17.必修第二册Unit 3 On the move(体育运动的故事)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 3 On the move 单元写作深度指导 写关于体育运动的故事(Writing a sports story) 【学以致用】 1.adjustable adj.可调整的,可调节的 (应用文之建议信)这样,你可能很快就会适应在北京的生活了。 In this way, you may adjust yourself to the life here in Beijing soon.  2.(教材原句)Using only a rope, you can develop your footwork and balance. 只用一根绳子,你就能改善你的步法和平衡。 ①(应用文之建议信)我建议你在工作和休闲之间保持平衡。 I suggest that you keep a balance between work and relaxation.  3.(教材原句)It involves doing very slow physical exercises to relax your mind and calm your body.它包括做非常缓慢的体育训练活动,来放松你的大脑和平静你的身体。 (应用文之告知信)I participated in the activity where my work involved caring for the elderly. 我参加了一个活动,我的工作是照顾老人。 4.(教材原句)But before I knew it, I was taking part in local races. 但是不知不觉地,我就参加了本地的一些赛跑。 (应用文之建议信)你最好三思而后行。 You’d better think twice before you act.  注： It will be+时间段+before...要过多久才…… It may be+时间段+before...也许要过多久才…… It won’t be long before...不久就…… It was+时间段+before...过了(多长时间)才…… I.题型解读 体育故事是讲述自己和一项体育运动的经历的故事,主要记叙自己与这项运动的渊源、自己对它的感触、期间遇到了什么问题以及自己以后的目标。体裁一般为记叙文。 II.策略框架 体育故事的结构框架: III.教材词汇 (1)champion　　 　n.(尤指体育比赛中的)冠军,第一名 (2)ultimate adj.(目标等)最终的 (3)goal n.球门 (4)proud adj.骄傲的,自豪的 (5)be terrified of 害怕 (6)envy v.羡慕,忌妒 (7)confident adj.自信的 (8)dynamic adj.充满活力的,精力充沛的 (9)ultimate goal 最终目标 (10)competitive adj. 竞争的 IV.常用词块 (1)be fond of/be keen on　　 喜欢 (2)persuade sb.to do sth. 说服某人做某事 (3)of all the sports 在所有的运动中 (4)give it a shot 尝试 (5)challenge oneself 挑战自我 (6)fall in love with 爱上 (7)take an active part in 积极参加 (8)with all one’s strength/spare no effort/go all out 全力以赴 (9)stick to 坚持 (10)a sense of achievement 成就感 (11)build up one’s body 增强体质 (12)dream of 梦想 V.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①All the students are encouraged to take part in a sport.鼓励所有的学生参加一项体育运动。 ②You have to have a strong will to compete in individual sports. 你必须有坚强的意志去参加个人体育项目的竞争。 (2)主体段落句 ①My ambition was to play sports at the highest level.我的志向就是参加最高水平的运动。 ②After he won the amateur championship he turned professional. 他获得业余赛冠军后就转为了职业运动员。 (3)段尾句 ①Try to fit some regular exercise into your daily routine. 尽量在日常生活中安排一些有规律的锻炼。 ②Gentle exercise can be beneficial to older people. 轻松的锻炼对年长者有益。 英语课上,老师让学生讲述自己做某项运动的具体经历。请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文。要点如下: 1.你与你所讲述的运动的渊源; 2.做运动的经历或过程; 3.运动给你带来了什么。 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.众所周知,运动可以改善健康。 As we all know, exercise can improve one’s health.  2.我小时候身体不好,所以父母鼓励我打乒乓球。 I wasn’t healthy when I was young so my parents encouraged me to play ping-pong.  3.(一句多译)我太累了,不想继续(练)下去。 (1) I was too tired to continue.(too...to...)  (2) I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue.(so...that...)  4.(一句多译)我父母说服我不要放弃。 (1)My parents persuaded me not to give up.  (2)My parents persuaded me out of giving up.  5.通过每天打乒乓球,我可以保持头脑清醒,从而可以按时完成我的任务。(so that) By playing ping-pong every day I can keep my mind alert so that I can finish my tasks on time.  Step 4:衔接成篇 As we all know, exercise can improve one’s health. The reason why my parents encouraged me to play ping-pong was that I wasn’t healthy when I was young.Before I knew it, my fitness and my skills improved. 　　At the start,I was too tired to continue,but my parents persuaded me not to give up. 　　By playing ping-pong every day I can keep my mind alert so that I can finish my tasks on time.Without it,I will feel tired and my body becomes quite sluggish.It has become a part of my life. 1．根据下面提示写一篇关于你最喜欢的足球运动故事。 1. 你最喜欢的体育运动是足球； 2. 父亲是个足球队员，参加过各种比赛；正是在他的影响下，你才开始对足球展现出了兴趣；1998年的法国世界杯（World Cup）对你也产生了影响，至今仍记得其主题曲（theme song），于是喜欢上了足球； 3. 你去年被一支足球队吸收成为一名队员，现在担任队长（captain），司职前锋（forward）；每天写完作业后你跟朋友一起踢球；足球值得你的投入和热爱； 4. 最喜爱的球员是阿根廷（Argentina）的梅西（Messi），最大的愿望是能成为像他那样的巨星，希望能代表国家在世界杯的舞台上踢球。 要求：包括所有要点，可适当发挥。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你校英文网站的体育栏目正在征稿，请你以“Sports and I”为题写一篇稿件，内容包括： 1.