2025届高考英语读后续写专题之善举类繁忙路口的暂停：为盲人夫妇亮起的人性之光讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 We have all heard the expression: “Remember to stop and smell the roses.” But, how often do we really take time out of our busy fast-paced lives to notice the world around us? I have reflected back on one situation many times since it happened and have learned several powerful lessons from it. I’m as guilty as anyone of ignoring the world around in this manner, especially when I am driving on California’s overcrowded streets. A short time ago, however, I witnessed an event that showed me how being wrapped up in my own little world has kept me from being fully aware of the bigger world picture around me. I was driving to a business appointment and, as usual, I was planning in my mind what I was going to say. I came to a very busy crossroads where the stoplight had just turned red. “All right,” I thought to myself, “I can beat the next light if I race ahead of the pack. ”My mind and car were in auto pilot, ready to go when suddenly my absent-minded state was broken by an unforgettable sight. A young couple, both blind, was walking arm-in-arm across this busy crossroads with cars whizzing by in every direction. The woman was holding something tightly in her hands that sling to her chest, obviously carrying a child. Both of them had a white walking stick extended, searching for clues to direct them across the crossroads. Initially I was moved. They were overcoming what I felt was one of the most feared handicaps — blindness. “Wouldn’t it be terrible to be blind?” I thought. Without realizing the danger they were in, they were walking right the path of oncoming cars. I was frightened for them because I didn’t know if the other drivers understood what was happening. However, as I watched from the front line of traffic, I saw a miracle unfold before my eyes. 注意：     1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Every car in every direction did the same thing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Never noticing something different, the couple adjusted their route as they followed the coaching. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 我们常说要停下脚步欣赏周围，但在忙碌生活中却很少做到。作者在一次驾车去赴商业约会途中，在一个繁忙路口等红灯时，看到一对盲人夫妇手挽手过马路，妻子还抱着孩子，他们用盲杖探路，全然不知周围的危险。作者先是被他们的勇敢触动，又为他们身处险境担忧，然而接下来却目睹了奇迹。 五要素分析 · 人物：作者、盲人夫妇、路口的司机们。 · 时间：作者驾车去赴约时。 · 地点：加利福尼亚一个繁忙的十字路口。 · 起因：作者在路口等红灯时看到盲人夫妇过马路。 · 经过：盲人夫妇处于车流中，情况危险。 · 结果：即将展开神奇的救援画面。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 · 伏笔：作者担心其他司机没注意到盲人夫妇的危险。回应：第一段续写所有车辆都停下，人们展现出尊重和帮助，消除了作者的担忧。 · 伏笔：盲人夫妇在车流中行走，需要引导。回应：第二段续写盲人夫妇在人们的引导下安全过马路，没有意识到特殊情况，与开头盲人不知危险相呼应。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：紧张转为感动，原本对盲人夫妇身处危险的紧张，因所有车辆的行动而变为感动。 · 故事线：描述车辆集体停下的安静又震撼的场景，人们的反应体现出对盲人夫妇的尊重和保护。 第二段 · 情感线：温馨，盲人夫妇在善意的帮助下安全通过，画面充满温暖。 · 故事线：讲述盲人夫妇在引导下调整路线过马路，他们虽不知特殊情况但能感受到善意。 主旨升华句 1. In the face of the weak, kindness is a light that can guide them through the darkness of danger. 2. Sometimes, a moment of collective humanity can create a beautiful and safe haven for those in need. 3. True respect lies not in words but in our actions towards those who are different. 4. A simple act of stopping can be the most powerful expression of love and care in our busy lives. 5. Our world is filled with silent heroes, whose kindness makes the journey of the disadvantaged less bumpy. 写作示范 第一篇 Every car in every direction did the same thing. It was as if time had stopped. The drivers held their breath, their hands still on the steering wheels, eyes locked on the couple. Some put on their hazard lights to signal to others. People got out of their cars to form a human shield around the couple, guiding them with gentle voices. Never noticing something different, the couple adjusted their route as they followed the coaching. They walked with confidence, feeling the love and care around them. Their smiles were bright, unaware of the miracle that had unfolded just for them. The crossroads became a stage of kindness that day. 第二篇 Every car in every direction did the same thing. The usually noisy intersection became a silent tableau. The drivers waited patiently, their expressions solemn. A few even turned off their engines to show their commitment to the couple's safety. They watched as if they were guardians of the blind pair. Never noticing something different, the couple adjusted their route as they followed the coaching. They seemed to sense the good will and moved forward without hesitation. When they finally reached the other side, a sigh of relief spread among the drivers. The moment was a reminder of the power of human compassion. 第三篇 Every car in every direction did the same thing. The drivers spontaneously became a united front of protection. No one was in a rush anymore. They watched the couple with soft eyes. Some waved their hands to signal the couple which way to go. The air was thick with a sense of shared responsibility. Never noticing something different, the couple adjusted their route as they followed the coaching. Their steps were steady. They nodded in gratitude at the voices guiding them. As they walked away, the drivers felt a sense of fulfillment. This simple act of kindness made the crossroads a symbol of hope and love. 参考答案 Every car in every direction did the same thing. Every single vehicle remained stationary, creating an almost surreal silence among the usually noisy engines. The drivers' faces showed a mixture of concern and respect. Some were on the phone, perhaps alerting others further back in the traffic about the situation. It was a beautiful synchrony of humanity, a collective decision to protect the vulnerable. Never noticing something different, the couple adjusted their route as they followed the coaching. They walked with trust, as if they knew they were in safe hands. The child in the mother's arms was calm, as if also sensing the love and protection surrounding them. When they reached the sidewalk, the crowd that had gathered around them let out a soft cheer. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$