09.必修第二册Unit 1 Lights, camera, action!(记影评)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 1 Lights, camera, action! 单元写作深度指导 写影评 1.(教材原句)The Prince has given up hope of a cure but his wife, Elizabeth, takes him to see Lionel Logue, an Australian speech doctor living in London.亲王已经放弃了治疗的希望,但他的妻子伊丽莎白带他去见了莱昂内尔·洛格,这是一位澳大利亚语言治疗师,当时住在伦敦。 【写作借鉴】 a cure for sth.　医治某种病的疗法 cure sb.of sth. 治愈某人的病;改掉某人的坏习惯 ▲ 常见的“动词+sb.+of+sth.”的结构还有: ①remind sb.of sth.　　　提醒某人某事 ②warn sb.of sth. 警告某人某事 ③rob sb.of sth. 抢劫某人某物 ④inform sb.of sth. 通知某人某事 ⑤cheat sb.of sth. 欺骗某人某事 ⑥suspect sb.of sth. 怀疑某人某事 2.(教材原句) The film looks like a fairly typical historical film without fancy special effects, and it is made enjoyable by the performances of the main actors.这部电影看上去像一部颇为典型的历史剧,没有复杂的特效,而几位主演的出色演技令这部电影十分精彩。 【写作借鉴】 (1)be typical of sb./sth.　是……的特点 It is typical of sb.to do sth. 某人一向…… (2)typically adv.典型地;有代表性地;一向如此 ▲句型It is typical of sb.to do sth.可以转换为“Typically,+句子”的形式。 ①(应用文之建议信)学生在期末考试前看书熬到深夜是很典型的。 →It is typical of students to stay up reading till late night before the final exam.  →Typically, students stay up reading till late night before the final exam. ②Typically, he always plays jokes on others. →It is typical of him to play jokes on others.(用It作形式主语改写)  3.(教材原句)All in all, I highly recommend this film.总之,我强烈推荐这部电影。 (应用文之建议信)I strongly recommend developing a good habit of going for a walk after supper for the sake of your health.为了你的健康,我强烈建议养成晚饭后散步的好习惯。 【写作借鉴】 (1)recommend sth.to sb.　向某人推荐某物 recommend sb.as... 推荐某人担任…… recommend doing sth. 建议做某事 recommend sb.to do sth. 推荐某人做某事 recommend sb.for the job 推荐某人担任此职 recommend that...=It is recommended that... 建议…… (2)recommendation n.推荐,建议 ▲recommend后接从句时,从句谓语动词要用(should)do结构。recommend作“推荐,举荐”讲时,不能说recommend sb.sth. (应用文之建议信)我建议把机器尽快检修一下。 →I recommend the machines to be checked as soon as possible.  →I recommend that the machines (should) be checked as soon as possible.  4.(教材原句)In the meantime, Hooper skilfully creates uncertainty and tension with narrow indoor sets and dark lighting.与此同时,胡珀巧妙地利用狭窄的室内布景和昏暗的灯光来营造不确定性和紧张感。 【写作借鉴】 (1)have a narrow escape　死里逃生,险些遇险 a narrow victory/defeat 险胜/惜败 (2)narrow the gap 缩小差距 (3)narrowly adv.勉强地;狭隘地 ▲(应用文之建议信)父母和孩子应该多交流,缩小他们之间的差距,这样他们才能更好地理解彼此。 Parents and children should communicate more to narrow the gap between them so that they can understand each other better.  【题型技巧】 1.题型特点 一般来说,影评属于议论文的一种。影视评论就是观看者在看完电影后,将其感想以文字的形式呈现出来,来发表自己的观点和看法。 2.结构安排 影评适宜用“三段式”写法: 第一段:背景(setting)简介,即对电影的名称、导演、特点等做简单介绍。 第二段:情节概述(main plot of the film),包括主要演员及故事梗概。电影的情节概述不宜太长,只需把自己要评论的内容突出即可。 第三段:观后感及评论(comment/review),可以选择性地从不同角度,如电影的主题、情节、人物形象的塑造、语言风格、演员的演技、画面特点、场景的设置、颜色的搭配或拍摄的理念等方面有针对性地发表个人看法,但不要面面俱到。最后对电影进行总体评价。如果认为有必要,也可推荐其他人观看。 3.突破策略 写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点,评论可以从多方面进行,但一篇评论的中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点:一是点面结合;二是观点和材料的统一。 “点面结合”就是要对你所评论的电影先做一个总体介绍,如电影的导演、主要演员、主要情节等,这是“面”的介绍;然后结合某一情节或某一段对话、某一个场面、某一细节、某一事物进行具体分析,这是“点”的评论。 观点和材料的统一就是要树立明确的观点,然后引用电影中的具体情节加以分析。 【语料积累】 1.教材词汇 (1)comedy n. 