第4部分 话题3 经历与感受-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册(仁爱版 云南专用)

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  众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版) !" 3 # <=>?@ 0 2022 1 (与家人、朋友之间的事情;让你成长、改变的经历;难忘的经历) 【教材单元链接】 人教版 课标版 八下Unit2志愿服务与慈善 八下Unit5难忘的事情 九全 Unit4我们的变化 九全 Unit11感受 八下Unit5经历与感受 !" #$%& 开头句 1.Foralongtime,therewasonethingthatIwould neverforget. 2.ThebiggestpersonalchangeIveeverhadisthat Ihavefaleninlovewithreading. 3.Duringthepastthreeyears,therewasonething leavingaverydeepimpressiononme. 中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文] ★LastThursday,WangHongsawanelderly blindmanwanderingaroundthestreetcorneronher wayhome.WangHongoferedtohelphimcrossthe roadaftercommunicatingwiththeoldman.When theycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroad stoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.WangHong tooktheoldmanacrosstheroadandsaidgoodbye tohim.IthinkWangHongisrealyaverywarm heartedandkindgirl.Ishouldlearnfromherand trymybesttohelpothers. ★ Wevolunteerswerethen divided into groups.Somemadeecofriendlyproducts.Others gaveoutreusablewaterbotlesandthebagswe made.Iwentalouttoworkatthelearningstals, teachingneighborshowtoproperlyrecycleandhow toreducetrashhereintown. 结尾句 1.Inshort,Ithinktheexcelentgamewilbein mymindforever. 2.IwassothankfulthatIdecidedtohelpothers fromthenon. 3.Nomaterhowhardlifeis,weshouldntgiveup ourhope. 4.Inmyview,helpingothersgivesmeastrong feelingofbeingneededandbringsmehappi                                ness. '" ()*+   你校英文刊正在开展以“WhatIValueMost”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏 投稿,描述你所珍惜的东西及经历(如:时间、健康、亲人、生命等)。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。       02  话题写作培优册 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体:本文是一篇     ; ②时态:介绍自己日常生活中珍惜的人和事以     为主; ③人称:介绍自己珍惜的原因和总结珍惜的重要性用第     人称;介绍所珍惜的人带给自己 的帮助用第     人称。 二、构思框架 第一段 引出话题:介绍自己最珍惜的是什么 参考句型:①beworthdoingsth.;②themostvaluablethingtomeis爥 例:Therearemanyimportantthings.Theyareworthvaluinginourdailylives.(用that引 导的定语从句升格)                                        第二段 介绍自己的生活经历 参考句型:①encouragesb.todosth.;②putoneselfinonesshoes;③ofertodosth.; ④notonly爥 butalso爥;⑤teachsb.todosth. 例:IofertodosomehouseworkwheneverIhavetime.Doinghouseworkhelpsmelearnsome basiclifeskilsandgivesmyparentssometimetohavearest.(用because,notonly爥butalso爥 升格)                                                                               第三段 总结:珍惜身边人和事 参考句型:①weshouldvalue爥;②Its爥thatgive(s)methepowertogoforward. 例:是我的家人给了我前进的力量。(强调句)                                                                     三、分阶范文 初阶范文 高阶范文 WhatIValueMost Therearemanythingsweshouldvalue inourlives.Withoutdoubt,themostvalua blethingtomeismyfamily. Myfamilyofermeloveandwarmth. Theyencouragemetofacedificultiesbrave ly.Theyhelpmebecomeabeterperson.In mydailylife,Iofertosharesomehousework wheneverIhavetime.Itnotonlyhelpsme learnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmy parentssometimetohaveabreak. Alinal,whatIvaluemostismyfamily. WhatIValueMost Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworthvaluingin ourdailylives.Withoutdoubt,themostvaluablethingtomeis myfamily.Letmetelastoryaboutme. Myfamilyofermeloveandwarmth,whichencouragesme tofacedificultiesbravely.Whatsmore,theyteachmehowto behaveproperly.Theyhelpmebecomeabeterperson.Inmy dailylife,Ialwaysputmyselfinmyfamilymembersshoes.I ofertosharesomehouseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnot onlyhelpsmelearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmypar entssometimetohavearest. Alinal,itsmyfamilythatgivemethepowertogofor ward.Weshouldvaluewhatwehaveandthepersonswho loveus. 12   众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版) ," -./0 一、句子升格练习 1.中学生在课余时间参加志愿服务活动是很重 要的。(汉译英)       2.Ididitfortwoweeks.Itwasverytiring.(用 but连接)   3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelp.Iam stilamiddleschoolstudent.