11.必修第二册Unit 2 Be sporty, be healthy(写建议信)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 2 Be sporty, be healthy 单元写作深度指导 写关于锻炼身体的建议信 1.(教材原句)What would you do in my position? 你处在我的位置会怎么做? The principal took the position that the students should have enough exercise. 那位校长认为学生应该进行足够的锻炼。 【写作借鉴】 be in position　就位;在适当的位置 out of position 在不适当的位置,不合适的 take up a position 担任工作 take the position that... 认为……,主张…… 2.(教材原句)Read the email below and make a list of the reasons why Leo is unwilling to begin working out regularly.阅读下面的电子邮件,并列出Leo不愿意开始定期进行锻炼的原因。 (1)若关系词在从句中作状语,要用why或for which引导定语从句。 (2)若关系词在从句中作主语、宾语,要用which或that引导定语从句,其中作宾语时关系词常可省略。 (3)reason构成的常见搭配: a/the reason for (doing) sth. (做)某事的原因 a/the reason to do sth. 做某事的原因 a/the reason why/for which...is that...……的原因是…… ▲(1)That/This/It is why...“那/这就是……的原因”,why从句表示结果;That/This/It is because...“那/这是因为……”,because从句表示原因。 (2)主语为名词reason时,表语从句中的连接词要用that,而不用why或because。 ▲(应用文之申请信)我之所以是志愿者的最佳人选是因为我英语说得很流利。 The reason why I’m the best person to be a volunteer is that I speak English fluently.  1.题型特点 提供身体锻炼方面的建议是英语书面表达中的常见话题,主要涉及锻炼身体的益处、 方法和注意事项。体裁可以是应用文、议论文等。 2.结构安排 建议信常用“三段式”写法: 第一段:根据对方遇到的难题,写明写信目的; 第二段:主体段,详细分析对方遇到的问题,提出合理的建议; 第三段:总结全文,提出希望,即希望对方能采纳自己的建议。 3.突破策略 (1)在写这类书面表达时,应注意以下几个方面: ①指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题; ②这些问题会导致的后果; ③在今后的生活中如何改善生活方式,进行规律锻炼,提升健康水平。 (2)注意正确使用时态。通常在提到对方遇到的问题时用一般过去时;在分析对方问题和提出建议时用一般现在时;在表达祝愿、希望对方接受建议时用一般将来时。 (3)此外,还应注意语气特点。建议信要给出写信的原因、 建议的内容、 提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,所以语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。 【语料积累】 1.教材词汇 (1)tend　　　　　vi.往往会;趋向vt.照看 (2)disease n.病,疾病 (3)moreover adv.此外,而且 (4)reduce vt. 减少,缩小 (5)routine n. 常规,惯例adj. 常规的,例行的;乏味的 (6)muscle n. 肌肉,肌 (7)jogging n. 慢跑锻炼 (8)stretch vt. & vi. 伸展,舒展;拉长;伸出;(使) 延伸 (9)movement n. 活动,转动;移动;运动 (10)energy n. 能,能量;精力;能源 (11)injury n. 伤害,损伤 (12)prevent vt. 阻止,阻碍 (13)equipment n. 设备;配备,装备 (14)champion n. 冠军,第一名 (15)satisfaction n.满意;满足,达到 (16)inspiration n.灵感;鼓舞人心的人(或事物) 2.常用词块 (1)work out/take exercise regularly 定期锻炼 (2)as a matter of routine 例行公事 (3)physical exercise 身体锻炼 (4)full of energy 精力充沛 (5)build up one’s body 强身健体 (6)develop a habit of 养成……的习惯 (7)in good health 身体状况良好 (8)contribute to 促进,有利于 (9)improve one’s health 增进某人的健康 (10)stay in shape 保持体形 (11)outdoor activities 户外活动 (12)keep healthy/fit 保持健康 (13)do wonders 创造奇迹,产生神奇作用 (14)over the long term 长期 (15)stick with 持续,坚持 (16)make up for 弥补,补偿 3.话题句式 (1)开篇常用句型: ①I’m sorry to hear that you are suffering from bad health.听说你身体不好,我很难过。 ②I’m writing to offer you my advice/tips/suggestions on how to keep healthy. 我写信是想给你提供关于如何保持健康的建议。 ③Would you be kind enough to give me some advice/tips/suggestions on how to build up my body? 你能给我一些关于如何强身健体的建议吗? (2)主体部分常用句型: ①I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。 ②If I were you, I would try tai chi. 如果我是你,我会尝试一下太极。 ③It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise. 找一个可以和你一块锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。 ④How about playing basketball in your free time? 在你空闲的时候打篮球怎么样? (3)结尾常用句型: ①I hope my suggestion can be of help to you. 希望我的建议对你有帮助。 ②I think you can make it if you follow the above advice. 如果你听从以上建议,我认为你会成功的。 (2024·东莞高一检测)假定你是李华,请你给正在生病的朋友交换生Tom写一封建议信,说明锻炼的重要性和好处,鼓励他积极锻炼身体,从而为更好地学习打下基础。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.你一直专心致志地学习,连运动的时间都没有。 You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.  2.在我看来,缺乏锻炼确实对你的健康有害。 From my perspective, lacking exercises is really harmful to your health.  3.我觉得如果你能经常锻炼,对你的健康是有好处的。 I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.  4.运动既有助于你的身体健康,又能使你精神焕发。 Exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.  5.如果你有一个强壮的身体,你可以继续学习而不会感觉不好或生病。 If you have a strong body, you can keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill.  