内容正文:
写作培优册
主题2 多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
(2024广西;2023广西;2021北部湾经济区)
(学生在学校的学习与生活;校园环境与基础设施;校园活动;新生建议;规章制度)
【教材模块/单元链接】
外研版 人教版 译林牛津版
七(上)M3我的学校
七(上)M5上学的一天
七(下)M1失物招领
九(上)M11照片:学校生活
九(下)M2教育:学校生活
九(下)M8学校生活&朋友
七(上)U3教室里的物品
七(下)U1加入社团、俱乐部
七(下)U4规章制度
七(下)U11校园旅行
九(全)U14学校生活
七(上)U3学校开放日
七(上)U4我在学校的一天
八(上)U2学校生活
一阶
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素材积累
短语与搭配
1.graduatefrom从……毕业
2.cometoanend即将结束
3.pass/failtheexam通过考试/未通过考试
4.setupsomeclubs成立一些俱乐部
5.jointhebasketbalclub加入篮球俱乐部
6.takeanactivepartin积极参加
7.diferentkindsofactivities不同种类的活动
8.haveagoodefecton对……有良好的影响
9.makefuluseof充分利用
10.makeprogress取得进步
11.geton/alongwelwithsb.和某人相处得好
开头句
1.Imsurethatyoualhaveyourownmemories
aboutthehappinessofthelastthreeyears.
[外研九(下)M8]
2.Howtimeflies!Imgraduatingfromourschool.
中间句
学校日常生活
1.Ourlessonsbeginateightoclock.Usualywe
havethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointhe
afternoon.MyfavouritesubjectisEnglish.
2.Twiceaweek,Iplaybasebalafterschool.Ilove
thisgameandpracticehardeverytime.Ourteam
wontwogameslastmonth.
社团活动、校园旅行
1.Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolorful,
alkindsofclubshavebeensetup.Asforme,
IdliketosetupanEnglishClub.Intheclub,
youcanspeaktoforeignersandtalkaboutgood
waysoflearningEnglish.
2.SometimesmyfriendsandIgotothelibraryin
theafternoon.WehaveaReadingClub.
3.TodayIwentonaschooltrip.Wevisitedthe
sciencemuseumanditwasrealyinteresting.
[人教七(下)U11]
校园环境与基础设施
1.Betweenthisbuildingandthedininghalisthe
classroombuildingwithtwentyfourclassrooms.
[外研七(上)M3]
2.Myschoollooksbeautiful.Theplaygroundisso
big.Theclassroomsarecleanandbright.
3.Thereisabigplaygroundinourschool.The
placeIlikemostinmyschoolistheplayground
whereIcandoexerciseandplayhappilywithmy
classmates.
对新生提出关于校园生活的建议
1.Youdbetertakeanactivepartindiferent
kindsofactivitiestomakeyourschoollifemore
colorful.
2.First,asstudents,itsimportantforyouto
studyhardatschool.Youmustlistentothe
teacherscarefulyinclassanddoyourhomework
carefulyafterschool.Second,itsalsoimportant
tokeephealthy.Tokeephealthy,youcan
exerciseoftenandeatregularly.
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众相原创 赋能中考 广西英语
学校规章制度
Youmustfolowtherulesbothinandoutof
school.Forexample,studentsshouldwearthe
schooluniformsatschool.Andstudentsarenot
alowedtobringmobilephonestotheschool.
Folowingtherulesatschoolcanmakeyou
behavewel.
结尾句
1.Aslongasyoufolowtheadviceabove,Ibelieve
youwilhaveacolorfulschoollife.
2.Ifyoumakefuluseofyourfreetime,youwil
haveawonderfulschoollifeandyouwillearn
alot.
高分模板
Howtimeflies!Mythreeyearmiddleschool
lifeiscomingtoanend.Lookingbackonthethree
years,Ifeel (感受类形容词).
