读后续写 艾伦的 “洗衣风波”：一次特别的家务尝试 讲义-2025届福建省宁德市一级达标学校高三上学期第一次联考（一模）英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One Saturday morning, Allen woke up to find the house unusually quiet. Typically, his mom would be up making breakfast and tidying up, but not this time. Hearing her cough, Allen knocked on her door and asked anxiously, “Mom, are you alright?” “Sweetheart,” she replied weakly. “I’ve got a bad cold. You can have cereal for breakfast and watch cartoons while I rest in bed.” Allen poured some cereal into a bowl and ate the pieces dry. Mom must feel very bad if she was staying in bed all day. How could Allen help? First, he wiped up the crumbs of cereal he left on the kitchen counter. He also put away the cereal box neatly, so the kitchen looked just as it did when he woke up. But what else could he do? Allen thought. Saturday was the day when mom did laundry. Allen loved to watch the clothes spinning in the machine. That should be fun! He ran to his room to get the laundry basket, inside which there was his mother’s favorite white dress, among other clothes and a pair of red socks. Allen opened the door to the washer and put the clothing inside. He had watched Mom do laundry lots of times, so he knew where to find the washing powder and how to pour it into the machine. Finally, he closed the door and pressed the big button that said “START.” Allen looked through the round glass window. Water was pouring in, and the machine was starting to spin, making his clothing tumble (滚动) around. That was easy! Allen was watching cartoons when he heard the washing machine beep, indicating that the laundry was finished. He opened the door, took out the damp clothes, moved them into the dryer. Everything looked clean, and he felt a sense of pride. Then he pulled out a pink dress among the clothes. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1 But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket. Paragraph 2 Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Allen nervously knocked at his mom’s bedroom door again. 文章大意 周六早上，Allen 醒来发现妈妈因感冒卧床，他吃了点干麦片后，想为妈妈做点事。他收拾了厨房，然后决定洗衣服。他把洗衣篮里的衣服（包括妈妈最喜欢的白色连衣裙和一双红袜子等）放进洗衣机，加了洗衣粉启动洗衣机。洗完后他把衣服放进烘干机，之后却发现多了一件粉色连衣裙。 五要素分析 · 人物：Allen 和生病的妈妈。 · 时间：周六上午。 · 地点：家里，包括厨房、洗衣房和妈妈卧室。 · 起因：妈妈生病，Allen 想帮忙做家务。 · 经过：Allen 收拾厨房、洗衣服。 · 结果：洗衣完成后出现了意料之外的粉色连衣裙。 几处伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔：洗衣篮里没有粉色裙子。回应：可能是混进了其他衣服，需要找出原因和解决办法。 · 伏笔：妈妈在生病休息。回应：Allen 处理粉色裙子问题可能会打扰妈妈休息，但也可能会给妈妈带来温暖。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：惊讶、疑惑和紧张，对多出来的粉色裙子感到不知所措。 · 故事线：描述 Allen 努力回忆粉色裙子的来源，猜测可能是和邻居家的衣服混在一起了，或者是之前不小心放进去的。 第二段 · 情感线：紧张又期待，希望妈妈不要太生气，同时也希望自己的行为能让妈妈感到欣慰。 · 故事线：Allen 向妈妈解释事情经过，把粉色裙子递给妈妈，询问该如何处理，表现出他的诚实和希望为妈妈分忧的心情。 主旨升华句 1. Every little act of kindness, even with a bit of mistake, can be a warm ray of sunshine in a family. 2. Helping out at home, despite the occasional mishap, shows the true love and care within a child's heart. 3. In the process of doing something good, mistakes are just like spices that add more flavor to our life stories. 4. A child's attempt to assist, regardless of the outcome, is a beautiful expression of family love and responsibility. 5. Mistakes made while trying to help are stepping stones to growing up and understanding the value of family chores. 写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1 But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket. He was confused and a bit worried. Where did it come from? He checked the washer again to see if there was something he missed. Then he realized that it might have been mixed in with his clothes accidentally. He felt bad, thinking that he might have caused trouble. Paragraph 2 Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Allen nervously knocked at his mom’s bedroom door again. When mom opened the door, Allen told her what had happened. He apologized for the mix - up. Mom smiled weakly and said it was okay. She praised Allen for being so helpful and told him they would figure out whose dress it was later. Allen felt relieved and proud of himself for trying to help. 第二篇 Paragraph 1 But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket. His heart sank. Had he made a big mistake? He racked his brain, trying to recall if he had picked up something else by mistake. He carefully examined the dress, hoping to find a clue. Maybe it was from the neighbor's laundry that got mixed up somehow. Paragraph 2 Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Allen nervously knocked at his mom’s bedroom door again. Mom asked what was going on. Allen explained the situation with a trembling voice. Mom hugged him and said, "It's okay, dear. You meant to help, and that's what matters." Allen smiled, feeling the warmth of his mom's love and understanding, and he learned that helping sometimes has little bumps. 【答案】Paragraph 1 But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket. “Where did it come from?” Allen wondered, reaching into the washer to take out more clothes. Then much to his astonishment, he pulled out two T-shirts, both in light pink. Realizing there was something wrong, Allen stood frozen, his heart sinking. Suddenly, he caught sight of the red socks. He knew the reason for the accident. With no means of handling the situation, Allen was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the dress from his mom. “That is not a positive approach to the problem,” he reminded himself. Finally, he decided to dry and fold the laundry before telling his mom everything. Paragraph 2 Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Allen nervously knocked at his mom’s bedroom door again. He came to the bedside with his head drooping. Sensing her son’s unease, the mother inquired with concern what was wrong. Realizing what’s going on, mom smiled understandingly at Allen, “Never mind, dear. I know you meant to help.” Then mom held the dress up before her and said in an approving tone, “You know what? I think it looks nicer.” At this, Allen beamed with relief, making a silent vow to be more careful in helping his mom out next time.     学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$