(用 eventhough 连接)       二、书面表达 你校英文刊正在开展以“BeingaVolunteer” 为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专 栏投稿,介绍一下你作为志愿者的经历和感受 (如:社区服务、动物保护、红十字会、老人之家 等),或谈谈成为志愿者的重要性及意义。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。                                                                                                        22   众相原创 赋能中考 4.IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe cultureinourcountry. 二、记叙文范文 SummerVacation Ihadawonderfulvacationthisyear.ThenIwilshare myunforgetableexperiencewithyou. InJuly,ItookatriptoBeijingwithmyfamily.Firstof al,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegotto Beijing.Then,weclimbedtheGreatWalandtookmany photos.Besides,wealsotasteddeliciousfoodandbought presentsinWangfujingStreetformyfriends.ThoughIfelt tiredafterthetrip,itwasanunforgetableexperience. Inaword,Ihadameaningfulandwonderfulsummer vacation. 说明文范文 SummerVacation Iwilgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Duringthevaca tion,Ildosomethingmeaningfulandpreparewelforthefu ture. IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe cultureinourcountry.Tokeephealthy,Ilexerciseforat leastonehouraday.Exercisemakesmefulofenergy.Il listentomusictorelaxmyself.Also,inordertoimprovemy self,IlreadsomebooksIlike.Illearntocookformypar ents.Besides,Ilhelpoutaroundthecommunity.Finaly,I wilmakeaclearplanforthenewtermtomakesureIcan startitsmoothly.AndIlmakeaperfectplantoliveahappy life. Ihopeeveryonewilspendawonderfulvacation. 56 2 7 xyqz{q|}~LDEw 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③一 二、第一段 Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmy mind.;第二段Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,and othersdancedtothemusic.;第三段 Thispartyismean ingfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbut alsobecauseitwasachancetoexpressourthankstoour teachers. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly. 2.Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesandmakes uspreparewelforthenextclass. 3.Onlydoingsocanwehavemoreenergytostudyefectively inclass. 4.Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute break. 二、 ATenminuteBreak Wehaveatenminutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmy opinion,takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly. Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesand makesuspreparewelforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocan wehavemoreenergytostudyefectivelyinclass.Myten minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimple exercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithme happilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeel energeticandlistencarefulytoteachers.Youshouldntrun toofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,donttakeenergeticex ercisetoomuch. Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute break. 56 3 7 €‚ƒ„ 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三 二、第一段 Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworth valuinginourdailylives.;第二段 Iofertodosome houseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnotonlyhelps melearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmyparents sometimetohavearest.;第三段 Itsmyfamilythatgive methepowertogoforward. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepart involunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime. 2.Itwasverytiring,butIdiditfortwoweeks. 3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam stilamiddleschoolstudent. 二、记叙文范文 BeingaVolunteer Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepartin volunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime. Lastyear,Ijoinedagrouptohelptheneighborsthrow outtheirrubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery early,andcolecttherubbishfromdoortodoor.Atfirst,I foundithardtogetupearly.Itwasverytiring,butIdidit fortwoweeks.Intheend,Igotathankyouleterfromthe neighbors.Atthattime,Ifeltproudofmyself.Fromthat,I learnedhowtosortdiferentkindsofgarbage. IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam stilamiddleschoolstudent.Ithinkitsgreattobeavolun teer.Helpingothersbringshappinessnotonlytoothersbut                                                                      alsotoourselves. 