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应用文写作
假定你是高二学生李华,最近在学习生活中遇到一些困难,请你给Teens英文报的心理专栏编辑John写一封信。内容如下:
1.寻求帮助;
2.求助内容;
3.期望回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段:表明写信目的(寻求帮助)
· 以礼貌的方式开场,介绍自己是高二学生,点明当前在学习和生活中遭遇困难,希望从编辑处获得援助。例如:“Dear John, I'm Li Hua, a senior two student. I'm writing to you as I'm currently facing several difficulties in both my study and daily life, and I'm hoping you can offer some help.”
第二段:详细阐述求助内容
· 学习方面:课程难度大幅提升,像数学和化学,复杂的公式和概念让自己理解吃力。“In terms of study, the difficulty of the courses has increased significantly. For instance, in math and chemistry, the complex formulas and concepts are really hard for me to understand. I often spend a lot of time on them but still can't fully grasp.”
· 生活方面:与室友相处出现问题,作息习惯不同导致矛盾,影响休息和情绪。“In my life, I'm having trouble getting along with my roommate. Our different daily schedules have caused conflicts, which have affected my rest and mood.”
第三段:表达期望得到回复
· 表达迫切期待编辑能给予一些针对性建议,帮助自己摆脱困境。“I'm really looking forward to your reply. I hope you can give me some targeted suggestions to help me get out of these troubles.”
语言积累(10 句英文)
1. I'm currently encountering numerous hurdles in my academic journey.(我目前在学业道路上遇到许多障碍。)
2. The academic pressure has reached an almost unbearable level.(学业压力已经达到几乎无法承受的程度。)
3. I'm struggling to cope with the intense workload at school.(我在努力应对学校繁重的课业。)
4. Life seems to be throwing one challenge after another at me lately.(最近生活似乎不断地向我抛出挑战。)
5. The conflicts in my life are starting to take a toll on my mental state.(生活中的矛盾开始对我的精神状态产生负面影响。)
6. I'm finding it increasingly difficult to adapt to the new challenges in study.(我发现越来越难以适应学习中的新挑战。)
7. The problems in my life are interfering with my ability to focus on study.(生活中的问题干扰了我专注学习的能力。)
8. I'm desperate for some expert advice to navigate through these difficulties.(我迫切需要一些专家建议来度过这些难关。)
9. I'm hoping you can shed some light on how to solve these issues.(我希望你能对如何解决这些问题提供一些启示。)
10. Your professional opinion would be a great comfort to me during this tough time.(在这个艰难时期,你的专业意见对我来说将是极大的安慰。)
写作示范1
Dear John,
I'm Li Hua, a senior two student. I'm writing to you because I'm really in a tough situation and need your help.
First, in my study, the increasing difficulty of the courses is driving me crazy. Subjects like physics and math have become extremely challenging. I often feel lost during class and have a hard time catching up with the teacher's pace. What's more, there's so much homework that I barely have time to review. In my life, I'm having trouble getting along with some classmates. We have different personalities and often have conflicts, which makes me feel stressed and affects my mood for study.
I'm looking forward to your reply and hoping you can give me some useful advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear John,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing this letter to ask for your help as I'm facing several difficulties that are really bothering me.
In my study, the amount of knowledge to learn has multiplied. I'm struggling with English grammar and vocabulary. I study hard, but the results in exams are not satisfactory. Also, I have a hard time concentrating during long study hours. In life, the busy study schedule has made it hard for me to exercise regularly. I'm worried about my health. Moreover, I'm feeling a bit isolated as I don't have much time to communicate with my old friends.
I sincerely hope you can reply soon and offer me some valuable suggestions to solve these problems.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear John,
I'm Li Hua, a senior two student. I'm writing to you in the hope that you can assist me with the issues I'm currently having.
Regarding my studies, the new learning methods required for some subjects are difficult for me to adapt to. For example, in chemistry, the need to understand complex reaction mechanisms and do various types of problem - solving has me stumped. In addition, the large number of tests makes me very nervous. In my daily life, I'm having difficulty sleeping well because of the stress. I'm also having problems with time management between schoolwork and extracurricular activities.
I'm eagerly looking forward to your response and some practical advice from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible Version:
Dear John,
I’m Li Hua. Entering the second year of studying in the high school, I find it much more difficult to manage my life well, so I’m exceedingly anticipating your advice about the difficulties I encountered.
First and foremost, an increasing amount of homework has led to a lack of time. I sought but failed to find a proper way to arrange my schedule. I’ve been struggling with maintaining a balance between my studies and extracurricular activities. The pressure to perform well academically is mounting, and I find myself often sacrificing my personal interests and hobbies. Secondly, as Mathematics and Physics are getting more difficult, I sometimes find myself unable to keep pace with my teachers’ teaching in class. It makes me feel very anxious. Last but not least, the high expectation my parents have on me is making me feel more stressed.
Would you like to give me some suggestions about how I could tackle these problems? I’m eagerly looking forward to your reply.
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