内容正文:
写作培优册
主题4 身心健康、安全与救护
(如何健康生活;如何处理孤独、烦恼;如何保持安全;急救)
【教材模块/单元链接】
外研版 人教版 译林牛津版
七(上)M4健康饮食
八(下)M4卫生&健康
八(上)M8事故
八(上)M12安全&急救
九(下)M4安全规则&建议
九(下)M5急救&锻炼
七(上)U6食物
八(下)U1健康与急救
七(上)U6健康的生活方式
一阶
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素材积累
短语与搭配
1.lookafter/takecareof照顾
2.takeabreak休息
3.keepsb.ingoodhealth使某人保持身体健康
4.begoodfor对……有好处
5.keepabalanceddiet保持均衡饮食
6.domoreexercise多做锻炼
7.physicalandmentalhealth身心健康
8.indanger处于危险中
9.saveoneslife挽救某人的生命
10.obeythetraficrules遵守交规
11.stayawayfrom远离……
12.keepcalm保持冷静
13.asksb.forhelp向某人求助
14.becarefulof小心……
开头句
1.Herearefiverulesforahealthylife.
[外研九(下)M5]
2.Nowadays,peoplepaymuchmoreatentionto
health.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetolearn
somewaystokeephealthy.
3.Inordertomakeusgrowupsafely,ourschool
hasmademanysafetyrulesforustofolow.
中间句
身体健康
1.Itisimportanttoremember:eatwel,stay
healthy,anddontgetfat! [外研七(上)M4]
2.Ifyouwanttobehealthy,youshouldhavea
healthyeatinghabit. [外研七(上)M4]
3.Itisagoodideaforustodoexerciseevery
day.Thereisnodoubtthatregularexercisecan
giveusstrongbodies. [人教八(下)U1]
4.Itisnecessaryforustohaveenoughsleep.We
shouldgotobedandgetupearlytosleepforat
leasteighthourseveryday. [人教八(下)U1]
5.Iseldomeatcakesorsweets.Theyhavetoo
muchsugarandarebadformyteeth.
[译林牛津七(上)U6]
心理健康
1.Weshouldlearntodealwithstressbylistening
torelaxingmusicorwatchinginterestingmovies.
[人教八(下)U1]
2.Whenwearesad,itisagoodchoicetotelour
problemstoourparentsandteacherstoaskfor
help. [人教八(下)U1]
3.Itsgoodtorelaxbywatchinggameshowsor
surfingtheInternet,butIthinkthebestwayis
throughexercise.
安全
1.Beespecialycarefulwiththedoor.Shutit
whenyoureinandlockitwhenyougoout.
[外研九(上)M4]
2.Whenyoureonyourbike,thinkabouttheriskof
anaccident!Payatention,stopattheredlights
anddontridetoofast. [外研八(上)M8
]
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众相原创 赋能中考 广西英语
3.Dontpusheachother,especialywhenwego
upstairsordownstairs.
结尾句
1.Inshort,folowwhatyoulearntinschool.You
canbesafeandyoucanalsohelpsaveothers.
[外研八(上)M12]
2.Thesearesomegoodwaystokeephealthy.
Everyoneshouldtryhisbesttocareabout
personalhealthforabeterlife.
俗语/谚语
1.Earlytobed,earlytorise.早睡早起。
2.Healthisthefirstwealth.健康是第一财富。
3.Hewhohashealthhashope.拥有健康就拥有
希望。
4.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹
果,医生远离我。
5.Alightheartliveslong.豁达者长寿。
高分模板
Asisknowntousal,itisveryimportantfor
ustokeephealthy/safe.Thenhowcanwekeep
healthy/safe?Youcantrythefolowingtips.
First, (方法1). (与方
法1相关的内容).Second, (方法2).
(与方法2相关的内容).Third,
(方法3). (与方法3相关的内容).At
last/Lastbutnotleast, (方法 4).
(与方法4相关的内容).