Step 3:衔接成篇 Dear Tom, I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. Recently you have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise, which from my perspective is really harmful to your health.Thus, I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.In fact, exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill. In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study.Hope my suggestions will be of some help to you. 　　Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 1．随着生活水平的提高，人们越来越关注健康问题。健康专家提出了保持健康的几点建议： 建议 注意事项 饮食 多吃水果和蔬菜，因为其中富含维生素，脂肪含量低； 不要吃脂肪含量高的食物；吃甜点要适量；不多喝咖啡。 锻炼 经常性的锻炼保持身材；每天跑步强壮心脏；饭后不宜立即运动；运动完不能马上吃饭，也不能大量饮水。 生活习惯 …… 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter向你咨询，作为学业繁忙的高中生应该如何保持健康的体质。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括以下几个方面： (1)健康饮食  (2)规律的体育锻炼  (3)充足的睡眠  (4)适当的课外活动 注意：1.书数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，目前冬天到来，流感肆虐，你的朋友Lily写信向你询问如何防流感、保持健康。请你给她发一封邮件提些建议。 内容要点如下： 1. 保证充足睡眠，至少八小时。 2. 注意合理饮食，多吃水果蔬菜。 3. 坚持体育锻炼，多参加体育活动。 注意：词数80左右;可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，开头、结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Lily, Glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to prevent flu and keep healthy. I am happy to give you some suggestions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Hua 4．假定你是李华，英国笔友David写邮件给你说他想锻炼强身，但又因为种种原因无法坚持。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)分析可能的原因； (2)提出相应的建议。 注意：①写作词数应为80个左右； ②请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua 5．假定你是李华，你的美国网友David打算在周末进行身体锻炼，但是不知道去哪里锻炼更好，是公园还是健身房。请你针对他的咨询、回复一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.发邮件的目的； 2.明确你的观点和理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, Glad to receive your email. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．假定你是李华，你班交换生Felix因进行体育锻炼时扭伤左脚而无法走路。请你就此事给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.主动提供帮助； 3.提出关于锻炼的建议。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Be sporty, be healthy 单元写作深度指导 写关于锻炼身体的建议信 1.(教材原句)What would you do in my position? 你处在我的位置会怎么做? The principal took the position that the students should have enough exercise. 那位校长认为学生应该进行足够的锻炼。 【写作借鉴】 be in position　就位;在适当的位置 out of position 在不适当的位置,不合适的 take up a position 担任工作 take the position that... 认为……,主张…… 2.(教材原句)Read the email below and make a list of the reasons why Leo is unwilling to begin working out regularly.阅读下面的电子邮件,并列出Leo不愿意开始定期进行锻炼的原因。 (1)若关系词在从句中作状语,要用why或for which引导定语从句。 (2)若关系词在从句中作主语、宾语,要用which或that引导定语从句,其中作宾语时关系词常可省略。 (3)reason构成的常见搭配: a/the reason for (doing) sth. (做)某事的原因 a/the reason to do sth. 做某事的原因 a/the reason why/for which...is that...……的原因是…… ▲(1)That/This/It is why...“那/这就是……的原因”,why从句表示结果;That/This/It is because...“那/这是因为……”,because从句表示原因。 (2)主语为名词reason时,表语从句中的连接词要用that,而不用why或because。 ▲(应用文之申请信)我之所以是志愿者的最佳人选是因为我英语说得很流利。 The reason why I’m the best person to be a volunteer is that I speak English fluently.  1.题型特点 提供身体锻炼方面的建议是英语书面表达中的常见话题,主要涉及锻炼身体的益处、 方法和注意事项。体裁可以是应用文、议论文等。 2.结构安排 建议信常用“三段式”写法: 第一段:根据对方遇到的难题,写明写信目的; 第二段:主体段,详细分析对方遇到的问题,提出合理的建议; 第三段:总结全文,提出希望,即希望对方能采纳自己的建议。 3.突破策略 (1)在写这类书面表达时,应注意以下几个方面: ①指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题; ②这些问题会导致的后果; ③在今后的生活中如何改善生活方式,进行规律锻炼,提升健康水平。 (2)注意正确使用时态。通常在提到对方遇到的问题时用一般过去时;在分析对方问题和提出建议时用一般现在时;在表达祝愿、希望对方接受建议时用一般将来时。 (3)此外,还应注意语气特点。建议信要给出写信的原因、 建议的内容、 提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,所以语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。 【语料积累】 1.教材词汇 (1)tend　　　　　vi.往往会;趋向vt.照看 (2)disease n.病,疾病 (3)moreover adv.此外,而且 (4)reduce vt. 减少,缩小 (5)routine n. 常规,惯例adj. 常规的,例行的;乏味的 (6)muscle n. 肌肉,肌 (7)jogging n. 慢跑锻炼 (8)stretch vt. & vi. 伸展,舒展;拉长;伸出;(使) 延伸 (9)movement n. 活动,转动;移动;运动 (10)energy n. 能,能量;精力;能源 (11)injury n. 伤害,损伤 (12)prevent vt. 阻止,阻碍 (13)equipment n. 设备;配备,装备 (14)champion n. 冠军,第一名 (15)satisfaction n.满意;满足,达到 (16)inspiration n.灵感;鼓舞人心的人(或事物) 2.