2024-2025学年高一上学期期中考试前英语作文专项讲义：求助信，建议信，读后续写

高一期中考试前作文专项讲义 Arthur English Research Centre Ⅰ求助信 结构点拨 求助信是向别人寻求帮助的书信体。 1.首段：说明写信目的； 2.中段：希望对方提出建议和改进措施。 3.末段：表达感谢并期盼回复。 素材积累 1.首段常用语 (1)I’m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.我写信是想问您能否帮助我。 (2)I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。 (3) I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。 2.中段常用语 (4)I can’t concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。 (5)Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.？Thank you in advance! 你能到机场接我叔叔并带他去旅馆吗？因为这是他第一次去美国。提前谢谢你！ (6)Would you be so kind to introduce to me the conditions of the accommodation? 能不能请您给我介绍一下住宿条件？ (7)I’m struggling with choosing a major now. I’m not sure where my interest lies and which major has a bright future that can ensure me a good job. Do you have any suggestions on the choice of a major? 我现在很难选择专业。我不知道我的兴趣所在，也不知道哪个专业有一个光明的未来，可以保证我有一份好工作。你对专业的选择有什么建议吗？ (8)I’m stuck and wondering if you could give me some practical advice as I know you’ve organized similar activities. 我遇到了困难，不知道你能否给我一些实用的建议，因为我知道你也组织过类似的活动。 (9)I am wondering if you could have the books delivered to me once you purchase them. If so，please inform me how you prefer to receive the money. 我想知道您一旦买了书，是否可以把书寄给我。如果可以的话，请告诉我您希望如何收取这笔钱。 3.尾段常用语 (10)I would be very grateful if you could help me .../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and ...如果您能帮助我……我会非常感激。 (11)I’d appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account. 如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。 (12)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume. 如果您能帮我一个忙，抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历，我将不胜感激。 (13)I’m eager for your timely help./I’m eager to get your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。 One possible version： Dear Mr. George, Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice. As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help. Yours, Li Hua Ⅱ建议信 结构点拨 第一部分：说明写信的目的 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因、提出建议 第三部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 素材积累 第一部分：说明写信的目的： (1) I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 (2) I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 (3) I’m writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 (4) You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 (5) I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因、提出建议： (6)它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (7)顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (8) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (9)我建议……I’d like to suggest that…/I would like to make a recommendation that… I am writing to advise…/If I were you, I would… 第三部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复: (10) I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 (11) I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 (12) I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 (13) I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 One possible version： Dear Mr. Green, You can’t imagine how overjoyed I am hearing about your plan! I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference. As a big fan of Chinese calligraphy myself, I’ll recommend it without hesitation because it’s a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique. In order to learn it well, first and foremost, one may need to devote himself/herself to long hours of practice. Second, signing up for a calligraphy course would be a wise choice, which would help her study in a systematic way. Besides, it’d also be beneficial to study and imitate the works of famous calligraphers. I do hope you’ll find my advice helpful. Best wishes for her future study! Yours, Li Hua Ⅲ知临学校优秀试题一 2023学年第一学期高一段英语科目期中质量检测 （考试时间：120分钟 试卷满分：150分） 注意事项： 1. 答卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。 2. 回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 第四部分 写作 (共两节，满分40分) 第一节 (满分15分) 假定你是李华，你的好朋友peter在给你写信询问你如何能将汉语学好，请给她写一封建议信，内容包括： 1. 多交中国朋友，练习口语。2.听中文歌曲，看中文电影。3.记日记。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________ Yours, LiHua 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为100左右。 In the farmers' market, there were many other stalls (摊位) with all kinds of food for sale as well as colorful rows of fruit and vegetables set out on tables. Cooked food stalls filled the air with the wonderful smells of hot tasty snacks, and the smell of fresh coffee was everywhere. "Wow," Gus cried out, "Jam (果酱)!" Just in front of him, there was a jam stall that sold all kinds of home-made jam. But the only kind Gus wanted was strawberry, so he bought a jar. He couldn't help but taste the jam immediately. It was OK, he frowned (皱眉) and shook his head, but never as good as Rose's, whose jam was just magic. Rose was his neighbour, an elderly lady who lived alone but liked company now and again. Her doorbell was usually too quiet before Gus and his mom moved to the village after his father's death. Gus often rang her doorbell and asked whether she needed anything from the supermarket as he and his mother were going to town. In return, Rose would often give Gus a jar of jam. Gus was amazed how jam could be so delicious, so whenever free he would be at Rose's home watching her make the super jam. Suddenly, an idea struck Gus. Probably he could try that to make some money and help his mum. He then bought a bag of potatoes for Rose for her kind offer of wonderful jam. