15.必修第二册Unit 2 Let’s celebrate!(写信表达观点)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(外研版2019)

Unit 2 Let’s celebrate! 单元写作深度指导 　写信表达观点和看法(Writing a letter to express ideas) 【学以致用】 1.request n.& vt. 请求,要求 (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)My partner posted her request on the notice board of a local park. 我的搭档把她的要求贴在了当地公园的布告栏上。 我父母要求我再学一门外语。 →My parents requested me to learn a second foreign language.(request v.)  →My parents requested that I (should) learn a second foreign language.(request that)  →My parents made a request that I (should) learn a second foreign language.(request n.)  2.(教材原句) The lantern fair attracts a lot of people, so it’s one of the busiest times of year for the traffic police.灯会吸引了许多人,所以这是一年中交警最忙的时候之一。 In Beijing,there are many tourist attractions,like the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and the Tian’anmen Square.But what attracts me most is the Great Wall,which is also attractive to foreigners.More and more foreigners are attracted by it and come to China.  北京有许多旅游胜地,比如长城、颐和园以及天安门广场。但是最吸引我的是长城,它对外国人来说也很有吸引力。越来越多的外国人被它吸引而来到中国。 3.(教材原句) The occasion is more enjoyable without all that tiring cooking, and the dishes taste better!不用辛苦地做饭,用餐会更愉快,而且菜的味道也更好! (应用文之节日介绍)It is an occasion for all the family to celebrate. 这是个举家庆祝的时刻。 You should on no occasion do such a thing that hurts someone else. →On no occasion should you do such a thing that hurts someone else.(倒装句)  4.(教材原句)Can’t they admit that the preparations for the dinner are hard work? 难道他们不觉得准备年夜饭很辛苦吗? (应用文之邀请信)Learning our school table tennis team is admitting new members, I can hardly wait to invite you to join it.得知我们学校乒乓球队正在招收新成员,我迫不及待地邀请你加入。 (应用文之人物介绍)李老师既幽默又有耐心,被认为是最好的老师之一。 Mr Li was humorous and patient, and was admitted to be/as one of the best teachers.  5.effort n.力气,精力 (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)With a workout partner, you will increase your training effort as there is a subtle competition.有了一个锻炼伙伴,你会更加努力训练,因为这是一种微妙的竞争。 (应用文之倡议书)让我们从现在开始,不遗余力地每分钟做一点。 Let’s start now and spare no effort to do a little bit every minute.  6.exist v.存在,实际上有 (应用文之劝慰信)Though difficulties exist in our daily life, we should not be afraid of them. 尽管困难在我们的日常生活中存在,我们不应该害怕它们。 There exists a beautiful lake surrounded by green grass and wild flowers in front of our village.  在我们的村庄前面有一个美丽的湖,被绿草和野花环绕。 7(教材原句)It was not only for the delicious food that we seldom got to eat, but for the opportunity to have our whole family gathered together.不仅仅因为我们可以吃到平时难以吃到的美食,而且因为全家人能有机会团聚在一起。 Smartphones not only take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to our health. →Not only do smartphones take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to our health.(倒装句)  I.题型解读 观点类文章,一般为议论文。一般来说可以有以下几种类型:A.针对某一问题提出观点和看法,论证这一观点; B.针对某一现象,分析原因,提出你的观点;C.针对某一现象,阐述正反方观点,提出你的观点。 II.策略框架 观点类文章一般为三段式。主体时态是一般现在时,表达自己观点时使用第一人称,描述现象、用论据进行论证时使用第三人称。 III.教材词汇 (1)attend 　　vt.参加,出席 (2)organize vt. 组织 (3)activity n.活动 (4)fun n.乐趣 (5)joy n.高兴 (6)opinion n.观点 IV.常用词块 (1)as for me在我看来 (2)in my opinion 我认为 (3)from my point of view 依我之见,在我看来 (4)as far as I am concerned 在我看来 (5)on the one hand...on the other hand 一方面……另一方面 (6)take into consideration/account 考虑到 (7)concerning this issue 关于这个问题 (8)when it comes to 当提到 (9)vary from person to person 因人而异 (10)have a discussion about关于……的讨论 V.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①Recently...had a heated discussion about whether...or not. 近来,……关于是否……进行了热烈的讨论。 ②Having read your article concerning ...I am writing to express my opinion about ... 读过你的关于……的文章后,我写信是想表明我对……的观点。 ③With...changing in these years, ...witness a great increase in... 随着这些年……的变化,……见证了……的大幅增长。 ④The reasons are chiefly as follows.主要原因如下。 (2)主体段落句 firstly; secondly; besides (this); in addition (to this); what’s more; furthermore; moreover; in a word; in short; even worse ... 首先;其次;除此以外;另外;而且;此外;而且;总而言之;简而言之;更为糟糕的是…… (3)段尾句 ①I entirely agree with the idea that... 