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Unit 5 First Aid
人教版2019选择性必修第二册
Reading for writing
Share your story about providing first aid
Learning about language
Learning Objectives
read and understand English materials about first aid, and can describe first aid in English;
recognize the importance of learning first aid knowledge, learn to protect themselves and help others;
improve their abilities in learning comprehension, as well as critical thinking and problem-solving skills.
Activity 1
Watch a video and think about the questions:
What happened to Sheldon?
What technique did George use to save him?
Activity 1
Watch a video and think about the questions:
What happened to Sheldon?
What technique did George use to save him?
Sheldon is choking on a sausage and George is performing the Heimlich manoeuvre on him.
Activity 1
Henry Heimlic created the Heimlich manoeuvre in 1974. It is a useful first-aid way to help choking victims.
How is the Heimlich manoeuvre performed?
Is it easy to learn?
What do you know about Heimlich manoeuvre?
Activity 2
Read and put A--E in the correct places in the text.
Choking victims usually have only about four minutes before they collapse and sometimes die
If you see someone choking, first call the emergency services
Chen wasted no time
With choking victims, every minute counts
Doing the Heimlich manoeuvre on a small child is not recommended
C. Chen wasted no time.
A. Choking victims usually have only about four minutes before they collapse and sometimes die
B. If you see someone choking, first call the emergency services.
E. Doing the Heimlich manoeuver on a small child is not recommended
D. With choking victims, every minute counts.
Activity 3
Read for the structure
A first aid story
An introduction of the Heimlich manoeuvre
The conclusion of the story
Para. 1-2
Para. 3-5
Para. 6
→Highlight the theme
1. Who were the people involved?
2. What happened?
3. Where did it happen?
4. What did Chen Wei do?
5. How does the story end?
A narrative essay
Narrative
Expository
Activity 3
Conclusion: the structure of a narrative essay.
the set-up
Who
Where
When
What
the conflict
a challenge or difficulty
the conclusion
the end of the story
Write a narrative essay
A narrative essay tells a story. Like all good stories, it has three parts: the set-up, the conflict, and the conclusion. The set-up tells you about who, what, and where. The conflict always involves a challenge or difficulty that the characters face. The conclusion is the end of the story, where the problem in Part 2 has been solved.
Activity 3
How to perform Heimlich manoeuvre
___________ him/her
______ your arms around his/her _____
_________ with one hand
place it in the ________
of his/her stomach
___________with your other hand tightly
_________ and into his/her stomach in one motion
waist
stand behind
wrap
make a fist
grab your fist
push up
upper part
Activity 4
How to perform Heimlich manoeuvre
lay the child ________
head _______ than his/her body
_____________to his/her upper back
How to perform the Heimlich manoeuvre on small child?
face down
lower
give firm slaps
Activity 4
Activity 5
Read for Language
Read the 1st paragraph and find out the description of the emergency.
Chen Wei, a high school student in Beijing, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. A fellow diner at the restaurant, Zhang Tao, was choking on some steak. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friends were slapping him on the back.
action
+
facial expressions/ emotions
Activity 5
Read the 2nd paragraph and find out the verbs used to describe Chen’s reaction.
Chen wasted no time. He got up and ran to Zhang’s table at once. With the help of Zhang’s friends, he was able to help Zhang to his feet. Then, standing behind Zhang, Chen did the Heimlich manoeuvre.
What did the underlined verbs show about Chen’s reaction?
His help was quick, timely and professional.
Activity 5
Read the 4th and find out the verbs used to describe how to deal with choking.
If you see someone choking, first call the emergency services. Then, make sure that the victim is really choking: A choking person cannot speak. Slapping the victim’s back will often force out the obstruction. If this does not work, you can perform the Heimlich manoeuvre by standing behind him and wrapping your arms around his waist. Make a fist with one hand and place it in the upper part of his stomach. Grabbing your fist with your other hand tightly, push up and into his stomach in one motion. Continue doing this until the obstruction is forced out.
