2025届高考英语读后续写专题亲情类--经济困境下的成长：理解母亲，珍惜所有 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was a baby, my parents gave me anything I wanted. I would play with a toy for a while, get bored, and ask my parents for a new one. Then my dad died when I was 2, and I got even more stuff as my mom, friends, and family gave me more and more stuff to try to make me feel better. My mom continued to treat me to whatever I wanted until I was seven and my world crashed.   That was when the real estate (房地产) market crashed. My mom had thought buying houses was a good idea as a way to invest her money to take care of us. After the crash, I went from the kid who got a fine iPod，and who had the coolest house, to almost having nowhere to stay.   Since then, when I would ask for a new toy or bike, or even to see a movie my mom would say “I’m sorry honey but we really can’t afford that right now ” But my mom had grown up in a family where money was never a problem, so this change was as big for her as it was for me. My constant requests for toys and video games deepened her concern about our financial situation. But I wasn’t used to hearing “no.” So, for a year or two, I kept asking for things whether I really needed them or not .   Then something happened that would change my way of thinking forever. My mom had been working really hard all year, just topay for the necessities, like our rents, and water and power bills. When she asked me what I wanted for my birthday I said that I wanted a new video gaming system. I didn’t know that it was expensive. All I knew was that my friends had them and that I wanted one, too. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 开头已给出。 Paragraph 1：On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what I asked for.                                                                                                                   Paragraph 2：From then on I wouldn’t ask for anything that I didn’t need.                                                                                                                                    文章大意 小时候，作者家境优渥，想要什么都能得到。但在作者两岁时父亲去世，七岁时房地产市场崩溃，家庭经济状况急转直下。妈妈从满足作者一切需求到无力支付。作者习惯了索取，仍不断索要东西，这让妈妈对财务状况更加担忧。在作者生日时，他期待得到想要的新电子游戏系统。 伏笔及续写回应 1. 伏笔：家庭经济崩溃，妈妈无法满足作者需求，但作者仍不断索要。回应：生日没收到游戏系统，让作者开始反思。 2. 伏笔：妈妈辛苦工作维持生计。回应：作者看到妈妈的辛苦，决定不再索要不必要的东西。 续写要点 · 第一段： 1. 情感线：作者从期待到失望、生气，妈妈则是无奈与愧疚。 1. 故事线：生日拆礼物，没得到期待的游戏系统，妈妈再次表示无力购买。 · 第二段： · 情感线：作者的理解、懂事和成长。 · 故事线：作者理解妈妈的艰辛，不再索要不必要的物品。 主旨升华句 1. True understanding often sprouts from the soil of hardship.（真正的理解往往从苦难的土壤中萌发。） 2. Adversity can be the best teacher of gratitude and contentment.（逆境是感恩和知足的最佳老师。） 3. Sometimes, disappointment paves the way for the growth of empathy.（有时，失望为同理心的成长铺平道路。） 4. Hard times can transform a demanding child into an understanding soul.（艰难时期能把一个贪求的孩子变成一个善解人意的人。） 5. Financial struggle can open the eyes of the young to the value of life's essentials.（经济困境能让年轻人看到生活必需品的价值。） 写作示范 1 Paragraph 1： On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what I asked for. I ripped the paper off each gift with eagerness, my heart pounding with anticipation. But as the last present was unwrapped, and there was no sign of the gaming system, my face fell. Tears welled up in my eyes as anger and disappointment surged within me. I turned to my mom, who was looking at me with a pained expression, her eyes filled with the weight of our situation. Paragraph 2： From then on I wouldn’t ask for anything that I didn’t need. I saw the sacrifices my mom made daily, working long hours just to keep a roof over our heads. I realized that my wants were insignificant compared to our survival. I became more aware of the value of things and the effort behind them. I started to cherish what we had, and every small gift or kind gesture became precious. 写作示范 2 Paragraph 1： On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what I asked for. Each present I opened with growing excitement, imagining the new video gaming system within one of them. But as I neared the end of the pile, disappointment began to set in. When the last present revealed something other than what I desired, I felt a sharp pang of sadness. I looked at my mom, and she explained once more how tight our finances were. Paragraph 2： From then on I wouldn’t ask for anything that I didn’t need. I remembered the tired look on my mom's face and how hard she worked. I started to think about the things we already had and how lucky we were. I understood that there were more important aspects of life than having the newest possessions. I learned to be grateful for the simple things and the love my mom provided. 参考范文 Paragraph 1：On my birthday, I started opening presents, believing that I would get what I asked for. As I opened the last gift box, I found nothing other than a pair of jeans (指出礼物的内容). My mom could tell how disappointed I was and she started crying. I hugged her harder than I had ever hugged anyone before (“我”由失望到理解母亲的情感转变). I realized how hard she was working and that she couldn’t afford to give me anything I didn’t need (呼应伏笔). Paragraph 2：From then on I wouldn’t ask for anything that I didn’t need.I learned the difference between what I wanted and what I needed (呼应伏笔). I learned to appreciate the toys or games I did have and took good care of them. when I wanted a new iPod (呼应伏笔), I had to work to buy it (以上描写“我”行为的转变). The feeling of having truly earned something was one of the best feelings in the world. I was also grateful to my mother, who had given me all she could give. (主旨升华) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$