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为100左右； 2. 续写部分为一段，开头语已为你写好； The next morning, Gus rang Rose's doorbell. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ 2023学年第一学期期中高一英语答案 应用文写作 Dear Peter, I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. My suggestions are as follows. To begin with, it is a good idea to make more Chinese friends who can help practice your spoken Chinese. What’s more, it also helps to listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can enable you to gain a better understanding of Chinese. Last but not least, keeping a diary is also a good choice, as it can improve your writing level. I hope my advice will be helpful to you, and make progress in Chinese. Yours, Li Hua 　　　 读后续写 The next morning, Gus rang Rose’s doorbell. Rose opened the door and then Gus handed the bag of potatoes to her. “Thank you for your jam. It is really the most delicious jam I have ever had”, Gus said happily. When Rose heard this, a bright smile spread across her face and she was satisfied that Gus loved it so much. Then Gus suggested to her that it should be a wonderful thing if more people could taste her magic jam. The jam would be popular in the market if she could make more, in that case, he would help to sell it and Rose just needed to pay 5% commission. Delighted at his good idea, Rose was grateful for his help and said her jam would always be free for Gus. The jam was so popular among the villagers that it was named as Rose and Gus’s Jam. 优质应用文实例一 优质应用文实例二 优质读后续写实例一 优质读后续写实例二 Ⅳ知临教育集团优秀试题二 2023学年第一学期期中考试高一（预科班）英语试题 第四部分 写作（共两节, 满分30分） 第一节（满分15分） 假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Luke刚刚随父母来华读高一，对新的学校生活不适应，并且由于他的汉语薄弱，和同学沟通有困难，写电子邮件征求你的建议。请你用英文给他回信，要点如下： 1.安慰； 2.建议； 3.祝愿与期待。 注意：字数在80字左右。 Dear Luke, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二节（满分15分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Surprise!” was the first thing I heard when I opened the door. My family and friends were all smiling at me. There were colorful balloons all over the house, a big poster saying "HAPPY BIRTHDAY'', and of course a cake with 12 candles. It was a wonderful feeling. I knew that I had finally turned twelve and I might possibly get the thing I wanted most. I saw my mom and dad coming towards me with a small box which seemed to be a birthday present. When I opened the box, I couldn't believe my eyes. I had really gotten a mobile phone! Throwing myself into their arms, I let out a cry of joy, “Thank you! I love you guys!” “You're welcome. We knew this was going to make you happy but we didn't only get you this because you turned twelve, but also because you are doing well in school. We expect you to keep getting good grades." “Of course I will." I said confidently. As soon as I got to school the next morning, I was showing off my phone and asking everyone for their number. It was cool how I got so many contacts on the first day. It felt like I didn't even exist in that class anymore. I wouldn't pay much attention to the teachers because I was too busy on my phone. However, I didn't get caught using it. I am pretty sure that the teacher did notice that I stopped paying attention to her because a week later we took a test and I failed. What was worse, my mom had to sign the test. It was hard to show my mom the test. She was used to seeing A's and B's on my tests. Finally, I showed it to her, and she couldn't believe it. She was angry but most of all, she was disappointed. 注意： 1.续写短文的词数应为100左右； 2,续写段的开头已给出。 Realizing the reason for my failure, my parents started to dislike the fact that I had a phone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023学年第一学期期中考试高一（预科班）英语试题答案 第四部分 写作（共两节, 满分30分） 第一节（满分15分） (答案及解析：略） 第二节（满分15分） 答案 Realizing the reason for my failure, my parents started to dislike the fact that I had a phone. They said I never paid attention to them，thinking we didn't communicate as much with my phone. They regretted having given me a phone, which made me ignore the family and my study. Then I realized I was wrong. Later I tried going a whole day without a phone and spend my spare time with my family . Soon, I had a different opinion about cellphones. Phones can really get you addicted. How great it is to break away from the phone! 解析 【分析】本文讲述了作者生日时，因为他已经12岁，并且在学校表现非常出色，父母给他一部手机作为生日礼物，作者非常的开心。他在学校炫耀手机，记下同学们的电话号码并且在课上也只关注手机，背着老师玩手机，无心听课学习。考试了，成绩一塌糊涂，他拿着成绩单让妈妈签字，妈妈既生气又失望。 Ⅴ月考试题一 第四部分　写作(共两节，满分 40 分) 第一节　(满分15分) 你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“Green Travel”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿。