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Unit 1 Reading for Writing 建议信学案
一、建议信结构 Structure
1. Greeting问候
2. Body Part正文
(1) 写信目的(+安抚情绪)
(2) 建议+理由
(3) 希望采纳建议+表示谢意+盼望回复
3.Closing Remarks结束语
二、好句型 Sentence Patterns
1. 第一部分:说明写信目的
(1) I have learned that you have some trouble in... after reading your letter and I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
看完你的信之后,我已了解到你在……有困难,因此我写信给你提一些建议。
(2) I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. My advice is as follows
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
(3) You have asked me for my advice concerning/about/on how to learn Chinese , and I will try to give you some tips here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
(4) I'm sorry to know that you're under intense pressure as the exam is drawing near. Actually, everyone will feel anxious when faced with crucial exams. Don't worry. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.
我很遗憾地获悉,随着考试的临近,你正承受着巨大的压力。 事实上,当面对重要的考试时,每个人都会感到焦虑。别担心,也许以下的建议会对你有帮助。
(5) Hearing that you are going to university in Beijing, I'd like to express my warmest welcome to you. Here are some suggestions about choosing university and preparations for it.
听说你打算来北京上大学,我向你表示最热烈的欢迎。 这里有一些关于选择大学及其准备工作的建议。
(6) As for how to do sth, I'd like to offer you some practical advice.至于要如何做...,我来给你一点实用的建议。
2. 第二部分:提出建议(写详细,一般3条左右)
(1) Above all, you'd better...,which can not only...,but also... Besides, it would be a good idea to do sth as well as do sth. More importantly, I would like to suggest that you should...
首先,你最好……,这不仅可以……还可以……。另外,做……和……也不错。 更重要的是,我建议你应该……
(2) If I were you, I would... 我要是你, 我就...
(3) It's highly recommended that ... 我极力推荐...(从句谓语用should +动词原形)
(4) It might be a good idea to do sth. 做某事会是个好主意。
(5) In my opinion, it would be a wise choice if you...依我看,...会是一个明智的选择。
(6) You'd better spare some time to exercise regularly, which will definitely help you release stress and build up your body.(用非限制性定语从句说明建议理由,建议和理由合为一个复杂句)
你最好抽出一些时间定期锻炼,这肯定会帮助你释放压力,强健你的身体。
(7) My first tip is to bury yourself in your studies. Therefore, there will be less spare time available for you to feel homesick.
我的第一个建议是专心学习。这样,你就没有太多的时间想家。
(8) Why not take part in some afterclass activities? They will give you a chance to relax yourself.
为什么不参加一些课外活动呢?它们将给你一个放松自己的机会。
3. 第三部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复(一句带过)
(1) I sincerely hope these suggestions will be helpful/of use to you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚希望这些建议会对你有用。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。
(2) I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
(3) I believe that you will take my suggestions in consideration. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
我相信你会考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。
(4) I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(5) I will be more than glad if you will take my suggestions into consideration. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.
如果你能考虑我的建议我会非常高兴。 如果你有任何问题,请随时问我。
3、 建议信模板 Templates
模板1
Dear ________(收信人),
You have asked me for my advice on/about/concerning/with regard to ________(事由),and I will try to make some suggestions here.
First, it is important to ________(第1条建议). ________(第1条建议的理由). Additionally/In addiction/What’s more/Besides,If I were you, I would... ________(第2条建议). ________(第2条建议的理由).Besides, it should be a good idea to ________(第3条建议).I'm sure that ________(第3条建议的理由).
I hope you will find these proposals useful. Good luck with your ________(祝愿).
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板2
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议).
First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)As to(至于) __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
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