Mostofmyhappinessisbroughtbymy
teachersandclassmatesinmyschool.Theteachers
arevery (评价类形容词).Theynotonly
(老师做的事情1)butalso
(老师做的事情 2).Myclassmatesarevery
(评价类形容词).Wealways
(和同学们做的事情1)and (和同学们
做的事情 2)together.Whatsmore,ourschool
organizeddiferentkindsofactivitiesforus,suchas
(活动1)and (活动2).They
makeourschoollife (评价类形容词).
Algoodthingscometoanend,butIamsure
(希望).
句型训练
1.Ilikesciencebest.(用of短语表明范围来升格
句子)
2.Wesetupmanyclubs.(用suchas举例俱乐部
的种类)
3.IpreferEnglishclubs.(用定语从句扩写具体
特点)
4.Studentsshoulddevelopgoodlearninghabits.Its
important.(用Itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.升
格句子)
5.Ilikethelibrarymostinmyschool.Icanborow
books.(用theplaceIlikemostis爥 where爥 连
接句子)
二阶
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(2024广西)假定你是李华,你的外籍朋友
Sam知道你将参加你校举办的课本剧比赛
(textbookplaycompetition),他对此很感兴趣。请
你用英语写一封邮件,告知他相关的情况。内容
包括:
1.比赛信息(时间、地点……);
2.你的准备计划(阅读课文、参加讨论……);
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:prepare(v.准备),text(n.课文),
discuss(v.讨论),performance(n.表演)
DearSam,
Howisitgoing?Imgladtotelyousomething
aboutthecomingtextbookplaycompetitioninour
school.
Yours,
LiHua
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
1.文体:本文要求给外籍朋友写一封邮件,是一
篇 ;
2.时态:介绍课本剧比赛信息用 ,介
绍自己的准备计划,以 为主;
3.人称:介绍课本剧比赛信息用第 人
称,介绍自己的准备计划,用第 人称
。
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二、构思框架,列出要点
构思框架
列出要点
1. 为了使我们的学校生
活更加丰富多彩
2. 举办课本剧比赛
3. 在下午4点举行
4. 为……做准备
5. 这是我的计划。
6. 仔细阅读文本
7. 理解我的角色
8. 与……讨论……
9. 努力练习表演技巧
10. 希望做某事
11. 献上精彩的表演
12. 赢得一个奖项
13. 享受这次比赛
三、遣词造句,连句成文
DearSam,
Howisitgoing?Imgladtotelyousomething
aboutthecomingtextbookplaycompetitioninour
school.
Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolourful,
ourschoolwilholdthetextbookplaycompetition.It
wilbeheldat4:00p.m.nextFridayintheschool
hal.Everyoneispreparingforit.Herearemy
plans.
Firstly,Iamgoingtoreadthetextcarefuly
andtrytounderstandmyrole.Secondly,Iplanto
discusshowtogetonwelwithmyclassmates.
Besides,Iwilpracticetheactingskilshard
togetherwiththem.
Inaword,wewilworkasagreatteam.I
hopethatwelgiveawonderfulperformanceand
winaprizeinthetextbookplaycompetition.
Yours,
LiHua
三阶
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丰富多彩的课外活动让我们的校园生活更
加充实,促进我们成长。你校校刊的英语专栏正
以“Colorfulactivitiesatschool”为题进行征稿,请
你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你在学校经常做的事情(打篮球、写作业);
2.你经常做这些事情的原因 (保持健康、交朋友
等);
3.你的收获。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:outdoor(adj.户外的),playbasketbal
(打篮球)
Colorfulactivitiesatschool
Therearelotsofafterschoolactivitiesinmy
school.Now,letmeintroducesomeofmyown
activities.
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众相原创 赋能中考
Passage3
1.rule改为rules 2.a改为the
3.tels改为told 4.understood改为understand
5.old改为older 6.anything改为something
7.polite改为politely 8.eight改为eighth
9.what改为how 10.It改为
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题1 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Thesummervacationiscoming.Iplantotakeupsome
newhobbies,suchastakingphotosandplayingthegui
tar.
2.Therearemanyworksofartinthemuseumwhichwewil
visittomorow.
