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第四部分 高频话题三阶写作指导
众相原创 赋能中考 云南英语(课标版)
人与自我
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(假期活动;周末活动;旅行计划与安排;生活目标与梦想)
【教材单元链接】
人教版 课标版
七上Unit2家庭 八上Unit1假期
七下Unit2日常活动 八上Unit2闲暇活动
七下Unit12周末活动 八上Unit6生活目标
七上Unit4玩得高兴
七下Unit7生日聚会
七下Unit8季节、天气与假期
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角度1 假日活动
开头句
1.Thesummer/wintervacationiscomingsoon,
andwevehadagreatplanforit.
2.Lastweekend,Ihadapicnicwithmyfriendsat
thefootofCangshanMountain.Itwasrealyin
teresting.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
★Inthemorning,wevisitedtheHistoryMu
seum.WelearnedaboutthehistoryoftheLong
March.ThenwelistenedtothestoriesoftheRed
Army,whichgreatlytouchedus.Afterlunch,we
wenttotheFolkCultureCenter,whereweenjoyed
papercutingart.Wealsowatchedlocaloperaper
formancesthatareeducational.
结尾句
1.Thoughalofusfeltverytired,wegotthehap
piestmemory.
2.Ilookforwardtocreatinglastingmemorieswith
myfamily,readingmorebooks,learningnew
things,andshowingmorelovetotheworlddur
ingthisholiday.
3.Thetournotonlydeepensourloveforourcoun
trybutalsoenrichesourunderstandingoftradi
tionalChineseart!
角度2 生活目标与梦想
开头句
1.Livingwithoutadream islikewalkingina
strangecitywithoutamap.
2.Thelifegoalisjustlikealightwhichguidesyou
indarknessandhelpsyouovercomedificulties.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
★Doctorsnotonlysavethelivesofthepa
tients,butalsodevotetheirlivestotheirwork.To
makemydreamcometrue,first,Iwilstudyharder
andtrytoreadmorebooks爥
结尾句
1.IstronglybelieveifIputmyheartintoit,Ican
achievemydreaminthefuture.
2.Ibelievethatthemanwhoholdsontohisdream
wilbeabletoachievehisdreamoneday.
角度3 节日活动
1.WeplanttreesonTreePlantingDayeveryyear
andhopetheycangrowupquickly.
2.IwanttodosomethingformymotheronMothers
Day,suchasmakingadelicioussupperforher.
3.MysisterandIwenttotheOldPeoplesHome
onMayDayholiday.Wedidsomecleaningfor
themandbroughtsomefruittothem.
俗语/谚语
1.Lifeiswhatyoumakeit.你的生活由你创造。
2.Bigdreamsarethekeytoeverything.远大的理
想是开启万物的钥匙。
3.Timeflieswhenyourehavingfun.快乐的时光
总是飞逝
。
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话题写作培优册
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假期对学生来说是一段放松身心、关心家人、充实自我的时间。你校英文刊专栏正在开展以
“MyHolidayPlans”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,介绍你的假期计划。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:介绍假期里面的活动时以 为主,介绍这些活动可能会带来的感受时用
;
③人称:介绍自己的暑假计划用第 人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 介绍假期的含义以及对学生来说假期的意义
参考句型:①Iamgoingtotraveltosomeplacesofinterestwhichcan爥;②Itsachancetodo爥;
③Itsnecessary/meaningfulformetodo爥
例:Ienjoysomefreetimeafterworkinghardinclasses.(用It+adj.+forsb.todosth.句型
扩写句子)
第二段 介绍“我”自己的假期计划,以及假期计划怎样帮助“我”成长
参考句型:①plantodosth.;② spend爥with爥;③wanttoshowsth.forsb.;④ 爥isagood
choicefor爥
例:Iplantohaveapicnicintheparkwithmyfamily.(用by+doing扩写句子)
第三段 个人的期望以及假期计划的完成会给自己带来什么
参考句型:①lookforwardtodoingsth.;②
ImsureIl爥
三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
MyHolidayPlans
Aholidayisaspecialtimetotakea
breakandrelax.SoIcanenjoysomefree
time.
Duringmyholiday,Iplantohaveapic
nicintheparkwithmyfamily.Ialsowantto
showmycareformyparentsbysharingsome
chores.Next,Iwanttodomuchreading.Be
sides,Ialsowanttotravel.
