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专题06 书信写作
1.
(2024·广东)假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Peter计划寒假来中国旅游,期间将在你所居住的城市游玩一天,希望你能给他当导游。请用英文给Peter 写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
(1)表示欢迎:
(2)介绍游玩安排:品尝美食、参观博物馆、参加朋友聚会等;
(3)期待他的到来。
注意:
1 .词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am very glad to hear that you'll come to China to have a tour on winter vacation. Being your guide is fortunate. Welcome to our city and hope that you can have a good day and enjoy yourself.
First let's introduce our arrangement. Our city is a beautiful city which lies in the east of Shandong province. We'll pay a visit to our city's museum in the morning and in the afternoon, we plan to have our lunch in the famous restaurant called Big Hotel. There is plenty of delicious food in the restaurant. In the evening, we'll have a party with my friends at my home.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。的外国朋友Peter计划寒假来中国旅游,期间将你所居住的城市游玩一天,希望你能给他当导游。请用英文给Peter 写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐的:glad→pleased
希望:hope→expect
出名的:famous→noted
幸运的:fortunate→lucky
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We'll pay a visit to our city's museum in the morning and in the afternoon, we plan to have our lunch in the famous restaurant called Big Hotel.
拓展句:We'll pay a visit to our city's museum in the morning and in the afternoon, we plan to have our lunch in the famous restaurant that is called Big Hotel.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to hear that you'll come to China to have a tour on winter vacation.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Our city is a beautiful city which lies in the east of Shandong province.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
2.
(2023·广东)假定你是李华。请给外教David写一封邮件,邀请他参加在学校操场举办的“英语之夜”活动。活动时间为下周五晚上六点到八点。
内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2) 活动内容:演唱歌曲、朗诵诗歌和表演话剧;
(3)希望对方能参加。
注意:1.词数 90左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
It is a great privilege for me to invite you to participate in the activity of English Night. Here is some detailed information you may want to know .
The event is scheduled to be held on the playground from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday, running for two hours. We will have lots of activities you are interested in, such as singing, reading poems, and acting English Drama.
We really hope that you would accept this invitation. If you don’t have prior appointment, please come and join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。请给外教David写一封邮件,邀请他参加在学校操场举办的“英语之夜”活动。活动时间为下周五晚上六点到八点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
举行:hold→throw
对……感兴趣:be interested in→take interest in
回复:reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We will have lots of activities you are interested in, such as singing, reading poems, and acting English Drama.
拓展句:We will have lots of activities you are interested in, which include singing, reading poems, and acting English Drama.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here is some detailed information you may want to know about.(运用了省略了关系词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The event is scheduled to be held on the playground from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday, running for two hours.(运用了现在分词作状语)
3.
(2022·广东)假定你是李华。你和外国朋友Robert约定下周一去参加晚会。但你得了流感,医生建议你休息一段时间,因此不能赴约。请给Robert写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
(1)告知不能赴约;
(2)说明不能赴约的原因;
(3)希望下次再约。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robert,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t attend the evening party next Monday.
I know I have promised you, but I’ve been having the flu unexpectedly. I didn’t feel well last night and later I found I had a fever and coughed badly, so my parents sent me to the hospital, where I was told I got the flu. The doctor advised me to stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
If it’s convenient for you, shall we make another appointment after my recovery? Sorry again for any trouble this may cause.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的外国朋友Robert写一封电子邮件告诉他你因得了流感而不能跟他一起去参加晚会了。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:terribly→awfully
告诉:tell→inform
参加:attend→participate in
出乎意料地:unexpectedly→beyond one’s expectations
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The doctor advised me to stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
拓展句:The doctor advised that I should stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t attend the evening party next Monday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I didn’t feel well last night and later I found I had a fever and coughed badly, so my parents sent me to the hospital, where I was told I got the flu.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
4.
(2021·广东)假定你是李华,学校将在下周五下午:2:30在运动场举办“英语角”(English Corner)活动。届时,英语老师和同学们将会参加。请你写信邀请外教Robert参加,并请他谈谈他的中学时光。
内容要点:
(1)写信目的;
(2)活动时间、地点及主要内容;
(3)期待对方回复。
注意: 1.词数90左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robert,
I'm writing to invite you to attend an English corner. The activity will be held on the playground of our school at 2:00 p.m. next Friday.
Varieties of English activities are well prepared, including performing English plays, communicating freely with your classmates and singing famous English songs, which will surely give you a surprise. I sincerely ask you to prepare a short speech to talk about your time in the high school, which will be greatly appreciated. So please come if it is convenient to you.
I hope we are lucky enough to have you here and expect to learn more with your presence and participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,学校将在下周五下午: 2:30在运动场举办“英语角”(English Corner)活动。届时,英语老师和同学们将会参加。请你写信邀请外教Robert参加,并请他谈谈他的中学时光。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→take place
各种各样的:varieties of→multifarious
肯定:surely→definitely
参加:attend→take part in
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I'm writing to invite you to attend an English corner. The activity will be held on the playground of our school at 2:00 p.m. next Friday.
拓展句:I'm writing to invite you to attend an English corner which will be held on the playground of our school at 2:00 p.m. next Friday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Varieties of English activities are well prepared, including performing English plays, communicating freely with your classmates and singing famous English songs, which will surely give you a surprise.(运用了动名词作宾语,which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】So please come if it is convenient to you.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型3】I hope we are lucky enough to have you here and expect to learn more with your presence and participation.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
5.
