2025届高考英语读后续写遇险类--野火无情,人间有爱:灾难中的互助与希望 讲义

2024-11-03
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阅读下面材料、根据其内容和给出段开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Aubrey, a mom of three, was breastfeeding her 10-month-old daughter in her Maui home last week when alarms started going off and she saw her entire neighborhood was covered in black smokes. Aubrey and her husband Alex rushed out of the home and into their car, escaping with their10-month-old daughter as well as their 6-year-old twin daughters, They didn't take any necessities.In fact, they had never thought the wildfires would ever get to where they lived, After all, they were very far. While Aubrey and her family eventually made it to safety, a relative's home, they later learned their own home was burned to the ground. They were left with no possessions, so Alex had to go to the neighborhood surrounding his relative's home searching for supplies for his baby daughter Blue. He went door-to-door, asking if anyone had a baby and if there was a bottle or a diaper(尿布) and some extra milk.One neighbor just had a baby so he gave Alex two bottles, And some neighbors gave Alex two diapers and some gave her three. Alex later said. “They were holding onto their own diapers too,which I understand." The disaster turned into a crisis for countless parents like Aubrey and Alex, who had to escape quickly and now needed basic supplies to keep their children alive and safe. The wildfires claimed the lives of over 100 people, while many more remained missing.Officials on Maui warned that their supplies were running out. Aubrey and Alex decided to travel to another island, Oahu, where they could stay in the home of Alex's brother's. There, they had more access to supplies like diapers and milk, Then they managed to contact with volunteers and left in a lifeboat for Oahu. Thinking those helpless people.they cried in pain.注意: 1.续写词数应为 150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 Now on Maui,situations were becoming worse. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Together with other volunteers, Alex and his brother collected large quantities of supplies on Oahu. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 奥布里在家给 10 个月大的女儿喂奶时,警报响起,附近浓烟滚滚。她和丈夫带着三个女儿匆忙逃离,之后发现自家房子被烧毁。他们一无所有,丈夫亚历克斯只能在亲戚家附近挨家寻找婴儿用品。这场野火造成重大伤亡,物资也快耗尽。奥布里和亚历克斯决定前往瓦胡岛投奔亚历克斯哥哥,他们联系志愿者后乘救生艇离开,为受灾民众感到痛心。 伏笔及回应 1. 伏笔:野火导致他们失去家园和物资,面临生存危机。回应:在续写中情况愈发糟糕,更多人需要帮助,他们努力获取物资。 2. 伏笔:他们决定前往瓦胡岛,那里物资更易获取。回应:在岛上和志愿者一起收集大量物资,准备帮助受灾者。 续写要点 · 第一段: 1. 情感线:人们的恐慌、无助,奥布里和亚历克斯对受灾者的担忧。 1. 故事线:火势蔓延,更多人失去家园,物资极度匮乏,急需外界援助。 · 第二段: · 情感线:亚历克斯和志愿者们的积极、善良,对帮助受灾者的坚定决心。 · 故事线:在瓦胡岛收集物资,准备送往毛伊岛救助受灾民众。 主旨升华句 1. In the face of disaster, human kindness shines like a lighthouse.(在灾难面前,人类的善良像灯塔一样闪耀。) 2. Crisis reveals the true nature of humanity, which is love and solidarity.(危机揭示了人性的本质,那就是爱与团结。) 3. When disaster strikes, every helping hand is a ray of hope.(当灾难来袭时,每一只援助之手都是一线希望。) 4. Even in the darkest times of disaster, acts of kindness can light up the world.(即使在灾难最黑暗的时刻,善举也能照亮世界。) 5. The power of unity in a disaster is stronger than the destruction of the flames.(灾难中团结的力量比火焰的破坏力更强大。) 写作示范 1 Now on Maui, situations were becoming worse. The wildfires continued to rage out of control, swallowing more houses and leaving more families homeless. People were huddled together in shelters, desperate for food, water, and basic necessities. The cries of children and the anguished expressions of parents filled the air. With supplies dwindling, the hope of survival seemed to be fading. Aubrey and Alex felt a deep sense of sorrow and helplessness as they watched their beloved island in such a state of despair. Together with other volunteers, Alex and his brother collected large quantities of supplies on Oahu. They worked tirelessly, going from store to store, gathering diapers, milk, canned food, and other essential items. The volunteers shared the same goal - to bring relief to the suffering people on Maui. Boxes of supplies piled up, a symbol of hope. They carefully loaded them onto boats, ready to make the journey back to Maui and offer a glimmer of light to those in the darkness. 写作示范 2 Now on Maui, situations were becoming worse. The wildfires showed no sign of abating. The death toll was rising, and the missing list was growing longer. Families were separated, and the remaining survivors were in a state of panic. The local infrastructure was severely damaged, and the distribution of the little remaining supplies was chaotic. Everywhere there was despair, and the future seemed extremely bleak. Aubrey and Alex's hearts were heavy with grief as they thought about their friends and neighbors still trapped in this nightmare. Together with other volunteers, Alex and his brother collected large quantities of supplies on Oahu. They organized donation drives and received an outpouring of support from the local community. People donated clothes, toys, and medical supplies in addition to the much - needed diapers and milk. Alex and his brother were deeply touched by this show of solidarity. With trucks filled with supplies, they prepared to set sail for Maui, determined to make a difference and bring some comfort to the people there. 参考答案 Now on Maui, situations were becoming worse. The fires were still spreading ferociously, consuming everything in their path. The shelters were overcrowded with people who had lost everything. The shortage of supplies was becoming more and more severe, and the air was filled with the smell of smoke and the sounds of people's moans. Every family had a tragic story, and the whole island seemed to be drowning in sorrow. Aubrey and Alex's hearts ached for their hometown and the people they had to leave behind. Together with other volunteers, Alex and his brother collected large quantities of supplies on Oahu. They set up collection points in various neighborhoods. People came with bags full of diapers, formula, and other necessities. Alex and his brother carefully sorted and packed the items. They also received generous donations from local businesses. With trucks loaded with supplies, they were ready to bring hope back to Maui, determined to help those in desperate need and make the island rise again from the ashes. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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