喜剧片,喜剧 (2)fantasy n. 幻想作品;幻想,想象 (3)horror n. 恐怖电影(或故事等);震惊,恐惧 (4)actually adv. 实际上,事实上 (5)familiar adj. 熟悉的,常见的 (6)factor n. 因素,要素 (7)visual adj.视力的,视觉的 (8)studio n. 电影摄影棚;录音室 (9)enable vt. 使能够,使可行 (10)prefer vt. 较喜欢,更喜欢 (11)creative adj.创造性的,创作的;有创造力的 (12)angle n. 角度;立场,观点 (13)ensure vt.保证,确保 (14)award n. 奖,奖品,奖金vt. 授予,给予 (15)adapt vt.改编,改写;使适应 vi.适应 (16)recommend vt.推荐,举荐 2.常用词块 (1)be based on　以……为基础 (2)be directed by 由……导演 (3)learn from... 从……中学习 (4)be popular with... 受……欢迎 (5)be set in 以……为背景 (6)the martial arts 武术 (7)romantic scenes 浪漫的场景 (8)play the part of 扮演 (9)the most exciting moments 最激动人心的时刻 (10)behind the scenes 在后台,在幕后 (11)not to mention 更不用说,且不说 (12)do justice to 恰当处理(某人或某事);公平对待(某人或某事),给予公正的评价 (13)in addition to 除……以外(还) (14)pull up 停车,停止 3.常用句式 (1)开篇常用句型: The new Chinese TV series is making waves in China and abroad.There must be more stories behind the scenes.这部新的中国电视剧在国内外掀起了波澜,其幕后一定有更多故事。 (2)主体部分常用句型: ①He has great chemistry with Rush and Bonham Carter,whose characters are both very believable. 他与拉什和博纳姆·卡特之间关系很好,他们的角色都非常可信。 ②Based on a true story, the film is set in London in the 1930s.影片根据真实故事改编,背景设定在20世纪30年代的伦敦。 ③The film was adapted from a novel,which told that a couple adopted a flexible way to bring up their adopted son,who gradually adapted to his new family.这部电影是由一部小说改编来的,它讲述了一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子,使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭的故事。 ④This film tells us a story about how a common panda becomes a real dragon warrior. 这部电影为我们讲述了一个平凡的熊猫是怎样成为一个真正的龙武士的。 ⑤What I have to admit is that this movie is wonderful,such as its advanced digital video effect and the worry about the future of human beings. 我不得不承认的是这部电影很不错,比如它先进的数字视频特效和对于人类未来的担忧。 (3)结尾常用句型: The film is well worth seeing,as it carried the main idea that justice can always beat evil. 这部电影很值得观看,因为它主要告诉我们正义一定会战胜邪恶。 (2024·南通高一检测)假如你最近看了电影《泰坦尼克号》(Titanic),请根据以下内容写一篇评论。 影片 信息 影片于1997年在美国上映,由詹姆斯·卡梅隆(James Cameron)执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥(Leonardo DiCaprio)和凯特·温斯莱特(Kate Winslet)领衔主演杰克和露丝。 影片 主要 内容 影片讲述了一个感人的故事,杰克与露丝在巨轮上坠入爱河,但泰坦尼克号却撞上了冰山。在泰坦尼克号即将沉没的时候,杰克把生的机会留给了露丝。 你的 评价 …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.最近,我看了电影《泰坦尼克号》,这是一部根据真实事件改编的电影。 Recently,I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event.  2.这部电影由詹姆斯·卡梅隆执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥和凯特·温斯莱特主演。 The film is directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.  3.当泰坦尼克号即将沉没时,杰克放弃了生存的机会,把它留给了露丝。 As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose.  4.在我看来,《泰坦尼克号》是一部集浪漫、悲剧和史诗于一体的杰作。 In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.  5.这是一部值得观看和记住的电影,它将永远是电影史上的经典之一。 It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema.  Step 3:衔接成篇 　　Recently, I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event, directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.The film was released in the United States in 1997 and is still loved by many people. The film tells a deeply touching story.Jack and Rose met and fell in love on the Titanic, but the ship unfortunately collided with an iceberg.As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose. In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema. 1．