内容正文:
众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版)
!"
5
# KL>MN(2023)
(如何健康生活;如何处理孤独、烦恼;最喜欢的运动;健康正确的运动方法)
【教材单元链接】
人教版 课标版
七上Unit6食物 八下Unit1健康与急救
八上Unit1体育运动 八上Unit2健康
八下Unit6享受骑自行车
!" #$%&
开头句
1.Asisknowntousal,itisveryimportantto
keephealthy.
2.AsfarasIamconcerned,healthisthemostpre
ciousgiftthatonecaneverhave.
3.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealized
theimportanceofkeepinghealthy.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
角度1 健康生活
★Firstofal,itsimportanttoeattheright
food.Haveagoodbreakfasteverymorningandeat
freshfruitandvegetables.Next,goodlivinghabits
canhelpusliveahealthylifetoo.Tobefit,we
hadbeternotstayuplatesothatweareabletoget
enoughsleep.Whatsmore,tostayhappyistostay
healthy.
角度2 心理健康(校园霸凌与校园暴力)
★First,weshouldbestrictwithourselves.
Itsgoodforustofolowtheschoolrules.We
shouldntbuly(霸凌)orlaughatothers.Then,we
shouldbefriendlytoourclassmatesanddontfight
withthem.Ifwearebuliedbyothers,weshould
askourteachersandparentsforhelp.Whenwe
meetschoolbulying,weshouldbebravetostopit.
角度3 最喜欢的运动
★Myfavouritesportistabletennis,whichhas
broughtmorepleasureforme.Playingtabletennis
makesmestrongandhealthy.Especialy,itisgood
formyeyes.Italsohelpsmereducemydailystress
andrelaxmyself.Whatsmore,Imbraveenough
throughplayingthisgame,soInevergiveupwhen
Ifacedificulties.Sportsgiveussomanybenefits.
Ihopealofustakeanactivepartinsports.
角度4 运动经历及启示
★Itwassunnythatday.MyparentsandI
startedtoclimbthemountainat8a.m.inthe
morning.Ifeltveryexcitedatfirst.Ienjoyedthe
beautifulflowersandtreesasIclimbedup.Howev
er,astimewentby,IfeltsotiredthatIcould
hardlybreathe.ItoldmyparentsthatIwantedto
giveupclimbing.Butmyparentscheeredmeupby
singingsomesongsandtoldmesomejokes.Inthe
end,Ireachedthetopofthemountain.WhenIsaw
thecloudsaroundme,Ilostmyselfinthebeautyof
natureandIwasproudofmyself.
结尾句
1.Inaword,abalanceddietcanhelpmakeus
strongerandhealthier.
2.Inshort,weshoulddevelopagoodhabitofeat
inghealthyfood.
俗语/谚语
1.Healthisthefirstwealth.健康是第一财富。
2.Wherethereishealth,thereishope.拥有健康
就拥有希望。
3.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一
苹果,医生远离我。
4.Alightheartliveslong.豁达者长寿
。
62
话题写作培优册
'" ()*+
朋友之间的友谊本应是纯真的,但是近日偶有校园暴力 (campusviolence)发生。你校英文刊
正在开展以“HowtoProtectOurselvesinCampusViolence”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,
向专栏投稿,介绍校园暴力的危害及如何保护好我们自己(如:学校教育、家校联合、尊重他人等)。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:介绍校园暴力的危害及如何保护自己都是一般说明,以 为主;
③人称:介绍“我们”在校园暴力中如何做用第 人称,介绍学校、家长的做法用第
人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 点明主题:介绍校园暴力及其危害
参考句型:①beharmfulforsb.;②belikelytodosth.
例:校园暴力对学生的身心健康有害。(汉译英)
第二段 阐述应对和抵制校园霸凌的办法
参考句型:①getalongwelwith;②dealwithsth.
例:Wemeetviolenceoncampus.Weshouldaskteachersandparentsforhelp.
(用when的引导时间状语从句升格)
第三段 结语:号召大家共同抵制校园霸凌
参考句型:①have/taketheresponsibilitytodosth.;②
Itsourdutytostop爥
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
HowtoProtectOurselves
inCampusViolence
Inrecentyears,campusviolencehasoften
beenreported.TodayIamgoingtotalksome
thingaboutbulyinginschool.Campusviolence
isharmfulforstudentsphysicalandmental
health.Sohowtosolvecampusviolence?
First,theschoolteachesstudentstoget
alongwelwitheachother.Second,theschool
andthefamilyshouldworktogethertobuilda
peacefulcampus.Third,studentsshouldlearnto
respectothersanddealwiththemconfidently.
Everyoneshouldkeepthecampussafe.We
shouldworktogethertofightagainstcampusvio
lence.