我完全同意这个观点…… ②Taking all these factors into consideration, we can come to the conclusion that... 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们可以得出结论…… ③To sum up/Summing up/To conclude/In conclusion...总的来说…… 　　现在越来越多的人喜欢过“洋节日”。对中国人过“洋节日”的做法,有的人赞同,有的人反对。请你向报社投稿表达自己的看法。 注意:1.词数80个左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.有人认为今天是一个全球化的世界。 Some people think today is a world of globalization.  2.世界各地的人们交换他们的产品和信息。 People around the world exchange their products and information.  3.他们也分享彼此的文化和习俗。 They also share cultures and customs with each other.  4.对中国人来说,过分关注外国节日是不明智的。 To pay too much attention to foreign festivals is not sensible for Chinese people.  5.这会影响我们对自己传统节日的感情。 This will affect our feelings on our traditional ones.  6.了解更多的外国文化对我们大有好处。 Knowing more foreign cultures benefits us greatly.  7.它可以促进国家之间更好地合作。 It can contribute to better cooperations between countries.  Step 3:衔接成篇 　　Nowadays,an increasing number of Chinese love to celebrate foreign holidays. Some people think today is a world of globalization. People around the world not only exchange their products and information but also share cultures and customs with each other.But some people oppose.They think it’s not sensible for Chinese people to pay too much attention to foreign festivals,which will affect our feelings on our traditional ones. Personally,whether we celebrate foreign festivals or not doesn’t count.Knowing more foreign cultures benefits us greatly,contributing to better cooperations between countries. 1．近期，“玉兔二号”月球车在月球表面留下了月饼形状的图案，引发了广泛关注。你所在班级就“太空探索是否值得”进行了讨论。请根据下表信息，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍讨论情况并表达你的个人观点。 观点 理由 30%反对 1. 离我们的生活遥远 2. 投入成本高 70%赞同 1.探索宇宙的奥秘 2.有助于科技进步 你的观点 …… 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：月球车lunar rover Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．随着暑假到来，很多学生到处旅游，也有很多学生忙着学习技能。针对这个现象，你校英文报开设专栏，邀请广大师生参与讨论：To travel or to learn skills?请你就此话题投稿，内容包括： (1) 阐述现象； (2) 你的观点； (3) 你的理由。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 To Travel or to Learn Skills? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，你学校的英语论坛首页置顶了一篇帖子，讨论如何选择大学专业，请你写一封回贴，内容包括： 1. 你的观点； 2. 你的理由。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Hi, I'm also interested in the topic. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 4．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David最近在考虑是否要出国留学，他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点，并给出理由(不少于三个)。 注意:1.词数80左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是Mary Min，你远在英国的笔友Jennifer学习汉语数年。她给你来信，说许多中文词语的字面意义与实际含义完全不同。请你就这一语言现象，以“青梅竹马”为例，回信支撑她的观点。(信的开头和结尾已经写好) Dear Jennifer, I have just read your letter regarding your confusion about some of the Chinese words’ meanings. I can’t agree with you more! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   In conclusion, I’d kindly remind you to double check the cultural as well as the linguistic side of a Chinese expression before putting it in use. Enjoy exploring and good luck! Mary Min 6．假如你是李华，你在世界土壤日(12月5日)当天参加了题为“有机农场”体验活动。现请你以“OrganicFarming”为题，向你校报英文专栏投稿。 内容包括： 1. 什么是有机农业。 2. 有机农业的利弊(各列举两点)。 3. 你的观点。 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 根据自己掌握的相关知识，批判性地阐述自己的观点。 Organic Farming ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你们班要举行一场英文辩论赛，辩论赛的题目是“Are smart homes suitable for us?”你们小组作为反方，抽到的选项是“Smart homes are not suitable for us.”，你作为本小组的一辩手，请写一篇辩论稿阐述你们的观点，内容如下： 1.阐明自己的观点。 2.陈述理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右。 2.请写在答题卡的相应位置。 Boys and girls, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 8．假设你是李华，你的英国好友Chris发来邮件，询问你身边发生的趣事，而恰好你们班最近就“看电影是否比看原著更好”这一话题展开了讨论。请你根据所给提示用英语回一封邮件，介绍同学们的不同观点以及你的看法。 赞成的观点：1. 节省时间；2. 易于理解。 反对的观点：1. 书中细节更多；2. 可以欣赏语言的魅力。 Dear Chris, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Let’s celebrate! 单元写作深度指导 　写信表达观点和看法(Writing a letter to express ideas) 【学以致用】 1.request n.& vt. 请求,要求 (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)My partner posted her request on the notice board of a local park. 我的搭档把她的要求贴在了当地公园的布告栏上。 