读后续写 匿名的善意：萨拉的大学梦与神秘恩人 讲义-2024届江苏省徐州市高三上学期期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。  Sara gazed thoughtfully at her parents while holding a letter. She was accepted to pursue the Electrical Engineering degree programme at University Pertanian Malaysia. All her hard work and sacrifices had paid off. But she knew, being the eldest of 6 siblings, her family could not afford to pay the university entrance fees. Her father was only a settler working on a palm oil estate. Though she was determined to decline the offer, Sara went to visit Ms.Chang with the letter. Ms. Chang was one of the most dedicated teachers that Sara knew.From a humble beginning, she supported herself at the Teachers’Training College by teaching tuition. So she understood how hard poor students struggled to continue their study. For years, not only did she bring reference books to the students, but she often took them out for lunch and assured them they would succeed in life. “Congratulations Sara, I am so proud of you," Ms. Chang said excitedly. “But I'm afraid I have to reject the offer, because my family is unable to bear the cost of enrolling me there," Sara replied in a low tone. Ms. Chang looked at her intently and told her not to worry about finance. There would always be a way. A few days later, when Sara was hesitating about declining the offer, her high school principal, Mr. Salim, called her to his office. To her astonishment, Mr. Salim handed her an envelope, in which Sara saw a large sum of cash. It was more than what she needed. But when Sara asked Mr. Salim where the money was from, he just told her that the person wanted to remain anonymous(匿名的). With the money in the cnvelope, Sara became a freshman of the university. One month later, she received another sum of money. She called her father, “Dad, you don't have to send money to me. I can manage on my own." Her father was stunned, “But I didn't." From then on, Sara received the same sum of money every month. “Who is the kind soul that is making all this contribution?" she was always wondering. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。  Time flew and Sara graduated at last. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang's house. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 Sara 被马来西亚博特拉大学电气工程专业录取，但因家庭贫困打算拒绝。老师 Ms. Chang 鼓励她别担心费用。之后高中校长 Mr. Salim 给了她一个装有足够学费的信封，捐款人匿名。Sara 入学后每月都收到一笔钱，她以为是父亲给的，但父亲否认。Sara 一直好奇这位好心人的身份。 五要素分析 · 人物：Sara、Ms. Chang、Mr. Salim 和 Sara 的父亲。 · 时间：从 Sara 收到大学录取通知开始，持续到她大学毕业。 · 地点：学校、校长办公室和大学。 · 起因：Sara 家庭贫困，无力支付大学学费。 · 经过：老师鼓励，校长给她匿名捐款，大学期间持续收到钱。 · 结果：Sara 顺利上大学但不知捐款人是谁。 几处伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔：捐款人匿名。回应：后文揭示是 Ms. Chang。 · 伏笔：Sara 对捐款人身份的好奇。回应：最终找到答案。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：充满感激和急切想知道恩人身份的心情。 · 故事线：Sara 以优异成绩毕业，决定寻找恩人，回到母校向校长询问捐款人信息。 第二段 · 情感线：感动、崇敬，为 Ms. Chang 的善举所震撼。 · 故事线：Sara 来到 Ms. Chang 家，表达深深的感激，领悟到善良和助人的力量。 主旨升华句 1. True kindness is like a lighthouse, guiding those in the dark sea of difficulty towards hope. 2. The act of giving, even anonymously, can create ripples of change in someone's life journey. 3. A selfless donor is an angel in disguise, bringing the light of opportunity to the needy. 4. In the face of hardship, the kindness of strangers can be the most powerful driving force for success. 5. The beauty of altruism lies in its ability to transform lives without expecting anything in return. 写作示范 第一篇 Time flew and Sara graduated at last. With excellent grades, she was filled with gratitude towards the unknown benefactor. She returned to her high school and found Mr. Salim. She told him that she wanted to thank the person who had changed her life. Mr. Salim smiled and finally revealed the address of the kind - hearted person. With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang's house. Her heart was pounding with emotion. When Ms. Chang opened the door, Sara's eyes welled up with tears. She threw herself into Ms. Chang's arms and thanked her profusely. She realized that Ms. Chang's kindness had been the wind beneath her wings all this time. 第二篇 Time flew and Sara graduated at last. She had a successful college career, all thanks to the anonymous donor. She couldn't wait to find out who it was. She rushed to the principal's office. Mr. Salim saw her coming and knew what she wanted. He handed her a piece of paper with an address on it. With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang's house. She felt a mixture of excitement and nervousness. As she knocked on the door, her hands were shaking. When Ms. Chang appeared, Sara burst into tears and said, "Thank you for believing in me and changing my life." It was a moment of pure emotion and realization of the power of kindness. 范文: Time flew and Sara graduated at last. Thanks to that anonymous Samaritan, she was able to accomplish her college education without distraction. Try as she may, she could never figure out who was the kind soul.“Mr. Salim must have hidden something from me," the doubt echoed constantly in her mind. Sara visited Mr. Salim immediately she went hometown.“Please, Mr. Salim, tell me who sent me the money." she asked earnestly. The principal looked into her eyes and, at last, nodded solemnly ---“Now is the time….” With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang's house. Scenes of talking with Ms. Chang swept before her eyes. The doorbell rung, a lady answered it. It was Ms. Chang! Sara suppressed the urge to jump into her arms.“Ms. Chang, I have known everything!”Sara choked up, taking out a cash card, “I'd pay back part of the money…” However, Ms. Chang  interrupted her,“Dearest, it's worth it!” A month later, with the help of Ms. Salim, a scholarship was established,  specifically awarded to impoverished students. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$