内容正文:
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Knock-knock-knock. “Hello? ” I called timidly through my cousin Anita’ s bedroom door. No answer. There’s no way she forgot I was moving in today, right? I thought. “Anita? It’s me, Norah! ” I called again.
I had only met my cousin once a couple of years ago when Anita and Aunt Sonam had flown to California to visit. Mom had hoped Anita and I would be friends. But all Anita wanted to talk about was soccer, which was practically a foreign language to me. Secretly, I had felt relieved when the visit was over.
Now, I was standing in my aunt’s tiny apartment in New York City, and there was still no answer from Anita. I knocked again, a little louder this time. Finally, Anita opened the door. She apologized, saying she had been listening to music. But instead of inviting me in, Anita frowned at my massive suitcase.
Behind her, I could see a blue beanbag chair crowded next to a bunk bed(上下铺). In my old room in California, I’d had a double bed all to myself, and my original artwork had covered all the walls. Anita’s walls, on the other hand, were covered with posters of the U. S. women’s soccer team. I didn’t see any free space to hang anything else.
“C-can I come in? ” I asked, blushing. Anita nodded, but she barely moved. I had no choice but to squeeze by her into the room. I put my stuff against the wall and Anita started bouncing the soccer ball from her foot to her knee and back again. Suddenly, her foot kicked the ball at an odd angle, and it accidentally flew toward me. “Whoops! ” Anita called. “Think fast! ”
But I was still taking in the surroundings, so the ball caught me off guard and bounced off my shoulder. Forcing a smile, I pretended it didn’t bother me. Unsure of what to do, I took out my sketchbook(素描本) and colored pencils and sat down. Just holding my sketchbook made me feel more at ease. I started sketching aimlessly while Anita went back to bounce her ball.
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, it dawned on me that I could draw Anita in action.
Anita studied the drawing carefully.
文章大意
Norah 搬到纽约和表姐 Anita 一起住。她们几年前见过一次,但 Anita 只对足球感兴趣,让 Norah 觉得有些隔阂。Norah 来到 Anita 狭小的公寓,Anita 看到她的大行李箱时皱了皱眉。房间很拥挤,没什么空间给 Norah 放东西。Anita 在屋里玩球还不小心砸到 Norah,但 Norah 没说什么。后来 Norah 拿出素描本开始画画,缓解尴尬。
伏笔及续写回应
1. 伏笔:Anita 热爱足球,文中多次提到她玩球的场景。续写回应:Norah 画 Anita 玩球的画面,引起 Anita 的注意和赞赏。
2. 伏笔:Norah 擅长画画,拿出素描本后有了后续的情节发展。续写回应:通过画画改善了两人的关系。
续写要点
1. 第一段:Norah 开始画 Anita 玩球的样子,专注于捕捉她的动作、表情和姿态,突出 Norah 画画时的认真以及对 Anita 的重新认识,从艺术角度展现 Anita 的活力。
2. 第二段:Anita 看到画后,先是惊讶然后表达赞赏,两人之间的紧张氛围由此缓解,关系开始改善,体现出彼此开始接受对方。
情感线
从最初 Norah 对和 Anita 相处的不安、尴尬,到通过画画这一行为,两人关系有所缓和,情感由消极向积极转变。
故事线
Norah 搬到 Anita 家,环境的不适和之前的隔阂让气氛尴尬,玩球插曲加剧了这种氛围,但 Norah 画画的举动成为转折点,改善了两人关系。
主旨升华句
1. "Art has the power to bridge the gap between different souls."(艺术有能力弥合不同灵魂之间的差距。)
2. "A shared moment of creativity can break the ice of unfamiliarity."(一个共同的创造性时刻可以打破陌生的坚冰。)
3. "In the language of art, we can find common ground even with those we least expect."(在艺术的语言中,我们甚至可以在最意想不到的人身上找到共同点。)
4. "Sometimes, a simple drawing can be the key to unlocking a new friendship."(有时,一幅简单的画可以成为开启新友谊的钥匙。)
5. "The beauty of art lies in its ability to connect us beyond our differences."(艺术之美在于它有能力超越我们的差异将我们联系起来。)
写作示范 1
Suddenly, it dawned on me that I could draw Anita in action. I carefully observed every detail of her movements as she played with the soccer ball. The curve of her body as she bent to control the ball, the determination in her eyes, and the energy in her limbs were all vividly presented under my pencil. I was so absorbed in drawing that I forgot the uneasiness between us. I wanted to use my drawing to show my understanding of her love for soccer.
Anita studied the drawing carefully. Her eyes widened in surprise. "You really captured me," she said with a big smile. There was no more coldness in her tone. I could feel the ice between us melting. "I never knew you could draw like this. It's amazing." This simple compliment made me feel warm. From that moment on, we started to see each other in a new light, realizing that we could be more than just reluctant roommates.
写作示范 2
Suddenly, it dawned on me that I could draw Anita in action. I adjusted my position slightly to get a better view of her. As my pencil glided across the paper, I captured the rhythm of her bounces, the way her hair swayed with each movement. I drew the soccer ball as if it were an extension of her, an integral part of her being. I poured my concentration into the sketch, hoping to create a connection through art.
Anita studied the drawing carefully. A look of astonishment crossed her face. "This is... incredible," she murmured. She looked up at me, and for the first time since I arrived, there was genuine warmth in her eyes. "I'm sorry if I made you feel unwelcome. You're really talented." This exchange opened the door to a new beginning. We both understood that our differences could be the start of a beautiful friendship rather than a barrier.
参考答案
Suddenly, it dawned on me that I could draw Anita in action. Quickly turning to a blank page, I broadly outlined the shape of my cousin bouncing the soccer ball. My spirits rose with each new line I drew. It was true that I didn’t enjoy playing sports, but I was really enjoying the challenge of trying to sketch my cousin in action! Although it was my first attempt at something like this, I was pleased with the way I’d captured the energy of Anita’s movements. As I was examining my drawing, I didn’t notice the soccer ball was no longer bouncing. I glanced up to see Anita curiously eyeing my drawing. Nervously, I handed the sketchbook to her.
Anita studied the drawing carefully. I resisted the urge to grab the sketchbook and hide. She must think it was totally weird. However, Anita said it was awesome and asked if she could have it. Before I could respond, she had already ripped the drawing out of the sketchbook. Then Anita rummaged through a drawer for a tape, saying that she wasn’t really into art, but thought the drawing should definitely be on display in “our room”. After taping the drawing over one of her posters, Anita said a few changes needed to be made around the room if I was moving in. With a broad smile, I picked up Anita’s soccer ball and tossed it toward my new roommate. “Think fast! ”
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