Ifyoudothesethings,Ibelieveyoucanbea
healthyperson/liveasafelife.
句型训练
1.Weshouldprotectourselvesandvalueourlives.
(用tryonesbesttodosth.升格句子)
2.Eatingsomefruiteverydayisnecessary.(用Itis
+adj.+forsb.todosth.升格句子)
3.Ithinkitisagoodwaytotalkwithourfriends.
(扩写句子,补充说明和朋友聊天的好处)
4.毫无疑问,心理健康和身体健康一样重要。
(汉译英)
5.如果你多做运动,你会很健康。(汉译英)
二阶
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安全对我们每个人都很重要。为进一步增
强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,你校
将展开以“Safetyrulesatschool”为题的演讲比
赛。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍
你们在学校应该注意的安全准则。
内容包括:
1.你的看法(安全第一……)
2.你认为在学校应该注意的安全准则(不要在教
室打闹、上下楼梯时不要拥挤……)
3.你的感受和希望。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:crowd(v.拥挤),goupstairsordownstairs
(上下楼),step(n.台阶),value(v.珍视)
Safetyrulesatschool
Helo,everyone!Itsimportantforustokeep
safeatschool.
Thatsal.Thankyou.
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写作培优册
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
1.文体:本文要求介绍自己对安全的看法及应该
注意的安全准则,是一篇 ;
2.时态:介绍自己对安全的看法及应该注意的安
全准则,用 ;
3.人称:介绍自己对安全的看法,用第 人
称;介绍应该注意的安全准则,可以用第
人称,也可以用第 人称。
二、构思框架,列出要点
构思框架
列出要点
1. 在我看来
2. 安全第一。
3. 遵守这些安全规则
4. 相互追逐
5. 跌落
6. 受伤
7. 打电话报警求助
8. 保持安全
三、遣词造句,连句成文
Safetyrulesatschool
Helo,everyone!Itsimportantforustokeep
safeatschool.Inmyopinion,safetycomesfirst,
becausewithoutsafety,wehavenothing.Inorder
tokeepsafe,wemustfolowtheserulesatschool.
Firstofal,dontfightorrunaftereachother
betweenlessonsintheclassroom,orwemayhurt
ourselves.Besides, dontcrowd when we go
upstairsordownstairs,orwemayfalofstepsand
gethurt.Whatsmore,dontthrowrubbishoutof
thewindowsoftalbuildings.Itsverydangerous.
Lastbutnotleast,ifweareindanger,wemust
telourteachersorcalthepoliceforhelpintime
sothatwecankeepourselvessafe.
Lifeisimportant,andweshouldvalueit.I
hopeeveryonecanfolowtheserulesandkeepsafe
atschool!
Thatsal.Thankyou
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三阶
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(2024河池二模)为落实《“健康中国2030”
规划纲要》,教育部印发了《生命安全与健康教育
进中小学课程教材指南》的通知。通知中提出了
坚持“生命至上,健康第一”的理念。现在学校英
文网站开展征文活动,请你以“Howtokeep
healthy”为题,用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.多做运动有益身心健康;
2.养成健康的饮食习惯;
3.睡眠充足和注意休息;
4.积极乐观和保持愉快。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:optimistic(adj.乐观的),positive(adj.
积极的)
Howtokeephealthy
Itsimportanttokeephealthy.Butwhatshould
wedotokeephealthy?
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广西英语(RJ)
二阶 主题典例探究
一、1.说明文 2.一般现在时 3.一;一
二、1.Iwouldliketosharesomewaysonimproving/howto
improveEnglishlisteningandspeakingskilswithyou.
2.tostartwith/firstofal 3.whatsmore 4.lastbut
notleast 5.watchEnglishmovies 6.listentoEnglish
songs 7.takepartin 8.thebestwaytodosth. 9.I
hopethesewaysarehelpful.
