读后续写--勇敢的探索与意外：地窖惊魂与小猫的救援使命 讲义-云南省云南师大附中2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整 短文。 The Christmas holidays were fast approaching, and we had ordered many gifts online. So, when the doorbell rang, I was sure some of the packages had arrived. I ran to the door and swung it open, but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful calico kitten (杂色猫) sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was no way that she could have rung the doorbell by herself, was there? We figured that someone had found the kitten somewhere and left her there, and then rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed we would welcome an additional family member and take care of her. My husband called her our little angel, so we named her accordingly. She had a calm aura (气质) about her as she walked straight into our home and hearts, fitting in perfectly. It seemed as if she was always meant to be in this big house with us. She was an old soul and turned out to be the perfect companion. Always by my side, she was more like a puppy than a kitten. Wise beyond her years, she enjoyed wandering through the tunnels and mysterious rooms as much as I did, but with much less fear. Angelica the calico was courageous. So, I took a page from her book and decided to be brave, too. There was an underground stone cellar (地窖) I had been eager to explore. The only way in was down a rickety (摇晃的) ladder to its murky (昏暗的) depths. I guessed it was an old root cellar, probably twelve feet deep. I had promised my husband that I wouldn’t explore dangerous areas unless he or someone else was around. Though I knew I was stretching it, I figured that Angelica would count as my companion. I was ready to explore this cellar, and so was she. I equipped myself with a good flashlight and warm clothes, and carefully started down the rickety ladder while Angelica was looking down at me from above. Faint crack and sudden crash were what I could remember.   注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I woke up with pieces of the rotting, broken ladder lying around me on the stone cellar floor. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   Paragraph 2: It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  故事梗概 圣诞节即将来临，我们在网上订购了许多礼物。一天，门铃响了，“我”以为包裹到了，但开门后却只看到一只可爱的杂色猫（calico kitten） 坐在门口。“我”和“我”老公推测它是被人遗弃的便收养了它。我们给它起名叫 Angelica。 Angelica性格温和，迅速融入了我们的家庭，很好地陪伴着我。受敢于探索的Angelica的启发，“我”决定鼓起勇气探索家里的一个地下石窖。带着手电筒和温暖的衣物，我开始了这次冒险，沿着一个摇摇晃晃的梯子爬了下去，Angelica 则在上面注视着我……   主要人物：作者“我”、Angelica (the calico kitten) 次要人物：“我” 的老公（my husband） 叙事视角：第一人称 主题分类： 人与动物关系Human-Animal Relationship 家庭亲情关系 Family Relationship 续写思路建议 从原文的最后一句话（Faint crack and sudden crash were what I could remember.）可以看出作者“我”摔了跤并且晕了过去 。因此，续写部分第一段，应该主要描写“我”醒来后的生理和心理感受。身体上，比如，身体疼痛、脚踝受伤、骨折等。心理上，比如，无助和恐惧。第一段的末尾为了实现和第二段出题人给出的信息（It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope）无缝衔接，我们建议大家最好明确提及小猫Angelica一直在上面看着“我”。   第二段续写，为了创设阅卷人喜闻乐见的“灾难故事，有惊无险”的结局，一种稳妥的内容编写思路是：小猫不断地发出叫声（求救信号），我老公闻声赶来，我顺利得救，有惊无险。 写作参考答案分析 Paragraph 1: I woke up with pieces of the broken, rotting ladder scattered around me on the stone cellar floor. My head hurt, and a sharp pain shot through my ankle.（合理的剧情设置：摔晕醒来之后感到身体疼痛）The weak light from my flashlight, which had rolled a few feet away, cast strange shadows on the cold, stone walls.（和原文提到的物件flashlight互动）Fear rose inside me as I tried to sit up and realized how deep I was in the cellar, surrounded by silence and darkness.（合理的情绪描写：无助和恐惧）Just then, I heard a soft, familiar meow from above. Angelica’s little face appeared at the edge of the opening, her eyes full of worry. “Angelica,” I whispered, feeling a wave of relief wash over me. （此处刻意提到小猫Angelica是为了和下文开局无缝衔接） Paragraph 2: It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope. Angelica paced back and forth at the edge of the cellar, meowing as if she were calling for help.（恰当的动作描写：小猫前后踱步发出叫声寻求帮助）Her sounds echoed in the darkness, making me feel a little less alone. I reached for my flashlight, its faint beam guiding me through the shadows. Suddenly, I heard footsteps approaching—it was my husband, drawn in by our cat's cries.（次要人物my husband闻声赶来，恰到好处地登场）He quickly assessed the situation and borrowed a sturdy ladder from our neighbor. (和原文概念互动和延续：事故的起因就是一把破旧的ladder). Relief washed over me as he climbed down. “I’m here!” I shouted, tears of gratitude streaming down my face. Angelica had done it—my courageous angel had brought help just in time. (合理的省略细节和适度的文末留白：节约文字，至于我老公如何帮助爬上去就不必赘述了。)     词汇和表达推荐 a sharp pain 一阵剧痛 ankle n. 脚踝 meow（miaow）v. 喵喵叫  n.猫叫声 edge n. 边缘 pace back and forth  来回踱步 footstep n. 脚步声、足迹 relief n. 如释重负 wash over sb  (情感)涌上心头 sturdy adj. 坚固的（结实的） stream down（液体、气体）向下流 下水文1 Paragraph 1: I woke up with pieces of the rotting, broken ladder lying around me on the stone cellar floor. Pain shot through my body as I tried to move. The flashlight was still on, but its beam was dimmer now. The air was thick and musty, making it hard to breathe. I called for help, but my voice seemed to be swallowed up by the darkness. I realized I was trapped in this cold, damp place with no way to get out on my own. Fear started to grip me as I thought about how long it might be before someone found me. Paragraph 2: It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope. I called her name as loudly as I could, hoping she was still there. After a while, I heard a soft meowing from above. I called again, and the meowing grew louder. Then, I saw her little head peeking over the edge of the cellar opening. I pleaded with her to get help. She seemed to understand and disappeared. I waited in the darkness, praying that she would bring someone to rescue me. 下水文2 Paragraph 1: I woke up with pieces of the rotting, broken ladder lying around me on the stone cellar floor. Every part of my body ached, especially my ankle which seemed to have twisted during the fall. The flashlight had rolled away, casting a weak and eerie glow in one corner. I felt a sharp pain in my ribs when I tried to sit up. The cellar was silent except for the sound of my own ragged breathing. I knew I was in a bad situation, and panic threatened to overwhelm me as I wondered if I'd ever get out. Paragraph 2: It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope. I mustered all my strength and shouted her name. To my relief, I soon heard her soft meows from above. She appeared at the edge of the cellar entrance, her big eyes looking down at me with concern. I implored her to go find help. She stared at me for a moment as if understanding my plea, then turned and disappeared. I lay there in the semi - darkness, hoping against hope that she would lead someone to my rescue. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$