2025届高考英语读后续写专题之遇险类：雪地救马 讲义

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整 短文。 Ben raced out of school. Christmas holidays! When he got home, he went to check on his pony(小马), Scout. He slipped him a candy, and Scout rubbed Ben's shoulder with his nose. Ben started toward the house and found his older brother Jack starting the snow mobile to deliver gas to Uncle Mike. Ben jumped on the back and joined him. They set off slowly. The snow was fresh and deep on the remote mountain path. When they arrived, Jack went over with the gas can.! Ben looked up the mountain and saw something moving, he got binoculars(望远镜)and saw two animals. “Could they be two horses" Ben murmured. Jack climbed back on the snowmobile and asked Ben to leave. When Ben told Jack he saw horses up in the snowy tree, he didn't believe it: Ben looked back up the mountain, but he couldn't see anything. At dinner, Ben told his father he saw two horses up on the mountain today. "If they are horses, they must be trapped by all this snow," said his dad, “if they're trapped, we have to do something," said Ben, his voice rising. His dad looked at Jack. "Well, in the morning go and take a look. Take some hay (干草). If they look as if they can survive, give them the hay. If not…" Jack looked serious, and slowly nodded, In the morning, Ben and Jack set off in the cold snow. When they got to the place where Ben had seen the horses, they stopped and looked up using binoculars. No horses. They waited for a few minutes. “I see them. They're horses. Let's take the snowmobile up there " Ben suddenly cried. They drove the snowmobile in the deep snow and finally reached the place. “Oh no!” said Ben, “They're starving!” One of the horses had lost a lot of hair, and their tails were almost gone. Their eyes were lifeless and tired. Paragraph1: Jack walked around the horses. Paragraph 2: The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 文章大意 圣诞节假期，Ben 从学校跑回家看望他的小马 Scout。之后他和哥哥 Jack 开雪地摩托给 Uncle Mike 送汽油。在途中，Ben 用望远镜看到山上有两个疑似马的动物，Jack 不太相信。回家后 Ben 告诉父亲此事，父亲让 Jack 第二天带 Ben 去查看并带上干草。第二天他们到达 Ben 看到马的地方，一开始没发现，后来看到了，发现马的状况非常糟糕，饿到不行，一匹马掉了很多毛，尾巴也快没了，眼神毫无生气。 五要素分析 · 人物：Ben、Jack 和他们的父亲，以及可能参与救助的邻居们。 · 环境：偏远的山区，有厚厚的积雪，山路难行。 · 情节：从发现疑似马的身影，到确认马被困且状态极差，准备展开救助。 · 冲突：马被困雪中面临饿死的危险，需要人们的救助。 · 主题：对动物的关爱和救助，展现人性的善良。 伏笔与回应 · 伏笔：Ben 看到山上有东西，怀疑是马，为后续寻找和救助马埋下伏笔。父亲让兄弟俩带干草查看，暗示可能需要对马进行救助。 · 回应：兄弟俩第二天真的找到了马，且马的糟糕状况让他们开始实施救助，回应了之前的伏笔。 续写要点 · 第一段续写要点 1. 情感线：紧张、担忧，Jack 在查看马的过程中，对马的状况深感忧虑，同时也有一种要救助它们的使命感。 1. 故事线：详细描述 Jack 检查马的情况，包括身体状况、可能存在的伤病等，同时表现出马对干草的反应，进一步凸显它们的饥饿。 · 第二段续写要点 2. 情感线：急切、积极，兄弟俩为了救马四处寻求帮助，展现出他们的善良和坚持。 2. 故事线：讲述兄弟俩挨家挨户寻求邻居帮助的过程，以及邻居们的反应，大家纷纷响应，准备一起救助马。 主旨升华句（英文） 1. Compassion for animals is a noble virtue that reflects the best of humanity. 2. In the face of the suffering of the weak, our act of kindness can be a warm fire in the cold snow. 3. Saving the trapped horses is not only an action but also a song of love between humans and animals. 4. When we reach out to help the needy animals, we are building a bridge of hope across the species. 5. The rescue of these horses shows that every life is precious and worthy of our protection. 写作示范1 续写第一段 Jack walked around the horses. He noted the sores on their hooves and the dullness in their eyes. It was clear they hadn't eaten properly in days. As he stroked their manes gently, he whispered soothing words, trying to calm them. The horses nuzzled against him weakly, as if pleading for help. Jack knew they had to act fast. He took out his phone to take some pictures, thinking they might be useful for getting more help later. 续写第二段 The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help. Their voices were filled with urgency as they told the neighbors about the horses' plight. Doors opened one after another, and people's hearts were touched. Some fetched ropes, others brought medical supplies they had at home. A group of children even offered their pocket money to buy more food for the horses. Together, they formed a rescue team and rushed back to the mountain with determination in their eyes. 写作示范2 续写第一段 Jack walked around the horses. His heart sank at the sight of their emaciated bodies. The snow around them was stained with their struggle. He crouched down to check their legs, making sure there were no broken bones. The horses' ribs were protruding sharply under their thin skin. Jack quickly opened the bale of hay they'd brought and spread it out, watching intently as the poor creatures devoured it, their desperation evident. 续写第二段 The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help. Their voices rang out in the cold air, filled with hope and a sense of duty. The neighbors listened intently, their faces showing concern. Soon, a procession of people carrying shovels, blankets, and more hay made their way up the mountain. Everyone worked in unison, clearing the snow around the horses and providing them with the care they so desperately needed. 参考答案 续写第一段 Jack walked around the horses. He carefully inspected their muzzles, seeing how chapped and dry they were from the cold. Their coats were matted with snow and ice. As he moved closer, one of the horses let out a weak whinny, as if recognizing that help had finally arrived. Jack took off his gloves and felt their bellies, concerned about any internal issues due to malnutrition. He signaled to Ben to bring more hay while he tried to make the horses as comfortable as possible. 续写第二段 The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help. Their knocks echoed through the small mountain community. Each household joined without hesitation. An old farmer brought his horse trailer, planning to transport the weak horses to a warmer place. Women prepared warm mash for them. The children carried small buckets of water. United by a common goal, they all set off to rescue the horses from the icy grip of the mountain. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$