内容正文:
书面表达之通知
在写口头通知时,应注意以下几个问题:
1. 在正文之前,要有称呼语,以引起别人的注意。如: Boys and girls , attention please. / Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention please? I have something important to tell you. /Attention, please! I have an announcement to make.等。
2. 同样地,结尾要给听众结束通知的信号: That's all . /Thank you so much for it . /Thank you for your attention等。
书面通知:
1. 标题:在正文上面正中的地方 写上 NOTICE .
2. 正文(注意:不要称呼和自我介绍)
① 首段:表述活动目的及活动基本信息
② 主体:时间、地点、(活动流程),活动要求/准备工作和报名方式等
③ 尾段:号召参与、表示期待
3 )单位:发通知的单位一般写在 正文的右下角。
通知类:英语通知,分为口头通知和书面通知两类。
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假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校即将举办中国古诗词朗诵大赛(Classical Chinese Poetry Reciting Contest)。为鼓励你校学生参加比赛,请你代表学生会写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 比赛具体事项(时间、地点、准备工作和报名方式等);
3. 欢迎大家参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
写作类型:Notice
When/Where/How: activities
Aim/ purpose
What
审 题
人称(person)
时态(tense)
Para. 1: The lead
活动目的和意义的表达方式
①活动意义或者活动目的短语
1.公益类活动(去敬老院、福利院、环保):
improve students’ communicative/social skills
提高学生们的沟通/社交技能
inspire/improve students’ social responsibilities
激发/提高学生们的社会责任感
raise/strengthen awareness of garbage classification
提高/加强垃圾分类意识
活动目的和意义的表达方式
2.文娱休闲类活动(比赛、展览、晚会、运动会, 讲座, 游玩)
cultivate students’ love/enthusiasm/passion for... 培养学生们对...的爱/热爱
raise/arouse students’ interest in... 提高/唤起学生对...的兴趣
enrich students’ campus life 丰富学生们的校园生活
broaden students’ horizons 拓宽学生们的视野
promote students’ understanding of 提高学生们对…的理解
help students have/gain a better understanding of… 帮助学生更好的了解…
develop students’ practical skills 培养学生的实践能力
活动目的和意义的表达方式
2.文娱休闲类活动(比赛、展览、晚会、运动会, 讲座, 游玩)
exercise students’ willpower锻炼学生的意志力
enhance the cohesive force 增强凝聚力
strengthen students’ unity加强学生的团结
build up students’ bodies增强学生们的体魄
help students get close to nature 帮助学生们亲近自然
give students relaxation from heavy work让学生从繁重的学习中放松
relax students physically and mentally 让学生身心得到放松
②Sentence patterns:(1)+2+3
(1) Aimed at doing sth/With the aim/intention of doing sth/In order to do sth,
(2) a (…) competition/contest/activity titled/themed+“题目”
(3) will be held/will be organized/will take place/is scheduled to be held/is to be held in our school(或者具体的地点).
不可原谅的错误
举办
Sb will hold the activity.
The activity will be held by sb.
The activity will take place(尤指根据安排或计划)发生,进行(不可用被动)
知识精讲
hold-held-held
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【即学即练】
(1)为了丰富校园生活,激发学生对中国文学的热情,我校拟举办一场别开生面的中国古典诗词朗诵比赛。
Aimed at enriching campus life and stimulating/arousing students’ enthusiasm for Chinese literature, an extraordinary Classical Chinese Poetry Reciting Contest is scheduled to be held in our school.
(2)为鼓劢我们学生锻炼身体,保持健康,我们学校将举行一场马拉松比赛。
With the intention of encouraging us students to take exercise and keeping healthy, a marathon race is to be held by our school.
(3)为了加强环保意识,我们将组织一个以“社区垃圾分类”为主题的社会实践活动。
In order to raise/strengthen the awareness of environmental protection, we will organize a social practice activity whose theme is Waste Sorting in Community.
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【即学即练】
(4)为了提高人们的保护地球的意识, 一项叫做“拯救地球”的活动将于下周日在学校举行。
Aimed at raising people’s awareness of protecting the earth, an activity themed Save the Earth will be held in the school next Sunday.
(5)为了提高学生垃圾分类意识和帮助学生们养成良好的习惯, 一场海报设计大赛将会举办。
With the intention of strengthening students’ awareness of garbage classification and helping students form good habits, a poster designing competition will take place/will be held.
(6)为了帮助学生更好的了解我们学校的发展, 一部优秀的影片将会在校园放映。
In order to help students have a better understanding of the development of our school, an outstanding movie will be shown on our campus.