常用词块 (1)work out/take exercise regularly 定期锻炼 (2)as a matter of routine 例行公事 (3)physical exercise 身体锻炼 (4)full of energy 精力充沛 (5)build up one’s body 强身健体 (6)develop a habit of 养成……的习惯 (7)in good health 身体状况良好 (8)contribute to 促进,有利于 (9)improve one’s health 增进某人的健康 (10)stay in shape 保持体形 (11)outdoor activities 户外活动 (12)keep healthy/fit 保持健康 (13)do wonders 创造奇迹,产生神奇作用 (14)over the long term 长期 (15)stick with 持续,坚持 (16)make up for 弥补,补偿 3.话题句式 (1)开篇常用句型: ①I’m sorry to hear that you are suffering from bad health.听说你身体不好,我很难过。 ②I’m writing to offer you my advice/tips/suggestions on how to keep healthy. 我写信是想给你提供关于如何保持健康的建议。 ③Would you be kind enough to give me some advice/tips/suggestions on how to build up my body? 你能给我一些关于如何强身健体的建议吗? (2)主体部分常用句型: ①I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。 ②If I were you, I would try tai chi. 如果我是你,我会尝试一下太极。 ③It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise. 找一个可以和你一块锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。 ④How about playing basketball in your free time? 在你空闲的时候打篮球怎么样? (3)结尾常用句型: ①I hope my suggestion can be of help to you. 希望我的建议对你有帮助。 ②I think you can make it if you follow the above advice. 如果你听从以上建议,我认为你会成功的。 (2024·东莞高一检测)假定你是李华,请你给正在生病的朋友交换生Tom写一封建议信,说明锻炼的重要性和好处,鼓励他积极锻炼身体,从而为更好地学习打下基础。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.你一直专心致志地学习,连运动的时间都没有。 You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.  2.在我看来,缺乏锻炼确实对你的健康有害。 From my perspective, lacking exercises is really harmful to your health.  3.我觉得如果你能经常锻炼,对你的健康是有好处的。 I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.  4.运动既有助于你的身体健康,又能使你精神焕发。 Exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.  5.如果你有一个强壮的身体,你可以继续学习而不会感觉不好或生病。 If you have a strong body, you can keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill.  Step 3:衔接成篇 Dear Tom, I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. Recently you have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise, which from my perspective is really harmful to your health.Thus, I feel it would be beneficial to your health if you could work out on a regular basis.In fact, exercise can both contribute to your physical health and refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or falling ill. In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study.Hope my suggestions will be of some help to you. 　　Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 1．随着生活水平的提高，人们越来越关注健康问题。健康专家提出了保持健康的几点建议： 建议 注意事项 饮食 多吃水果和蔬菜，因为其中富含维生素，脂肪含量低； 不要吃脂肪含量高的食物；吃甜点要适量；不多喝咖啡。 锻炼 经常性的锻炼保持身材；每天跑步强壮心脏；饭后不宜立即运动；运动完不能马上吃饭，也不能大量饮水。 生活习惯 …… 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter向你咨询，作为学业繁忙的高中生应该如何保持健康的体质。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括以下几个方面： (1)健康饮食  (2)规律的体育锻炼  (3)充足的睡眠  (4)适当的课外活动 注意：1.书数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，目前冬天到来，流感肆虐，你的朋友Lily写信向你询问如何防流感、保持健康。请你给她发一封邮件提些建议。 内容要点如下： 1. 保证充足睡眠，至少八小时。 2. 注意合理饮食，多吃水果蔬菜。 3. 坚持体育锻炼，多参加体育活动。 注意：词数80左右;可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，开头、结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Lily, Glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to prevent flu and keep healthy. I am happy to give you some suggestions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Hua 4．假定你是李华，英国笔友David写邮件给你说他想锻炼强身，但又因为种种原因无法坚持。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)分析可能的原因； (2)提出相应的建议。 注意：①写作词数应为80个左右； ②请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua 5．假定你是李华，你的美国网友David打算在周末进行身体锻炼，但是不知道去哪里锻炼更好，是公园还是健身房。请你针对他的咨询、回复一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.发邮件的目的； 2.明确你的观点和理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, Glad to receive your email. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．假定你是李华，你班交换生Felix因进行体育锻炼时扭伤左脚而无法走路。请你就此事给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表示安慰； 2.主动提供帮助； 3.提出关于锻炼的建议。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． With the improvement of people’s living standards, people are paying more attention to health problems. Firstly, we should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in vitamins and low in fat. As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat. Secondly, exercise is important. Regular exercise can help us keep our figures. People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t. Finally, we should sleep about eight hours every day, and never work too hard. Overwork and little sleep will cause us to fall ill. What’s more, keep happy every day. