读后续写公开课build a coffeehouse课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

Continuation writing By the end of the session, we’ll be able to 1. understand the meaning of the text; 2. design a reasonable and logic ending of the story; 3. polish the story with some advanced expressions; 4. apply what you have learned to practice. How to read How to design How to write How to polish How to read 1.Read for elements of the story 2.Read for Plot 3.Read for theme Read for elements of the story I, Gary, other supporters of mine During my first term as president of Students’ Union On campus Raise money to build a coffeehouse as my first mission Read for Plot I managed to get Gary, who was active,energetic, clever and eloquent, to join me. Gary proved to be the most capable and efficient in the group of helpers. I wanted to take credit for everything. My ego took over and my arrogance and pride were out of control. I was more confident of the mission. Gary was really helpful. I became increasingly arrogant. Read for theme Paragraph 1: It wasn’t long before all my supporters, even Gary, began to turn against me. I was annoyed but I don’t care about that. Paragraph 2: I finally realized what a stupid mistake I had made. I was regretful and wanted to make up for it. Read for theme What should be the theme of the story? Teamwork, Cooperation, Modesty *Pride comes from shallowness while arrogance comes from ignorance. *We should be modest and work with partners to achieve something. How to design Tips: 1. Lock the subject of the given sentence; 2. Design from two aspects: events and emotions; 3. The ending should be positive and educational. Paragraph l:It wasn't long before all my supporters, even Gary, began to turn against me . l. How did the supporters turn their backs on me? 2.What did Gary do to show his disappointment and discontentment? 3.How did I feel and react then? 4.What was the influence of our conflicts on the mission? Paragraph 2:I finally realized what a stupid mistake l had made. l. What mistake did I realize l had made? 2.What did I do to make up for the mistake? 3.How did Gary and the other supporters react? 4.What happened finally and what did I think of the experience? How to write Answer the questions above and we’ll get a draft quickly. How to polish 1.Appreciate the sentences from the text. 1)When I was elected the president of Student’s Union, everybody congratulated me on my campaign saying it was one of the best the school had seen. 2)Having determined my goal, I set up a small group of helpers to do fundraising. 3)Gradually, all of us who participated felt like we were part of something much bigger than we were. 4)I began speaking down to my group members, demanding they listen to me because I thought I knew what was best. 2.More skills 1)心理描写---愤怒 explode with anger 勃然大怒 shake/boil with anger/ rage怒火中烧 Filled with fury, Jim was unable to utter a single word. Jim满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。 Kate’s reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano.凯特的回答如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了。 I exclaimed with fury, storming into my room and slamming the door before she could respond.我愤怒地叫了起来，冲进房间，在她没来得及回答前就砰地关上了门。 2)心理描写---愧疚,后悔 be full of guilt 满心愧疚 shed tears of regret 流下后悔的泪水 be ashamed of doing sth. ...后悔做某事 “If I hadn’t quarreled with Tom, I wouldn’t have to be here.” Jane thought regretfully, with tears welling up in her eyes.“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我就不会在这里了。”简后悔地想，眼里涌出了泪水。 I was overcome by a wave of guilt and words failed to express my regret. 我被一阵内疚所压倒，言语无法表达我的遗憾。 With/Holding the little dog statue in his hand, the old man felt a flood of regret welled up in him. 手里拿着小狗雕塑，老人觉着心中涌起一阵懊悔。 3)Only+when I realize the importance of ...+will I do sth. 倒装句 4)It was+one’s joint efforts/support/forgiveness/generosity that made me feel relieved. 强调句型 5)主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C（三个并列谓语，动作依次发生） 动作链 6)Having done…+主句.（表示先做了某事，再发生核心动作）非谓语动词结构 7)With sth. ...doing／done...+主句+doing... with结构+主句+现在分词结构 3.The language should be vivid, the content should be interrelated, the plot should be evident, the value should be warm. Possible version: It wasn’t long before all my supporters, even Gary, began to turn against me. But I was still obsessed with my power and I even pictured what praise the principal would give me when I accomplished this mission. However, things started to go bad. When I ordered them to continue the fund-raising mission, they ignored my requests , doing things at their own will. Even Gary had a quarrel with me in public, which made me filled with anger. Not until I felt so embarrassed and depressed did I wake up to the fact that I had lost all my friends including Gary. Meanwhile, building the coffeehouse seems to be hopeless. I finally realized what a stupid mistake I had made. I learned that only those who are humble and respect others would make it in the end. I was overcome by a wave of guilt and ran into Gary, working up the courage to make my apology . First astonished and then relieved with a warm smile, Gary gave me a hug finally, which meant he had forgiven me. With Gary's help, our team members are all back. Through everyone's joint efforts, we managed to raise all the funds and make our coffeehouse a reality. Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one lag behind. Step 5. Homework 1.Improve your writing. 2.Insist on everyday extended reading and accumulate more useful expressions. Thank you! $$