(2020·广东)假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。
内容要点:
(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;
(2)地点:学校操场;
(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数:
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Alice,
How is it going? I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.
By the way, you’re particularly expected to sing, dance and play some musical instruments or perform anything you’re good at.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信;假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。内容要点:(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;(2)地点:学校操场;(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:take part in our concert in the open air(参加露天音乐会);for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.(为了庆祝即将到来的春节);particularly expected to sing, dance(特别期待唱歌、跳舞)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句和一般将来时态的被动语态;I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming.句中使用if引导的从句。
6.
(2019·广东)你是李华,就读于、国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob,希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友(pen pal),以便相互学习对方的语言和文化:你容易相处,熟悉中国历史,喜欢中国传统音乐。
内容要点:
(1)写信目的;
(2)自我介绍;
(3)表示感谢。
注意 : 1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear bob,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bob,
My name is Li Hua, an international school student. I am writing the letter to you to help me to find a pen pal.
I’m outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends. Now I want to make a pen pal from English-speaking country, from whom I can make a good command of English language and culture. At the same time, I would like to share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with him.
I would appreciate it if you can recommend a pen pal to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文为一封书信:你是李华,就读于、国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob,希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友(pen pal),以便相互学习对方的语言和文化:你容易相处,熟悉中国历史,喜欢中国传统音乐。内容要点:(1)写信目的;(2)自我介绍;(3)表示感谢。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:an international school student(一名国际学校的学生);to help me to find a pen pal(帮助我找一个笔友);outgoing and easy-going boy(外向且容易相处的男孩);fond of making friends(喜爱交朋友);make a good command of English language and culture(精通英语语言和文化)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一封书信,内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends.句中使用so引导的并列句;Now I want to make a pen pal from English-speaking country, from whom I can make a good command of English language and culture.句中使用定语从句;I would appreciate it if you can recommend a pen pal to me.句中使用if引导的从句。
7.
(2018·广东)假如你是李华,你的朋友 Robert来信说要来中国学汉语,想了解你校情况。你回信告知:你校建于1950年,校园环境优美,有教学楼、图书馆、音乐舞蹈室、游泳池和运动场,而且你校的老师都优秀,对学生很有耐心。
内容要点:
(1)听说 Robert要来你校学习,你很高兴。
(2)简单介绍你校情况。
(3)期待早日在中国见到 Robert。
注意:1、词数80左右。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3、开头和结尾已给出,不算字数。
Dear Robert,
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robert,
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese. Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment. On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance. Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise. The teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students.
Looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生回信Robert告知学校基本情况。
【详解】第一步: 审题
体裁: 应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构: 总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.听说 Robert要来你校学习,你很高兴。
2.简单介绍你校情况。
3.期待早日在中国见到 Robert。
第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)
look forward to;in our spare time;be patient with;as soon as possible.
第三步: 连词成句
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.
Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment.
On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time.
Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance.
Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise.
he teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步: 润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句,如: On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance.运用了where引导的定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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专题06 书信写作
1.
(2024·广东)假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Peter计划寒假来中国旅游,期间将在你所居住的城市游玩一天,希望你能给他当导游。请用英文给Peter 写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
(1)表示欢迎:
(2)介绍游玩安排:品尝美食、参观博物馆、参加朋友聚会等;
(3)期待他的到来。
注意:
1 .词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.
(2023·广东)假定你是李华。请给外教David写一封邮件,邀请他参加在学校操场举办的“英语之夜”活动。活动时间为下周五晚上六点到八点。
内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2) 活动内容:演唱歌曲、朗诵诗歌和表演话剧;
(3)希望对方能参加。
注意:1.词数 90左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.
(2022·广东)假定你是李华。你和外国朋友Robert约定下周一去参加晚会。但你得了流感,医生建议你休息一段时间,因此不能赴约。请给Robert写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
(1)告知不能赴约;
(2)说明不能赴约的原因;
(3)希望下次再约。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.
(2021·广东)假定你是李华,学校将在下周五下午:2:30在运动场举办“英语角”(English Corner)活动。届时,英语老师和同学们将会参加。请你写信邀请外教Robert参加,并请他谈谈他的中学时光。
内容要点:
(1)写信目的;
(2)活动时间、地点及主要内容;
(3)期待对方回复。
注意: 1.词数90左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.
(2020·广东)假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。
内容要点:
(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;
(2)地点:学校操场;
(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数:
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
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6.
(2019·广东)你是李华,就读于、国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob,希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友(pen pal),以便相互学习对方的语言和文化:你容易相处,熟悉中国历史,喜欢中国传统音乐。
内容要点:
(1)写信目的;
(2)自我介绍;
(3)表示感谢。
注意 : 1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear bob,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
7.
(2018·广东)假如你是李华,你的朋友 Robert来信说要来中国学汉语,想了解你校情况。你回信告知:你校建于1950年,校园环境优美,有教学楼、图书馆、音乐舞蹈室、游泳池和运动场,而且你校的老师都优秀,对学生很有耐心。
内容要点:
(1)听说 Robert要来你校学习,你很高兴。
(2)简单介绍你校情况。
(3)期待早日在中国见到 Robert。
注意:1、词数80左右。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3、开头和结尾已给出,不算字数。
Dear Robert,
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.
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Yours
Li Hua
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