesmart
productscorectly,theywilbringusamoreconvenient
lifeinthefuture.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisthedevelopmentofsciencethatcreatesmanyin
ventionsthathelpuslivebeter.
2.Ifindthattheelectriccarseemstobefaster.
3.Newenergyvehiclesarenotonlycheapbutalsoenviron
mentalyfriendly.
4.Electriccarsarepopularwithmanypeoplebecauseelec
tricitycanbegotindiferentways.
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