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生介绍健康专家提出的保持健康的几点建议。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 提高：improvement→enhancement 关注：pay attention to→focus on 重要的：important→significant 导致：cause→lead to 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Overwork and little sleep will cause us to fall ill. 拓展句：It is overwork and little sleep that will cause us to fall ill. 【高分句型1】Firstly, we should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in vitamins and low in fat.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than those who don’t.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) 2．Dear Peter, Hearing from you, I am writing to give you some tips on how to keep healthy. In my opinion, we should have a balanced diet to build up our strength. Only in this way can we have enough energy. We had better take physical exercise regularly because not only does exercise improve our health but also ensures our satisfying learning efficiency. Besides, we should have enough sleep, which is a healthy lifestyle. In addition, participating in all sorts of after-class activities will benefit us a lot. Hope the suggestions above can be helpful to you. Sincerely, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就“学业繁忙的高中生应该如何保持健康体质”给Peter写一封建议信。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累： 建议：tip→suggestion/proposal/recommendation 在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned/as far as I can see 定期地：regularly→on a regular basis 此外，而且：in addition→additionally/what’s more/furthermore 2.句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：In my opinion, we should have a balanced diet to build up our strength. 拓展句：In my opinion, we should have a diet which is balanced to build up our strength. 【高分句型1】Besides, we should have enough sleep, which is a healthy lifestyle. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】We had better take physical exercise regularly because not only does exercise improve our health but also ensures our satisfying learning efficiency. (运用了because引导原因状语从句和部分倒装) 3．Dear Lily, Glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to prevent flu and keep healthy. I am happy to give you some suggestions. As we know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast, we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruit, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. It is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly and it will be helpful to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求针对朋友提出的如何预防流感的问题写封建议信。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 重要性：importance→significance 需要：be in need of→require 此外：in addition → what’s more 有益的：helpful→beneficial 2.句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly and it will be helpful to your health. 拓展句：In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly,which will be helpful to your health. 【高分句型1】As we know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. （运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Since we grow very fast, we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruit, fish, meat and so on.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句） 4．Dear David, Glad you want to exercise. I also believe it will benefit our health.          You said you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym. Also, you can’t fit exercise into your busy schedule. My advice is that you try some aerobic activities, like jogging and cycling, which are economical in cost. If possible, you might just as well try to take stairs up to your flat every day. This doesn’t involve extra time and plans. All in all, you’d better find some easy and enjoyable ways to exercise. I am sure you will stick with them. Yours, Lihua 【写作分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给想锻炼强身但又因为种种原因无法坚持的笔友David写信，分析出现这种情况的原因，并提出相应的建议。