Before Heimlich manoeuvre
Call the emergency
Make sure that…
Slap the victim’s back
Performing Heimlich manoeuvre
Stand behind him
Wrap your arms…
Make a fist and place it…
Grab your fist
Push up and into…
Activity 5
Read the 5th paragraph and find out how to perform Heimlich manoeuvre on a small child.
Doing the Heimlich maneuver on a small child is not recommended, as you may hurt him. Instead, lay the child face down on your lap with the head lower than the rest of his body, and then give firm slaps to his upper back until he can breathe again.
precise action
+
precise position
Summary 1
Use precise verbs and add other details
Situations Verbs used Others
Emergency
Reaction
How to perform Heimlich
manoeuvre
How to perform Heimlich manoeuvre on a small child
Hear sb screaming
Choke on some steak
Hold his throat
His face turning red (facial expressions)
Desperate (emotions)
Got up and ran
Help Zhang to his feet
Stand before
Stand behind
Wrap your arms around his waist
Make a fist and grab your fist
Push up and into his stomach
Continue doing this
Before Heimlich manoeuvre:
Call the emergency
Make sure that…
Slap the victim’s back
Lay the child
Give firm slaps
Face down on your lap
With head lower than…
To his upper back
Activity 5
Read the 1st paragraph and find out how the author linked the sequential (按顺序的) actions or events.
Chen Wei, a high school student in Beijing, had his dinner interrupted when he heard someone screaming from another table. A fellow diner at the restaurant, Zhang Tao, was choking on some steak. He was now holding his throat with his face turning red, while his desperate friends were slapping him on the back.
Activity 5
Read the 2nd paragraph and find out how the author linked the sequential (按顺序的) verbs.
Chen wasted no time. He got up and ran to Zhang’s table at once. With the help of Zhang’s friends, he was able to help Zhang to his feet. Then, standing behind Zhang, Chen did the Heimlich manoeuvre. The food was instantly forced out, and Zhang began to breathe again. Ten minutes later, an ambulance arrived. The doctors checked Zhang and made sure that he was fine. They suggested he eat more slowly and take smaller bites before they left.
Summary 2
Use proper ways to link sequential actions
Types Examples from the text More examples
Adverbial
Adverbial Clauses
V. ing-form
Now
At once
Then, …
Instantly
Again
Ten minutes later
Immediately,
Before/after that
Soon, …
…
when + instant action
while + continuous action
before + sentence
after + sentence
until + sentence
as soon as + sentence
hear someone screaming
with his face turning red
standing behind, … did…
Extension
How to choose a good quote?
The quote in the end depends on your theme.
life-saving
“First-aid is for everyone everywhere.”
“Safety brings first-aid to the uninjured.” – F.S.Huges
“Accidents do happen; make first-aid your best mate.”
first-aid
“You don’t have to be a doctor to save lives.”
“Next to creating a life the finest thing a man can do is to save one.”
-- Abraham Lincoln
“We all have the power to save a life.”
You can choose either a part of the character’s saying or a great man’s as long as your quote helps strengthen your theme.
Writing task
A narrative essay on providing first–aid
What person/perspective should be used?
What verb tense should be used?
Scene:David的女儿在玩耍时误吞纽扣,David通过急救措施帮助女儿脱险。
The first/third person.
Past tense.
Structure
Parts Elements Key words
1. Set-up Who? Where? What?
2. Development Any conflict(s)?
3. Conclusion How does the story end?
Any comment(s)/ quote(s)?
David & his daughter Jane
At home
Jane swallowed a button
Jane choked on a button
frightened, struggling, lips blue
Checked, slapped to her back
David taught first-aid at college
Importance of first-aid:
“When seconds count, an ambulance is often minutes away”.
Evaluation
Work in pairs.
Use the checklist to help each other revise the drafts.
Is the narrative essay clear?
Does it have three parts?