82   云南英语(课标版) 说明文范文 BeingaVolunteer Beingavolunteerisgreat,becauseithasmanyadvanta ges. Firstofal,wecangetusefullifeexperiencesandskils fromit.Whendoingvolunteerwork,wecanlearnalotand practiceourskilsatthesametime.Secondly,wecanmeet interestingpeopleandmakemorefriends.Boththepeoplewe arehelpingandthepeopleweareworkingwithmaytelus interestingstories.Wecanmakefriendswiththembydoing kindthings.Thirdly,beingavolunteerisimportantforour health.Whiledoingvolunteerwork,weexerciseandfeel happy,whichisgoodforourbodyandmind. Inshort,beingavolunteercannotonlyhelpothersbut alsomakeabigdiferencetoourlives.Letsworktogetherto makeabeterworld! 56 4 7 tuLD4…†‡ˆ‰LD4Š‹‡ ŒDŽ 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时 ③一;三 二、第二段 IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,be causeIhadworkedoutaloftheexperimenthomework problems.;IjustcouldntputwhatIhadlearntintoprac ticenomaterhowhardItried.;第三段 Ilearnedtobe modest,whichwilpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.TodayIwouldliketosharesomeusefultipsonhowto improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou. 2.Weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewith peopleinEnglish,whethertheyareEnglishteachersor classmates. 二、记叙文范文 HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking WhenIwasinGradeEight,IwaspoorinEnglishlis teningandspeaking.IaskedmyEnglishteacherforhelpand shegavemesomeusefullearningmethods. Atfirst,Ilistenedtotheconversationsandpassagesin thetextbookandrepeatthemloudly.ThenIwasbraveand activetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishin class.Afterthat,Icheckedmylearningresultsbytakinglis teningandspeakingtestsontheappofmysmartphone. Theselearningmethodsworked realywel.Aftertwo months,mylisteningandspeakingabilitiesgreatlyimproved. IwasgratefultomyEnglishteacher. Now,Ibelieveaslongaswefindrightlearningmethods andpracticehardalthetime,wewilmakegreatprogressin ourEnglishlisteningandspeaking. 说明文范文 HowtoImproveEnglishListeningandSpeaking Asweknow,Englishlisteningandspeakingarerealy importantinlearningEnglish.TodayIwouldliketoshare someusefultipsonhowtoimproveEnglishlisteningand speakingskilswithyou. Firstofal,wecanhavemorecommunicationactivities inclass,suchasdiscussions,interviews,storytelingand roleplay.Inthisway,wecanhavemorefunlearningEng lish.Secondly,wecantakepartinmoreoutofclassactivi tieslikeEnglishspeechcompetitions.Throughtheseactivi tieswecanimproveourEnglishskilsinaneasyandrelaxing way.Thirdly,weneedtofindmoreopportunitiestocommu nicatewithpeopleinEnglish.BecauseusingEnglishisthe bestwaytolearn. Alinal,whatweneedismorefreetimeandmore space.Wemustbeabletomasterlisteningandspeaking skils. 56 5 7 ‚‘’ 写作剖析 一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三 二、第一段 Campusviolenceisharmfulforstudentsphysical andmentalhealth.;第二段 Whenwemeetviolenceon campus,weshouldaskteachersandparentsforhelpin time. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.IwashedmyschooluniformbecauseIneededtowear itonMonday. 2.Ithoughtweshouldtryourbesttobeindependentandre sponsible,becausewehavegrownup! 3.Itshelpfulforyoutodosomewashingorcookingonweek ends. 4.Turntoothersforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems./When youhaveproblems,turntoothersforhelp. 二、记叙文范文 TakeCareofYourself LastSaturday,myparentsdecidedtovisitmygrandpar entsinthecountryside.Beforetheyleft,myparentssaid, “Takecareofyourself.Welcomebackthisevening.”I noddedandreplied,“Dontwory,DadandMom.” Afterthat,Iatebreakfastquicklyandthenstudyforthe tests.Atabout11:30a.m.,Ifelthungry.Icookedtomato noodlesformyself.Theywereverydelicious.ThenIwashed myschooluniformbecauseIneededtowearitonMonday. Next,Icleanedmybedroomandthelivingroom.At2:                                                                       00p. 92

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