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 对……有好处：benefit→be beneficial to 建议：advice→suggestion 总之：all in all→in a word 省钱的：economical in cost→money-saving 2.句型拓展 同义句转换 原句：You said you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym. 拓展句：What you said in your last e-mail is that you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym. 【高分句型1】You said you can’t afford to sign up for classes in the gym.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】My advice is that you try some aerobic activities, like jogging and cycling, which are economical in cost. （运用了that引导的表语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 5．Dear David, Glad to receive your email. From your letter I have learned your confusion about where to exercise. I am writing to give you my advice. The first choice is the park.The park is a perfect place to exercise. Firstly,parks provide a natural and open environment for exercise. You can do many outdoor activities,such as jogging, cycling or some simple stretches. Besides, the fresh air and beautiful scenery can help to clear your mind and improve your mood. However,if you enjoy indoor activities,a gym may be a better choice. A gym can provide a more structured environment with machines,weights,and classes for a more targeted workout. In conclusion,no matter where you decide to exercise, remember to find a workout you enjoy and stick with it. Looking forward to hearing about how your weekend workout goes! 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给David回复一封电子邮件，给他一些关于周末去哪里健身更好的建议。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 困惑：confusion→puzzle 建议：advice→suggestion 此外：besides → what’s more 总之：in conclusion→ in short/in all/finally 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The first choice is the park.The park is a perfect place to exercise. 拓展句：The first choice is the park which is a perfect place to exercise. 【高分句型1】However,if you enjoy indoor activities,a gym may be a better choice.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 【高分句型2】In conclusion,no matter where you decide to exercise, remember to find a workout you enjoy and stick with it.（运用了no matter where引导的让步状语从句和省略了关系代词which/that的定语从句） 6．Dear Felix, I’m terribly sorry to hear that your left ankle was so badly twisted during your workout yesterday that you couldn’t even walk. But don’t worry about missing classes during the next few days. Every morning I’ll go and pick you up at about 7:00. Then I’ll take you to school by e-bike. When school is over, I’ll send you back again. To prevent such accidents from happening again, you can never be too careful when you’re working out. Additionally, do keep in mind that you must always do warm-up exercises before workout. That way you can greatly reduce the possibilities of getting hurt. I hope that you’ll soon get well again! Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Felix写一封邮件，对于他在体育锻炼时扭伤左脚而无法走路表示安慰，并提供帮助和关于锻炼的建议。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 阻止：prevent→stop 锻炼：work out→exercise 此外：additionally→in addition 记住：keep in mind→remember 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To prevent such accidents from happening again, you can never be too careful when you're working out. 拓展句： You can never be too careful when you’re working out so that such accidents won’t happen again. 【高分句型1】I’m terribly sorry to hear that your left ankle was so badly twisted during your workout yesterday that you couldn’t even walk.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和so…that引导的结果状语从句） 【高分句型2】Additionally, do keep in mind that you must always do warm-up exercises before workout.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$