浙江省衢州2023-2024学年高二下学期期末英语读后续写画的风波：我和妹妹在奶奶家的冲突讲义

202406衢州高二期末 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。  My fourth of July vacation began with a scream. “Tara!” I jumped, my eyelids snapping open. I realized that my four-year-old sister, Tammy, was staring down at me. I struggled to push her off me as she bounced on my legs, she screamed, and then ran out of my room. It was as if Tammy never did anything wrong. If Tammy got angry, Mom would say she was trying to get her point across. When Tammy broke a plate, Dad said she was just “helping” me empty the dishwasher. When Tammy scribbled (乱涂乱画) all over the wall, instead of scolding her, my parents chuckled and said, “She’s turning into an artist just like you, Tara.” We were flying to Utah to visit my grandma for the Fourth of July. Every year I draw Grandma a picture for her birthday, but I sighed as I considered about what picture I should draw this time. When we walked off the plane, I was relieved to see the smiling face of my grandma. We raced over to her. “Hi, sweetheart.” Grandma got down on one knee to hug Tammy and then swung her in the air. Tammy screamed with laughter. Then Grandma hugged me. “It’s so good to see you too, Tara.” After six hours of flight, I was exhausted—six hours of listening to Tammy scream with delight again and again and again. I wanted to be alone, so I went outside with my sketchbook and colored pencils. Looking at the scenery, I felt inspired to work on Grandma’s drawing. As I admired the shading on the mountains and the swirls of the sunset, I smiled to myself and thought, this is the best picture I have ever made. Before I finished my picture, Mom was calling me inside for dinner. When I walked back into the room, and my heart stopped. Tammy was lying on the bed, scribbling on a piece of paper. Tammy saw me frozen in the doorway, she jumped from the bed. She ran over to me and grinned. “I drew you a picture.” she shouted. “Out!” I screamed angrily, and she ran out of the room. I ran over to the bed. I picked up the paper, and it was just as I’d feared. My drawing had black scribbles all over it.  注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mom appeared in the doorway with Tammy by her side. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I gathered up the courage to walk over to Grandma. ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 文章大意 7 月 4 日假期，“我” 被 4 岁妹妹 Tammy 吵醒。在家里 Tammy 犯错总是被父母包容。一家人坐飞机去犹他州看望奶奶，“我” 每年都会为奶奶画画作生日礼物，这次在欣赏风景时获得灵感开始画画。但在吃饭前，“我” 发现 Tammy 在 “我” 画的纸上乱涂乱画，“我” 很生气。 五要素分析 · 人物：“我”、妹妹 Tammy、父母和奶奶。 · 时间：7 月 4 日假期，包括飞行途中和到达奶奶家后。 · 地点：从家出发，在飞机上，最后到奶奶家。 · 起因：Tammy 总是捣蛋，这次毁了 “我” 给奶奶画的画。 · 经过：假期旅程、“我” 画画、Tammy 搞破坏。 · 结果：“我” 的画被破坏，“我” 很愤怒。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 · 伏笔：父母对 Tammy 的过度包容。回应：妈妈可能在后续继续偏袒 Tammy，也可能理解 “我”。 · 伏笔：“我” 为奶奶画画。回应：第一段续写中要处理画被破坏后如何向奶奶交代，第二段续写 “我” 走向奶奶可能是去解释或者重新准备礼物。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：愤怒、委屈，对妈妈和 Tammy 的不满。 · 故事线：描述妈妈看到被破坏的画后的反应，可能会责备 “我” 对 Tammy 发脾气，“我” 试图解释但不被理解。 第二段 · 情感线：忐忑、愧疚，对奶奶的爱与不知如何面对的纠结。 · 故事线：“我” 走向奶奶，可能会鼓起勇气向奶奶说明画被破坏的情况，或者拿出被破坏的画，向奶奶道歉。 主旨升华句 1. Love should be fair, not blind, especially when dealing with the conflicts between siblings. 2. True patience is understanding the feelings of all children, not just indulging one. 3. Sibling conflicts can be a test of family love and how we handle them reveals our true nature. 4. Forgiveness is a bridge that can connect the hearts of siblings torn apart by misunderstandings. 5. In a family, every child's feelings are precious and should be respected and protected. 写作示范 第一篇 Mom appeared in the doorway with Tammy by her side. Mom's face was full of anger. "Tara, how could you shout at your sister? She just wanted to give you a present." I felt a lump in my throat. "But she ruined my drawing for Grandma." I choked. Mom just shook her head. I ran to my corner, tears streaming down. I gathered up the courage to walk over to Grandma. I held the scribbled paper tightly. With a trembling voice, I told Grandma what happened. Grandma smiled gently, hugged me and said, "Your love in the drawing can't be scribbled over, dear." I burst into tears in her arms. 第二篇 Mom appeared in the doorway with Tammy by her side. Mom scolded me for being mean to Tammy. I tried to explain that she had ruined my hard work for Grandma, but Mom wouldn't listen. Tammy hid behind Mom, looking at me with a smug face. I was so frustrated that I stormed out of the room. I gathered up the courage to walk over to Grandma. I showed her the ruined drawing with tears in my eyes. I apologized for not having a perfect gift. Grandma took my hand and said, "Sweetheart, the most important thing is your love. You can make another one with Tammy." I nodded, realizing the true meaning of family. 参考范文： Mom appeared in the doorway with Tammy by her side. Tammy was sniffling, tears rolling down her chubby cheeks. Mom’s gaze shifted to my picture, which I held with shaking hands. She gently pushed Tammy out of the room. She shut the door and sat down next to me, “Tara,” she whispered, “I’m so sorry. I know you worked hard on that. Tammy is challenging sometimes. But you yelling at her doesn’t solve anything.” It felt as if a dam inside of me broke. I sighed and glared at my mom. Darkness fell quickly. Mom laid out some blankets in the yard for us to sit on to watch the fireworks. Tammy was strangely quiet, sitting on the grass and staring up at the night sky, and I felt torn how to present the picture to grandma. I gathered up the courage to walk over to Grandma. Grandma looked up at me, her eyes sparkling. I handed her the picture I had drawn, the one that Tammy had ruined. Grandma took it into her hands and said. “Oh, Tara, I love it!” She smiled at me. “Do you know why I love it so much? This picture represents the bond you and Tammy share. If you look closely at the picture, there was a faint scribble of two stick-figure girls holding hands and screaming with delight.” I sat down on the blanket next to Tammy and hugged her. I had been so worried about not having the perfect Fourth of July vacation that I forgot about what mattered most. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$