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Class: Name:
Writing
I. Pre-writing
Task 1: finish the useful phrases
1. 与...分享...
2. 景色优美的地方
3. 集中/关注做某事
4. 运用不同的技能
5. 给 (书/电影/画作等) 命名(entitle)
6. 不仅...而且...
7. 某事使某人想起+that...
8. 充满(full/filled)
9. 只要
10. 期待你的回复
Task 2: finish the useful sentences
1.我写信是想和你分享上周五我在一个美丽的公园上的一节艺术课。毫无疑问,这是一次非同寻常的经历,将深深地印在我心中。
I’m writing to share an art class ______________ I had in a beautiful park last Friday _____ you. It was_______________(undoubted) an exceptional experience that/which would remain_________(deep) in my heart.
2. 在公园里,我发现了一个风景优美的地方,集中精力创作我的艺术品。
In the park, I discovered a spot with ____________scenery/view and concentrated/ focused on___________(create) my piece of art.
3. 阳光明媚,鸟儿在树上叽叽喳喳地歌唱,这些都被我的画捕捉到了。
The sun was shining ____________ the birds were twittering/singing ______ the tree, ________ were all captured on my __________(paint).
4. 运用我学到的各种技能,我还记录了孩子们在草地上快乐玩耍和奔跑的场景,因此这幅画被命名为《夏日的青春》。
__________________(employ/use) various/different skills _______________I had learned, I also recorded the scene _______________children were playing and running _____________(happy) on the grass,___________________the painting were entitled “Youth in Summer”.
5. 在这门独特的课程之后,我的学校生活不仅充实了,而且我的审美能力也得到了提高。
After this_____________class, _________was my school life fulfilled, ______________my aesthetic(审美的) _________(able) was improved.
6.它提醒我,只要我们有敏锐的眼光去看,生活就是充满美丽的。我希望有一天我们能一起拥有这样的经历。期待你的回复!
It ________ (remind) me that life _______________________beauty, ___________we have keen eyes to see it. I hope we can have ___________________together someday. __________________________!
Writing
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:词数100左右。
II. While-writing
Para.1: 我写信是想和你分享上周五我在一个美丽的公园上的一节艺术课。毫无疑问,这是一次非同寻常的经历,将深深地印在我心中。
Para.2: 在公园里,我发现了一个风景优美的地方,集中精力创作我的艺术品。阳光明媚,鸟儿在树上叽叽喳喳地歌唱,这些都被我的画捕捉到了。运用我学到的各种技能,我还记录了孩子们在草地上快乐玩耍和奔跑的场景,因此这幅画被命名为《夏日的青春》。
Para.3: 在这门独特的课程之后,我的学校生活不仅充实了,而且我的审美能力也得到了提高。它提醒我,只要我们有敏锐的眼光去看,生活就是充满美丽的。我希望有一天我们能一起拥有这样的经历。期待你的回复。
III. Assignment
假定你是李华,上周五你们班组织了一场电影之夜。请你给美国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括: 请使用衡水体:
(1)观看的电影简介;
(2)你的感想。
注意:词数100左右;
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Vermeer
The Starry Night
van Gogh
Napoleon Crossing the Alps at the
St Bernard Pass
Бурлаки на Волге,
Burlaki na Volge
伏尔加河上的纤夫
列宾
Il Cenacolo or L'Ultima Cena
最后的晚餐
达芬奇
虾
齐白石
梅花
关山月
我的父亲
罗中立
清明上河图
张择端
千里江山图
王希孟
Share Personal Experience
with Others
Writing
Pre-writing
Task 1: finish the useful phrases
1. 与...分享...
2. 景色优美的地方
3. 集中/关注做某事
4. 运用不同的技能
5. 给 (书/电影/画作等) 命名(entitle)
不仅...而且...
某事使某人想起+that...
充满(full/filled)
只要
期待你的回复
1. 与...分享...
2. 景色优美的地方
3. 集中/关注做某事
4. 运用不同的技能
5. 给 (书、电影、画作等) 命名
2. a spot with breathtaking scenery/view
3. concentrated/focused on dong sth.
4. Employing/Using various/ different skills
+5
1. share... with...
4. be entitled +名称
6. 不仅...而且...
7. 某事使某人想起+that...
8. 充满(full/filled)
9. 只要
10. 期待你的回复
6. not only... but (also)...
8. be full of... / be filled with...
7. It reminds sb. that...
9. as long as
10. look forward to your reply
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Task 2: finish the useful sentences on your paper
Pre-writing
You need to fill in the blanks in the following sentences
You can write down your answers on your papers.
Let’s compete!
Choose one and answer the question loudly
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How to write?
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1.我写信是想和你分享上周五我在一个美丽的公园上的一节艺术课。毫无疑问,这是一次非同寻常的经历,将深深地印在我心中。
I’m writing to share an art class ________ I had in a beautiful park last Friday_____you. It was_______________(undoubted) an exceptional experience that/which would remain_________(deep) in my heart.
Sentence 1 raise your hands to answer
with
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that/which
undoubtedly
deeply
In the park, I discovered a spot with ____________scenery/view and concentrated/ focused on___________(create) my piece of art.
