第4部分 话题1 丰高、充实、积极向上的生活-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册(仁爱版 云南专用)

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    第四部分 高频话题三阶写作指导   众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版) 人与自我    !" 1 # $%&'(&)*+,-./ 0 2019 1 (假期活动;周末活动;旅行计划与安排;生活目标与梦想) 【教材单元链接】 人教版 课标版 七上Unit2家庭     八上Unit1假期 七下Unit2日常活动 八上Unit2闲暇活动 七下Unit12周末活动 八上Unit6生活目标 七上Unit4玩得高兴 七下Unit7生日聚会 七下Unit8季节、天气与假期 !" #$%& 角度1 假日活动 开头句 1.Thesummer/wintervacationiscomingsoon, andwevehadagreatplanforit. 2.Lastweekend,Ihadapicnicwithmyfriendsat thefootofCangshanMountain.Itwasrealyin teresting. 中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文] ★Inthemorning,wevisitedtheHistoryMu seum.WelearnedaboutthehistoryoftheLong March.ThenwelistenedtothestoriesoftheRed Army,whichgreatlytouchedus.Afterlunch,we wenttotheFolkCultureCenter,whereweenjoyed papercutingart.Wealsowatchedlocaloperaper formancesthatareeducational. 结尾句 1.Thoughalofusfeltverytired,wegotthehap piestmemory. 2.Ilookforwardtocreatinglastingmemorieswith myfamily,readingmorebooks,learningnew things,andshowingmorelovetotheworlddur ingthisholiday. 3.Thetournotonlydeepensourloveforourcoun trybutalsoenrichesourunderstandingoftradi tionalChineseart! 角度2 生活目标与梦想 开头句 1.Livingwithoutadream islikewalkingina strangecitywithoutamap. 2.Thelifegoalisjustlikealightwhichguidesyou indarknessandhelpsyouovercomedificulties. 中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文] ★Doctorsnotonlysavethelivesofthepa tients,butalsodevotetheirlivestotheirwork.To makemydreamcometrue,first,Iwilstudyharder andtrytoreadmorebooks爥 结尾句 1.IstronglybelieveifIputmyheartintoit,Ican achievemydreaminthefuture. 2.Ibelievethatthemanwhoholdsontohisdream wilbeabletoachievehisdreamoneday. 角度3 节日活动 1.WeplanttreesonTreePlantingDayeveryyear andhopetheycangrowupquickly. 2.IwanttodosomethingformymotheronMothers Day,suchasmakingadelicioussupperforher. 3.MysisterandIwenttotheOldPeoplesHome onMayDayholiday.Wedidsomecleaningfor themandbroughtsomefruittothem. 俗语/谚语 1.Lifeiswhatyoumakeit.你的生活由你创造。 2.Bigdreamsarethekeytoeverything.远大的理 想是开启万物的钥匙。 3.Timeflieswhenyourehavingfun.快乐的时光 总是飞逝                                              。 41  话题写作培优册 '" ()*+   假期对学生来说是一段放松身心、关心家人、充实自我的时间。你校英文刊专栏正在开展以 “MyHolidayPlans”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,介绍你的假期计划。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。   写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体:本文是一篇     ; ②时态:介绍假期里面的活动时以     为主,介绍这些活动可能会带来的感受时用      ; ③人称:介绍自己的暑假计划用第     人称。 二、构思框架 第一段 介绍假期的含义以及对学生来说假期的意义 参考句型:①Iamgoingtotraveltosomeplacesofinterestwhichcan爥;②Itsachancetodo爥; ③Itsnecessary/meaningfulformetodo爥 例:Ienjoysomefreetimeafterworkinghardinclasses.(用It+adj.+forsb.todosth.句型 扩写句子)                                        第二段 介绍“我”自己的假期计划,以及假期计划怎样帮助“我”成长 参考句型:①plantodosth.;② spend爥with爥;③wanttoshowsth.forsb.;④ 爥isagood choicefor爥 例:Iplantohaveapicnicintheparkwithmyfamily.(用by+doing扩写句子)                                                                               第三段 个人的期望以及假期计划的完成会给自己带来什么 参考句型:①lookforwardtodoingsth.;②                      ImsureIl爥 三、分阶范文 初阶范文 高阶范文 MyHolidayPlans Aholidayisaspecialtimetotakea breakandrelax.SoIcanenjoysomefree time. Duringmyholiday,Iplantohaveapic nicintheparkwithmyfamily.Ialsowantto showmycareformyparentsbysharingsome chores.Next,Iwanttodomuchreading.Be sides,Ialsowanttotravel. Iexpecttocreatelastingmemorieswithmy family,readingmorebooksandlearningnew things.Byfinishingtheseplanshappily,Ibe lieveIwilfeelhappytohavenewexperiences. MyHolidayPlans Aholidayisaspecialtimeforstudentstotakeabreakfrom schoolandrelax.Itsachancetoenjoysomefreetimeafter workinghardinclasses. Duringmyholiday,Iplantospendwonderfultimewith myfamilybyhavingpicnicsinthepark.Ialsowanttoshow mycareformyparentsbysharingsomechores.Whatsmore,I wanttodomuchreading.Readingmakesafulman.Besides, travelingisanothergoodchoiceforsuchalongholiday. Ilookforwardtocreatinglastingmemorieswithmyfami ly,readingbooksandlearningnewthings.Bycompletingthese planswithjoy,ImsureIlfeelhappyandreadyfornewexpe riences. 