2025届高考英语读后续写专题之人与动物类 神奇救援犬：米洛的英勇之举 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Milo is a rescue dog, adopted by 20-year-old Makayla Swift. But Milo the beagle is also a rescuer. One morning in November 2021, Swift opened her front door in Silver Spring, Maryland, and Milo took off running. Milo ran to the house across the street. He seemed unsatisfied with this house, so he ran to the one next door, Swift on his tail. He started scratching on the front door and Swift was thinking, “Why is he literally trying to break into her house?” She was embarrassed. Not everyone wants a strange dog on their property. But as she tried to drag Milo away, she could hear a sound coming through an open upstairs window. It was a voice yelling “Help!” Hours earlier, around 4 a.m., 85-year-old Sherry Starr had risen from her bed. All of a sudden, standing there between the toilet and the tub, she slipped. She went down-hard-on the tile floor, and got stuck. Starr was scared of dying there. Her best bet, she decided, was to listen for the letter carrier in the afternoon and scream like the devils. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 For the next few hours, Starr practiced yelling, “Help! Help! Help!” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Not long after the call, rescue workers arrived. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 米洛是一只被 20 岁的麦凯拉・斯威夫特收养的救援犬。2021 年 11 月的一个早晨，米洛跑出门，在街对面的房子处停下，又跑到隔壁房子，开始挠前门。斯威夫特试图把它拽走时听到楼上窗户传来 “救命！” 的呼喊声。原来，85 岁的雪莉・斯塔尔几个小时前在浴室滑倒被困，她本打算等下午邮差经过时呼救。 五要素分析 · 人物：米洛、麦凯拉・斯威夫特、雪莉・斯塔尔、救援人员。 · 时间：2021 年 11 月的一个早晨（凌晨 4 点后）。 · 地点：马里兰州银泉市的街区。 · 起因：米洛异常的行为引起注意，雪莉・斯塔尔被困浴室。 · 经过：米洛跑到斯塔尔家门前挠门，斯威夫特听到呼救声。 · 结果：即将等待救援人员到来。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 · 伏笔：斯塔尔计划等邮差经过时呼救。回应：第一段续写斯塔尔不断练习呼救，米洛听到并前来。 · 伏笔：听到了呼救声。回应：第二段续写救援人员到来展开救援。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：斯塔尔的恐惧、焦急，不断练习呼救，希望有人能听到。 · 故事线：描述斯塔尔在被困期间的心理活动和持续呼救的状态，米洛的反应让斯威夫特意识到情况紧急。 第二段 · 情感线：看到希望后的安心，斯塔尔和斯威夫特都因救援人员到来而情绪缓解。 · 故事线：救援人员到达后采取的救援行动，斯塔尔最终获救，对米洛和斯威夫特的感激。 主旨升华句 1. Sometimes, our rescuers come in the most unexpected forms. 2. A dog's instinct can be a powerful force in saving a life. 3. In times of distress, every little action can lead to a great rescue. 4. Kindness and vigilance, whether from a human or an animal, can make a world of difference. 5. Even the smallest of creatures can be the heroes we need in our darkest hours. 写作示范 第一篇 For the next few hours, Starr practiced yelling, “Help! Help! Help!” She tried to make her voice as loud as possible, her throat getting sore. She was desperate, fearing that no one would hear her. Meanwhile, Milo was persistent in scratching at the door. Swift realized something was terribly wrong. She called 911, explaining the situation. Not long after the call, rescue workers arrived. They quickly forced open the door and rushed upstairs. When they found Starr, she was weak but conscious. They carefully lifted her onto a stretcher. Starr kept thanking Milo and Swift. The whole neighborhood later praised Milo for his heroic act. 第二篇 For the next few hours, Starr practiced yelling, “Help! Help! Help!” Every shout was filled with her fear and hope. She was exhausted but didn't stop. Milo, outside, barked loudly, trying to get more attention. Swift stayed with Milo, waiting for any sign of someone who could help. Finally, she decided to call the local emergency number. Not long after the call, rescue workers arrived. They followed Milo's barks and Swift's directions. When they reached Starr, she was on the verge of losing consciousness. The rescuers quickly provided first aid and carried her out. Starr hugged Milo later, tears of gratitude in her eyes. 第三篇 For the next few hours, Starr practiced yelling, “Help! Help! Help!” Her voice echoed in the empty house, but she had no idea if anyone could hear. She thought of her family and friends, praying for a miracle. Milo's scratching became more frantic. Swift was now certain that someone was in trouble inside. She started knocking on neighbors' doors for help. Not long after the call, rescue workers arrived. They broke down the door and made their way to Starr. She was in pain but relieved to see them. The workers carefully moved her, checking for injuries. Starr later told everyone how Milo was her angel that day. Swift felt proud of her furry friend. 参考答案 For the next few hours, Starr practiced yelling, “Help! Help! Help!” Her voice grew hoarse, but she didn't stop. Every cry was a desperate plea for survival. Meanwhile, Milo's barking and scratching intensified. Swift, now understanding the gravity of the situation, joined in shouting for help, hoping someone in the neighborhood would hear. Not long after the call, rescue workers arrived. They quickly assessed the situation and rushed upstairs. Gently, they lifted Starr onto a stretcher. She was weak but managed to smile and thank Milo and Swift. The neighborhood watched in awe as the old woman was safely taken away, and Milo became the hero of the day, his tail wagging as if he knew he'd accomplished something great. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$