2025届高考英语读后续写个人成长类--爷爷的鼓励：开启我的春季探索之旅 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My grandpa lived at the top of a mountain all by himself, This was my first time to stay with him. L was curious about everything around, Sometimes I went into the woods and pretended that I was Alex the Adventurer, I must stay near and I couldn't go past the big rock alone, This way, Grandpa could always see me from the yard. One morning, I raced up the path back to Grandpa's yard as fast as I could. “Grandpa, I hear something strange in your woods!" I told him, He saw the excitement and fear in my eyes, "Let's go to find out what it is." He took my hand with his big and warm one. As we hiked toward the big rock, I held Grandpa's hand tighter, I could feel my palms becoming sweaty. Cack-cack-cack (呱呱呱)! There was that sound! I grabbed Grandpa’'s leg. “What is that, Grandpa?” 1whispered, “It's the first sign of spring," he said. “How about you going past the big rock a bit. See if you can find out what it is." "By myself?" I hesitated, unsure of what to do next, "I promise it's safe," he gently encouraged me, "And I’ll stay here by the big rock where you can see me."“'No." I looked at Grandpa. His whole face seemed to be smiling, even his eyes, I wondered what an adventurer would do, I stood up straighter and made a brave face, “Grandpa," I said, "[ think I can do it. "Crunch! Crunch! My feet stepped on the dead leaves as I got closer. Suddenly there was silence. L stopped and looked back, My face must not look so brave, because Grandpa said, “It's all right, Alex. Just a little further. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为 100 左右: 2.续写部分为一段，请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I stood up straighter and took a big step forward. —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 文章大意 “我” 第一次和爷爷住在山顶，喜欢在树林附近玩。一天早上，“我” 听到树林里有奇怪的声音，爷爷带着 “我” 去查看，走到大岩石附近又听到声音，爷爷鼓励 “我” 独自走过大岩石去看看，“我” 有些犹豫但还是决定尝试，在前进过程中突然没了声音，爷爷鼓励 “我” 再往前走一点。 五要素分析： 1. 角色（Character） · “我”（Alex）：故事的主角，一个充满好奇心和冒险精神的孩子。在爷爷的鼓励下，克服内心的恐惧，勇敢地探索奇怪声音的来源，展现出了勇敢和成长。 · 爷爷：给予 “我” 鼓励和支持，他的信任推动着 “我” 去独自探索，是 “我” 冒险行动的引导者，虽然没有和 “我” 一起前行，但他的存在给了 “我” 安全感。 2. 背景（Setting） · 地点：山顶爷爷家附近的树林，有大岩石、小溪、灌木丛等自然元素。这里是 “我” 玩耍和探索的地方，环境充满神秘色彩，暗示着未知和冒险。 · 时间：春季（从文中提到 “这是春天的第一个迹象” 可推断），这个时间背景为故事增添了生机和希望的氛围，与发现青蛙（春天的象征之一）相呼应。 3. 冲突（Conflict） · 内在冲突：“我” 内心的恐惧与想要成为冒险家的渴望之间的冲突。“我” 一方面害怕独自前行去探索未知的声音，另一方面又不想在爷爷面前表现出懦弱，同时受到冒险家梦想的驱使，这种矛盾心理构成了主要的内在冲突。 · 外在冲突：未知的奇怪声音带来的紧张感。这个声音在树林中显得神秘而可怕，成为了 “我” 冒险过程中的阻碍，增加了故事的悬念和紧张氛围。 4. 情节（Plot） · 起始：“我” 听到树林里奇怪的声音，向爷爷报告，爷爷鼓励 “我” 独自去大岩石后面查看，“我” 虽犹豫但决定尝试，这是故事的开端，引出了后续的冒险。 · 发展：“我” 在前进过程中，先是听到声音消失而紧张，在爷爷的鼓励下继续前进，这是情节的发展部分，增加了紧张感和悬念。 · 高潮：“我” 发现了声音的来源 —— 几只在溪边的青蛙，这是故事的高潮，解开了奇怪声音之谜。 · 结局：“我” 兴奋地跑回爷爷身边，向爷爷报告发现，感觉自己像个真正的冒险家，完成了这次冒险，故事圆满结束。 5. 主题（Theme） · 成长与勇气：通过 “我” 在爷爷的鼓励下克服恐惧，独自探索并有所发现的经历，体现了成长需要勇气这一主题。在面对未知和恐惧时，勇敢地迈出第一步是成长的关键，同时亲人的鼓励在这个过程中有着重要的作用。 · 对自然的探索与发现：故事围绕着对树林中奇怪声音这一自然现象的探索展开，最终发现是青蛙的叫声，象征着春天的到来。这体现了对自然的好奇和探索可以带来惊喜和对自然之美的认知。 伏笔及续写回应 1. 伏笔：“我” 扮演冒险家，但不敢独自过岩石。回应：在爷爷鼓励下，“我” 决定勇敢尝试，在续写中继续前进。 2. 伏笔：奇怪的声音吸引 “我”，爷爷说那是春天的第一个迹象。回应：续写中 “我” 继续探索声音来源。 续写要点 · 第一段： 1. 情感线：紧张、勇敢交织，有对未知的害怕，也有想成为冒险家的勇气，还有对爷爷鼓励的回应。 1. 故事线：“我” 鼓起勇气向前，努力寻找声音来源，可能会描述周围环境增加紧张感。 主旨升华句 1. Courage is taking that first step into the unknown despite fear.（勇气是尽管害怕，仍向未知迈出第一步。） 2. With the encouragement of loved ones, we can overcome our fears and explore.（在亲人的鼓励下，我们可以克服恐惧去探索。） 3. Every step of exploration is a victory over our inner timidity.（探索的每一步都是对内心胆怯的一次胜利。） 4. Adventure begins when we choose to face our fears and move forward.（当我们选择面对恐惧并向前时，冒险就开始了。） 5. In the journey of discovery, courage and love make us stronger.（在探索之旅中，勇气和爱让我们更强大。） 写作示范 示范一 I stood up straighter and took a big step forward. The leaves under my feet seemed to be cheering me on. I peeked through the bushes and there, by a small stream, were several frogs. Their green skins glistened in the sunlight. They were the source of the strange sound. I turned back to Grandpa with a huge smile on my face. I felt like a real adventurer. 示范二 I stood up straighter and took a big step forward. My heart was pounding like a drum. I pushed aside some branches and saw a little pond. There were some tadpoles swimming around and making the cack - cack sound as they jumped. I realized that Grandpa was right. It was a sign of spring. I felt a sense of pride and couldn't wait to tell Grandpa what I found. 示范三 I stood up straighter and took a big step forward. As I got closer, the silence was broken by more cack - cack sounds. I took a deep breath and looked around. To my surprise, I found a group of baby ducks waddling near a small puddle. They were so cute. Their innocent eyes and fluffy bodies made me forget my fear. I knew this was an amazing discovery and I was glad I had the courage to come this far. 参考答案 I stood up straighter and took a big step forward. The air seemed to hold its breath with me. As I inched closer, I peeked through the underbrush. There, by a small stream, were several plump frogs sitting on rocks, their throats puffing in and out as they made that strange sound. I turned around, grinning from ear to ear, and ran back to Grandpa. "It's frogs, Grandpa! Spring is here!" I shouted, feeling like a true adventurer. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$