内容包括： 1．汽车带来的问题(如空气污染，交通堵塞等)； 2．解决办法(如骑自行车等)。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends， That’s all.Thank you for your listening. 续写训练　(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One Friday afternoon，some of my classmates planned to take a hike in a jungle(丛林)，including my friends Jake and Liam.They asked me if I would like to go with them.I love outdoor activities，so I agreed. It was sunny the following morning.I was so excited about hiking since it was the first time that I had hiked with them.I ate a light breakfast.After that，I hurriedly ran out of my house to meet them in the school playground. The jungle where we were going was far from our school.Its name is Salymbia Jungle.It took about three hours to go there by bus，but it wasn’t a boring journey as we were all eager to hike.After we got off the bus，we found a local guide to ensure our safety.The guide，whose name is Thomas，said that he had hiked in the Salymbia Jungle lots of times and that he was familiar(熟悉的) with the route(路线)．When we arrived，Thomas told us never to leave the group because we would easily get lost in the jungle if we walked alone.Then we began to hike. There were different kinds of plants which we had never seen before.All of us were amazed at the beauty of the scenery and the sounds of the creatures.Sadly，after hiking for about an hour，I found that my watch was gone.I realized that my watch had fallen off.It was a gift from my grandma，and I loved it very much.Without thinking，I turned back and tried to find my watch.Since I was the last one walking in the group，nobody noticed it when I walked away. I wasn’t worried about getting lost because I thought I could find my watch easily.However，when I finally found my watch and tried to catch up with my friends，they had gone far.I immediately realized that I was alone and lost. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 The sky started to become dark and I was very worried. Fortunately，they found me with great effort. 第四部分　写作(共两节，满分 40 分) 第一节　(满分15分) 参考范文 Dear friends， I feel honored to deliver a speech here.My topic today is “Green Travel”． Nowadays，with the number of cars increasing，air pollution and traffic jam are becoming serious，about which we have to raise awareness.It is high time that we took action from now on.Riding a bike is one of the solutions，whose advantages are obvious.Not only can it save a lot of energy，which is beneficial to our environment，but also our health will improve by cycling.Since we have only one earth，let’s do what we can before it is too late! That’s all.Thank you for your listening. 第二节　(满分25分) 参考范文 The sky started to become dark and I was very worried.I didn’t know what to do.I called out to my friends，but there was no reply.I tried to look for a way but none of the scenes seemed familiar.I walked for a few more minutes and I got tired and hungry.I felt frightened.Finally，I gave up and took a rest.As I was falling asleep，I heard a human voice.It was unbelievable，and then I heard someone else.I let out a cry，“Help！” Fortunately，they found me with great effort.My friends Jake and Liam told the guide that they found I was lost，and finally some rescuers were called to help.They led me back to the bus.Seeing me，my friends told me they were really worried.I apologized to them for leaving the group without telling them.Instead of feeling angry with me，they comforted me and helped me calm down.And I truly learned a good lesson from it—never leave your group members when you’re in a new place. Ⅵ月考试题二 第四节 应用文写作（满分25分） 你校正在举行以“Sports life”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你以“My Favorite workout”为题目写一篇文章并参加比赛。内容包括： 1. 介绍这一项运动； 2. 喜欢它的原因。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Favorite workout ______________________________________________________________________ One possible version My Favorite Workout It seems to me that almost everyone has his or her favorite form of exercise, and I'm no exception. My favorite workout is definitely badminton, which is, in my opinion, also the most suitable sport for me as a senior high for the following reasons. Firstly, with the shuttle cock always flying high overhead, while playing the sport, I have to hold my head high all the time, which undoubtedly does good to a person who bends over the desk most time and thus might be in the danger of developing some problems with the neck. Secondly, badminton, unlike other working out forms, never requires much in playing conditions—with two light rackets, one little shuttle, and a nice partner, I can just enjoy the game to my heart's content almost at any place even during a short break between classes. Moreover, I don't think it necessary to describe to anyone who has ever played it how much delight badminton can bring us. All in all, it is badminton that enriches my life on campus as well as keeping me physically and mentally fit despite stressful schoolwork. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$