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Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
Section B 1a-1e & Writing
Lead in
What are the rules at our school?
We can’t arrive late for class.
We can’t eat in the class.
We can study with our friends.
What can you do at school?
We can play basketball
after school.
Look at the pictures and answer
the questions.
1. What happened to the boy at the door in the picture?
2. How do you think the people in the picture might be feeling?
Presentation
He’s late for class.
2. The teacher looks annoyed.
The boy who is late might be embarrassed or afraid.
The other students might feel sorry for him, or they might be disapproving.
1. What happened to the boy at the door in the picture?
2. How do you think the people in the picture might be feeling?
Do you ever...
1. get to class late? ______
2. study with friends? ______
3. finish a test early? ______
4. worry about failing a test? ______
5. …
Read the questions. How often do you do these things? Write A for always, U for usually, S for sometimes and N for never.
1a
always
usually
often
sometimes
never
Do you ever …
get to class late? __________
study with friends? __________
finish a test early? __________
worry about failing a test? __________
Listen and circle the things in 1a that Peter
talks about.
1c
Listen again. Match these sentence parts.
1d
1. Peter is going to … __
2. He isn’t allowed to … __
3. Peter wasn’t allowed to … __
4. He could … __
5. He should be allowed to …__ a. take the test.
b. pass the test.
c. fail a math test.
d. take the test later.
e. get to class late.
d
b
a
e
c
fail a test
考试不及格
2. take a test
参加考试
3. pass the test
通过考试
4. be strict with
对某人严格要求
5. worry about
担心…
Parents should not be too strict with teenagers.
家长不能对青少年太严厉。
be strict with sb. 对某人要求严格
be strict in sth. 对某方面要求严格
strict作形容词,意为“严厉的,严格的”;
例:我们的班主任对学生要求严格,而且她对自己的
工作要求也很严格。
Our English teacher is very strict with us, and she
is also very strict in her work.
Discuss:
Should Peter be allowed to take the test later?
Why?
I agree/disagree that ...
Because I think/believe ... / I don't think/believe...
亮明观点
阐述理由
Do you have any rules at home? What are they?
can't play phones or computers
can't watch TV
can't hang out with friends on weekday
must be home before 10
...
Writing A
描述规则的可用句型:
I must .....
I am not allowed to….
I have to….
4. I can't ....
...
My Family Rules
Do you agree or disgree with these family rules?
How do you think the rule should be changed?
阐述理由的可用句型:
I think that I should be allowed to …
2. I think I can/could …… if I …
3.From my point of view/ in my opinion, I...
...
每个家庭都有自己的家规,好的家规利于孩子的成长、家庭的和睦。为了让孩子们更好地成长,家长禁止孩子看电视,你同意这条家规吗?请就这一问题在日记中表露你的心声。
1. 定基调
体裁:应用文(日记);
日记的主体部分为议论文
时态:一般现在时
人称:以第一人称为主
写作案例
亮明观点
阐述理由
表达愿望
2. 列提纲、写句子
What do you disagree with?
There are so many rules in my family. One of them is that I am not allowed to watch TV. My parents think that... , but/while I don’t agree with them.
Why do you disagree?
I think/believe that...
I don't think that.../it's (not)... to do sth.
How should it be changed?
I think I/we should be allowed to .../I would like to ...
watching TV influences has an influence on my schoolwork. watching TV gets in the way of my schoolwork
not all TV programs are bad for me
it’s not a good idea to spend all the time studying
I think I should be allowed to watch TV on weekends
I would like to watch some programs about education, music, sports and science.
I could... if I...
I promise that …… if ……
I wish .../I hope...
I will...
I can do even better in my study if I’m allowed to do this
3. 巧衔接
阐述不同意的理由时可以用到连接词:firstly, what's more, besides, in addition...
在由“为什么不同意这条家规”过渡到“应该如何改这条家规”时,可以使用表示推论的词therefore (因此)或for these reasons等来起承上启下的作用.