我父母要求我再学一门外语。 →My parents requested me to learn a second foreign language.(request v.)  →My parents requested that I (should) learn a second foreign language.(request that)  →My parents made a request that I (should) learn a second foreign language.(request n.)  2.(教材原句) The lantern fair attracts a lot of people, so it’s one of the busiest times of year for the traffic police.灯会吸引了许多人,所以这是一年中交警最忙的时候之一。 In Beijing,there are many tourist attractions,like the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and the Tian’anmen Square.But what attracts me most is the Great Wall,which is also attractive to foreigners.More and more foreigners are attracted by it and come to China.  北京有许多旅游胜地,比如长城、颐和园以及天安门广场。但是最吸引我的是长城,它对外国人来说也很有吸引力。越来越多的外国人被它吸引而来到中国。 3.(教材原句) The occasion is more enjoyable without all that tiring cooking, and the dishes taste better!不用辛苦地做饭,用餐会更愉快,而且菜的味道也更好! (应用文之节日介绍)It is an occasion for all the family to celebrate. 这是个举家庆祝的时刻。 You should on no occasion do such a thing that hurts someone else. →On no occasion should you do such a thing that hurts someone else.(倒装句)  4.(教材原句)Can’t they admit that the preparations for the dinner are hard work? 难道他们不觉得准备年夜饭很辛苦吗? (应用文之邀请信)Learning our school table tennis team is admitting new members, I can hardly wait to invite you to join it.得知我们学校乒乓球队正在招收新成员,我迫不及待地邀请你加入。 (应用文之人物介绍)李老师既幽默又有耐心,被认为是最好的老师之一。 Mr Li was humorous and patient, and was admitted to be/as one of the best teachers.  5.effort n.力气,精力 (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)With a workout partner, you will increase your training effort as there is a subtle competition.有了一个锻炼伙伴,你会更加努力训练,因为这是一种微妙的竞争。 (应用文之倡议书)让我们从现在开始,不遗余力地每分钟做一点。 Let’s start now and spare no effort to do a little bit every minute.  6.exist v.存在,实际上有 (应用文之劝慰信)Though difficulties exist in our daily life, we should not be afraid of them. 尽管困难在我们的日常生活中存在,我们不应该害怕它们。 There exists a beautiful lake surrounded by green grass and wild flowers in front of our village.  在我们的村庄前面有一个美丽的湖,被绿草和野花环绕。 7(教材原句)It was not only for the delicious food that we seldom got to eat, but for the opportunity to have our whole family gathered together.不仅仅因为我们可以吃到平时难以吃到的美食,而且因为全家人能有机会团聚在一起。 Smartphones not only take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to our health. →Not only do smartphones take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to our health.(倒装句)  I.题型解读 观点类文章,一般为议论文。一般来说可以有以下几种类型:A.针对某一问题提出观点和看法,论证这一观点; B.针对某一现象,分析原因,提出你的观点;C.针对某一现象,阐述正反方观点,提出你的观点。 II.策略框架 观点类文章一般为三段式。主体时态是一般现在时,表达自己观点时使用第一人称,描述现象、用论据进行论证时使用第三人称。 III.教材词汇 (1)attend 　　vt.参加,出席 (2)organize vt. 组织 (3)activity n.活动 (4)fun n.乐趣 (5)joy n.高兴 (6)opinion n.观点 IV.常用词块 (1)as for me在我看来 (2)in my opinion 我认为 (3)from my point of view 依我之见,在我看来 (4)as far as I am concerned 在我看来 (5)on the one hand...on the other hand 一方面……另一方面 (6)take into consideration/account 考虑到 (7)concerning this issue 关于这个问题 (8)when it comes to 当提到 (9)vary from person to person 因人而异 (10)have a discussion about关于……的讨论 V.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①Recently...had a heated discussion about whether...or not. 近来,……关于是否……进行了热烈的讨论。 ②Having read your article concerning ...I am writing to express my opinion about ... 读过你的关于……的文章后,我写信是想表明我对……的观点。 ③With...changing in these years, ...witness a great increase in... 随着这些年……的变化,……见证了……的大幅增长。 ④The reasons are chiefly as follows.主要原因如下。 (2)主体段落句 firstly; secondly; besides (this); in addition (to this); what’s more; furthermore; moreover; in a word; in short; even worse ... 首先;其次;除此以外;另外;而且;此外;而且;总而言之;简而言之;更为糟糕的是…… (3)段尾句 ①I entirely agree with the idea that... 我完全同意这个观点…… ②Taking all these factors into consideration, we can come to the conclusion that... 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们可以得出结论…… ③To sum up/Summing up/To conclude/In conclusion...总的来说…… 　　现在越来越多的人喜欢过“洋节日”。对中国人过“洋节日”的做法,有的人赞同,有的人反对。请你向报社投稿表达自己的看法。 注意:1.词数80个左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.有人认为今天是一个全球化的世界。 Some people think today is a world of globalization.  