三阶 写作实战训练
Howtodevelopgoodlearninghabits
Asweknow,itsveryimportantformiddleschool
studentstohavegoodlearninghabits.Buthowtodevelop
goodlearninghabits?
Atfirst,weshouldprepareforthenewlessons.Forex
ample,wecanreadthetext,findandlearnthenewwords,
andpreparethetoolswewiluseinclass.Then,listening
carefulyandtakingnotesaregoodlearninghabits,too.We
canwritethekeywordsorkeypointsonthenotebooks.Af
terclass,wearesupposedtofinishourhomeworkcarefuly.
Itisasimportantasanewlessonbecauseitcanhelpususe
thethingswehavelearnedinclassbeter.Besides,we
shoulddomorereadingafterclass.Thatcangiveusmore
knowledgethatwecantgaininclass.
Ihopewealcandevelopgoodlearninghabitsanden
joyourschoollife.
主题4 身心健康、安全与救护
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueour
lives.
2.Itsnecessaryforustoeatsomefruiteveryday.
3.Ithinkitisagoodwaytotalkwithourfriendsandwecan
shareourhappinessandsadnesswiththem.
4.Thereisnodoubtthatmentalhealthisasimportantas
physicalhealth.
5.Ifyoudomoreexercise,youwilbeingoodhealth.
二阶 主题典例探究
一、1.说明文 2.一般现在时 3.一;一
二、1.inmyopinion 2.Safetycomesfirst.
3.folowthesesafetyrules 4.runaftereachother
5.falof 6.gethurt 7.calthepoliceforhelp
8.keepsafe
三阶 写作实战训练
Howtokeephealthy
Itsimportanttokeephealthy.Butwhatshouldwedo
tokeephealthy?Herearemysuggestions.
First,doingexerciseisgoodforkeepinghealthyphysi
calyandmentaly.Wecandomoreexerciseafterclass,
suchasrunningandplayingbasketbal.Secondly,remem
bertoeathealthyfood.Weshouldeatmorefreshvegetables
andfruits.Weshouldavoideatingjunkfood.Third,weare
supposedtohaveenoughsleepandlearntohavearest.
Dontstayupbecauseitsbadforourhealth.Finaly,we
shouldbeoptimisticandpositive.Weshouldgetonwel
withotherpeopleandkeephappy.
Ifwetrytofolowthesesuggestions,welkeepour
selveshealthy.
主题5 自我认识,自我管理,自我提升
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Iknowthatshecaresaboutmebecauseshesalwaysthere
tolisten.
2.Readingbooksandnewspapersismyfavoritehobbywhich
hasbecomeanecessarypartofmylife.
二阶 主题典例探究
一、1.说明文 2.一般现在时;一般将来时 3.一
二、1.dowelin 2.manageoneself 3.havehealthyliving
habits 4.getupearly 5.keeprunningeveryday
6.havedificulty(in)doingsth. 7.makeaclearplan
forsth. 8.asksb.foradvice 9.readbooks
10.keeplearning
三阶 写作实战训练
DearSam,
Thanksforyouremail.Imverygladtotelyousome
thingaboutmydreamjob.
IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,
becauseIenjoystayingwithchildren.Besides,Iwanttobe
ateacherbecauseofthepowerofanexample—MissLi,my
Englishteacher.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish,and
sheinfluencesmealot.IusedtobeweakinEnglishandit
mademesad.Shecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegood
waystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,Imadegreat
progressinEnglish.Ihavemadeupmymindtobeagood
teacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.
AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobeateacher,Iwil
makeeveryeforttorealizemydream.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
主题6 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Runningisagoodwaytoreduceourpressure.
2.Wecanshowourcaretoourparentsbycookingamealfor
them.
3.WhenIamtired,Iprefertolistentothemusicthatcan
makemerelaxed.
4.Asteenagersinnewtimes,itsourdutytointroduce
Chineseculturetotheworld.
5.Ourschoolwilsetupsomenewcoursestohelpstudents
learnsomebasiclifeskils.
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