Iexpecttocreatelastingmemorieswithmy
family,readingmorebooksandlearningnew
things.Byfinishingtheseplanshappily,Ibe
lieveIwilfeelhappytohavenewexperiences.
MyHolidayPlans
Aholidayisaspecialtimeforstudentstotakeabreakfrom
schoolandrelax.Itsachancetoenjoysomefreetimeafter
workinghardinclasses.
Duringmyholiday,Iplantospendwonderfultimewith
myfamilybyhavingpicnicsinthepark.Ialsowanttoshow
mycareformyparentsbysharingsomechores.Whatsmore,I
wanttodomuchreading.Readingmakesafulman.Besides,
travelingisanothergoodchoiceforsuchalongholiday.
Ilookforwardtocreatinglastingmemorieswithmyfami
ly,readingbooksandlearningnewthings.Bycompletingthese
planswithjoy,ImsureIlfeelhappyandreadyfornewexpe
riences.
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一、句子升格练习
1.WegottoBeijing.WewenttoseethePalace
Museum.(用assoonas引导的时间状语从句
升格)
2.Itwasameaningfulexperience.Ifelttiredafter
thetrip.(用though/although引导的让步状语
从句升格)
3.Itriedtoputabookshelfinmyroom.Imadea
mistake.(用but连接句子)
4.Iwanttotravelaround.Icanknowmoreabout
thecultureinourcountry.(用 sothat引导的
目的状语从句升格)
二、书面表达
(2024齐齐哈尔改编)你校校刊英语专栏正
在开展以“SummerVacation”为题的征文活动。
请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,叙述一次
你难忘的暑假生活经历(如郊游、研学、劳动实践
等)及感悟,或谈谈如何过一个有意义的暑假
生活。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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云南英语(课标版)
2.Lucyhadastronginterestinpaintingwhenshewasonly5
yearsold.
3.Letsmakefuluseofoursparetimeandformahabitof
learningEnglishwel.
4.Ihavemadeupmymindtoloseweightandkeephealthy.
技巧2
1.IwanttobeateacherinthefuturebecauseIlikebeing
withchildren.
2.Wecandomanythingstohelpthosepoorchildren.For
example,wecanraisesomemoneytobuybooksforthem.
3.Youwontfulyexperiencethecultureofaforeigncountry
unlessyougothereinperson.
4.Spendmoretimetalkingwithyourparentssothattheycan
understandyoubeter.
5.Thevilageisbecomingsobeautifulthatalotoftourists
comehereeveryyear.
6.Idontunderstandsomepeoplewhothrowtherubbisheve
rywhere.Inmyopinion,wemustprotecttheenvironment.
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技巧1
状语从句
1.Iwilbeproudofyouaslongasyoutryyourbest.
2.Thegirlwassosadthatshecouldntsayaword.
3.Althoughitwasraininghardoutside,theyoungmanwent
toworkasusual.
4.Ilvisitmygrandparentsassoonasthesummerholiday
beginsthisyear.
5.Everyoneinourteamtrainedhardinorderthatwecanwin
thebasketbalmatch.
宾语从句
1.IwanttoknowhowyoulearnEnglish.
2.Iamsurethatourteacherwilleadustoamorecolorful
andwonderfulfuture.
3.Ihavelearnedthatweshouldnevergiveupwhenwemeet
withdificulties.
4.Iwanttoknowwhatyoudidtomakeyourdreamcometrue.
5.Everyoneintheclassknowswhereteaisproduced.
6.Hedoesntknowifhisbrotherhasreturnedthemagazine
tothelibraryyet.
7.IwanttoknowwhyAnnarefusedtocometomyparty.
定语从句
1.MissLiistheteacherwhohelpedmealotduringthepast
threeyears.
2.IlikethebookwhichwaswritenbyLuXun.
3.Istilrememberthedaysthatwespentinthecountryside
tenyearsago.
4.Fionaloveslisteningtoherchildrensingingsongsthat
theylearnedatschool.
5.IdontknowtheboywhosefatherisanEnglishteacher.
技巧2
感叹句
1.HowkindandcaringMissBaiis!
2.Whatgreatfunwehadyesterday!
3.Whatusefulsuggestions/adviceJimgaveus!
4.Howweltheyhavepreparedfortheactivity!
用it作形式主语或形式宾语的句型
1.Amyconsidersitherdutytohelpherclassmates.
2.Itisdificultformetolearnmathswel,butIwilkeep
tryingmybest.