2.在公园里,我发现了一个风景优美的地方,集中精力创作我的艺术品。
Sentence 2 raise your hands to answer
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breathtaking
creating
3.阳光明媚,鸟儿在树上叽叽喳喳地歌唱,这些都被我的画捕捉到了。
Sentence 3 raise your hands to answer
+5
The sun was shining____________the birds were twittering/singing ______ the tree,________were all captured on my __________(paint).
while/and
on
which
painting
4.运用我学到的各种技能,我还记录了孩子们在草地上快乐玩耍和奔跑的场景,因此这幅画被命名为《夏日的青春》。
__________________(employ/use) various/different skills __________I had learned, I also recorded the scene _______________children were playing and running ______(happy)on the grass,___________________the painting were entitled “Youth in Summer”.
Sentence 4 raise your hands to answer
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Employing/Using
which/that
where/in which
happily
due to which/for which
5.在这门独特的课程之后,我的学校生活不仅充实了,而且我的审美能力也得到了提高。
Sentence 5 raise your hands to answer
+4
After this________class, _________was my school life fulfilled, ______________my aesthetic(审美的) _________(able) was improved.
unique
not only
but (also)
ability
6.它提醒我,只要我们有敏锐的眼光去看,生活就是充满美丽的。我希望有一天我们能一起拥有这样的经历。期待你的回复!
It ________ (remind) me that life _______________________beauty, ___________we have keen eyes to see it. I hope we can have ___________________together someday. __________________________!
Sentence 6 raise your hands to answer
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reminds
is full of/ be filled with
as long as
such an experience
Looking forward to your reply
作文题目
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
写作词数应为100 左右。
Share an experience
Purpose & Mood
Detailed information
Para 1
Para 2
Feelings & Thoughts
Para 3
While-writing
Structures of writing
How to share an experience?
Para.1:我写信是想和你分享上周五我在一个美丽的公园上的一节艺术课。毫无疑问,这是一次非同寻常的经历,将深深地印在我心中。
Para.2:在公园里,我发现了一个风景优美的地方,集中精力创作我的艺术品。阳光明媚,鸟儿在树上叽叽喳喳地歌唱,这些都被我的画捕捉到了。运用我学到的各种技能,我还记录了孩子们在草地上快乐玩耍和奔跑的场景,因此这幅画被命名为《夏日的青春》。
Para.3:在这门独特的课程之后,我的学校生活不仅充实了,而且我的审美能力也得到了提高。它提醒我,只要我们有敏锐的眼光去看,生活就是充满美丽的。我希望有一天我们能一起拥有这样的经历。期待你的回复!
Group Work: use the phrases and expressions
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+15
+15
我写信是想和你分享上周五我在一个美丽的公园上的一节艺术课。毫无疑问,这是一次非同寻常的经历,将深深地印在我心中。
Possible Version Para 1:
Purpose & Mood
I’m writing to share an art class that/which I had in a beautiful park last Friday with you. It was undoubtedly an exceptional experience that/which would remain deeply in my heart.
在公园里,我发现了一个风景优美的地方,集中精力创作我的艺术品。阳光明媚,鸟儿在树上叽叽喳喳地歌唱,这些都被我的画捕捉到了。运用我学到的各种技能,我还记录了孩子们在草地上快乐玩耍和奔跑的场景,因此这幅画被命名为《夏日的青春》。
Possible Version Para 2:
Detailed information
In the park, I discovered a spot with breathtaking scenery/view and concentrated/focused on creating my piece of art. The sun was shining while/and the birds were twittering/singing on the tree, which were all captured on my painting. Employing/Using various/different skills that I had learned, I also recorded the scene where children were playing and running happily on the grass, due to which/for which the painting were entitled “Youth in Summer”.
在这门独特的课程之后,我的学校生活不仅充实了,而且我的审美能力也得到了提高。它提醒我,只要我们有敏锐的眼光去看,生活就是充满美丽的。我希望有一天我们能一起拥有这样的经历。期待你的回复!
Possible Version Para 3: Feelings & Thoughts
After this unique class, not only was my school life fulfilled, but (also) my aesthetic(审美的) ability was improved. It reminds me that life is full of beauty, as long as we have keen eyes to see it. I hope we can have such an experience together someday. Looking forward to your reply!
Para.1:我写信是想和你分享上周五我在一个美丽的公园上的一节艺术课。毫无疑问,这是一次非同寻常的经历,将深深地印在我心中。
Para.2:在公园里,我发现了一个风景优美的地方,集中精力创作我的艺术品。阳光明媚,鸟儿在树上叽叽喳喳地歌唱,这些都被我的画捕捉到了。运用我学到的各种技能,我还记录了孩子们在草地上快乐玩耍和奔跑的场景,因此这幅画被命名为《夏日的青春》。
Para.3:在这门独特的课程之后,我的学校生活不仅充实了,而且我的审美能力也得到了提高。它提醒我,只要我们有敏锐的眼光去看,生活就是充满美丽的。我希望有一天我们能一起拥有这样的经历。期待你的回复!
Group Work: use the phrases and expressions
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+25
+25
Dear Chris.
I’m writing to share an art class that/which I had in a beautiful park last Friday with you. It was undoubtedly an exceptional experience that/which would remain deeply in my heart.
In the park, I discovered a spot with breathtaking scenery/view and concentrated/focused on creating my piece of art. The sun was shining while/and the birds were twittering/singing on the tree, which were all captured on my painting. Employing/Using various/different skills that I had learned, I also recorded the scene where children were playing and running happily on the grass, due to which/for which the painting were entitled “Youth in Summer”.
After this unique class, not only was my school life fulfilled, but (also) my aesthetic(审美的) ability was improved. It reminds me that life is full of beauty, as long as we have keen eyes to see it. I hope we can have such an experience together someday. Looking forward to your reply!
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