读后续写--泰勒・斯威夫特:点亮肯尼迪生命之光讲义-河南省新高中创新联盟TOP二十名校2024-2025学年高三上学期10月调研考试英语试卷

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In a world full of uncertainties,there lives a ten-year-old girl named Kennedy Coke,who is an energetic young fighter.Her life has been a series of extraordinary battles. Kennedy’s story began many years ago.At just two years old,a routine visit to urgent care for what seemed like a common cold took an unexpected turn.As the doctors examined her,they discovered a lung tumor(肿瘤).Little Kennedy had a rare genetic condition called DICER1 syndrome.This condition made it incredibly difficult for her body to hold up tumors,and thus she began her long and tough journey of battling multiple health issues. Through the years,Kennedy showed remarkable courage.She went through chemotherapy(化疗) and numerous treatments,and against all odds,she overcame her initial illness.She was a miracle for a while,bringing hope and joy to her family. But life had more turns in store for Kennedy.In January 2024,during a routine check, doctors discovered another tumor.Once again,Kennedy faced the battle bravely.She underwent surgery with firm determination.However,just six months later,her condition worsened.At only ten years old,she has to face more difficulties than most people meet in a lifetime. As she prepared for this new battle,Kennedy’s spirit started to fade away.Her mother,Jodi Hill Coke,could see the change in her daughter.She knew Kennedy needed something to cheer her up and give her hope.And that’s when she remembered Kennedy’s love for Taylor Swift.Kennedy was a huge fan of the pop star and had always dreamed of attending the Eras Tour.But with the tour’s tickets selling for thousands of dollars,it seemed like an impossible dream.Determined to reignite(再次点燃)Kennedy’s wish,Jodi reached out to Taylor Swift’s team,sharing Kennedy’s inspiring story and her heartfelt wish. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Fortunately,the request touched hearts of Taylor Swift’s team and Taylor herself responded. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Kennedy along with her mother attended the concert with the tickets.__________________ 文章大意 10 岁的肯尼迪・科克是一位勇敢的女孩,她从 2 岁起就因罕见的 DICER1 综合征导致身体易长肿瘤,经历了化疗和多次治疗后曾战胜初期疾病。但 2024 年 1 月检查出又一肿瘤,手术后半年病情恶化。在她精神开始消沉时,母亲想到她对泰勒・斯威夫特的喜爱以及她想去看时代巡回演唱会的梦想,于是向泰勒团队求助。 伏笔及续写回应 1. 伏笔:肯尼迪是泰勒的超级粉丝,梦想参加时代巡回演唱会。回应:泰勒团队和泰勒本人回应了请求,肯尼迪有机会实现梦想。 2. 伏笔:母亲希望能重燃肯尼迪的希望。回应:参加演唱会让肯尼迪重新振作。 续写要点 · 第一段: 1. 情感线:惊喜、期待。泰勒的回应给肯尼迪和家人带来巨大的惊喜,让他们重新燃起希望。 1. 故事线:泰勒团队为肯尼迪送来了演唱会门票,实现了她看似遥不可及的梦想。 · 第二段: · 情感线:兴奋、幸福。肯尼迪在演唱会上感受到快乐和力量,重新找回战斗的勇气。 · 故事线:肯尼迪和母亲一起参加演唱会,享受这一特殊时刻。 主旨升华句 1. In the darkest times, a glimmer of hope can be a powerful medicine.(在最黑暗的时刻,一丝希望是强大的良药。) 2. Kindness from strangers can reignite the light of hope within us.(陌生人的善意可以重新点燃我们内心的希望之光。) 3. Dreams have the magic to lift our spirits even in the toughest battles.(梦想有魔力,即使在最艰难的战斗中也能振奋我们的精神。) 4. Love and support from the world can give the weak the strength to fight.(来自世界的爱和支持可以给弱者战斗的力量。) 5. A little act of kindness can be a lighthouse for those lost in the storm of life.(一个小小的善举可以成为那些在人生风暴中迷失者的灯塔。) 写作示范 示范一 Fortunately, the request touched hearts of Taylor Swift’s team and Taylor herself responded. They were deeply moved by Kennedy's brave fight against the disease. They arranged for two tickets for Kennedy and her mother, hoping to bring some light to this little fighter's life. When Jodi told Kennedy the news, her eyes lit up with excitement and disbelief. Kennedy along with her mother attended the concert with the tickets. As the music filled the air, Kennedy was completely immersed in the joy. She sang along, her face beaming with happiness. For a moment, she forgot all the pain and difficulties. The concert became a source of strength, rekindling her spirit to continue her battle. 示范二 Fortunately, the request touched hearts of Taylor Swift’s team and Taylor herself responded. They decided to offer Kennedy and her mother free tickets and backstage passes. Taylor was especially touched by Kennedy's story and wanted to meet her in person. When Kennedy heard the news, she felt as if she was in a beautiful dream. Kennedy along with her mother attended the concert with the tickets. During the concert, Kennedy felt like she was in a wonderland. She watched Taylor perform in awe. When she met Taylor backstage, she was overjoyed. The experience filled her with new - found energy and hope, making her ready to face her health issues again. One possible version: Fortunately, the request touched hearts of Taylor Swift's team and Taylor herself responded. She was moved by the girl's story and wanted to bring joy to her who has fought so hard for so long. Not only did she offer Kennedy and her family VIP tickets to the Eras Tour, but she also offered words of encouragement and hope. 'Taylor expressed her care to Kennedy, " A lot of people love you very much. l believe that you are sure to overcome your cancer, Hope to see you at my concert.” Kennedy along with her mother attended the concert with the tickets, Taylor's music filled the air, lifting her spirits higher with every note. For Kennedy, this was not only a concert but also a lighthouse of hope and a reminder that she was surrounded by love and support from people who believed in her will. After Kennedy left the concert, she felt invincible and ready to face whatever challenges lying ahead with the strength of her hero by her side. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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