你对体育锻炼重要性的认识； 2.你难忘的一次体育运动经历。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Sports and I ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．十二月为长安一中的“体育文化月”。请为你校校刊（英文版）写一篇短文，介绍“体育文化月”活动情况，内容包括： 1. 活动背景；2. 活动内容及开展情况；3. 你的感受。 注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．学校英文报体育专栏正在举行征文比赛，请你以“My Favorite Sports Star”为题写一篇文章参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 个人成就； 3. 喜欢原因。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Sports Star ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是班级体育委员，班主任请你就“青少年应持有正确的健美观”这一话题在班级内进行演讲，内容包括： 1. 过去对健美的错误理解； 2. 现在对健美的新的认识： 3. 对同学们的鼓励和祝愿。 注意：词数90词左右。 Hello, dear classmates. My speech today is about the right attitude to fitness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．受学生会委托，你在校英文报上发出倡议，呼吁同学们重视锻炼，积极参加体育活动，要点如下： 1．倡议的原因； 2．倡议的内容。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．题目已为你写好； 3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 More Exercise, Better Health ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是高一学生李华，应学生会的邀请，写一篇文章向同学们推荐一项在校的课外体育运动，旨在激发同学们的运动热情，内容包括： 1. 运动的名称； 2. 推荐的理由； 3. 温馨的提示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子”的理念已深入人心。为配合该活动，你班将举行一次主题班会。请以“Sports and Health”为主题写一篇发言稿，介绍你自己的体育锻炼情况及感受等。 要点提示：1.自己的锻炼情况； 2.最喜欢的体育活动及原因； 3.锻炼的效果及感受； 4.倡议大家积极参与体育锻炼。 要求：1.短文必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥； 2.词数90左右；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, I’m glad to be here to say something about sports and health. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 On the move 单元写作深度指导 写关于体育运动的故事(Writing a sports story) 【学以致用】 1.adjustable adj.可调整的,可调节的 (应用文之建议信)这样,你可能很快就会适应在北京的生活了。 In this way, you may adjust yourself to the life here in Beijing soon.  2.(教材原句)Using only a rope, you can develop your footwork and balance. 只用一根绳子,你就能改善你的步法和平衡。 ①(应用文之建议信)我建议你在工作和休闲之间保持平衡。 I suggest that you keep a balance between work and relaxation.  3.(教材原句)It involves doing very slow physical exercises to relax your mind and calm your body.它包括做非常缓慢的体育训练活动,来放松你的大脑和平静你的身体。 (应用文之告知信)I participated in the activity where my work involved caring for the elderly. 我参加了一个活动,我的工作是照顾老人。 4.(教材原句)But before I knew it, I was taking part in local races. 但是不知不觉地,我就参加了本地的一些赛跑。 (应用文之建议信)你最好三思而后行。 You’d better think twice before you act.  注： It will be+时间段+before...要过多久才…… It may be+时间段+before...也许要过多久才…… It won’t be long before...不久就…… It was+时间段+before...过了(多长时间)才…… I.题型解读 体育故事是讲述自己和一项体育运动的经历的故事,主要记叙自己与这项运动的渊源、自己对它的感触、期间遇到了什么问题以及自己以后的目标。体裁一般为记叙文。 II.策略框架 体育故事的结构框架: III.教材词汇 (1)champion　　 　n.(尤指体育比赛中的)冠军,第一名 (2)ultimate adj.(目标等)最终的 (3)goal n.球门 (4)proud adj.骄傲的,自豪的 (5)be terrified of 害怕 (6)envy v.羡慕,忌妒 (7)confident adj.自信的 (8)dynamic adj.充满活力的,精力充沛的 (9)ultimate goal 最终目标 (10)competitive adj. 竞争的 IV.常用词块 (1)be fond of/be keen on　　 喜欢 (2)persuade sb.to do sth. 说服某人做某事 (3)of all the sports 在所有的运动中 (4)give it a shot 尝试 (5)challenge oneself 挑战自我 (6)fall in love with 爱上 (7)take an active part in 积极参加 (8)with all one’s strength/spare no effort/go all out 全力以赴 (9)stick to 坚持 (10)a sense of achievement 成就感 (11)build up one’s body 增强体质 (12)dream of 梦想 V.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①All the students are encouraged to take part in a sport.鼓励所有的学生参加一项体育运动。 ②You have to have a strong will to compete in individual sports. 你必须有坚强的意志去参加个人体育项目的竞争。 (2)主体段落句 ①My ambition was to play sports at the highest level.我的志向就是参加最高水平的运动。 ②After he won the amateur championship he turned professional. 他获得业余赛冠军后就转为了职业运动员。 (3)段尾句 ①Try to fit some regular exercise into your daily routine. 尽量在日常生活中安排一些有规律的锻炼。 ②Gentle exercise can be beneficial to older people. 轻松的锻炼对年长者有益。 英语课上,老师让学生讲述自己做某项运动的具体经历。请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文。要点如下: 1.你与你所讲述的运动的渊源; 2.做运动的经历或过程; 3.运动给你带来了什么。 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.众所周知,运动可以改善健康。 