请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。 1.动画电影《功夫熊猫》取材于中国文化。 2.情景:一个平凡的熊猫成为一个龙武士的故事。师傅起初不认为熊猫能成为龙武士,但是通过不断的努力,他最后得到了师傅的认可,并打败了他们的敌人——老虎。 3.主题:只要努力,每个人都能成功。 注意:词数80左右。 提示词:师傅master;龙武士 dragon warrior _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．根据电影《哈利·波特》的简介，写一篇英语短文。 1．根据英国作家J.K. Rowling的小说改编，由Chris Columbus执导。 2．哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受虐待，11岁生日时被邀请到Hogwarts魔法学校上学，这是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。 3．在Hogwarts，哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多冒险和神奇的事，并交了一些好朋友，同时学会了怎样获得真正的友谊，学会了勇敢。 4．这是一部非常成功的电影，风靡全世界。通过这部电影，我们学会了相信自己和帮助别人。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人选择读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： 1．看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 2．读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3．你的看法及理由：…… 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：原著original work/book in the original Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．请根据下面的材料，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍电影《夜宴》。 Night Banquet《夜宴》 Stars(Cast)：Zhang Ziyi(章子怡)，Daniel Wu(吴彦祖)，Zhou Xun(周迅)，Ge You(葛优) Director：Feng Xiaogang(冯小刚) Plot：这部电影取材于莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《哈姆雷特》(Hamlet)。故事以五代十国为背景，通过争斗、舞蹈和讲故事的方式，讲述了宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事，最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去。 Review & comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．你班上周末观看了科幻电影《流浪地球》。请你根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的电影介绍。 1.根据中国当代科幻作家刘慈欣的小说改编。 2.即将消亡的太阳成为地球的主要威胁，人类拯救地球。 3.人们建造了一个巨大的引擎系统，把地球从即将消亡的太阳那里推开。 4.《流浪地球》被认为是一部表现中国人与家园紧密联系的电影。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。 A Film Review 片名（Name）：《ET外星人》(ET) 导演（Director）：史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg) 剧情梗概：外星人(ET)误留在地球上，Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友，分享痛苦与快乐，最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。 评价(Comment)：本片美丽而感人；告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。 注意：词数80个左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。内容包括： 1.电影的简单介绍； 2.你的评价。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 8．前段时间的热映电影《热辣滚烫》揭示出当代社会中的一种“喜闻乐见”的讨好型人格，请写一篇文章包括以下要点： 1. 讨好型人格的定义和特点。 2. 形成这种人格的可能原因。 3. 它可能带来的负面影响。 4. 如何克服这种人格并变得更加自信和独立。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Lights, camera, action! 单元写作深度指导 写影评 1.(教材原句)The Prince has given up hope of a cure but his wife, Elizabeth, takes him to see Lionel Logue, an Australian speech doctor living in London.亲王已经放弃了治疗的希望,但他的妻子伊丽莎白带他去见了莱昂内尔·洛格,这是一位澳大利亚语言治疗师,当时住在伦敦。 【写作借鉴】 a cure for sth.　医治某种病的疗法 cure sb.of sth. 治愈某人的病;改掉某人的坏习惯 ▲ 常见的“动词+sb.+of+sth.”的结构还有: ①remind sb.of sth.　　　提醒某人某事 ②warn sb.of sth. 警告某人某事 ③rob sb.of sth. 抢劫某人某物 ④inform sb.of sth. 通知某人某事 ⑤cheat sb.of sth. 欺骗某人某事 ⑥suspect sb.of sth. 怀疑某人某事 2.