读后续写 烘焙大赛:莎拉与安东尼的梦想之旅 讲义-2024届江苏省盐城市高三上学期期中考试英语试题

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。  Sarah, a high school student, was always eager to participate in every activity happening in school life, and she often persuaded her best friend, Anthony, to join her. One day, Sarah saw a poster announcing the annual Great Bake-off Challenge. Excitedly, she explained to Anthony how the winner would be granted a baking masterclass with the well-known baker, Chef Bella. Both Sarah and Anthony loved baking and idolized (崇拜) chef Bella, whose cooking show was popular across the country. However, they realized the competition would be tough as their school had its share of talented bakers. Despite this, Sarah suggested that they combine their strengths to participate as a team. Anthony agreed, and they started the journey to win the Great Bake-off Challenge. Sarah and Anthony started by shortlisting their strengths: Sarah was skilled at constructing and decorating cakes, while Anthony was good at developing delicious flavors. They spent weekends brainstorming, testing, and perfecting their baking recipes,transforming Sarah's family kitchen into their very own bake-off battleground. As the date of the competition got closer, they grew more anxious. They even had a few arguments about the cake's design or the flavor combination, but they quickly resolved their disagreements and continued to work together as a team. The day of the Great Bake-off Challenge finally arrived. Sarah and Anthony walked into the school hall, their hearts pounding with a mix of anticipation and fear. The setup had multiple workstations, each equipped with an oven, a mixer, and basic baking tools. The participants were given three hours to complete their cakes, after which the judges would evaluate each creation based on taste and originality. The countdown began, and the couple sprung into action. Anthony worked on the complex flavor combinations, while Sarah started building the cake's impressive structure. During the intensity, they couldn't help but steal a glance at the other competitors, admiring their opponents’ skills and creativity. However, they remained focused on their creation, supporting and encouraging each other throughout the process. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Three hours unconsciously passed and the deadline was up. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The judges began their round of tasting and assessments. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 高中生 Sarah 热衷于参加学校活动,她拉着好友 Anthony 一起参加学校一年一度的烘焙大赛。获胜者能得到知名烘焙师 Chef Bella 的大师课。他们知道竞争激烈,但决定发挥各自优势组队参赛。赛前他们利用周末研究食谱,虽有争论但都能迅速化解。比赛当日,现场有多个配备齐全的工作站,参赛者需在三小时内完成蛋糕,由评委根据味道和创意评判。比赛中,他们分工协作,在专注自己作品的同时也关注对手。 五要素分析 · 人物:Sarah、Anthony 及其他参赛选手、评委。 · 时间:从看到烘焙大赛海报开始,到比赛当天。 · 地点:学校,包括 Sarah 家厨房(准备阶段)和学校礼堂(比赛现场)。 · 起因:对烘焙的热爱以及渴望赢得与知名烘焙师学习的机会。 · 经过:组队、准备、参赛过程中的协作与小插曲。 · 结果:完成作品,等待评委评判。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 · 伏笔:比赛竞争激烈。回应:他们在比赛中看到对手的实力,更专注于自己作品,通过努力使作品有竞争力。 · 伏笔:评委将根据味道和创意评判。回应:文中描述他们在味道和创意上精心准备,等待评委评判结果。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线:紧张又期待,完成作品后的如释重负和对结果的忐忑。 · 故事线:详细描述完成的蛋糕外观,展现他们对作品的满意,同时提及其他参赛者作品的优秀,增加紧张感。 第二段 · 情感线:极度紧张,对评委评价的关注与担忧。 · 故事线:描述评委品尝和评价的过程,着重于他们的表情和动作,突出 Sarah 和 Anthony 的紧张心情。 主旨升华句 1. Teamwork in a competition can turn a shared dream into a tangible achievement. 2. In the heat of a contest, friendship and collaboration are the secret ingredients to success. 3. The journey of a baking challenge is not just about winning, but also about the bond forged through teamwork. 4. When passion meets teamwork in a competition, the result is not only a creation but also a story of friendship. 5. A baking competition reveals that with combined efforts, friends can create something beautiful and achieve their dreams. 写作示范 第一篇 Three hours unconsciously passed and the deadline was up. Their cake stood out with its unique charm. The smooth frosting and delicate decorations were a testament to Sarah's skill. Anthony's flavors seemed to waft through the air, inviting everyone to take a bite. They looked around and saw other amazing cakes, but they felt proud of what they had achieved. The judges began their round of tasting and assessments. Sarah and Anthony's eyes were fixed on them. Every bite the judges took, every nod or whisper among them made their hearts race. They saw the judges write down notes, and they prayed that their hard work would shine through and earn them the top prize. 第二篇 Three hours unconsciously passed and the deadline was up. Their cake was a masterpiece. The tiers were perfectly aligned, and the colors blended harmoniously. It was a visual delight that drew many eyes. As they added the final touches, they were filled with a sense of accomplishment despite the nervousness. The judges began their round of tasting and assessments. Sarah squeezed Anthony's hand tightly. The judges sampled each cake methodically. When they reached Sarah and Anthony's creation, the duo watched intently. The judges' expressions were inscrutable as they tasted, leaving Sarah and Anthony on tenterhooks, waiting for the verdict. 范文: Three hours unconsciously passed and the deadline was up. They took a step back and started admiring their  accomplishment. It's an extraordinary five-layer cake with an incredible mix of flavors and impressive decorations, displaying their beautiful journey  together as friends. Drawing inspiration from their idol, Chef Bella, they sought to create not just a cake, but a great work of art. With dusted faces and flour- covered aprons, they looked at each other nervously, wondering whether they had done enough to win over the judges. The judges began their round of tasting and assessments.When the judges approached to sample their cake, they held their breath. Every bite the judges took, every whisper they shared intensified their anxiety. After what seemed like a century, the result was announced:“The winners are Sarah and Anthony!” Their hearts expanded with happiness as they hugged each other tight, holding back tears of joy. Their hard work finally paid off, and they would soon stand in the same kitchen with their beloved Chef Bella. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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