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众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版)
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(与家人、朋友之间的事情;让你成长、改变的经历;难忘的经历)
【教材单元链接】
人教版 课标版
八下Unit2志愿服务与慈善
八下Unit5难忘的事情
九全 Unit4我们的变化
九全 Unit11感受
八下Unit5经历与感受
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开头句
1.Foralongtime,therewasonethingthatIwould
neverforget.
2.ThebiggestpersonalchangeIveeverhadisthat
Ihavefaleninlovewithreading.
3.Duringthepastthreeyears,therewasonething
leavingaverydeepimpressiononme.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
★LastThursday,WangHongsawanelderly
blindmanwanderingaroundthestreetcorneronher
wayhome.WangHongoferedtohelphimcrossthe
roadaftercommunicatingwiththeoldman.When
theycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroad
stoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.WangHong
tooktheoldmanacrosstheroadandsaidgoodbye
tohim.IthinkWangHongisrealyaverywarm
heartedandkindgirl.Ishouldlearnfromherand
trymybesttohelpothers.
★ Wevolunteerswerethen divided into
groups.Somemadeecofriendlyproducts.Others
gaveoutreusablewaterbotlesandthebagswe
made.Iwentalouttoworkatthelearningstals,
teachingneighborshowtoproperlyrecycleandhow
toreducetrashhereintown.
结尾句
1.Inshort,Ithinktheexcelentgamewilbein
mymindforever.
2.IwassothankfulthatIdecidedtohelpothers
fromthenon.
3.Nomaterhowhardlifeis,weshouldntgiveup
ourhope.
4.Inmyview,helpingothersgivesmeastrong
feelingofbeingneededandbringsmehappi
ness.
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你校英文刊正在开展以“WhatIValueMost”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏
投稿,描述你所珍惜的东西及经历(如:时间、健康、亲人、生命等)。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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话题写作培优册
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:介绍自己日常生活中珍惜的人和事以 为主;
③人称:介绍自己珍惜的原因和总结珍惜的重要性用第 人称;介绍所珍惜的人带给自己
的帮助用第 人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 引出话题:介绍自己最珍惜的是什么
参考句型:①beworthdoingsth.;②themostvaluablethingtomeis爥
例:Therearemanyimportantthings.Theyareworthvaluinginourdailylives.(用that引
导的定语从句升格)
第二段 介绍自己的生活经历
参考句型:①encouragesb.todosth.;②putoneselfinonesshoes;③ofertodosth.;
④notonly爥 butalso爥;⑤teachsb.todosth.
例:IofertodosomehouseworkwheneverIhavetime.Doinghouseworkhelpsmelearnsome
basiclifeskilsandgivesmyparentssometimetohavearest.(用because,notonly爥butalso爥
升格)
第三段 总结:珍惜身边人和事
参考句型:①weshouldvalue爥;②Its爥thatgive(s)methepowertogoforward.
例:是我的家人给了我前进的力量。(强调句)
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
WhatIValueMost
Therearemanythingsweshouldvalue
inourlives.Withoutdoubt,themostvalua
blethingtomeismyfamily.
Myfamilyofermeloveandwarmth.
Theyencouragemetofacedificultiesbrave
ly.Theyhelpmebecomeabeterperson.In
mydailylife,Iofertosharesomehousework
wheneverIhavetime.Itnotonlyhelpsme
learnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmy
parentssometimetohaveabreak.
Alinal,whatIvaluemostismyfamily.
WhatIValueMost
Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworthvaluingin
ourdailylives.Withoutdoubt,themostvaluablethingtomeis
myfamily.Letmetelastoryaboutme.
Myfamilyofermeloveandwarmth,whichencouragesme
tofacedificultiesbravely.Whatsmore,theyteachmehowto
behaveproperly.Theyhelpmebecomeabeterperson.Inmy
dailylife,Ialwaysputmyselfinmyfamilymembersshoes.I
ofertosharesomehouseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnot
onlyhelpsmelearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmypar
entssometimetohavearest.
Alinal,itsmyfamilythatgivemethepowertogofor
ward.Weshouldvaluewhatwehaveandthepersonswho
loveus.
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众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版)
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一、句子升格练习
1.中学生在课余时间参加志愿服务活动是很重
要的。(汉译英)
2.Ididitfortwoweeks.Itwasverytiring.(用
but连接)
3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelp.Iam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.(用 eventhough
连接)
二、书面表达
你校英文刊正在开展以“BeingaVolunteer”
为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专
栏投稿,介绍一下你作为志愿者的经历和感受
(如:社区服务、动物保护、红十字会、老人之家
等),或谈谈成为志愿者的重要性及意义。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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4.IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe
cultureinourcountry.
二、记叙文范文
SummerVacation
Ihadawonderfulvacationthisyear.ThenIwilshare
myunforgetableexperiencewithyou.
InJuly,ItookatriptoBeijingwithmyfamily.Firstof
al,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegotto
Beijing.Then,weclimbedtheGreatWalandtookmany
photos.Besides,wealsotasteddeliciousfoodandbought
presentsinWangfujingStreetformyfriends.ThoughIfelt
tiredafterthetrip,itwasanunforgetableexperience.
Inaword,Ihadameaningfulandwonderfulsummer
vacation.
说明文范文
SummerVacation
Iwilgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Duringthevaca
tion,Ildosomethingmeaningfulandpreparewelforthefu
ture.
IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe
cultureinourcountry.Tokeephealthy,Ilexerciseforat
leastonehouraday.Exercisemakesmefulofenergy.Il
listentomusictorelaxmyself.Also,inordertoimprovemy
self,IlreadsomebooksIlike.Illearntocookformypar
ents.Besides,Ilhelpoutaroundthecommunity.Finaly,I
wilmakeaclearplanforthenewtermtomakesureIcan
startitsmoothly.AndIlmakeaperfectplantoliveahappy
life.