As we all know, exercise can improve one’s health.  2.我小时候身体不好,所以父母鼓励我打乒乓球。 I wasn’t healthy when I was young so my parents encouraged me to play ping-pong.  3.(一句多译)我太累了,不想继续(练)下去。 (1) I was too tired to continue.(too...to...)  (2) I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue.(so...that...)  4.(一句多译)我父母说服我不要放弃。 (1)My parents persuaded me not to give up.  (2)My parents persuaded me out of giving up.  5.通过每天打乒乓球,我可以保持头脑清醒,从而可以按时完成我的任务。(so that) By playing ping-pong every day I can keep my mind alert so that I can finish my tasks on time.  Step 4:衔接成篇 As we all know, exercise can improve one’s health. The reason why my parents encouraged me to play ping-pong was that I wasn’t healthy when I was young.Before I knew it, my fitness and my skills improved. 　　At the start,I was too tired to continue,but my parents persuaded me not to give up. 　　By playing ping-pong every day I can keep my mind alert so that I can finish my tasks on time.Without it,I will feel tired and my body becomes quite sluggish.It has become a part of my life. 1．根据下面提示写一篇关于你最喜欢的足球运动故事。 1. 你最喜欢的体育运动是足球； 2. 父亲是个足球队员，参加过各种比赛；正是在他的影响下，你才开始对足球展现出了兴趣；1998年的法国世界杯（World Cup）对你也产生了影响，至今仍记得其主题曲（theme song），于是喜欢上了足球； 3. 你去年被一支足球队吸收成为一名队员，现在担任队长（captain），司职前锋（forward）；每天写完作业后你跟朋友一起踢球；足球值得你的投入和热爱； 4. 最喜爱的球员是阿根廷（Argentina）的梅西（Messi），最大的愿望是能成为像他那样的巨星，希望能代表国家在世界杯的舞台上踢球。 要求：包括所有要点，可适当发挥。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你校英文网站的体育栏目正在征稿，请你以“Sports and I”为题写一篇稿件，内容包括： 1.你对体育锻炼重要性的认识； 2.你难忘的一次体育运动经历。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.标题已给出，不计入总词数； 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Sports and I ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．十二月为长安一中的“体育文化月”。请为你校校刊（英文版）写一篇短文，介绍“体育文化月”活动情况，内容包括： 1. 活动背景；2. 活动内容及开展情况；3. 你的感受。 注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．学校英文报体育专栏正在举行征文比赛，请你以“My Favorite Sports Star”为题写一篇文章参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 个人成就； 3. 喜欢原因。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Sports Star ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是班级体育委员，班主任请你就“青少年应持有正确的健美观”这一话题在班级内进行演讲，内容包括： 1. 过去对健美的错误理解； 2. 现在对健美的新的认识： 3. 对同学们的鼓励和祝愿。 注意：词数90词左右。 Hello, dear classmates. My speech today is about the right attitude to fitness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．受学生会委托，你在校英文报上发出倡议，呼吁同学们重视锻炼，积极参加体育活动，要点如下： 1．倡议的原因； 2．倡议的内容。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．题目已为你写好； 3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 More Exercise, Better Health ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是高一学生李华，应学生会的邀请，写一篇文章向同学们推荐一项在校的课外体育运动，旨在激发同学们的运动热情，内容包括： 1. 运动的名称； 2. 推荐的理由； 3. 温馨的提示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子”的理念已深入人心。为配合该活动，你班将举行一次主题班会。请以“Sports and Health”为主题写一篇发言稿，介绍你自己的体育锻炼情况及感受等。 要点提示：1.自己的锻炼情况； 2.最喜欢的体育活动及原因； 3.锻炼的效果及感受； 4.倡议大家积极参与体育锻炼。 要求：1.短文必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥； 2.词数90左右；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, I’m glad to be here to say something about sports and health. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．One possible version: Of all the sports, I like playing football best. My father was a footballer and has taken part in all kinds of competitions. It was under his influence that I began to show interest in it. Besides, I was also deeply influenced by the 1998 World Cup in France, whose theme song I still remember. Last year, I was admitted into a football team, in which I play as a forward as well as being captain. I play football with my friends every day after finishing my homework. It really deserves my devotion and love. My favorite player is Messi from Argentina. My greatest wish is to be a football super star like him in the future, and I hope I can stand for my country to play football in the World Cup when I grow up. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生根据提示写一篇自己最喜欢的足球运动故事。 