读后续写--拨出那通电话：从友谊破裂到重归于好的启示 讲义-云南省云南师大附中2024-2025学年高一上学期期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Why did she let out my secrets?” I thought regretfully. I'll always remember that day, when I was so surprised by all the strange looks everyone was giving me. Those thoughts will always stay with me. And I couldn’t believe I would lose the friendship of the person I trusted the most. Five years back, Sally was the new kid in class. I don’t know what it was, but something unique about her drew me to her. She was the most friendly person I knew. We started as classmates. But after a few months, I found we had a lot in common and that we got along well with each other. We were like best friends. So, I never expected her to hurt me in such a big way. I don’t know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. She made the matter bigger than it was, adding her own description of it and telling everyone at school. It hurt me seriously. After she gave away my secrets, everyone at school started laughing at me, looking at me and giggling (咯咯地笑) whenever I passed. After this terrible situation, I changed schools. Sally called me many times, but I didn’t answer. My heart was broken. I tried hard to heal from the scars (伤痕) she left on my heart: I started a new life. After five years, my life went back to the way it was, with new friends. But one day, I met Anna at the market. She was my classmate from 3rd grade. She told me that Sally wasn’t the one who brought my secrets to light. Mary was. Mary was our school’s big mouth who always wanted to stick her nose into other people’s business. I was at a loss. I wished I could have asked Sally about this. I wished I could go back in time and fix my mistakes. I was struggling. Maybe I should give Sally a call.   Paragraph 1: A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________   Paragraph 2: I have learned a lesson from the experience. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________   故事梗概 五年前，作者“我”和班上新来的Sally同学成为了好朋友。Sally的友好和独特吸引了“我”。然而，没想到当“我”把自己的秘密告诉Sally后，她却把秘密传遍了全班，导致我被嘲笑，心痛不已，最终选择转学，重建生活。尽管Sally多次给“我”打过电话，“我”都没有理她。 五年后，“我”偶遇老同学Anna，她告诉“我”其实当年是Mary泄露了“我”的秘密。“我”很后悔当年没有向Sally求证。或许“我”该给Sally打个电话，问个清楚… 主要人物：作者“我”、Sally 次要人物：Anna、Mary 、other classmates 叙事视角：第一人称 主题分类： 朋友关系（friendship） 同学关系 (classmate relationships) 误解与原谅 (misunderstanding and forgiveness)   续写思路建议 续写部分第一段，应该主要写“我”鼓起勇气给Sally打去电话后的故事细节。当然，从选取积极主题（误解与原谅）的角度出发，我们建议考生创设类似这样的内容：Sally接了电话。这通电话帮助“我”和Sally解除了多年的误会，重新建立了联系和友谊。 续写的第二段，应该主要写“我”从这次经历中具体获得了什么样的感悟和反思。本着“写作主题指向性明确”（write with purpose）的原则，这些反思应该尽量贴近同学朋友之间的误解与原谅这个主题。 参考范文 Paragraph 1: A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. My heart pounded as I waited for her to answer. When she finally picked up, there was a moment of heavy silence. “Hello?” she whispered. “Sally, it’s me,” I said, trembling. I heard her gasp, and then she said, “I’ve been waiting for this call for years.” Her words struck me deeply, filling me with relief and regret. I shared what Anna had revealed and how foolish I felt for blaming her for letting out my secret. During the conversation, we promised to meet and try to rebuild our friendship. (90 words)   Paragraph 2: I have learned a lesson from the experience. Misunderstandings can break even the strongest bonds if left unresolved. If only I had given Sally the chance to explain, we might have avoided years of pain. As we talked, I felt the weight of my anger and sadness start to lift. The truth was that we both suffered from a mistake that could have been prevented by communication. This experience taught me that forgiveness and understanding are essential, not just for others but for my own peace of mind.  (80 words)  写作细节分析 Paragraph 1: A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. My heart pounded as I waited for her to answer.（恰当的情绪描写：有些紧张）When she finally picked up, there was a moment of heavy silence.（恰当的内容创设：5年没联络了，先有片刻沉默） “Hello?” she whispered. “Sally, it’s me,” I said, trembling. I heard her gasp, and then she said, “I’ve been waiting for this call for years.”（和原文内容呼应：“Sally called me many times, but I didn’t answer”）Her words struck me deeply, filling me with relief and regret.（合理的情绪描写：释然和后悔交织）I shared what Anna had revealed and how foolish I felt for blaming her for letting out my secret. （原文内容呼应，Anna是作者得知错怪Sally的关键人物，let out my secret与原文开篇的提问相呼应）During the conversation, we promised to meet and try to rebuild our friendship.（积极的故事结局引导：误会解除，重建友谊）                                    Paragraph 2: I have learned a lesson from the experience. Misunderstandings can break even the strongest bonds if left unresolved.（和原文概念互动：my heart was broken）If only I had given Sally the chance to explain, we might have avoided years of pain. (恰当的语言运用：虚拟语气) As we talked, I felt the weight of my anger and sadness start to lift. The truth was that we both suffered from a mistake that could have been prevented by communication.（说出问题的根源：这一切都是缺乏沟通交流导致的）This experience taught me that forgiveness and understanding are essential, not just for others but for my own peace of mind.（把主题归到误解与原谅上，起到了升华的作用）                                   词汇和表达积累 pound v. 心脏狂跳 gasp v. 倒吸一口气 n. 喘息 relief n. 释然 reveal v. 揭示、透露 rebuild  v. 重建(关系) bond n. 纽带 unresolved adj. 未解决的 forgiveness n. 原谅、宽恕 essential adj. 必不可少的 写作示范一 Paragraph 1: A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. My heart raced as I pressed the call button. The moment I heard Sally's hello, my throat tightened. I managed to say, "Sally, it's me." There was a brief pause, and then I quickly told her what Anna had revealed. Sally let out a sigh of relief. She said she had always hoped I would find out the truth. We talked for a long time, reminiscing about our good times and how much we had both suffered from the misunderstanding. We agreed to meet up and start rebuilding our friendship. Paragraph 2: I have learned a lesson from the experience. This experience has engraved a deep mark in my heart. It has made me understand that we should never be too hasty in blaming others. In our lives, misinformation can easily cloud our judgment. We need to be more patient and search for the real story. A friendship as precious as mine and Sally's should not be sacrificed because of a simple misunderstanding. I will be more cautious and value the truth more highly in the future, and hold onto the people I care about with an open and understanding heart. 写作示范二 Paragraph 1: A few days later, I gathered the courage to pick up the phone. With a mix of nervousness and hope, I dialed Sally's number. As the connection was made, I felt a lump in my throat. I started speaking, my voice quivering slightly, "Sally, I'm sorry. I made a huge mistake." I told her about my encounter with Anna and how wrong I had been. Sally's response was filled with warmth. She said she had always known our friendship was stronger than that false accusation. We both apologized for the years we had lost, and I could feel the rift between us starting to mend. Paragraph 2: I have learned a lesson from the experience. This incident has been a powerful lesson for me. It has shown me the fragility of human relationships and the power of a single misunderstanding. I now know that we should always give our friends the benefit of the doubt and not let unfounded rumors break the beautiful bonds we share. It has taught me to be more discerning, to question what I hear, and to value the truth. I will never again allow something like this to damage a friendship that means so much to me, and I will always be ready to repair any cracks that may appear with honesty and love. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$