2025届高考英语读后续写个人成长类---触摸艰辛：从母亲的手读懂人生价值 讲义

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A young person who was academically excellent applied for a manager's post in an international company. He passed the written exam with ease, and in the group interview that followed, he impressed the interviewers with willy remarks, passion for work, and creative plans for the company's future. After that, this young man had to face the final interview by the company's director. The young man walked into the manager's office, feeling he could conquer the whole world with just one hand. The director shook hands with the young man and noticed the excitement and pride in his eyes. He looked into the young man's resume(简历) and saw that the young person did exceptionally well throughout his study life. With a satisfied smile, the director started questioning him. “Did you ever obtain any scholarship in your school or college?” “No,” replied the young man. “Then who paid for your education?” “My father passed away when I was three. It was my mother who paid for my tuition fees. She's a farmer and works all day in the fields,” said the young man. The director nodded and asked the young man to show his hands. Though confused, the young man held out his hands hesitantly, which were smooth and soft. Then the director asked if the young man had ever helped his mother with farm work. The young man said: “No, she always wanted me to focus on my academic work. Besides, she knows her work well and could do everything much faster than I could.” Learning the reply, the director told the young man that when he returned to his home that day, he should clean his mother's hands, and after that, he could come back and see him and report what he learned. Feeling there was a chance for him to get the job, the young man was delighted. When he returned home with a spring in his feel, he cheerfully requested his mother to let him clean her hands. Listening to this strange request, his mother felt astonished but happy. With mixed emotions, she showed her hands to him. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。      Now this young man started to clean his mother's hands gently.______________________________________________________________________      The following day he went to the director's office again.____________________________________________________________________________ 文本主旨 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位年轻人去一家公司面试，公司的经理注意到年轻人的经历和手部，所以要求年轻人回去后给自己的母亲洗手，让年轻人意识到母亲为了自己的学业所做出的牺牲，懂得感恩。 思路点拨 ① 由第一段首句内容“现在这个年轻人开始轻轻地给母亲洗手。”可知，第一段可描写年轻人注意到了母亲的双手粗糙，布满了伤口和老茧，意识到母亲为自己的学业做出的牺牲。 ② 由第二段首句内容“第二天，他又去了经理的办公室。”可知，第二段可描写年轻人把昨天的发现告诉了经理，并对经理表示了感谢，让他意识到母亲的伟大，经理对他感到满意，并最终录取了这位年轻人。 续写线索 应聘 → 经理注意到年轻人的经历和双手 → 经理布置回去帮母亲洗手的任务 → 发现母亲的手满是伤痕和老茧 → 感到母亲的伟大 → 回复并感谢经理 → 成功被录取 主旨升华句 1. True success is not only about personal achievements but also about understanding and respecting the sacrifices of our loved ones.（真正的成功不仅在于个人成就，还在于理解和尊重所爱之人的牺牲。） 2. Sometimes, the hands that toil for us hold the most valuable lessons of life.（有时候，为我们辛勤劳作的双手蕴含着最宝贵的人生经验。） 3. We should always remember that behind our success lies the hard work of those who support us with love.（我们应该永远记住，在我们成功的背后是那些用爱支持我们的人的辛勤付出。） 4. Humility comes from recognizing the value of the humble efforts that have shaped our lives.（谦逊源于认识到塑造我们生活的那些平凡努力的价值。） 5. The most precious knowledge is often learned from the simplest and most selfless acts of our family members.（最宝贵的知识往往来自家庭成员最简单、最无私的行为。） 写作示范 示范一 Now this young man started to clean his mother's hands gently. As he did so, he was shocked by what he saw. Her hands were rough, with numerous calluses and scars from years of hard labor in the fields. The wrinkles on her hands told the story of her struggle to support the family. He realized that his smooth hands were the result of his mother's sacrifices. Tears welled up in his eyes as he felt a deep sense of guilt for never helping her. The following day he went to the director's office again. His head was bowed, and his pride was gone. He told the director what he had seen and how he now understood the true meaning of hard work and sacrifice. The director nodded, seeing the change in the young man. He told him that he had passed the final test, as he had learned the most important lesson - to respect and value the efforts of others. 