【要点提示】1. 词汇积累 喜欢：like→be fond of, love 参加：take part in→participate in 此外：besides→in addition, what’s more 值得：deserve→be worth 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I play football with my friends every day after finishing my homework. It really deserves my devotion and love. 拓展句：I play football with my friends every day after finishing my homework, which really deserves my devotion and love. [高分句型1] It was under his influence that I began to show interest in it. (运用了强调句型) [高分句型2] Besides, I was also deeply influenced by the 1998 World Cup in France, whose theme song I still remember. (运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句) 2．One possible version: Sports and I Sports are of great importance for us. They can help us build up our body and become refreshed. Basketball is my favourite sport, which is full of fun and challenge. Of all the matches I’ve experienced, my first basketball match in senior high school is the most unforgettable. Our rival was a skillful team with several champion tittles. It turned out as expected, we fell behind most of the time. However, in spite of all the difficulties, each of us spared no efforts and we played as a team. Our hard work finally paid off. We managed to win 3 scores at the final moment! Basketball enriches my spare time, both physically and mentally. I love this game! 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。假定你是李华，你校英文网站的体育栏目正在征稿，请你以“Sports and I”为题写一篇稿件。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 比赛：match→competition 乐趣：fun→joy 重要的：be of great importance→be important 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：However, in spite of all the difficulties, each of us spared no efforts and we played as a team. 拓展句：However, although there were difficulties, each of us spared no efforts and we played as a team. [高分句型1] Basketball is my favourite sport, which is full of fun and challenge. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Of all the matches I’ve experienced, my first basketball match in senior high school is the most unforgettable. (运用了省略关系词的定语从句) 3． In order to cultivate students’ interest in participating in physical exercise and improve students’ physical health, our school held the sports and culture activity in December. Ten classes and some clubs gave a performance in the gym on the first day of December, which ignited our passion for sports. The students of Grade One played a football match because of their enthusiasm about football, and the match was so intense that it got a lot of attention. There was a basketball game in Grade Two, and many students showed their vitality and happiness through it. What made us most excited was that all the students in Grade Three participated in the tug-of-war competition. The winners of each event received medals on the last day of the month, and we were moved by their fighting spirit. The activity provides a platform for us to show ourselves. Not only does it enrich our campus life, but it makes us understand better “Sports make me healthy and happy”. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生为学校校刊（英文版）写一篇短文，介绍学校“体育文化月”的活动情况。 【要点提示】1. 词汇积累 为了：in order to→with the aim of 参加：participate in→take part in 激烈的：intense→fierce 提供：provide→offer 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：There was a basketball game in Grade Two, and many students showed their vitality and happiness through it. 拓展句：There was a basketball game in Grade Two, through which many students showed their vitality and happiness. 【高分句型1】What made us most excited was that all the students in Grade Three participated in the tug-of-war competition.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】Not only does it enrich our campus life, but it makes us understand better “Sports make me healthy and happy”.（运用了not only引导的部分倒装句式） 4．