3.IfinditinterestingtolearnEnglishbyusingthisapp.
4.Itstimetotakeactiontoprotectourearth.
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1.Jimcannotonlyplaybasketbalwel,butalsoplaythevi
olinwel.
2.Ontheonehand,travelingisagoodwaytorelax.Onthe
otherhand,wecanknowmoreaboutthisworld.
3.Helenseldomgetsangryevenifshehastowaitforalong
time.
第四部分 高频话题三阶写作指导
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③一
二、第一段 Itsnecessary/meaningfulformetoenjoysome
freetimeafterworkinghardinclasses.;第二段 Iplanto
spendwonderfultimewithmyfamilybyhavingapicnicin
theparkandcookingmealswithmyparents.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.WewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegot
toBeijing.
2.Though/AlthoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasamean
ingfulexperience.
3.Itriedtoputabookshelfinmyroom,butImadeamis
take.
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4.IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe
cultureinourcountry.
二、记叙文范文
SummerVacation
Ihadawonderfulvacationthisyear.ThenIwilshare
myunforgetableexperiencewithyou.
InJuly,ItookatriptoBeijingwithmyfamily.Firstof
al,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegotto
Beijing.Then,weclimbedtheGreatWalandtookmany
photos.Besides,wealsotasteddeliciousfoodandbought
presentsinWangfujingStreetformyfriends.ThoughIfelt
tiredafterthetrip,itwasanunforgetableexperience.
Inaword,Ihadameaningfulandwonderfulsummer
vacation.
说明文范文
SummerVacation
Iwilgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.Duringthevaca
tion,Ildosomethingmeaningfulandpreparewelforthefu
ture.
IwanttotravelaroundsothatIcanknowmoreaboutthe
cultureinourcountry.Tokeephealthy,Ilexerciseforat
leastonehouraday.Exercisemakesmefulofenergy.Il
listentomusictorelaxmyself.Also,inordertoimprovemy
self,IlreadsomebooksIlike.Illearntocookformypar
ents.Besides,Ilhelpoutaroundthecommunity.Finaly,I
wilmakeaclearplanforthenewtermtomakesureIcan
startitsmoothly.AndIlmakeaperfectplantoliveahappy
life.
Ihopeeveryonewilspendawonderfulvacation.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③一
二、第一段 Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmy
mind.;第二段Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,and
othersdancedtothemusic.;第三段 Thispartyismean
ingfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbut
alsobecauseitwasachancetoexpressourthankstoour
teachers.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
2.Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesandmakes
uspreparewelforthenextclass.
3.Onlydoingsocanwehavemoreenergytostudyefectively
inclass.
4.Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute
break.
二、 ATenminuteBreak
Wehaveatenminutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmy
opinion,takingthetenminutebreakisnecessary,becauseit
makesusrelaxedbothphysicalyandmentaly.
Thetenminutebreakisusedtorelaxourselvesand
makesuspreparewelforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocan
wehavemoreenergytostudyefectivelyinclass.Myten
minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimple
exercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithme
happilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeel
energeticandlistencarefulytoteachers.Youshouldntrun
toofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,donttakeenergeticex
ercisetoomuch.
Ihopethateveryonewilhaveawonderfultenminute
break.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般现在时 ③一;三
二、第一段 Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworth
valuinginourdailylives.;第二段 Iofertodosome
houseworkwheneverIhavetimebecauseitnotonlyhelps
melearnsomebasiclifeskilsbutalsogivesmyparents
sometimetohavearest.;第三段 Itsmyfamilythatgive
methepowertogoforward.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepart
involunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
2.Itwasverytiring,butIdiditfortwoweeks.
3.IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.
二、记叙文范文
BeingaVolunteer
Itisimportantformiddleschoolstudentstotakepartin
volunteerserviceactivitiesintheirfreetime.
Lastyear,Ijoinedagrouptohelptheneighborsthrow
outtheirrubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery
early,andcolecttherubbishfromdoortodoor.Atfirst,I
foundithardtogetupearly.Itwasverytiring,butIdidit
fortwoweeks.Intheend,Igotathankyouleterfromthe
neighbors.Atthattime,Ifeltproudofmyself.Fromthat,I
learnedhowtosortdiferentkindsofgarbage.
IamhappythatIamabletooferhelpeventhoughIam
stilamiddleschoolstudent.Ithinkitsgreattobeavolun
teer.Helpingothersbringshappinessnotonlytoothersbut
alsotoourselves.
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