2.世界各地的人们交换他们的产品和信息。 People around the world exchange their products and information.  3.他们也分享彼此的文化和习俗。 They also share cultures and customs with each other.  4.对中国人来说,过分关注外国节日是不明智的。 To pay too much attention to foreign festivals is not sensible for Chinese people.  5.这会影响我们对自己传统节日的感情。 This will affect our feelings on our traditional ones.  6.了解更多的外国文化对我们大有好处。 Knowing more foreign cultures benefits us greatly.  7.它可以促进国家之间更好地合作。 It can contribute to better cooperations between countries.  Step 3:衔接成篇 　　Nowadays,an increasing number of Chinese love to celebrate foreign holidays. Some people think today is a world of globalization. People around the world not only exchange their products and information but also share cultures and customs with each other.But some people oppose.They think it’s not sensible for Chinese people to pay too much attention to foreign festivals,which will affect our feelings on our traditional ones. Personally,whether we celebrate foreign festivals or not doesn’t count.Knowing more foreign cultures benefits us greatly,contributing to better cooperations between countries. 1．近期，“玉兔二号”月球车在月球表面留下了月饼形状的图案，引发了广泛关注。你所在班级就“太空探索是否值得”进行了讨论。请根据下表信息，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍讨论情况并表达你的个人观点。 观点 理由 30%反对 1. 离我们的生活遥远 2. 投入成本高 70%赞同 1.探索宇宙的奥秘 2.有助于科技进步 你的观点 …… 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：月球车lunar rover Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．随着暑假到来，很多学生到处旅游，也有很多学生忙着学习技能。针对这个现象，你校英文报开设专栏，邀请广大师生参与讨论：To travel or to learn skills?请你就此话题投稿，内容包括： (1) 阐述现象； (2) 你的观点； (3) 你的理由。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 To Travel or to Learn Skills? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，你学校的英语论坛首页置顶了一篇帖子，讨论如何选择大学专业，请你写一封回贴，内容包括： 1. 你的观点； 2. 你的理由。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Hi, I'm also interested in the topic. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 4．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David最近在考虑是否要出国留学，他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点，并给出理由(不少于三个)。 注意:1.词数80左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是Mary Min，你远在英国的笔友Jennifer学习汉语数年。她给你来信，说许多中文词语的字面意义与实际含义完全不同。请你就这一语言现象，以“青梅竹马”为例，回信支撑她的观点。(信的开头和结尾已经写好) Dear Jennifer, I have just read your letter regarding your confusion about some of the Chinese words’ meanings. I can’t agree with you more! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   In conclusion, I’d kindly remind you to double check the cultural as well as the linguistic side of a Chinese expression before putting it in use. Enjoy exploring and good luck! Mary Min 6．假如你是李华，你在世界土壤日(12月5日)当天参加了题为“有机农场”体验活动。现请你以“OrganicFarming”为题，向你校报英文专栏投稿。 内容包括： 1. 什么是有机农业。 2. 有机农业的利弊(各列举两点)。 3. 你的观点。 注意： 1. 词数80左右; 2. 根据自己掌握的相关知识，批判性地阐述自己的观点。 Organic Farming ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你们班要举行一场英文辩论赛，辩论赛的题目是“Are smart homes suitable for us?”你们小组作为反方，抽到的选项是“Smart homes are not suitable for us.”，你作为本小组的一辩手，请写一篇辩论稿阐述你们的观点，内容如下： 1.阐明自己的观点。 2.陈述理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右。 2.请写在答题卡的相应位置。 Boys and girls, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 8．假设你是李华，你的英国好友Chris发来邮件，询问你身边发生的趣事，而恰好你们班最近就“看电影是否比看原著更好”这一话题展开了讨论。请你根据所给提示用英语回一封邮件，介绍同学们的不同观点以及你的看法。 赞成的观点：1. 节省时间；2. 易于理解。 反对的观点：1. 书中细节更多；2. 可以欣赏语言的魅力。 Dear Chris, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 1．                                                               Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! Recently, the Yutu-2 lunar rover left a mooncake-shaped pattern on the lunar surface, which has attracted wide attention. Our class has had a discussion about whether space exploration is worth it. Thirty percent of the students are against it. They think space exploration is far from our daily life and it requires a large amount of money. However, seventy percent of the students are in favor of it. They believe that it can help us explore the mysteries of the universe and contribute to the progress of science and technology. Personally, I think space exploration is definitely worth it. It not only broadens our horizons but also gives us hope for the future of humanity. It may bring us unexpected benefits in the long run. Thank you! 