My Favorite Sports Star The Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics saw the rise of new generation sports stars, among whom Su Yiming, a snowboarder, is my favorite. Su began to learn snowboarding at the age of four under the influence of his parents. His talent for snowboarding was so exceptional that he was elected into national training team in 2018. To our delight, Su won China's first gold in snowboarding competition in the 2022 Winter Olympic Games, and he became the youngest Winter Olympic champion in China. Besides, he has starred in some films before. It is his energy, passion for sports and persistence that I admire greatly. Meanwhile, his fluent English in the interview also made a deep impression on me. I will pursue my sports and academic dreams like him. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇以“My Favorite Sports Star”为题的征文，介绍人物，他的个人成就，以及喜欢的原因。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 天赋：talent→gift 非凡的，卓越的：exceptional→extraordinary 高兴：delight→pleasure 热情：passion→enthusiasm 2.句式拓展 变化句式 原句：To our delight, Su won China's first gold in snowboarding competition in the 2022 Winter Olympic Games, and he became the youngest Winter Olympic champion in China. 拓展句：To our delight, Su won China's first gold in snowboarding competition in the 2022 Winter Olympic Games, becoming the youngest Winter Olympic champion in China. 【高分句型1】His talent for snowboarding was so exceptional that he was elected into national training team in 2018.（运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句） 【高分句型2】It is his energy, passion for sports and persistence that I admire greatly.（运用了强调句） 5．       Hello, dear classmates, my speech today is about the right attitude to fitness. In the past, I always compared myself with actresses/actors and models, making me worried about my weight and I tried every new diet. As a result, I almost went bananas. However, now I start thinking about fitness rather than weight and I have made a list of things that are suitable for my body, which has really made a difference. Classmates, please be so positive about ourselves and our body that we can become both happier and healthier. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友约翰写信邀请他周末看电影，表示对他给予你的帮助的感谢。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 健康：fitness→health 对……适合的：be suitable for→be fit for 积极的：positive→active 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In the past, I always compared myself with actresses/actors and models, making me worried about my weight and I tried every new diet. 拓展句：In the past, I always compared myself with actresses/actors and models, which made  me worried about my weight and I tried every new diet. 【高分句型1】However, now I start thinking about fitness rather than weight and I have made a list of things that are suitable for my body, which has really made a difference. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Classmates, please be so positive about ourselves and our body that we will become both happier and healthier.（运用了so…that引导的状语从句） 6．One possible version: More Exercise, Better Health Nowadays, many students haven't realized how important exercise is and don't work out regularly, listing various reasons such as lack of time or exhaustion from studying. However, taking regular exercise does us students good, helping reduce stress and improve learning efficiency. Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. We can incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog. Let's take action and exercise more from now! 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在校英文报上发出倡议，呼吁同学们重视锻炼，积极参加体育活动。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 理解：realize→comprehend 许多的：various→numerous 然而：however→nevertheless 压力：stress→pressure 2.