内容正文:
自然灾害的描述
(作文讲评)
与自然灾害相关的名词、名词词组
disaster
How many kinds ?
consequences
地震
洪水
旱灾
火山喷发
海啸
飓风
台风
龙卷风
泥石流
滑坡
森林大火
雷暴
暴风雪
沙尘暴
earthquake
flood
drought
volcano eruption
tsunami
hurricane
typhoon
tornado
mudslide
landslide
forest fire
thunderstorm
snowstorm
sandstorm
停电
停水
破坏,损害
毁坏
紧急情况
废墟
处于危险中
震惊中
受灾地区
Aid
power cut
water shortage
damage
destroy
emergency
ruins
in danger
in shock
stricken area/disaster area
Supplies 供给品
救济帐篷 tents /shelters
与自然灾害相关的动词、动词词组
1 描述灾害发生的时候
发生,爆发
喷发
惊慌
藏起来
逃跑
被困在
倒塌
幸存下来
遭受...
造成巨大损失
break out /strike /hit
erupt
panic
hide
escape from
get trapped /be buried in
fall down
survive
suffer
cause great damage
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2 救援
救援 come to rescue
搭建庇护所 set up shelters
挖出 dig out
捐赠 donate
提供某人某物 provide sth.for sb.
从灾难中恢复 recover from the disaster
送水和食物…… deliver water and food to...
重建家园 rebuild the home
与自然灾害相关的动词、动词词组
2.描述自然灾害用到的形容词
可怕的
凶猛的
破坏性强的
不期而至的
数不清的
失踪的
担心的
受伤的
失去意识的
terrible/ terrifying
violent/powerful/fierce
destructive
unexpected
countless/numerous
missing
be concerned about/be anxious about/be worried about
injured/hurt
unconscious
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Para.1: Lead(导语)——言简意赅
8月8日, 一场强烈的台风(名为Typhoon Morakot)袭击了台湾南部;
带来了50年来最严重的水灾;
产生了巨大的损失。
On August 8th, a violent typhoon called Morakot struck/hit the south of Taiwan(southern Taiwan), which led to the most serious flood in the past 50 years, as a result/in consequence, causing great damage to the area.
用不同的细节描述灾害带来的影响。
伤亡情况:
Para.2: Body(正文)——Present more details
据悉,在这次水灾中,460人死亡,35人受伤,62人失踪。
It was learned that 460 people were found dead, 35 got injured and 62 were/went missing in the floods.
伤亡情况;公共设施情况
Para.2: Body(正文)——Present more details
用不同的细节描述灾害带来的影响。
基本情况:(翻译)这次水灾来势凶猛,淹没了快半个城市。
The flood was so fierce/powerful that it almost submerged half of the city.
1.巨浪冲走了车、房子,10000多座房屋倒塌,很多人无家可归。
Cars and homes were swept away by huge waves. More than 10000 houses fell down/collapsed, making many people homeless.(被动语态,make现在分词作结果状语)
2.不仅如此,强大的海水还冲垮了桥梁和堤防,使得交通瘫痪。(leave现在分词作状语)
Even worse, the powerful seawater washed away levees and bridges, leaving the traffic brought down.
Para.2: Body(正文)——Present more details
3.受洪水影响,电力中断,居民无法正常生活。
①Affected by the floods, people were unable to live a normal life as usual due to power cuts.
②Affected by the floods, people cannot manage to lead a normal life as usual since the power/electricity was cut off.
4.据估计,造成的经济损失达97个亿。
It is estimated that the economic losses caused by the floods amounted to 9.7 billion.
Para.2: Body(正文)——Present more details
It was learned that 460 people were found dead, 35 got injured and 62 were/went missing in the floods. The flood was so fierce/powerful that it almost submerged half of the city. Cars and homes were swept away by huge waves. More than 10000 houses fell down/collapsed. Even worse, the powerful seawater washed away levees and bridges, leaving the traffic brought down. Affected by the floods, people cannot manage to lead a normal life as usual since the power/electricity was cut off. It was estimated that the economic losses caused by the disaster amounted to 9.7 billion.
Para.3: Rescue work+wish
Rescue work:
一听到台湾被洪水袭击,政府迅速指派军队赶往灾区。
On hearing the news that the terrible floods hit southern Taiwan, the government immediately sent/appointed the army to make their way to the disaster area.
The officials said that the army made every effort to get involved in the rescue work. Much to our delight, nearly 300 natives/ local citizens were rescued from the floods.
政府官员说台湾军方全力参与救灾工作,从灾区救出约300名当地居民
Para.3: Rescue work+wish
Wish:
With the strong support from the government and tireless efforts of the city’s people, Taiwan will surely get back up on its feet in the near future.
Para.3: Rescue work+wish
On hearing the news that the terrible floods hit southern Taiwan, the government immediately sent/appointed the army to make their way to the disaster area. The officials said that the army made every effort to get involved in the rescue work. Much to our delight, nearly 300 natives/local citizens were rescued from the floods. With the strong support from the government and tireless efforts of the city’s people, Taiwan will surely get back up on its feet in the near future.
汶川地震是自唐山地震后最可怕的灾难之一。
许多房屋建筑被毁,成千上万的人失去家园。
幸好,政府采取了紧急措施:许多士兵派去受灾地区及时救援被困人员。
大批食物,水,帐篷,药物等运送往受灾地区。
志愿者们纷纷伸出援助之手。
Practice:
1.许多房屋和楼房被毁,多达10,000,000 人无家可归。(leave现在分词作结果状语)
2. 出现山体滑坡,道路被堵同时水电通讯中断。(with的复合结构)
A great number of houses and buildings were destroyed, leaving as many as 10000000 people homeless.
There were landslides, with roads blocked as well as water supply, electricity and telecommunication cut off.
3.使69,197人死亡,374,176人受伤,18,340人失踪(leave+宾语+宾补)
4.许多士兵被派往那里营救人们,大量的志愿者提供帮助.
5. 大批的食物、水、帐篷和药从全中国和世界的其他地方运到地震灾区。
It left 69,197 dead, 374,176 injured, and 18,340 missing.
A great many soldiers were sent there to rescue the people from danger, and lots of volunteers offered help.
Large quantities of food, water, tents and medicine were transported from all over China and other parts of the world to the earthquake-stricken area.
抗震减灾的建议:
公众很有必要掌握应急自救措施
加强科学研究,力求准确预报地震
It is of great significance for the public to learn about some first aid in emergencies.
Scientific research should be strengthened to give precise forecasts of possible earthquakes.
1.避免无秩序地蜂拥而出
2. 躲在结实的家具下边
3. 用手臂或包护着头和颈
4. 注意避开吊灯、电扇等悬挂物
mustn’t rush out without order
hide yourself under some hard furniture
protect your head and neck by your arms or bag
avoid things that hang above your head, like ceiling lamps, fans and so on.
5.跑动寻找庇护处时,用一些较硬的东西保护脑袋
6. 杜绝明火,关煤气和电源
7. 不要使用电梯
8.在户外时跑到远离树木、建筑、广告牌、电线等的开阔之处。
when you run for safe shelters , don’t forget to cover your head with something hard.
put out fire and turn off the gas and electricity
stop using the lift
Once you are outdoors, try to get into an open area away from trees, buildings, signs and power lines.
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