3.Travelingcannotonlyopenupourmindbutalsogiveus
achancetodevelopbasiclifeskils.
4.IvisitedmanyplacesofinterestduringthetriptoXian.
5.Lastweekendwehadapicnicintheparkandweenjoyed
ourselves.
二阶 主题典例探究
一、1.说明文 2.一般将来时;一般现在时 3.一
二、1.inmyopinion 2.Itsagoodtimeforsb.todosth.
3.takeabreak/havearest 4.relaxoneself 5.planto
dosth. 6.spendtimewithsb. 7.learnbasiclife
skils 8.sharehousework 9.readbooks 10.takea
tripto 11.becomemoreindependent 12.learnnew
things 13.feelthehappinessoflife 14.lookforward
todoingsth. 15.Ihope爥/Itsmyhopethat爥 16.I
amsurethat爥
三阶 写作实战训练
Goodhabitsforabeterme
Aswealknow,goodhabitsarethekeytosuccess.
Goodhabitsmakeusbeterpeople.Duringmythreeyears
injuniorhighschool,Ivedevelopedmanygoodhabits.
First,Ihavedevelopedahabitofsetinggoalsand
planningmytime.Thishelpsmedowelinschoolandhave
timeforfun.Second,asthesayinggoes,“Healthcomes
first.”SoIusualydosomesportsafterschool.Ialways
playbasketbalwithmyfriends,whichisgoodformyhealth
andmakesmerelaxed.Third,Itrytobeontimeforevery
thinginmydailylife.Thisshowsrespectandhelpsmere
membermyduties.
Goodhabitshavehelpedmeinmanyways.Theymake
mehealthierandhappier.Ithinkeveryoneshouldhavegood
habits.
主题2 多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Ofalthesubjects,Ilikesciencebest.
2.Wesetupmanyclubs,suchastheEnglishClub,the
ChessClubandtheArtClub.
3.IpreferEnglishclubswhichcanprovidemewithchances
totalkwithothersinEnglish.
4.Itisveryimportantforstudentstodevelopgoodlearning
habits.
5.TheplaceIlikemostinmyschoolisthelibrarywhereI
canborowbooks.
二阶 主题典例探究
一、1.应用文 2.一般现在时;一般将来时 3.三;一
二、1.inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolo(u)rful
2.holdthetextbookplaycompetition 3.beheldat
4:00p.m. 4.preparefor 5.Herearemyplans.
6.readthetextcarefuly 7.understandmyrole
8.discuss爥with爥 9.practicetheactingskilshard
10.hope/wishtodosth. 11.giveawonderfulperfor
mance 12.winaprize 13.enjoythecompetition
三阶 写作实战训练
Colorfulactivitiesatschool
Therearelotsofafterschoolactivitiesinmyschool.
Now,letmeintroducesomeofmyownactivities.
Firstofal,afterschool,Iusualyspendhalfanhour
playingbasketbalontheplayground.ThereasonwhyIlike
playingbasketbalisthatitcanmakemekeephealthy.
ThenIfinishmyhomeworkatschool.SoIcanmakethe
mostofmytimeandIdonthavetodomyhomeworkafterI
gohome.Finaly,Itakedrawingclasses,becauseIlike
drawingthingsonpaperbest.Ithinkitcanhelpmebemore
creative.
Throughtheseactivities,Icannotonlyrelaxmyselfbut
alsolearnmanyskils,andmyschoollifebecomesmoreand
morecolorful.
主题3 积极的学习体验,恰当的
学习方法,勤学善思
一阶 素材积累与训练
1.Thebestwaytoimproveyourreadingabilityistoread
more.
2.Themorewordsyouremember,thebeteryourEnglishis.
3.ThereasonwhymygradeshaveimprovedisthatIread
theEnglishtextbookeveryday.
4.Tolearnaforeignlanguagewel,wemustformagood
habitofreading.
5.Cathyalwaysmakesgooduseofhertimetostudy,even
duringherlunchbreak.
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