HowtoProtectOurselvesinCampusViolence
Inrecentyears,campusviolencehasoftenbeenreport
ed.TodayIamgoingtotalksomethingaboutbulyingin
school.Campusviolenceisharmfulforstudentsphysicaland
mentalhealth.Studentshavelitleinterestandenergyto
learn.Sohowtosolvecampusviolence?
First,theschoolteachesstudentstogetalongwelwith
eachother.Second,theschoolandthefamilyshouldworkto
gethertobuildapeacefulcampus.Third,studentsshould
learntorespectothersanddealwiththemconfidently.Final
ly,whenwemeetviolenceoncampus,weshouldaskteach
ersandparentsforhelpintime.
Everyonehastheresponsibilitytokeepthecampus
safe.Weshouldworktogethertofightagainstcampusvio
lence.
72
众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版)
," -./0
一、句子升格练习
1.IneededtowearschooluniformonMonday.I
washedmyschooluniforms.(用 because引导
的原因状语从句升格)
2.我认为我们应该尽力独立和负责任,因为我们
已经长大了!(tryonesbesttodosth.)
3.在周末,洗衣服或做饭对你很有帮助。(its
helpfulforsb.todosth.)
4.Youhaveproblems.Turntoothersforhelp.(用
when引导的时间状语从句升格)
二、书面表达
你校英文刊正在开展以“TakeCareofYour
self”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,
向专栏投稿,叙述你照顾自己的一次经历(如:饮
食、锻炼、生活技能、心理健康等),或分享照顾好
自己的方法。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
82
云南英语(课标版)
说明文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Beingavolunteerisgreat,becauseithasmanyadvanta
ges.
Firstofal,wecangetusefullifeexperiencesandskils
fromit.Whendoingvolunteerwork,wecanlearnalotand
practiceourskilsatthesametime.Secondly,wecanmeet
interestingpeopleandmakemorefriends.Boththepeoplewe
arehelpingandthepeopleweareworkingwithmaytelus
interestingstories.Wecanmakefriendswiththembydoing
kindthings.Thirdly,beingavolunteerisimportantforour
health.Whiledoingvolunteerwork,weexerciseandfeel
happy,whichisgoodforourbodyandmind.
Inshort,beingavolunteercannotonlyhelpothersbut
alsomakeabigdiferencetoourlives.Letsworktogetherto
makeabeterworld!
56
4
7 tuLD4
LD4
D
写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时 ③一;三
二、第二段 IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,be
causeIhadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework
problems.;IjustcouldntputwhatIhadlearntintoprac
ticenomaterhowhardItried.;第三段 Ilearnedtobe
modest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.TodayIwouldliketosharesomeusefultipsonhowto
improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou.
2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewith
peopleinEnglish,whethertheyareEnglishteachersor
classmates.
二、记叙文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwaspoorinEnglishlis
teningandspeaking.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelpand
shegavemesomeusefullearningmethods.
Atfirst,Ilistenedtotheconversationsandpassagesin
thetextbookandrepeatthemloudly.ThenIwasbraveand
activetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishin
class.Afterthat,Icheckedmylearningresultsbytakinglis
teningandspeakingtestsontheappofmysmartphone.
Theselearningmethodsworked realywel.Aftertwo
months,mylisteningandspeakingabilitiesgreatlyimproved.
IwasgratefultomyEnglishteacher.
Now,Ibelieveaslongaswefindrightlearningmethods
andpracticehardalthetime,wewilmakegreatprogressin
ourEnglishlisteningandspeaking.
说明文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
Asweknow,Englishlisteningandspeakingarerealy
importantinlearningEnglish.TodayIwouldliketoshare
someusefultipsonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningand
speakingskilswithyou.
Firstofal,wecanhavemorecommunicationactivities
inclass,suchasdiscussions,interviews,storytelingand
roleplay.Inthisway,wecanhavemorefunlearningEng
lish.Secondly,wecantakepartinmoreoutofclassactivi
tieslikeEnglishspeechcompetitions.Throughtheseactivi
tieswecanimproveourEnglishskilsinaneasyandrelaxing
way.Thirdly,weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommu
nicatewithpeopleinEnglish.BecauseusingEnglishisthe
bestwaytolearn.
Alinal,whatweneedismorefreetimeandmore
space.Wemustbeabletomasterlisteningandspeaking
skils.
56
5
7
写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Campusviolenceisharmfulforstudentsphysical
andmentalhealth.;第二段 Whenwemeetviolenceon
campus,weshouldaskteachersandparentsforhelpin
time.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.IwashedmyschooluniformbecauseIneededtowear
itonMonday.
2.Ithoughtweshouldtryourbesttobeindependentandre
sponsible,becausewehavegrownup!
3.Itshelpfulforyoutodosomewashingorcookingonweek
ends.
4.Turntoothersforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems./When
youhaveproblems,turntoothersforhelp.
