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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I couldn’t bear it any longer! My best friend had gone for lunch with the most popular girl in class, leaving me to eat my tuna sandwich alone in the library. Worse still, during dance class, my partner, a boy, refused to hold my hand and bad mouthed me behind my back, further feeding my anger. It was, without a doubt, my worst day in school. I was hurt and mad, and looking for a target to release my anger. When I got home from school, Mother had baked peanut butter cookies and piled them up on a plate. She even artfully decorated each one with royal icing and topped it with sugar. ”Couldn’t you have made chocolate chip?“ I said moodily. ”I could have,“ she replied from the laundry room, ”but I made peanut butter ones. Eat them while they’re still hot, sweetie.“ Although I thought Mother was rather unthoughtful, I caved in and took a few bites unwillingly in the end. Later, when she pulled a grilled chicken from the oven and sang a merry tune, I somehow got annoyed again—Never mind that Mother had busied herself the whole afternoon with the cooking just to put this hot meal on the table. I wanted hamburgers.     ”Nobody even likes that kind of food, Mum! Why didn’t you make hamburgers?“ I complained. Mother took a deep breath, ran her fingers through her messy hair and looked into my eyes with a puzzled look. ”Sweetheart, you’ve never complained about having it before. What’s up?“ she said matter-of-factly (平淡地). It was from there that all went downhill. I screamed and complained nonstop until Mother hit her limit. It was the first time that Mother had got mad at me. Nobody seemed to care about me, including my beloved mother! Ultimately, we had a shouting match in the hallway. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。 Unable to contain her anger, ”No dinner for you! Go to bed now!" she exploded. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then a thick, juicy smell of hamburgers greeted my nose. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 “我” 在学校遭遇了糟糕的一天，好友抛下 “我” 和别人一起吃午饭，舞蹈课上男舞伴拒绝牵手还在背后说 “我” 坏话。回家后，“我” 把怒气撒在妈妈身上，抱怨她做的花生酱饼干和烤鸡，而不是 “我” 想吃的巧克力曲奇和汉堡。妈妈询问原因，“我” 却不停地尖叫抱怨，最终和妈妈在走廊大吵一架。 五要素分析 · 人物：“我”、妈妈。 · 时间：放学后。 · 地点：家里。 · 起因：“我” 在学校不愉快，对妈妈准备的食物不满。 · 经过：“我” 向妈妈抱怨、发脾气，和妈妈吵架。 · 结果：妈妈生气地让 “我” 去睡觉，不许吃晚饭。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 · 伏笔：“我” 想吃汉堡，对妈妈做的食物不满。回应：第二段续写中妈妈为 “我” 做了汉堡，体现妈妈对 “我” 的爱和包容。 · 伏笔：和妈妈吵架，妈妈生气了。回应：第一段续写妈妈的愤怒爆发，让 “我” 去睡觉且没晚饭；第二段续写妈妈主动缓解关系，展现亲情的力量。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：愤怒与委屈交织，妈妈的愤怒达到顶点，“我” 在被惩罚后既有对妈妈的埋怨，也有对自己行为的后悔。 · 故事线：妈妈因 “我” 的无理取闹而大发雷霆，命令 “我” 去睡觉，不许吃晚饭，“我” 回到房间后情绪复杂。 第二段 · 情感线：惊讶、感动与愧疚，闻到汉堡味时的惊讶，看到妈妈时的感动，以及对之前行为的愧疚。 · 故事线：汉堡的香味传来，“我” 发现是妈妈做的，妈妈向 “我” 道歉，“我” 和妈妈和好。 主旨升华句 1. Love from family is like a warm fire that can melt the ice of our anger and misunderstanding. 2. In the sea of family love, even the biggest waves of anger will eventually subside. 3. Sometimes, we hurt the ones we love most in our moments of weakness, but their forgiveness always shines brightly. 4. Family is the place where love overcomes all, even our childish tantrums. 5. The bond of family is so strong that it can repair the cracks caused by our hasty words and actions. 写作示范 第一篇 Unable to contain her anger, ”No dinner for you! Go to bed now!" she exploded. I ran to my room, tears streaming down my face. I felt so lonely and misunderstood. As I lay on my bed, I thought about how mean I had been. I could hear Mom moving around downstairs, and each sound made my heart ache more. Then a thick, juicy smell of hamburgers greeted my nose. I got up and opened the door. There was Mom, holding a plate of hamburgers. "I know you've had a bad day. Let's not fight," she said softly. I hugged her tightly, feeling so sorry for my behavior. 第二篇 Unable to contain her anger, ”No dinner for you! Go to bed now!" she exploded. I was shocked by her words but also knew I deserved it. I went to my room, feeling a mix of anger and sadness. I thought about the day and realized how wrong I had been. I heard Mom sigh outside my door. Then a thick, juicy smell of hamburgers greeted my nose. I walked out to see Mom with a plate of hamburgers. She said, "I thought you might want these. I love you, and we should be kind to each other." I nodded, my eyes full of tears. We forgave each other. 第三篇 Unable to contain her anger, ”No dinner for you! Go to bed now!" she exploded. I stomped to my room, slamming the door. I was fuming inside, but also started to feel bad. I remembered all the times Mom had been nice to me. I lay on my bed, crying softly. Then a thick, juicy smell of hamburgers greeted my nose. I opened the door to find Mom. She said, "I made these for you. I don't want us to be angry." I looked at her and said, "I'm sorry, Mom." We shared a hug, and the anger disappeared. 参考答案 Unable to contain her anger, ”No dinner for you! Go to bed now!" she exploded. I stood there, stunned for a moment, then rushed upstairs in a fit of rage. Throwing myself onto the bed, I buried my face in the pillow, hot tears of anger and self - pity soaking into it. I couldn't believe she'd punished me like this, yet deep down, I knew I'd brought it on myself. Then a thick, juicy smell of hamburgers greeted my nose. I sat up, confused. Curiosity got the better of me, and I tiptoed downstairs. There was Mom in the kitchen, plating a hamburger with a side of fries. She looked up with a sad smile. "I know you've had a tough day, and I shouldn't have lost my temper. Let's make up," she said. My eyes welled up as I hugged her, realizing how much she truly cared despite our fight. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$