Does the first part tell you about who, what and where?
Does the second part show a conflict?
Does the third part give the conclusion?
Is there a good quote to sum things up?
Are the details of the story easy to understand?
Evaluation
One possible work
One morning, David was working home while watching his infant daughter Jane crawling on the floor. Suddenly, he noticed that she had picked something up and put it in her mouth. Then she began to move like she was struggling. He quickly jumped from his chair and ran over and picked her up. She now had a frightened look on her face with her lips turning blue. However, she was not crying or making a sound.
He carefully opened her mouth to see if there was obstruction. Not finding anything, he then laid her face down on his lap and gave her a few firm slaps to her back. It worked! Within seconds a small button fell from her mouth onto the floor, and she was breathing once again. Thanks to David’s quick thinking, Jane was saved.
David now teaches life-saving techniques at the local college, and he uses this story to impress upon students the need for quick action. “When seconds count,” he said, “an ambulance is often minutes away.”
Summary: the structure
One morning, David was working home while watching his infant daughter Jane crawling on the floor. Suddenly, he noticed that she had picked something up and put it in her mouth. Then she began to move like she was struggling. He quickly jumped from his chair and ran over and picked her up. She now had a frightened look on her face with her lips turning blue. However, she was not crying or making a sound.
He carefully opened her mouth to see if there was obstruction. Not finding anything, he then laid her face down on his lap and gave her a few firm slaps to her back. It worked! Within seconds a small button fell from her mouth onto the floor, and she was breathing once again. Thanks to David’s quick thinking, Jane was saved.
David now teaches life-saving techniques at the local college, and he uses this story to impress upon students the need for quick action. “When seconds count,” he said, “an ambulance is often minutes away.”
Part 1: the set-up
Part 2: the development
Part 3: the conclusion
Summary: the language
One morning, David was working home while watching his infant daughter Jane crawling on the floor. Suddenly, he noticed that she had picked something up and put it in her mouth. Then she began to move like she was struggling. He quickly jumped from his chair and ran over and picked her up. She now had a frightened look on her face with her lips turning blue. However, she was not crying or making a sound.
He carefully opened her mouth to see if there was obstruction. Not finding anything, he then laid her face down on his lap and gave her a few firm slaps to her back. It worked! Within seconds a small button fell from her mouth onto the floor, and she was breathing once again. Thanks to David’s quick thinking, Jane was saved.
Precise verbs
Detailed description (emotion/ facial expressions/ precise position)
Summary: the language
One morning, David was working home while watching his infant daughter Jane crawling on the floor. Suddenly, he noticed that she had picked something up and put it in her mouth. Then she began to move like she was struggling. He quickly jumped from his chair and ran over and picked her up. She now had a frightened look on her face with her lips turning blue. However, she was not crying or making a sound.
He carefully opened her mouth to see if there was obstruction. Not finding anything, he then laid her face down on his lap and gave her a few firm slaps to her back. It worked! Within seconds a small button fell from her mouth onto the floor, and she was breathing once again. Thanks to David’s quick thinking, Jane was saved.
adverbial
adverbial clause
(while)
Summary: the language
David was working home while watching his infant daughter Jane crawling on the floor.
She now had a frightened look on her face with her lips turning blue. However, she was not crying or making a sound.
Not finding anything, he then laid her face down on his lap and gave her a few firm slaps to her back.
two actions at the same time
two actions at the same time
V-ing as the cause
Summary: the language
David now teaches life-saving techniques at the local college, and he uses this story to impress upon students the need for quick action. “When seconds count,” he said, “an ambulance is often minutes away.”
The end of the story
The quote echoes and restates the theme
Assignment
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友David的女儿玩耍时误吞积木Lego。David通过急救措施帮助女儿脱离了危险。请你写一封邮件,表达你的关心和赞扬。
写作要求:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Option 1:
Rewrite your essay with the suggestions from your partner.
Option 2:
Thank you
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