示范二 Now this young man started to clean his mother's hands gently. He noticed the deep cracks in her palms, the dirt embedded under her nails that seemed impossible to wash away completely. Each wrinkle was like a deep furrow of the land she had toiled on. His mother's hands were like a map of her life, filled with hardships and love. For the first time, he truly understood the price she had paid for his education. The following day he went to the director's office again. There was a newfound humility in his eyes. He told the director how his mother's hands were a revelation to him. He spoke of his new - found respect for his mother's labor and his determination to be worthy of her sacrifices. The director smiled, knowing that the young man had finally grasped the essence of what it meant to value those who had supported him all along. 参考范文 Now this young man started to clean his mother's hand gently. For the first time, he noticed his mother's hands were rough with cuts and calluses. Some of the cuts were so deep that she shivered with pain when they were cleaned. It was not until that moment that the young man started to understand the sacrifice his mother had made to ensure he could get a good education. Stroking his mother's hands with both affection and guilt, he felt a lump in his throat, tears of admiration and sorrow streaming down his face. The following day he went to the director's office again. His face was calm, and the excitement and pride in his eyes were replaced by sincerity and gratitude. “Thank you for this valuable lesson,” said the young man with tears glittering in his eyes. Then he continued to tell the manager that he was regretful about being an insensitive son who had been obsessed with grades and career opportunities, neglecting how his mother had suffered all these years. The manager listened attentively and finally said with a smile curving his lips, “I'm glad you've gained the power of appreciation, which is an essential quality in a manager. You are hired. ” 逐句精讲 For the first time, he noticed his mother's hands were rough with cuts and calluses.  他第一次注意到母亲的手很粗糙，手上布满伤口和老茧。 分析：顺承该段首句，描写母亲手的特征。rough adj.粗糙的；calluses n.老茧 Some of the cuts were so deep that she shivered with pain when they were cleaned.  有些伤口太深了，清洗时她疼得直发抖。 分析：进一步描写母亲手上的伤口。so...that...如此...以至于...；shivered with pain，疼得直发抖。 【高分句型】It was not until that moment that the young man started to understand the sacrifice his mother had made to ensure he could get a good education.  直到那一刻，这个年轻人才开始理解母亲为确保他能得到良好的教育所做的牺牲。 分析：描写年轻人开始理解母亲为自己做出的牺牲。It is/was +被强调部分 +that/who 引导的强调句型。It was not until that moment that ... started to understand... 直到那一刻...开始理解... Stroking his mother's hands with both affection and guilt, he felt a lump in his throat, tears of admiration and sorrow streaming down his face. 他既深情又愧疚地抚摸着母亲的手，喉咙哽咽，钦佩和悲伤的泪水顺着脸颊流下。 分析：动作+情绪描写。stroke v. 轻抚；Stroking his mother's hands with both affection and guilt，现在分词做状语；tears of admiration and sorrow streaming down his face，独立主格结构。整个句子结构：现在分词短语+主句+独立主格。情绪类表达可以积累下来。 His face was calm, and the excitement and pride in his eyes were replaced by sincerity and gratitude.  他的脸很平静，眼中的兴奋和骄傲被真诚和感激所取代。 分析：写年轻人的变化。" the excitement and pride in his eyes" 照应原文 "The director shook hands with the young man and noticed the excitement and pride in his eyes." “Thank you for this valuable lesson,” said the young man with tears glittering in his eyes. “谢谢您给我上了宝贵的一课，”年轻人说，眼里闪着泪光。 分析：语言+情绪描写。with tears glittering in his eyes，眼里闪着泪光，with引导伴随状语。 【高分句型】Then he continued to tell the manager that he was regretful about being an insensitive son who had been obsessed with grades and career opportunities, neglecting how his mother had suffered all these years.  然后他继续告诉经理，他很后悔自己是一个麻木不仁的儿子，痴迷于成绩和职业机会，忽视了母亲这些年来遭受的痛苦。 分析：写年轻人的反思。that 引导的宾语从句， who 引导的定语从句，注意时态的变化（一般过去时+过去完成时）。be regretful about...后悔...；insensitive，adj. 麻木不仁的，漠不关心的；be obsessed with，对...着迷；neglecting how his mother had suffered all these years，现在分词短语作状语。 The manager listened attentively and finally said with a smile curving his lips, “I'm glad you've gained the power of appreciation, which is an essential quality in a manager. You are hired. ” 经理聚精会神地听着，最后嘴角微微上扬笑着说：“我很高兴你懂得了感恩，这是经理必备的品质。你被录用了。” 分析：动作+语言描写，最后写经理对他感到满意，并最终录取了年轻人。attentively adv. 聚精会神地；with a smile curving his lips，嘴角微微上扬。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$