句式拓展 短句变长句 原句：Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. We can incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog. 拓展句：Therefore, not only should we give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are, but we can also incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog. 【高分句型1】Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are.（运用了however引导的让步状语从句） 【高分句型2】However, taking regular exercise does us students good, helping reduce stress and improve learning efficiency.（运用了动名词做主语和现在分词作状语） 7．参考范文1 Regular exercise is part of a healthy life. It’s my honor to recommend long-distance running to you, which has a lot of benefits. Running will help you get fit and prevent diseases. Like any exercise, it increases the flow of blood and oxygen to your brain. At the same time, it’s good for your eyes after a whole day of study. It also strengthens your immune system and reduces the risk of health problems. What’s more, if you feel down, going for a run can cheer yourself up. If you’re new to running, here are some tips for you — a pair of good running shoes is necessary. It’s important to warm up and cool down properly before and after running. (131 words) 参考范文2 Swimming, which deserves to be recommended, is my favorite sport. Swimming is a kind of aerobic exercise which is of great benefit to health. After a day of study, what fun it is to jump into the pool to swim with a few partners because swimming is a really relaxing exercise and it helps to relieve stress. Besides, it can increase flexibility of our body, enhance balance and coordination. Most importantly, swimming enables us to rescue ourselves in time of emergency while in the river. What a pool of blue water! However, it is necessary for us to strengthen self-protection. Before swimming, we should do warm-up exercise to stimulate our organs to prevent causing injuries. (116 words) 【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇文章给同学们推荐一项在校的课外体育运动，包括运动名称、推荐理由和温馨提示。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 帮助：help→assist 同时：at the same time→meanwhile 此外：What’s more→Furthermore 重要的：important→significant 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： It’s important to warm up and cool down properly before and after running. 拓展句： It’s important that you (should) warm up and cool down properly before and after running. 【高分句型1】It’s my honor to recommend long-distance running to you, which has a lot of benefits.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】What’s more, if you feel down, going for a run can cheer yourself up.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 8．Dear friends, I’m glad to be here to say something about sports and health. I love sports. My favorite sport is playing basketball. I like it because it’s exciting and good for my health. I usually play basketball with my best friends on the playground after school. I also enjoy playing ping-pong and swimming. I am stronger than before because I keep on taking exercise almost every day. “Keep doing exercise an hour a day, and you can work healthily for fifty years and live a happy life all the time.” So I hope all of us can take active part in sports, and also I wish everybody good health. That’s all. Thank you. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于发言稿。要求考生以“Sports and Health”为主题介绍自己的体育锻炼情况及感受等。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 也：also→too 喜欢：enjoy→be fond of 参加：take part in→join in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m glad to be here to say something about sports and health. 拓展句：I’m glad that I can be here to say something about sports and health. 【高分句型1】I like it because it’s exciting and good for my health.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】So I hope all of us can take active part in sports, and also I wish everybody good health.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$