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Para. 2: The body
告知细节(时间、地点、活动要求或准备工作和报名方式等
a. 活动时间地点句式
1.As scheduled/arranged, 活动 is to be held/will take place +地方+时间
“按照计划/安排, 活动将于.....举办”
2. As scheduled/arranged, 活动 will begin/start+at 时间 ,lasting about +时间
“按照计划/安排, 活动将于.....开始,持续多久”
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a. 活动时间地点句式
3.活动 is expected to last about +时间, from +时间+to+时间+地点
“活动将于…至…在…举行,预计持续…”
4.As scheduled/arranged, we will meet/gather+地方+时间, and then take a bus(或其他的交通方式) to+目的地,which is expected to take+多久。
“按照计划/安排, 我们将于…时间在……地点集合,并坐公汽前往…, 预计…多久到达”
告知细节(时间、地点、活动要求或准备工作和报名方式等
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2024年10月
2024年10月24日
2024年10月24日星期四
2024年10月24日星期四的上午8点
2024年10月24日星期四的上午8点-10点
时间的正确表达
in October, 2024;
on October 24, 2024
on Thursday, October 24, 2024
in年月季,上下晚
on具体的某一天,或具体某一天的上下晚
at 具体某一个时刻,或固定搭配(at night, at Christmas)
at 8:00 on Thursday morning, October 24, 2024
from 8:00 am to 10:00 am on Thursday, October 24, 2024
上周末
上周六
上周一晚上
上周二晚上8点
last weekend
last Saturday
last Monday evening
at 8:00 pm. last Tuesday
at 8:00 last Tuesday evening
特别注意:this/that/next/last前不要介词
在实践/园艺基地
在会议室
在报告厅
在体育场
在养老院
在学生俱乐部
在学校大门口
在操场
在学校大礼堂
在二楼
在502室
in the practice/gardening base
in the meeting/conference room
in the lecture hall
in the stadium
in the nursing home
in the student/students’ club
at the school gate
on the playground
in the school auditorium
on the second floor
in Room 502
常用地点表达
【即学即练】
(1)讲座于周五下午2点到5点在主楼大厅举行,预计持续3个小时。
The lecture is expected to last 3 hours, from 2 pm to 5 pm on Friday in the hall of the main building.
(2)按照计划,比赛将于2024年12月30日举行。
As scheduled, the contest is to be held on Dec. 30th, 2024.
(3)按照安排,这个活动将在下周二晚上7点开始,持续约3小时。
As arranged, the activity will start at 7:00 next Tuesday evening, lasting about 3 hours
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b. 活动要求或准备工作和报名方式
1.You’re supposed to do…
2. It’s required/recommended that you should…
3.Whoever/Anyone who is interested can either sign up(报名参加) in … office or directly register(注册) on our website.
4. Those who intend to participate are required to sign up/submit your entries before …
告知细节(时间、地点、活动要求或准备工作和报名方式等
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【即学即练】
(1)有意参加者请在11月底之前在学生会办公室报名或者直接在我们学校网站报名。
Those who intend to participate are required to sign up in the Student Union’s office or directly register on our school website before the end of November.
(2)这次活动所有参与者将分为三个组,你要选择其中一个。
All the participants in the activity will be divided into 3 groups, one of which you’re supposed to choose.
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Para. 3: The ending
(3)结尾(欢迎/呼吁大家参加)
知识精讲
(1)我们将热烈欢迎那些对此感兴趣的人。
Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.
(2)这真的是一个丰富知识、拓展视野的好机会。
This is definitely a good opportunity to enrich your knowledge and broaden your horizons.
(3)你不能错过这个黄金机会,一定要准时参加。
You mustn’t miss the golden chance and make sure you attend it on time.
(4)不要犹豫,参加吧!我相信你会受益的很多。
Don’t hesitate to take part! I’m sure you will benefit a lot.
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Your presentation
Notice
With the intention of enriching campus life and stimulating students’ enthusiasm for Chinese literature, an extraordinary Classical Chinese Poetry Reciting Contest is scheduled to be held in our school.
As arranged, the contest will take place in the lecture hall at 8 a.m. next Friday, lasting about 3 hours. To participate in it, you are supposed to select your poem and practise reciting it ahead of time. In addition, whoever is interested can either go to sign up in the Student Union office or directly register on our school website.
This is definitely a good opportunity to enrich your knowledge and broaden your horizons. Don’t hesitate to take part! I’m sure you will benefit a lot.
Students’ Union
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谢谢观看
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