2025届高考英语读后续写专题之助人类跨越陌生的善意：肾移植后的温暖情谊讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Many organ transplants (器官移植) come from those who are blood relatives or close friends. It’s rare for a person to make a living organ donation to a stranger. Not surprising when you consider the operative risks and other potential problems. That’s what Paul Wagner thought until he read an article about matchingdonors.com, a website that connects people who need transplants with those willing to be donors (捐赠者), Paul grew up in a poor family and admits to making many mistakes in his youth, including using drugs. “But I always got another chance,” he said. Paul said help came when he needed it most, and because of that, he wanted to give someone else a chance. That someone turned out to be former opera singer Gail Tomas, who was suffering from kidney (肾) failure and badly needed a new kidney. But her hopes for a donor were so slight because of her O+ blood type. Paul, also type O+, emailed Gail, offering to donate his kidney to her. He said, “It would be wrong of me not to help.” That attitude, however, was not shared by most surgeons, who refused to participate. The surgeon who agreed only did so after long interviews with Paul to be certain about his motivation. The transplant finally took place on National Donor Day. Afraid that Gail and her family would feel tied to him merely out of appreciation, Paul made it clear to Gail that he didn’t want to get to know her. But Gail insisted on making friends with him and was trying to find an opportunity to break down the barriers to their friendship. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;     2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then Gail’s first birthday after the transplant was approaching and she got an idea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Their friendship started after the birthday party. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 器官移植大多在血亲或好友间进行，陌生人活体捐赠很少见。保罗・瓦格纳看到一个连接移植需求者和捐赠者的网站后，决定为患肾衰竭且血型特殊（O +）、很难找到肾源的前歌剧演唱家盖尔・托马斯捐赠肾脏。多数外科医生拒绝参与，只有一位经过长时间询问保罗动机后同意手术。术后，保罗不想让盖尔因感激而与自己有过多联系，但盖尔想和他做朋友并试图打破障碍。 五要素分析 · 人物：保罗和盖尔。 · 时间：从保罗决定捐赠到盖尔术后一段时间。 · 地点：未提及，主要围绕手术相关和两人的生活。 · 起因：盖尔肾衰竭需肾移植，保罗想帮助她。 · 经过：保罗联系盖尔，经历手术困难，术后保罗态度冷淡，盖尔想交友。 · 结果：盖尔想进一步发展与保罗的关系。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 · 伏笔：盖尔想打破与保罗之间的友谊障碍。回应：第一段续写盖尔借生日派对邀请保罗，尝试拉近关系。 · 伏笔：保罗不想因感激建立关系，但内心善良。回应：第二段续写在派对上两人交流，保罗被打动，友谊开始发展。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：期待、紧张，盖尔期待保罗接受邀请，又担心他拒绝。 · 故事线：盖尔精心准备邀请，保罗收到邀请后内心有所触动，考虑是否参加。 第二段 · 情感线：温暖、感动，双方在派对上分享彼此故事，情感升温。 · 故事线：描述派对上温馨的氛围、两人的交流内容，展现友谊开始建立。 主旨升华句 1. True kindness is a bridge that can connect two strangers' hearts deeply. 2. Selfless giving not only saves lives but also sows the seeds of beautiful friendship. 3. In the act of helping others, we may unexpectedly find precious friendships waiting for us. 4. A life - saving gift can break down the walls between people and build a bond of love. 5. The beauty of humanity shines brightly when strangers become friends through acts of kindness. 写作示范 第一篇 Then Gail’s first birthday after the transplant was approaching and she got an idea. She planned to hold a small but warm birthday party and invited Paul as the special guest. She spent days preparing, making sure everything was perfect. She wrote a heartfelt letter with the invitation, telling Paul how much she valued his gift and his presence at the party would be the best gift for her. When Paul got the invitation, he was hesitant at first but then decided to go. Their friendship started after the birthday party. At the party, Gail welcomed Paul with open arms. They sat and talked for hours. Paul shared his past struggles and how he found meaning in helping her. Gail told him about her career and how she overcame difficulties. They both felt a strong connection, and their friendship grew from that day. 第二篇 Then Gail’s first birthday after the transplant was approaching and she got an idea. She thought it was a great chance to show Paul her gratitude and start a friendship. She organized a birthday party with a theme related to new life and hope. She sent Paul an invitation with a photo of herself looking healthy. She wrote that this new life was a gift from him and hoped he could celebrate with her. Paul received it and felt her sincerity. Their friendship started after the birthday party. When Paul arrived, Gail introduced him to all her family and friends. They told stories about Gail's recovery. Paul was moved by their love. As the party went on, he and Gail found they had similar interests. They laughed and joked, and a beautiful friendship began to bloom. 第三篇 Then Gail’s first birthday after the transplant was approaching and she got an idea. She decided to have a unique birthday party and make Paul the center of attention. She prepared a slideshow of her recovery journey with Paul's help highlighted. She also prepared a special thank - you speech. She sent the invitation to Paul, hoping he would come and feel her genuine appreciation. Paul was surprised by the invitation and felt a softening in his heart. Their friendship started after the birthday party. At the party, Gail delivered her speech, and there were tears in her eyes. Paul was deeply touched. They then talked about life, dreams, and the meaning of giving. They realized they could be great friends. Their laughter filled the room, and a new chapter of friendship opened. 参考答案 Then Gail’s first birthday after the transplant was approaching and she got an idea. She asked her family to help her make a handmade photo book of her life before and after the transplant, with a special section dedicated to Paul. She planned to give it to him as a birthday gift. She also prepared a video montage of her recovery days with a heartfelt thank - you message for Paul. Then she invited Paul to her small birthday gathering at her home. Their friendship started after the birthday party. When Paul arrived, Gail presented him with the photo book and played the video. Paul was deeply moved. They sat together and talked. Gail told him about how she used to perform on stage and how she hoped to get back to some form of musical activity. Paul shared his own hopes for the future. As they talked, the barriers between them melted away, and they felt a genuine connection starting to form. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$