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话题写作培优册
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(喜欢的科目;学习方法;最喜欢的书;阅读习惯)
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人教版 课标版
九全 Unit1学着如何学习 九上 Unit3世界上的英语
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角度1 阅读、学习的重要性/益处
1.Booksaremybestfriends.Readingcanbring
mehappinessandmakemegrowinwisdom.
2.Readingmakesagreatdiferencetoourlives.
Itsimportantforustokeepgoodreadinghabits.
3.Iprefertostudyingroupsbecauseitcanhelp
methinkindependently.
角度2 学习中存在的问题[选自2024中考
真题优秀范文]
★Lastyear,myEnglishgrammarwasweak.
Becauseofthisproblem,myEnglishwasnotgood.
SoIwenttoaskmyEnglishteacherforhelp.With
thehelpofmyteacherandmyowneforts,myEng
lishscoreshavegradualyimproved.NowIverealy
learnedhowtolearnEnglishbymyself.
角度3 找到正确的读书和学习方法
开头句
1.Englishisimportantandusefultous.Howcan
welearnitwel?Herearemysuggestions.
2.Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.
ManyforeignerswanttolearnChinese.Imhap
pytosharesomewayswithyou.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
★Youdbeterprepareforthenewlessonsin
advance.Whilehavingclasses,youmustlistento
theteachercarefuly.Afterclass,itsbetertofini
shyourhomeworkontimeandreviewwhatyouhave
learned.Ifyouhavediscoveredanymistakes,cor
rectthemimmediately.Thiswilhelpyouformgood
learninghabits.
★Lastyear,IoftenmademistakeswhenIdid
Englishreading.Rememberingtheteacherhadever
toldus,themoreweread,thehigherourreading
abilitywouldbe.Idecidedtotry.Ispentalmy
freetimeonEnglishreading.WheneverIread,I
madeeveryeforttounderstandthearticlesand
wrotedownmyownunderstandingofthem.Gradu
aly,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishreading.
★Ihaveagoodhabitofreading.Ispendover
tenhoursaweekreadingdiferenttypesofbooks.
ThefourgreatclassicalChinesenovelsaremy
favourite.Whenmyfriendsweretalkingaboutfa
mouscharactersinbooks,Icouldntunderstand
them!ThenIpickedupbooksandbeganreading.
Nowgoodbookshavebecomemygoodfriends.
Theyopenupawholenewworldtome.
结尾句
1.Letsstartreadingnow.Andletitbecomeapart
ofourlife.
2.Ihopeyoucanmakegreatprogressbyusingthe
methodsabove.
角度4 喜欢的科目
开头句
1.Westudydiferentsubjectsatschoolandmyfa
voritesubjectisEnglish(Chinese爥)./Ilike
English(Chinese爥)bestinalmysubjects.
2.Amongalthesubjectswelearnatschool,Ilike
learningmathbestandhereIdliketoshare
someofmywaysoflearningmath.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
★MyfavouritesubjectisEnglishbecauseitis
widelyusedintheworld.Weoftenmeetforeigners
inthepublicplaceseveryday.WithEnglish,we
cantalktothemeasily.MyEnglishteacheriskind
andfriendly,whichmakesmelikeEnglishbeter.I
takeEnglishnotescarefulyinclass.Italkwithmy
classmatesinEnglishinclass.IfindEnglish
class
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众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版)
veryinteresting.IhavealotoffunlearningEng
lish.
结尾句
1.IbelieveifIputmyheartintolearningit,Iwil
makebigprogress.
2.Alinal,geographyrealybringsmemuch
pleasure.Iwilkeepstudyingithard.
俗语/谚语
1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。
2.Nopain,nogain.一份耕耘,一份收获。
3.Nothingisimpossibleforawilingheart.世上无
难事,只怕有心人。
4.Readingtenthousandbooksisliketravelingten
thousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路
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你校英文刊正在开展以“MyMostUnforgetableLesson”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短
文,向专栏投稿,介绍你最难忘的一节课的经历、原因及感受(如:英语课、科学课、物理课等)。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:介绍自己难忘的那节课及学到的道理以 为主;
③人称:介绍自己上课的情况和感受时用第 人称,介绍老师上课的情况时用第
人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 引出话题:介绍自己最难忘的课
参考句型:leaveadeepimpressiononsb.
第二段 阐述难忘的原因
参考句型:①asksb.todosth.;②Iwasconfidentthat爥;③nomaterhow爥;④putsth.into
practice
例:Iwasconfident.Icoulddoagoodjob.Ihadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework
problems.(用that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句升格)
例:无论我多么努力,我就是不能把我学到的东西付诸实践。(用what引导宾语从句,nomater
how引导的让步状语从句升格)
第三段 总结:说明从难忘的课程中学到了什么
参考句型:①TheXXclasswasrealymemorablebecause爥;②learnedanimportantlifelessonthat爥
例:Ilearnedtobemodest.Itwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.(用which引导的定语
从句升格)
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话题写作培优册
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
MyMostUnforgetableLesson
Wehavehadthousandsoflessonsin
middleschool.Amongthem,themostun
forgetableoneisaphysicsclass.
Intheclass,ourphysicsteacherMr.
Liubroughtsomematerialsandaskedusto
usethemtodoanexperiment.IthoughtI
coulddoagoodjob.SoIoferedtoper
formtheexperimentinfrontofthewhole
class.However,IjustcouldntputwhatI
hadlearntintopractice.