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“太空探索是否值得”写一篇演讲稿。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 反对：against→ oppose 然而：However→ Nevertheless 相信：believed→ convinced 视野：horizons→ views 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：They think space exploration is far from our daily life and it requires a large amount of money. 同义句：They think space exploration is remote from our daily life and demands a large sum of money. 【高分句型1】Recently, the Yutu-2 lunar rover left a mooncake-shaped pattern on the lunar surface, which has attracted wide attention. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】It not only broadens our horizons but also gives us hope for the future of humanity. (运用了not only…but also…的并列句) 2．参考范文： To Travel or to Learn Skills? During the summer vacation, some people prefer to travel to different places, explore new cultures and relax themselves, while others choose to spend their time learning new skills such as cooking, painting or playing musical instruments. For me, I think it’s important to strike a balance between leisure and study. Therefore, I plan to spend some time traveling with my family or friends and also dedicate some time to learning new skills that interest me. This way, I can both enjoy the fun of traveling and enrich myself with useful knowledge and abilities. In conclusion, whether it’s traveling or learning skills during the summer vacation, it’s essential for us high school students to make good use of our time in order to broaden our horizons and improve ourselves. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“To travel or to learn skills?”为话题向校英文报投稿。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 不同的：different→diverse 重要的：important→significant 因此：therefore→as a result 提升自己：improve oneself→enhance oneself 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：...it’s essential for us high school students to make good use of our time in order to broaden our horizons and improve ourselves. 拓展句：...it’s essential that we high school students make good use of our time in order to broaden our horizons and improve ourselves. [高分句型1] Therefore, I plan to spend some time traveling with my family or friends and also dedicate some time to learning new skills that interest me. (运用了that引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] For me, I think it’s important to strike a balance between leisure and study. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 3．范文 Hi, I'm also interested in the topic. I want to major in Chinese medicine when I go to university and become a doctor in the future. As you know, Chinese medicine is part of our Chinese traditional culture, whose value is gradually recognized by the world. More and more people are turning to Chinese medicine when they are not feeling well. That is because it does less harm to people. Besides, during the fight against COVID-19, Chinese medicine is also making a great contribution and has effectively eased the patients’ pains. So I decide to pass down our traditional treasure and let more people benefit from it. Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封回贴，说明选择大学专业的观点。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 认可：recognize→approve 缓解：ease→relieve 决定：decide to→make up one’s mind to 此外：besides→in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Besides, during the fight against COVID-19, Chinese medicine is also making a great contribution and has effectively eased the patients’ pains. 拓展句：Besides, when people fight against COVID-19, Chinese medicine is also making a great contribution and has effectively eased the patients’ pains. [高分句型1] I want to major in Chinese medicine when I go to university and become a doctor in the future. