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I haven't seen my father for five year. As a devoted archaeologist(考古学家),he has been working in Greece, sparing no time for family reunion. Right before my summer vacation, he invited me to visit him and spend some time together. That's why I am here, at Athens airport. But he isn't here to meet me and I don't know why.
I take out the last email he sent me. "I am so pleased you are coming here at last. I'll be at the airport to meet you at 14:20." But now it is 15:30. I don't want to spend my holiday hanging around Athens airport with a lot of strangers. What I want is my dad and just like every other time in my life when I have wanted him, he is not here and I feel really angry and fed up.
When I was ten and I wanted him, I used to tell myself stories. But I am not ten any more and I am not in the mood for stories. I am going to find my father and I am going to tell him that when his only son comes to visit after five years, he needs a very good excuse when he doesn't turn up. A very, very good excuse.
Then I act. I go to the information desk where a pretty, dark-haired girl smiles at me and says that she is sorry that my father is not there. She then says quite sharply over the loudspeaker: "Alexander Wyatt must come immediately to Information where his son Jake is waiting." And when he does not come, she looks worried and asks if I am OK. I tell her that I'm fine. I change some money and get the metro to the hotel my father booked.
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The receptionist gives me the key to our room.
I call the tourist police and tell them my story.
文章大意
“我” 已经五年没见到身为考古学家的父亲,他邀请 “我” 来希腊共度暑假,并约定在机场接 “我”,但他却迟迟未出现,“我” 从一开始的期待转为愤怒和厌烦。在机场等待无果后,“我” 在信息台寻求帮助并广播找人,仍不见父亲踪影,于是 “我” 自行前往父亲预订的酒店。
五要素分析
· 人物:“我” 和父亲。
· 时间:暑假,具体时间从 14:20 开始逐渐推移。
· 地点:雅典机场、酒店。
· 起因:父亲邀请 “我” 来希腊,但未按约定在机场迎接。
· 经过:长时间等待、向机场信息台求助、自行前往酒店。
· 结果:到达酒店,依然没见到父亲。
几处伏笔及续写中的回应
· 伏笔:父亲是考古学家。回应:可能他因考古相关的突发状况而无法赴约,续写中或许会有涉及考古紧急事件的内容。
· 伏笔:父亲未出现且联系不上。回应:续写可能围绕寻找父亲展开,如在酒店发现线索或通过警察找到与父亲有关的信息。
续写要点
第一段
· 情感线:从愤怒转向焦虑与不安,对父亲的安危产生深深的担忧。
· 故事线:在房间里查看是否有父亲留下的线索,可能发现一些与考古相关的物品或神秘的笔记,猜测父亲可能的去向。
第二段
· 情感线:紧张、期待警方的帮助,希望尽快找到父亲。
· 故事线:详细向旅游警察描述父亲的特征和情况,配合警方调查,等待可能找到父亲的消息。
主旨升华句
1. The ties of family are like an unbreakable chain that connects us even in the most trying times.
2. Love for family can overcome anger and frustration when they are in trouble.
3. Our family members are precious treasures, and we should always be there for them, just as they should be for us.
4. In the journey of life, family is the anchor that holds us steady, even when the waves of uncertainty crash upon us.
5. True family love shines brightest in the darkest moments of separation and worry.
写作示范
第一篇
第一段:The receptionist gives me the key to our room. I enter the room with a sense of dread. The place is quiet, but there are signs of my father's presence. On the table lies a map with some areas circled in red, which seem to be archaeological sites. There's also a note with some Greek words I can't understand. I start to worry that something bad has happened to him.
第二段:I call the tourist police and tell them my story. They are very responsive. I describe the map and the note to them. They say they will contact local archaeology departments to see if there are any ongoing projects related to those sites. I'm left waiting anxiously, hoping for any news of my father.
第二篇
第一段:The receptionist gives me the key to our room. When I walk in, I see a mess of papers and books. Among them, I find a letter addressed to me. It says he had an unexpected discovery at a dig site and had to go immediately. But there's no mention of when he'll be back. My anger fades as concern floods in.
第二段:I call the tourist police and tell them my story. They quickly start their investigation. They ask me for details about the letter and the possible dig site. I give them all the information I can. They assure me they'll do their best to find him. I pace the room, praying for his safety.
第三篇
第一段:The receptionist gives me the key to our room. As I open the door, the room seems untouched except for a few personal items of my father's. I notice a small notebook with sketches of ancient artifacts and a name of a local museum. Could he have gone there? I feel a glimmer of hope as I grab the notebook.
第二段:I call the tourist police and tell them my story. They take note of the museum name. They tell me they'll send an officer to check. Meanwhile, they'll search other possible places. I wait impatiently, clutching the notebook, hoping it's a lead to finding my father.
参考答案
第一段:The receptionist gives me the key to our room. I trudge upstairs, my heart pounding with a mix of anger and worry. When I open the door, the room is in semi - darkness. I fumble for the light switch and the room is revealed. There's a strange silence. I see my father's jacket slung over a chair and his backpack on the floor. But no sign of him. I sit on the bed, feeling more alone than ever.
第二段:I call the tourist police and tell them my story. They are very calm and professional, asking me for details about my father's appearance, his work, and any possible contacts he might have had. I give them as much information as I can, including the name of the archaeological project he's been working on. They assure me they will start looking for him right away, and I feel a tiny bit of relief knowing that help is on the way.
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