Ilearnedanimportantlifelessonthat
realknowledgecomesfrompractice.
MyMostUnforgettableLesson
Wehavehadthousandsoflessonsinmiddleschool.Someof
themhaveleftadeepimpressiononme.Amongthem,themost
unforgetableoneisaphysicsclass.
Intheclass,ourphysicsteacherMr.Liubroughtsomemateri
alsandaskedustousethemtodoanexperiment.Iwasconfident
thatIcoulddoagoodjob,becauseIhadworkedoutaloftheex
perimenthomeworkproblems.Iofferedtoperformtheexperiment
infrontofthewholeclass.However,IjustcouldntputwhatIhad
learntintopracticenomatterhowhardItried.
ThephysicsclasswasrealymemorablebecauseIlearnedan
importantlifelessonthatrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.Ialso
learnedtobemodest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.
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一、句子升格练习
1.今天我想和你们分享一些关于如何提高英语
听说能力的实用技巧。(汉译英)
2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommuni
catewithpeopleinEnglish.TheycanbeEng
lishteachersorclassmates.(用whether引导的
让步状语从句升格)
二、书面表达
英语听说能力是学好英语的关键,你校英文
刊正在开展以“HowtoImproveEnglishListening
andSpeaking”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一
篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你自己准备英语听说
考试的一次经历,或分享一下提高英语听说能力
的方法。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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云南英语(课标版)
说明文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Beingavolunteerisgreat,becauseithasmanyadvanta
ges.
Firstofal,wecangetusefullifeexperiencesandskils
fromit.Whendoingvolunteerwork,wecanlearnalotand
practiceourskilsatthesametime.Secondly,wecanmeet
interestingpeopleandmakemorefriends.Boththepeoplewe
arehelpingandthepeopleweareworkingwithmaytelus
interestingstories.Wecanmakefriendswiththembydoing
kindthings.Thirdly,beingavolunteerisimportantforour
health.Whiledoingvolunteerwork,weexerciseandfeel
happy,whichisgoodforourbodyandmind.
Inshort,beingavolunteercannotonlyhelpothersbut
alsomakeabigdiferencetoourlives.Letsworktogetherto
makeabeterworld!
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时 ③一;三
二、第二段 IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,be
causeIhadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework
problems.;IjustcouldntputwhatIhadlearntintoprac
ticenomaterhowhardItried.;第三段 Ilearnedtobe
modest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.TodayIwouldliketosharesomeusefultipsonhowto
improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou.
2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewith
peopleinEnglish,whethertheyareEnglishteachersor
classmates.
二、记叙文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwaspoorinEnglishlis
teningandspeaking.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelpand
shegavemesomeusefullearningmethods.
Atfirst,Ilistenedtotheconversationsandpassagesin
thetextbookandrepeatthemloudly.ThenIwasbraveand
activetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishin
class.Afterthat,Icheckedmylearningresultsbytakinglis
teningandspeakingtestsontheappofmysmartphone.
Theselearningmethodsworked realywel.Aftertwo
months,mylisteningandspeakingabilitiesgreatlyimproved.
IwasgratefultomyEnglishteacher.
Now,Ibelieveaslongaswefindrightlearningmethods
andpracticehardalthetime,wewilmakegreatprogressin
ourEnglishlisteningandspeaking.
说明文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
Asweknow,Englishlisteningandspeakingarerealy
importantinlearningEnglish.TodayIwouldliketoshare
someusefultipsonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningand
speakingskilswithyou.
Firstofal,wecanhavemorecommunicationactivities
inclass,suchasdiscussions,interviews,storytelingand
roleplay.Inthisway,wecanhavemorefunlearningEng
lish.Secondly,wecantakepartinmoreoutofclassactivi
tieslikeEnglishspeechcompetitions.Throughtheseactivi
tieswecanimproveourEnglishskilsinaneasyandrelaxing
way.Thirdly,weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommu
nicatewithpeopleinEnglish.BecauseusingEnglishisthe
bestwaytolearn.
Alinal,whatweneedismorefreetimeandmore
space.Wemustbeabletomasterlisteningandspeaking
skils.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Campusviolenceisharmfulforstudentsphysical
andmentalhealth.;第二段 Whenwemeetviolenceon
campus,weshouldaskteachersandparentsforhelpin
time.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.IwashedmyschooluniformbecauseIneededtowear
itonMonday.
2.Ithoughtweshouldtryourbesttobeindependentandre
sponsible,becausewehavegrownup!
3.Itshelpfulforyoutodosomewashingorcookingonweek
ends.
4.Turntoothersforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems./When
youhaveproblems,turntoothersforhelp.
二、记叙文范文
TakeCareofYourself
LastSaturday,myparentsdecidedtovisitmygrandpar
entsinthecountryside.Beforetheyleft,myparentssaid,
“Takecareofyourself.Welcomebackthisevening.”I
noddedandreplied,“Dontwory,DadandMom.”
Afterthat,Iatebreakfastquicklyandthenstudyforthe
tests.Atabout11:30a.m.,Ifelthungry.Icookedtomato
noodlesformyself.Theywereverydelicious.ThenIwashed
myschooluniformbecauseIneededtowearitonMonday.
Next,Icleanedmybedroomandthelivingroom.At2:
00p.
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