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] That is because it does less harm to people. (运用了because引导表语从句) 4．Dear David, I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be of help to you. Frankly, I think it makes good sense to study abroad.The reasons are as follows. To begin with, exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes learning process interesting and effective. Moreover, bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world. Finally, studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and changes us for the better, which is the most important from my point of view. All things considered, I hope you can choose to study abroad and start a new life. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就美国笔友David是否应该出国留学，给出意见并阐述自己的观点。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 开心的：delighted→pleased 此外：moreover→in addition 重要的：important→significant 选择：choose→select 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Moreover, bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world. 拓展句：Moreover, when we are bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world. 【高分句型1】I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be of some help to you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】All things considered, I hope you can choose to study abroad and start a new life. (运用了独立主格结构) 5．Dear Jennifer, I have just read your letter regarding your confusion about some of the Chinese words’ meanings. I can’t agree with you more! Many Chinese words do convey “tricky” meanings for their cultural intricacy. They look simple and easy to understand. But, it is these literal meanings that lead you astray. For example, literally, qingmeizhuma(青梅竹马) means “green plum, bamboo horse”. However, in daily Chinese, we use it to mean “childhood sweethearts”. “Green plum”, the early stage of the growing fruit, symbolizes the girl, while “bamboo horse” refers to the boy, riding the bamboo as a horse. Thus, they make a perfect couple. Interesting, isn’t it? In conclusion, I’d kindly remind you to double check the cultural as well as the linguistic side of a Chinese expression before putting it in use. Enjoy exploring and good luck! Mary Min 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求你给的英国笔友Jennifer写一封回信，Jennifer学习汉语数年，她给你来信说许多中文词语的字面意义与实际含义完全不同。就这一语言现象，以“青梅竹马”为例，回信支撑她的观点。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 表达：convey→/express/ communicate 理解：understand→see/ comprehend 检查：check→ examine/ review/ inspect 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Many Chinese words do convey “tricky” meanings for their cultural intricacy. 拓展句：Many Chinese words convey a "tricky" meaning due to their cultural complexity. 【高分句型1】But, it is these literal meanings that lead you astray. (运用了It is+被强调部分+that+其他，这一强调句型结构。) 【高分句型2】“Green plum”, the early stage of the growing fruit, symbolizes the girl, while “bamboo horse” refers to the boy, riding the bamboo as a horse. (运用了while这一并列连词引导从句，表示前后意义上的对比。) 6．In order to let us learn something about Organic Agriculture, our class organized an experience activity on the World Soil Day. Organic agriculture is in the production of nonuse of genetic engineering and chemical synthetic pesticides, fertilizers and so on. With organic agriculture, environmental costs tend to be lower. What’s more, organic agriculture also creates less soil and water pollution. However, organic agriculture requires upfront costs and is often difficult to produce on a large scale by farmers themselves. And organic agriculture asks for more labors. As far as I’m concerned, organic agriculture forbids farmers to spray chemical pesticides on the plants and farmers use natural waste from animals, which will be good for improving the condition of the soil. All in all, I’m in favor of organic farming. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你在世界土壤日(12月5日)当天参加了题为“有机农场”体验活动。现请你以“OrganicFarming”为题，向你校报英文专栏投稿。内容包括：1. 什么是有机农业。2. 有机农业的利弊(各列举两点)。3. 你的观点。