4. 添佳句(名言警句/精美的句型)
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
(只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。/ “劳逸结合”)
It's + adj.+for sb. to do sth.
be+done
5. 成篇章:
Monday, May 15th
There are so many rules in my family. One of them is that I am not allowed to watch TV. My parents think that watching TV gets in the way of my schoolwork, while I don’t agree with them.
Firstly, I believe that not all TV programs are bad for me. There is no doubt that some of them can help me with my study. Besides, I don’t think it’s a good idea to spend all the time studying. As the famous saying goes that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. It is also necessary for us to learn to relax after studying for a long time. Therefore, I think I should be allowed to watch TV on weekends. I would like to watch some programs that are good for my study such as education, music, sports and science.
I promise that I will do even better in my study if I’m given the chance to do this. I hope my parents will agree with me.
每个家庭都有自己的家规,好的家规有利于孩子的成长、家庭的和睦。你不同意你家家规中的哪一条?为什么不同意?你认为这条家规应该如何改?请你就这三个问题写一篇日记倾吐自己的心声。
1. 定基调
2. 列提纲、写句子
3. 巧衔接
4. 添佳句(名言警句/精美的句型)
5. 成篇章
Writing
Wednesday, September 30th
One of my family rules is that I'm not allowed to have a mobile phone. My parents think that using it will get in the way of my study, but I don t agree with them.
First of all, it's a convenient way to communicate with others on a mobile phone, especially in an emergency. What's more, using a mobile phone can be helpful to my study as I can use lots of educational apps on it. Besides, I can use a mobile phone to relax myself such as listening to music, playing games or watching movies. It's not good to study all the time. For these reasons, I think I should be allowed to have a mobile phone.
I think my parents can make rules about how I use it. For example, I should be allowed to use my mobile phone once or twice a week. I can do even better in my study if I'm allowed to have a mobile phone. I hope my parents will agree with me.
Writing B
假如你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory) 规定,如不整理床铺,休息时间大声拨打电话,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品,离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
要求: (1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节。
(2)字数:80词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名,学校名和地名。
Dear Wang Ming,
I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作案例
【审题指导】
细读所给的文字提示,提取信息:
1. 文体:据写作要求,本文是一封书信,文体为应用文。
2. 时态:一般现在时。
3. 人称:提醒对方规则,用第二人称。
4. 要点:要点需齐全, 提醒改正,四条规则不能少。
5. 字数:120字左右。
写作步骤:一审;二写;三连;四改
假如你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory) 规定,如不整理床铺①,休息时间大声拨打电话②,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品③,离开寝室不关灯④等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
要求: (1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节。
(2)字数:80词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名,学校名和地名。
假如你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory) 规定,如不整理床铺①,休息时间大声拨打电话②,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品③,离开寝室不关灯④等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
文章结构
过渡语:遵守规则的原因及应该做什么
四条规则
提出希望
假如你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory) 规定,如不整理床铺,休息时间大声拨打电话,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品,离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
描述规则的可用句型:
Don’t …./Do…./No + doing…
You should/ shouldn’t do…
You are supposed to do…
4. You had better do…
5. You should not be allowed to do…
假如你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory) 规定,如不整理床铺,休息时间大声拨打电话,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品,离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
常用连接词
therefore(因此), what’s more, thus, so, as…
first, second, third, at last…
参考词组
love and respect each other
obey/follow/stick to the rules
without permission未经允许
Dear Wang Ming,
I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.
As we live in the same room, we are like families. So we should love and respect each other. What’s more, we are supposed to make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Firstly, when you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Secondly, don’t make phone calls when we are sleeping. In addition, you should not be allowed to use others’ things without permission. Last but not least, you had better turn off the lights before you leave the room.
All in all, I hope all of us can stick to these rules and try to make our room more and more comfortable.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
范文赏析
Thank you !
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