读后续写专题之个人成长类艰难的选择：高薪工作与棒球梦想的冲突讲义-2025届高三英语一轮复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I grew up in a poor family with six brothers, three sisters, my father and mother. We had little money and few goods, but plenty of love and attention. I was happy and energetic. I understood that no matter how poor a person was, he could still afford a dream. My dream was athletics. By the time I was sixteen, I could throw a ninety-mile-per-hour fastball and hit anything moving on the football field. And I was so lucky that my high-school coach was Ollie Jarvis, who not only believed in me, but often told me “Dream is priceless”. However, when I was about to get off the ground, one particular incident happened, which almost ruined my long-held dream. It was the summer holiday in senior two and a friend recommended me for a summer job. I was offered $ 12.25 per hour. Compared with the average $3.5, that was a big sum. I was so excited, because this meant a chance for money in my pocket, certainly money for a new bike and new clothes, and the start of savings for a house for my mother. The prospect(前景)of the job was inviting, and I wanted to jump at the opportunity. Then I realized I would have to give up summer baseball training to handle the work schedule. I didn't dare to tell my coach, I thought of the advice my mother often gave me when I lacked courage, "If you make your bed, you have to lie in it." I decided to talk to my coach in person. After all, my dream of buying my mom a house and having money in my pocket was worth facing his disappointment to me. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150字左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。     I gathered my courage and knocked at his door. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That question reminded me of what my coach used to say. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 我成长于一个贫穷但充满爱的大家庭。我的梦想是体育，高中教练也很支持我。高二暑假，朋友推荐我一份时薪很高的工作，这意味着我能赚钱买新自行车、新衣服，还能为给妈妈买房攒钱，但这需要我放弃棒球训练。我想起妈妈的话，决定鼓起勇气和教练当面谈。 五要素分析 · 人物：“我”、教练、家人和推荐工作的朋友。 · 时间：高二暑假。 · 地点：教练家门口等。 · 起因：高薪工作与棒球训练时间冲突。 · 经过：决定找教练谈。 · 结果：即将和教练沟通。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 · 伏笔：教练对我的信任和鼓励。回应：第一段续写教练可能会试图挽留我继续训练。 · 伏笔：妈妈的话以及梦想相关内容。回应：第二段续写通过教练的问题让我重新思考梦想和责任。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：紧张、忐忑，对教练反应的不安。 · 故事线：和教练说明情况，教练可能会表现出惊讶、失望，询问我对梦想和金钱的看法。 第二段 · 情感线：受到触动，开始重新审视自己的决定。 · 故事线：回忆教练过去的教导，内心挣扎在梦想和眼前利益之间。 主旨升华句 1. Dreams are the stars that guide us through the fog of material temptations. 2. When faced with choices, hold onto your dreams tightly, for they are the true wealth. 3. True courage is not only chasing money but also sticking to your dreams against all odds. 4. In the balance of life, don't let short - term gains outweigh the pursuit of long - term dreams. 5. A dream once kindled should not be extinguished by the allure of immediate benefits. 写作示范 第一篇 I gathered my courage and knocked at his door. When he opened it, I told him about the job offer and my dilemma. He looked at me in silence for a moment, then asked, "Do you think money can buy back your lost dream training time?" I was stunned, not knowing how to answer. That question reminded me of what my coach used to say. "Dream is priceless." I realized that if I gave up this summer's training, I might never reach my athletic potential. I thanked my coach and told him I would turn down the job. He smiled, and I knew I made the right decision. 第二篇 I gathered my courage and knocked at his door. Coach Ollie Jarvis opened the door with a warm smile, but it faded as I told him about the job. He said, "You know what you're giving up, right?" I nodded, feeling the weight of his disappointment. That question reminded me of what my coach used to say. "Dream is priceless." I remembered all the times he had pushed me to be better. I looked at him and said, "I can't lose my dream." He patted my shoulder, and I knew I had to follow my heart and continue with baseball training. 第三篇 I gathered my courage and knocked at his door. As the door opened, I saw coach's surprised face. I stammered out my situation. He frowned and asked, "Is money more important than your dream at this moment?" His words hit me hard. That question reminded me of what my coach used to say. His words about the pricelessness of dreams echoed in my ears. I thought of my love for athletics, the years of training. I felt ashamed. I told him I would stay with baseball, and his eyes lit up with approval. 参考答案 I gathered my courage and knocked at his door. Coach opened the door with a curious look. I told him haltingly about the job and how much it paid. His expression turned solemn. "So you're willing to trade your baseball future for this temporary job?" he asked, his eyes fixed on me. I felt a lump in my throat, unable to answer immediately. That question reminded me of what my coach used to say. "Dream is priceless." I remembered how he always told me to keep my eyes on the prize of my athletic career. I thought about the countless hours on the field, the passion for the game. I realized that sacrificing my dream for money was a short - sighted choice. I told coach I would stick with baseball training. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$