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 此外：what’s more→furthermore 然而：however→nevertheless 需要：require→demand 我认为：as far as I’m concerned→from my point of view 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In order to let us learn something about Organic Agriculture, our class organized an experience activity on the World Soil Day. 拓展句：Our class organized an experience activity on the World Soil Day so that we might learn something about Organic Agriculture, 【高分句型1】However，organic farming requires upfront costs and is often difficult to produce on a large scale by farmers themselves.（运用了不定式作状语） 【高分句型2】As far as I’m concerned, organic agricultureforbidsfarmers to spray chemical pesticides on the plants and farmers use natural waste from animals, which will be good for improving the condition of the soil. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 7．Boys and girls,     As the first speaker of our team, I argue against the idea that smart homes are suitable for us. We firmly believe that they are not suitable for everyone due to several key reasons.     Firstly, smart homes rely heavily on technology and internet, making them easy to be attacked by hackers, which may cause great loss to the owners.     Secondly, smart homes require much money to buy and install the equipments. Not everyone can afford them.     In addition, smart homes can lead to overreliance on technology and a loss of life skills. This dependence on technology can prevent personal growth.     In conclusion, while smart homes offer convenience in certain aspects of our lives, they are not suitable for everyone.     Thank you. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Smart homes are not suitable for us.”为主题写一篇辩论稿阐述观点。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 由于：due to→because of 依靠：rely on→depend on 此外：in addition→what’s more 导致：lead to→result in 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Secondly, smart homes require much money to buy and install the equipments. Not everyone can afford them. 拓展句：Secondly, smart homes require much money to buy and install the equipments, which not everyone can afford. 【高分句型1】As the first speaker of our team, I argue against the idea that smart homes are suitable for us.（运用了that引导的同位语从句） 【高分句型2】Firstly, smart homes rely heavily on technology and internet, making them easy to be attacked by hackers, which may cause great loss to the owners.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型3】In conclusion, while smart homes offer convenience in certain aspects of our lives, they are not suitable for everyone.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句） 8． Dear Chris, Recently our class had a discussion about whether it is better to watch the film than read the book. We had different opinions. Some of us in favour of the film think watching a film can save a lot of time. Besides, it’s easier for people to understand. However, others think differently. They believe the book offers more information, and it’s enjoyable to read beautiful language. From my point of view, reading the book may be the better choice. I think that it’s closely related to the author’s view. And it’s convenient to enjoy a book anytime and anywhere you like. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就班里关于话题“看电影是否比看原著更好”的讨论写一封邮件给英国好友Chris。 【要点提示】1.词汇积累 讨论：discussion → debate 观点：opinion → perspective 节省：save → conserve 提供：offer → provide 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：They believe the book offers more information, and it’s enjoyable to read beautiful language. 拓展句：They hold the belief that the book offers more information, and it’s enjoyable to read beautiful language. 【高分句型1】Recently our class had a discussion about whether it is better to watch the film than read the book. (运用了whether引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Some of us in favour of the film think watching a film can save a lot of time. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$