Ihopeeveryonewilspendawonderfulvacation.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③一
二、第一段 Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmy
mind.;第二段Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,and
othersdancedtothemusic.;第三段 Thispartyismean
ingfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbut
alsobecauseitwasachancetoexpressourthankstoour
teachers.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
2.Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesandmakes
uspreparewelforthenextclass.
3.Onlydoingsocanwehavemoreenergytostudyefectively
inclass.
4.Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute
break.
二、 ATenminuteBreak
Wehaveatenminutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmy
opinion,takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesand
makesuspreparewelforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocan
wehavemoreenergytostudyefectivelyinclass.Myten
minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimple
exercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithme
happilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeel
energeticandlistencarefulytoteachers.Youshouldntrun
toofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,donttakeenergeticex
ercisetoomuch.
Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute
break.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworth
valuinginourdailylives.;第二段 Iofertodosome
houseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnotonlyhelps
melearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmyparents
sometimetohavearest.;第三段 Itsmyfamilythatgive
methepowertogoforward.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepart
involunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
2.Itwasverytiring,butIdiditfortwoweeks.
3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.
二、记叙文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepartin
volunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
Lastyear,Ijoinedagrouptohelptheneighborsthrow
outtheirrubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery
early,andcolecttherubbishfromdoortodoor.Atfirst,I
foundithardtogetupearly.Itwasverytiring,butIdidit
fortwoweeks.Intheend,Igotathankyouleterfromthe
neighbors.Atthattime,Ifeltproudofmyself.Fromthat,I
learnedhowtosortdiferentkindsofgarbage.
IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.Ithinkitsgreattobeavolun
teer.Helpingothersbringshappinessnotonlytoothersbut
alsotoourselves.
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说明文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Beingavolunteerisgreat,becauseithasmanyadvanta
ges.
Firstofal,wecangetusefullifeexperiencesandskils
fromit.Whendoingvolunteerwork,wecanlearnalotand
practiceourskilsatthesametime.Secondly,wecanmeet
interestingpeopleandmakemorefriends.Boththepeoplewe
arehelpingandthepeopleweareworkingwithmaytelus
interestingstories.Wecanmakefriendswiththembydoing
kindthings.Thirdly,beingavolunteerisimportantforour
health.Whiledoingvolunteerwork,weexerciseandfeel
happy,whichisgoodforourbodyandmind.
Inshort,beingavolunteercannotonlyhelpothersbut
alsomakeabigdiferencetoourlives.Letsworktogetherto
makeabeterworld!
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时 ③一;三
二、第二段 IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,be
causeIhadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework
problems.;IjustcouldntputwhatIhadlearntintoprac
ticenomaterhowhardItried.;第三段 Ilearnedtobe
modest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.TodayIwouldliketosharesomeusefultipsonhowto
improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou.
2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewith
peopleinEnglish,whethertheyareEnglishteachersor
classmates.
二、记叙文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwaspoorinEnglishlis
teningandspeaking.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelpand
shegavemesomeusefullearningmethods.
Atfirst,Ilistenedtotheconversationsandpassagesin
thetextbookandrepeatthemloudly.ThenIwasbraveand
activetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishin
class.Afterthat,Icheckedmylearningresultsbytakinglis
teningandspeakingtestsontheappofmysmartphone.
Theselearningmethodsworked realywel.Aftertwo
months,mylisteningandspeakingabilitiesgreatlyimproved.
IwasgratefultomyEnglishteacher.
Now,Ibelieveaslongaswefindrightlearningmethods
andpracticehardalthetime,wewilmakegreatprogressin
ourEnglishlisteningandspeaking.
说明文范文
HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking
Asweknow,Englishlisteningandspeakingarerealy
importantinlearningEnglish.TodayIwouldliketoshare
someusefultipsonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningand
speakingskilswithyou.
Firstofal,wecanhavemorecommunicationactivities
inclass,suchasdiscussions,interviews,storytelingand
roleplay.Inthisway,wecanhavemorefunlearningEng
lish.Secondly,wecantakepartinmoreoutofclassactivi
tieslikeEnglishspeechcompetitions.Throughtheseactivi
tieswecanimproveourEnglishskilsinaneasyandrelaxing
way.Thirdly,weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommu
nicatewithpeopleinEnglish.BecauseusingEnglishisthe
bestwaytolearn.
Alinal,whatweneedismorefreetimeandmore
space.Wemustbeabletomasterlisteningandspeaking
skils.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Campusviolenceisharmfulforstudentsphysical
andmentalhealth.;第二段 Whenwemeetviolenceon
campus,weshouldaskteachersandparentsforhelpin
time.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.IwashedmyschooluniformbecauseIneededtowear
itonMonday.
2.Ithoughtweshouldtryourbesttobeindependentandre
sponsible,becausewehavegrownup!
3.Itshelpfulforyoutodosomewashingorcookingonweek
ends.
4.Turntoothersforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems./When
youhaveproblems,turntoothersforhelp.
二、记叙文范文
TakeCareofYourself
LastSaturday,myparentsdecidedtovisitmygrandpar
entsinthecountryside.Beforetheyleft,myparentssaid,
“Takecareofyourself.Welcomebackthisevening.”I
noddedandreplied,“Dontwory,DadandMom.”
Afterthat,Iatebreakfastquicklyandthenstudyforthe
tests.Atabout11:30a.m.,Ifelthungry.Icookedtomato
noodlesformyself.Theywereverydelicious.ThenIwashed
myschooluniformbecauseIneededtowearitonMonday.
Next,Icleanedmybedroomandthelivingroom.At2:
00p.
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