2025届高考英语读后续写专题之遇险类---希望之树：海啸中的守护 讲义

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Twelve-year-old Colin loved going to his grandfather's house in Puthur, a small village in Tamil Nadu. The house was near the pretty blue sea and had tall coconut palms(椰树) with green coconuts hanging from them. When the coconuts fell, the kids would break them open and drink the coconut water, Colin really enjoyed being there. He liked to play with the rabbits running around the trees. He would go fishing with his friends. It was always great fun to spend the holidays at Grandpa’s place. During his winter break, Colin was surprised when he arrived at his grandfather's village. There were hardly any trees left.“Grandpa, where did all the trees go?” Colin asked.“People cut them down for wood,to use as fuel and make furniture," Grandpa replied. Grandpa's house was different. He never let anyone cut down his trees. He loved and hugged each palm tree in his yard. He also named two big trees near the front door Strength and Hope. He had planted them himself, and now they had grown tall and strong. One night, Colin woke up because he heard a strange sound. He quickly ran to his grandfather. Grandpa shouted, “It's an earthquake!They ran outside the house and saw the sea rising. People were shouting screaming, and crying.The waves kept getting higher. Huge waves crashed into Grandpa’s house. They covered Colin and Grandpa and then went back into the sea, taking everything in their way. Grandpa held Colin's hand tightly, but another big wave came and separated them. Grandpa fought the waves and held onto Strength. He called out to Colin but couldn't see him. Grandpa climbed up the coconut tree and held on tight while the sea was all around. “Colin, Colin!” Grandpa cried,“Don't be scared. Come to me quickly,” “Oh Grandpa, I can't reach you!” 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 A wave carried Colin around, and to his surprise, he found himself next to the familiar tree, Hope. ____________________________________________________________________________ From that day on, Colin and his grandfather valued Strength and Hope more. ____________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 12 岁的科林喜欢去爷爷在普图尔的家，那里有海和椰子树，他在那里度过愉快假期。寒假回去时他发现树少了很多，因为人们砍树当燃料和做家具，而爷爷从不砍自家的树，还给两棵大树取名 “力量” 和 “希望”。一天晚上发生地震引发海啸，巨浪冲向房子，科林和爷爷被海浪冲散，爷爷抱住 “力量”，科林后来被海浪带到了 “希望” 树旁。 五要素分析 · 人物：科林和爷爷。 · 环境：泰米尔纳德邦普图尔的海边小村庄，有椰子树等，后遭遇地震海啸灾难。 · 情节：从愉快度假到发现树被砍，再到遭遇灾难与爷爷失散又重寻希望。 · 冲突：人与自然灾害的冲突，人类砍树行为对环境的破坏潜在影响。 · 主题：对自然的保护以及在灾难中希望与亲情的力量。 伏笔与回应 · 伏笔：爷爷给两棵树取名 “力量” 和 “希望”，并对树的热爱与保护。 · 回应：在海啸灾难中，爷爷抱住 “力量”，科林被冲到 “希望” 树旁，这两棵树成为他们在灾难中的救命稻草，体现了树名字的象征意义。 续写要点 · 第一段续写要点 1. 情感线：从惊恐、慌乱逐渐转变为找到希望后的安心。科林在 “希望” 树旁暂得安全，与爷爷相互呼喊鼓励，让彼此在灾难中有了坚持下去的勇气。 1. 故事线：描述科林在 “希望” 树旁的状态，如紧紧抱住树干，努力保持不被海浪冲走，和爷爷之间通过呼喊维系情感和希望。 · 第二段续写要点 2. 情感线：感恩、珍惜，意识到树的价值和亲情的珍贵。 2. 故事线：讲科林和爷爷在灾难后对 “力量” 和 “希望” 两棵树的呵护，以及他们向村民宣传保护树木的意义，村子重新种树，两棵树成为希望象征。 主旨升华句（英文） 1. Trees are not only part of our environment but also our saviors in unexpected disasters. 2. In the face of nature's wrath, hope and the bond of family are the lighthouses guiding us through the storm. 3. The love for nature and family, like the strong trees, can withstand the fiercest of the tides. 4. We should cherish every tree as they might hold the hope of our survival in the most desperate times. 5. Preserving nature means preserving the hope that sustains us during hardships. 写作示范1 续写第一段 A wave carried Colin around, and to his surprise, he found himself next to the familiar tree, Hope. He reached out his trembling hands and hugged the trunk tightly, as if it were his last straw. The howling wind and the roaring waves seemed less terrifying now. “Grandpa, I'm here with Hope!” he yelled with all his might. From the other tree, Grandpa's voice came through the chaos, “Colin, my boy! Stay strong. These trees will protect us.” The salty seawater splashed onto Colin's face, but his eyes were fixed on the branches above, filled with new - found courage. 续写第二段 From that day on, Colin and his grandfather valued Strength and Hope more. They fenced the two trees to prevent any harm. Every morning, they would come to check on them, watering and talking to them as if they were old friends. Colin told the other children in the village about the miraculous story. The villagers, deeply moved, joined them in planting more trees. The two trees, standing firmly in the middle of the village, became a reminder of the disaster and a symbol of hope. They witnessed the rebirth of the village and the deepening of the villagers' respect for nature. 写作示范2 A wave carried Colin around, and to his surprise, he found himself next to the familiar tree, Hope. He quickly grasped the trunk, his heart pounding. The water was still raging, but the tree gave him a sense of security. “Grandpa, I'm here!” he shouted. Hearing his voice, Grandpa on Strength replied, “Hold on tight, son!” The waves continued to assault them, but with the support of the trees, they felt less afraid. From that day on, Colin and his grandfather valued Strength and Hope more. They took better care of the two trees, watering them and protecting them from any harm. Colin told everyone in the village about how the trees had saved them. The villagers realized the importance of trees and started to plant more. The two trees became symbols of survival and hope in the rebuilt village, standing tall against the sky. 参考答案： A wave carried Colin around, and to his surprise, he found himself next to the familiar tree, Hope. Feeling the rush of floodwaters, Colin quickly climbed up the tree and tightly held onto it. Hours passed, and the floodwaters finally became quiet. Colin climbed down the tree and saw the destruction left behind. Their home was gone. But in the middle of the destruction, he spotted his grandfather, still holding onto Strength. Relief washed over Colin as he rushed to his side. They were safe, even though their home was lost. The trees had become their rescuer. From that day on, Colin and his grandfather valued Strength and Hope more. The two trees became real symbols of strength and hope for Colin and his grandfather. They rebuilt their lives, finding peace in the presence of these trees that had saved them. Together, they planted new trees, ensuring that the village would once again be filled with the beauty of nature. Colin and his grandfather shared their story, spreading awareness about the importance of preserving trees and the damaging consequences of deforestation. Their love for the trees and their determination to protect them became a guiding light for the community, inspiring others to value the natural world around them.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$