2025届高考英语读后续写专题之个人成长类勇敢的心：科林战胜校园霸凌讲义

续写题目 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "Hurry up, Colin!" Mum shouted from the hallway. "If we don't get going now, you will be late for school." Colin was sitting on the edge of his bed, looking down at his feet. Taking a deep breath, Colin slowly stood up and collected his schoolbooks. After putting them in his bag, he took a long look around his bedroom and went to join his mum. "Are you all right, Colin?" Mum asked with obvious concern. "Your father and I have noticed you've become very quiet recently and that you don't laugh as much as you used to. Is everything OK at school?" Colin looked into his mum's troubled face as she put a comforting arm around his shoulders." Don't worry, Mum. Everything's good," he replied with a weak smile. Mum drove Colin to school, who sat in the back seat in silence all the way. Colin watched the world pass by, deep in thought. He used to love going to school and he was always the one who would tell his mum to hurry up. As he stared out of the car window, he remembered that there was a time when he couldn't wait to get to school and meet up with his friends. But things were different now. Colin didn't understand why things had changed or what he had done wrong. All he knew was that a group of older boys had started to make fun of him. They would call him names and push him when nobody was looking. They would hide his books so that he would get into trouble with his teachers. One day, they even put his bag outside when it was raining so that all his books got wet. When the car eventually arrived at the school, Colin quickly brushed away silent tears and slowly got out of the car. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: As Colin walked into the school, he decided that he must do something to change the situation. Paragraph 2: From then on, Colin felt a change in his life. 文章大意 Colin 上学前在房间里发呆，妈妈注意到他最近变得沉默寡言。妈妈送他上学的路上询问，他只说没事。曾经他热爱上学，现在却不同了。原来是一群大男孩总是欺负他，比如取笑他、推搡他、藏他的书、把他书包放雨里弄湿书本。到学校后，他擦去眼泪下车。 五要素分析 · 人物：Colin 和妈妈。 · 时间：上学日的早晨。 · 地点：从家到学校。 · 起因：Colin 被同学欺负，情绪低落。 · 经过：妈妈关心询问，送他上学，他回忆被欺负的场景。 · 结果：他到学校后准备下车。 几处伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔：Colin 决定改变情况。回应：后续他可能采取行动对抗欺负行为。 · 伏笔：妈妈对 Colin 的关心。回应：Colin 的改变可能会让妈妈不再担忧。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：从委屈难过转为坚定勇敢，有了改变现状的决心。 · 故事线：Colin 打算向老师或信任的人求助，或者直接面对欺负他的人，表明自己不再容忍。 第二段 · 情感线：生活有了积极向上的变化，重拾快乐自信。 · 故事线：描述欺负行为停止，他重新享受校园生活，和朋友相处愉快。 主旨升华句 1. When faced with bullying, standing up bravely can bring back the sunshine in life. 2. Don't let the darkness of bullying overshadow the brightness of your school days. 3. Courage is the weapon to fight against the evil of bullying and regain happiness. 4. One's decision to resist bullying can rewrite the story of his school life. 5. Bullying may be tough, but the power within us to change the situation is tougher. 写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: As Colin walked into the school, he decided that he must do something to change the situation. He thought he couldn't keep silent anymore. He would first find his favorite teacher and tell him everything. Then he would ask the teacher to help him solve this problem. If those older boys continued to bully him, he would be brave enough to face them and tell them firmly that their behavior was wrong. Paragraph 2: From then on, Colin felt a change in his life. With the teacher's help, those older boys stopped their mean actions. Colin gradually regained his confidence. He started to laugh again and became active in class. He once again looked forward to going to school every day and having a great time with his friends. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: As Colin walked into the school, he decided that he must do something to change the situation. He knew he had to be strong. Instead of avoiding those older boys, he walked straight towards them. His heart was pounding, but he held his head high. He told them firmly that he wouldn't tolerate their bullying anymore and that he would report them if they continued. Paragraph 2: From then on, Colin felt a change in his life. The older boys were shocked by his courage and stopped bothering him. Colin's classmates also showed more respect for him. He felt like a heavy burden had been lifted. He went back to being the happy and outgoing boy he used to be, enjoying his school days to the fullest. 参考答案 Paragraph 1: As Colin walked into the school, he decided that he must do something to change the situation. He took a deep breath and headed straight to the principal's office. His hands were sweaty, but his mind was set. He told the principal about the bullying he had endured, how it had made him dread coming to school. The principal listened intently, promising to take immediate action. Colin also made up his mind that if he encountered those bullies again, he would not show fear but stand up for himself. Paragraph 2: From then on, Colin felt a change in his life. The principal addressed the issue during the school assembly, making it clear that bullying would not be tolerated. The older boys were disciplined. Colin's classmates came to support him, some sharing their own experiences. He started to enjoy school again. His old friends reconnected with him, and he even made new friends. Every morning, he now rushed to school with excitement, just like he used to. The dark cloud that had hung over him had dissipated, and he was ready to embrace his school life once more. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$