51   众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版) ," -./0 一、句子升格练习 1.WegottoBeijing.WewenttoseethePalace Museum.(用assoonas引导的时间状语从句 升格)     2.Itwasameaningfulexperience.Ifelttiredafter thetrip.(用though/although引导的让步状语 从句升格)     3.Itriedtoputabookshelfinmyroom.Imadea mistake.(用but连接句子)     4.Iwanttotravelaround.Icanknowmoreabout thecultureinourcountry.(用 sothat引导的 目的状语从句升格)     二、书面表达 (2024齐齐哈尔改编)你校校刊英语专栏正 在开展以“SummerVacation”为题的征文活动。 请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次 你难忘的暑假生活经历(如郊游、研学、劳动实践 等)及感悟,或谈谈如何过一个有意义的暑假 生活。 要求: 1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80; 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁; 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。                                                                                                                              61   云南英语(课标版) 2.Lucyhadastronginterestinpaintingwhenshewasonly5 yearsold. 3.Letsmakefuluseofoursparetimeandformahabitof learningEnglishwel. 4.Ihavemadeupmymindtoloseweightandkeephealthy. 技巧2 1.IwanttobeateacherinthefuturebecauseIlikebeing withchildren. 2.Wecandomanythingstohelpthosepoorchildren.For example,wecanraisesomemoneytobuybooksforthem. 3.Youwontfulyexperiencethecultureofaforeigncountry unlessyougothereinperson. 4.Spendmoretimetalkingwithyourparentssothattheycan understandyoubeter. 5.Thevilageisbecomingsobeautifulthatalotoftourists comehereeveryyear. 6.Idontunderstandsomepeoplewhothrowtherubbisheve rywhere.Inmyopinion,wemustprotecttheenvironment. lmnG 技巧1 状语从句 1.Iwilbeproudofyouaslongasyoutryyourbest. 2.Thegirlwassosadthatshecouldntsayaword. 3.Althoughitwasraininghardoutside,theyoungmanwent toworkasusual. 4.Ilvisitmygrandparentsassoonasthesummerholiday beginsthisyear. 5.Everyoneinourteamtrainedhardinorderthatwecanwin thebasketbalmatch. 宾语从句 1.IwanttoknowhowyoulearnEnglish. 2.Iamsurethatourteacherwilleadustoamorecolorful andwonderfulfuture. 3.Ihavelearnedthatweshouldnevergiveupwhenwemeet withdificulties. 4.Iwanttoknowwhatyoudidtomakeyourdreamcometrue. 5.Everyoneintheclassknowswhereteaisproduced. 6.Hedoesntknowifhisbrotherhasreturnedthemagazine tothelibraryyet. 7.IwanttoknowwhyAnnarefusedtocometomyparty. 定语从句 1.MissLiistheteacherwhohelpedmealotduringthepast threeyears. 2.IlikethebookwhichwaswritenbyLuXun. 3.Istilrememberthedaysthatwespentinthecountryside tenyearsago. 4.Fionaloveslisteningtoherchildrensingingsongsthat theylearnedatschool. 5.IdontknowtheboywhosefatherisanEnglishteacher. 技巧2 感叹句 1.HowkindandcaringMissBaiis! 2.Whatgreatfunwehadyesterday! 3.Whatusefulsuggestions/adviceJimgaveus! 4.Howweltheyhavepreparedfortheactivity! 用it作形式主语或形式宾语的句型 1.Amyconsidersitherdutytohelpherclassmates. 2.Itisdificultformetolearnmathswel,butIwilkeep tryingmybest. 3.IfinditinterestingtolearnEnglishbyusingthisapp. 4.Itstimetotakeactiontoprotectourearth. lmnY 1.Jimcannotonlyplaybasketbalwel,butalsoplaythevi olinwel. 2.Ontheonehand,travelingisagoodwaytorelax.Onthe otherhand,wecanknowmoreaboutthisworld. 3.Helenseldomgetsangryevenifshehastowaitforalong                                                       time. 第四部分 高频话题三阶写作指导 56 1 7 opqrsqtuv*LEw 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③一 二、第一段 Itsnecessary/meaningfulformetoenjoysome freetimeafterworkinghardinclasses.;第二段 Iplanto spendwonderfultimewithmyfamilybyhavingapicnicin theparkandcookingmealswithmyparents. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.WewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegot toBeijing. 2.Though/AlthoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasamean ingfulexperience. 3.Itriedtoputabookshelfinmyroom,butImadeamis           take. 72   众相原创 赋能中考 4.IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe cultureinourcountry. 