二、记叙文范文
TakeCareofYourself
LastSaturday,myparentsdecidedtovisitmygrandpar
entsinthecountryside.Beforetheyleft,myparentssaid,
“Takecareofyourself.Welcomebackthisevening.”I
noddedandreplied,“Dontwory,DadandMom.”
Afterthat,Iatebreakfastquicklyandthenstudyforthe
tests.Atabout11:30a.m.,Ifelthungry.Icookedtomato
noodlesformyself.Theywereverydelicious.ThenIwashed
myschooluniformbecauseIneededtowearitonMonday.
Next,Icleanedmybedroomandthelivingroom.At2:
00p.
92
众相原创 赋能中考
m.,Icontinuedtostudyuntil6:00p.m.
Intheevening,myparentscamebackhome.They
praisedmeforItookgoodcareofmyselfandourhouse.I
thoughtweshouldtryourbesttobeindependentandrespon
sible,becausewehavegrownup!
说明文范文
TakeCareofYourself
Aswealknow,goodhealthisimportant.Soeachof
youshouldpayatentiontotakingcareofyourselves.
First,youshouldputphysicalhealthinthefirstplace.
Asthesayinggoes,tohaveahealthybodyistohaveevery
thing.Youdbeterhaveabalanceddietanddoexercisereg
ularly.Second,somelifeskilsarealsoneeded.Itshelpful
foryoutodosomewashingorcookingonweekends.Inthe
meantime,mentalhealthalsoplaysanimportantroleindaily
life.Positivethinkingisnecessaryforsuccess.Turntoothers
forhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.
Bydoingthese,Imsureyouwilbecomemoreandmore
independentandresponsible.Andyourlifewilbemuchbet
ter,too.
56
6
7 B1CDEFGHIJKLMN
写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Musicislikeakey,whichopensadoortothe
worldforme.;第二段Musicbringsmehopeandstrength
duringhardtimes,oferingwordsofwisdomthatguideme
throughlifeschalenges.;第三段 Ihopethatalofus
wilvaluemusicandmakeitapartofourlife.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itcannotonlydevelopmylivingskilsbutalsohelp
megetasenseofachievement.
2.WhenImfree,Iusualycleanthehouseandcookformy
parents.
3.Wecantakepartinvolunteeractivitiessuchasplanting
treesorgrowingvegetablesinordertoenrichourreal
worldworkexperience.
二、记叙文范文
ToLoveLabor
Ienjoydoingchores.Bydoinghousework,itcannot
onlydevelopmylivingskilsbutalsohelpmegetasenseof
achievement.SoIthinkitsnecessaryformetodochores.
WhenImfree,Iusualycleanthehouseandcookfor
myparents.LastFridayafternoon,Iarivedhomeearlier
thanmyparents,soIdecidedtopreparedinnerforthem.I
cookedpotatopancakes—theirfavoritefood.Whenthey
camebackhome,theytastedsomeandtoldmethesewere
thebestpancakesintheworld.Youcouldntimaginehow
happyIwaswhenIheardthat.
Fromthisexperience,Irealizedthatitismydutyto
sharehousework.SoIplantodomorechoresfromnowonto
makemyparentshappy.
说明文范文
ToLoveLabor
Aswealknow,hardworkingspiriteducationcanhelp
morestudentstogetbeter.Asmiddleschoolstudents,what
shouldwedotofalinlovewithdoingchores?
Firstly,weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassesto
learnsomebasiclifeskilsatschooleveryweek.Secondly,
wecantakepartinvolunteeractivitiessuchasplantingtrees
orgrowingvegetablesinordertoenrichourrealworldwork
experience.Inaddition,weneedtotrytodosomehousework
athomeliketidyingrooms,washingclothesorcookingsome
dishes.Aboveal,wecouldformgoodworkinghabitsand
valuetheimportanceofworkinghardthroughourexperience.
Inaword,thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessary
andithelpstoimproveourselves.
56
7
7 L
写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Agoodfamilyrelationshipwilmakeourlifehap
pier.;第二段Wecanofertosharethehouseworksothat
theycanhavearestafteradayswork.;Dontmakethem
angryandtrytotaketheiradvicewhenwedisagreewith
eachother.;第三段 Letsbuildagoodrelationshipwith
ourparentsfromnowon!
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Ibelievethatworkingtogethernotonlybringsushap
pinessbutalsoleadsustosuccess.
2.Wheneverybodyaddsfuel,theflamesrisehigh.
3.Thereisnodoubtthatcommunicationcanhelpusknow
moreaboutourteammates.
二、记叙文范文
ManyHandsMakeLightWork
Haveyouheardofthesaying“Manyhandsmakelight
work.”?Idliketoshareoneofmyexperienceswithyou.It
makesmeunderstanditbeter.
03