二、记叙文范文 SummerVacation Ihadawonderfulvacationthisyear.ThenIwilshare myunforgetableexperiencewithyou. InJuly,ItookatriptoBeijingwithmyfamily.Firstof al,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegotto Beijing.Then,weclimbedtheGreatWalandtookmany photos.Besides,wealsotasteddeliciousfoodandbought presentsinWangfujingStreetformyfriends.ThoughIfelt tiredafterthetrip,itwasanunforgetableexperience. Inaword,Ihadameaningfulandwonderfulsummer vacation. 说明文范文 SummerVacation Iwilgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Duringthevaca tion,Ildosomethingmeaningfulandpreparewelforthefu ture. IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe cultureinourcountry.Tokeephealthy,Ilexerciseforat leastonehouraday.Exercisemakesmefulofenergy.Il listentomusictorelaxmyself.Also,inordertoimprovemy self,IlreadsomebooksIlike.Illearntocookformypar ents.Besides,Ilhelpoutaroundthecommunity.Finaly,I wilmakeaclearplanforthenewtermtomakesureIcan startitsmoothly.AndIlmakeaperfectplantoliveahappy life. Ihopeeveryonewilspendawonderfulvacation. 56 2 7 xyqz{q|}~LDEw 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③一 二、第一段 Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmy mind.;第二段Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,and othersdancedtothemusic.;第三段 Thispartyismean ingfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbut alsobecauseitwasachancetoexpressourthankstoour teachers. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly. 2.Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesandmakes uspreparewelforthenextclass. 3.Onlydoingsocanwehavemoreenergytostudyefectively inclass. 4.Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute break. 二、 ATenminuteBreak Wehaveatenminutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmy opinion,takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly. Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesand makesuspreparewelforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocan wehavemoreenergytostudyefectivelyinclass.Myten minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimple exercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithme happilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeel energeticandlistencarefulytoteachers.Youshouldntrun toofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,donttakeenergeticex ercisetoomuch. Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute break. 56 3 7 €‚ƒ„ 写作剖析 一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三 二、第一段 Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworth valuinginourdailylives.;第二段 Iofertodosome houseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnotonlyhelps melearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmyparents sometimetohavearest.;第三段 Itsmyfamilythatgive methepowertogoforward. 三阶 写作实战 一、1.Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepart involunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime. 2.Itwasverytiring,butIdiditfortwoweeks. 3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam stilamiddleschoolstudent. 二、记叙文范文 BeingaVolunteer Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepartin volunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime. Lastyear,Ijoinedagrouptohelptheneighborsthrow outtheirrubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery early,andcolecttherubbishfromdoortodoor.Atfirst,I foundithardtogetupearly.Itwasverytiring,butIdidit fortwoweeks.Intheend,Igotathankyouleterfromthe neighbors.Atthattime,Ifeltproudofmyself.Fromthat,I learnedhowtosortdiferentkindsofgarbage. IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam stilamiddleschoolstudent.Ithinkitsgreattobeavolun teer.Helpingothersbringshappinessnotonlytoothersbut                                                                      alsotoourselves. 82

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