(教材原句) The film looks like a fairly typical historical film without fancy special effects, and it is made enjoyable by the performances of the main actors.这部电影看上去像一部颇为典型的历史剧,没有复杂的特效,而几位主演的出色演技令这部电影十分精彩。 【写作借鉴】 (1)be typical of sb./sth.　是……的特点 It is typical of sb.to do sth. 某人一向…… (2)typically adv.典型地;有代表性地;一向如此 ▲句型It is typical of sb.to do sth.可以转换为“Typically,+句子”的形式。 ①(应用文之建议信)学生在期末考试前看书熬到深夜是很典型的。 →It is typical of students to stay up reading till late night before the final exam.  →Typically, students stay up reading till late night before the final exam. ②Typically, he always plays jokes on others. →It is typical of him to play jokes on others.(用It作形式主语改写)  3.(教材原句)All in all, I highly recommend this film.总之,我强烈推荐这部电影。 (应用文之建议信)I strongly recommend developing a good habit of going for a walk after supper for the sake of your health.为了你的健康,我强烈建议养成晚饭后散步的好习惯。 【写作借鉴】 (1)recommend sth.to sb.　向某人推荐某物 recommend sb.as... 推荐某人担任…… recommend doing sth. 建议做某事 recommend sb.to do sth. 推荐某人做某事 recommend sb.for the job 推荐某人担任此职 recommend that...=It is recommended that... 建议…… (2)recommendation n.推荐,建议 ▲recommend后接从句时,从句谓语动词要用(should)do结构。recommend作“推荐,举荐”讲时,不能说recommend sb.sth. (应用文之建议信)我建议把机器尽快检修一下。 →I recommend the machines to be checked as soon as possible.  →I recommend that the machines (should) be checked as soon as possible.  4.(教材原句)In the meantime, Hooper skilfully creates uncertainty and tension with narrow indoor sets and dark lighting.与此同时,胡珀巧妙地利用狭窄的室内布景和昏暗的灯光来营造不确定性和紧张感。 【写作借鉴】 (1)have a narrow escape　死里逃生,险些遇险 a narrow victory/defeat 险胜/惜败 (2)narrow the gap 缩小差距 (3)narrowly adv.勉强地;狭隘地 ▲(应用文之建议信)父母和孩子应该多交流,缩小他们之间的差距,这样他们才能更好地理解彼此。 Parents and children should communicate more to narrow the gap between them so that they can understand each other better.  【题型技巧】 1.题型特点 一般来说,影评属于议论文的一种。影视评论就是观看者在看完电影后,将其感想以文字的形式呈现出来,来发表自己的观点和看法。 2.结构安排 影评适宜用“三段式”写法: 第一段:背景(setting)简介,即对电影的名称、导演、特点等做简单介绍。 第二段:情节概述(main plot of the film),包括主要演员及故事梗概。电影的情节概述不宜太长,只需把自己要评论的内容突出即可。 第三段:观后感及评论(comment/review),可以选择性地从不同角度,如电影的主题、情节、人物形象的塑造、语言风格、演员的演技、画面特点、场景的设置、颜色的搭配或拍摄的理念等方面有针对性地发表个人看法,但不要面面俱到。最后对电影进行总体评价。如果认为有必要,也可推荐其他人观看。 3.突破策略 写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点,评论可以从多方面进行,但一篇评论的中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点:一是点面结合;二是观点和材料的统一。 “点面结合”就是要对你所评论的电影先做一个总体介绍,如电影的导演、主要演员、主要情节等,这是“面”的介绍;然后结合某一情节或某一段对话、某一个场面、某一细节、某一事物进行具体分析,这是“点”的评论。 观点和材料的统一就是要树立明确的观点,然后引用电影中的具体情节加以分析。 【语料积累】 1.教材词汇 (1)comedy n. 喜剧片,喜剧 (2)fantasy n. 幻想作品;幻想,想象 (3)horror n. 恐怖电影(或故事等);震惊,恐惧 (4)actually adv. 实际上,事实上 (5)familiar adj. 熟悉的,常见的 (6)factor n. 因素,要素 (7)visual adj.视力的,视觉的 (8)studio n. 电影摄影棚;录音室 (9)enable vt. 使能够,使可行 (10)prefer vt. 较喜欢,更喜欢 (11)creative adj.创造性的,创作的;有创造力的 (12)angle n. 角度;立场,观点 (13)ensure vt.保证,确保 (14)award n. 奖,奖品,奖金vt. 授予,给予 (15)adapt vt.改编,改写;使适应 vi.适应 (16)recommend vt.推荐,举荐 2.常用词块 (1)be based on　以……为基础 (2)be directed by 由……导演 (3)learn from... 从……中学习 (4)be popular with... 受……欢迎 (5)be set in 以……为背景 (6)the martial arts 武术 (7)romantic scenes 浪漫的场景 (8)play the part of 扮演 (9)the most exciting moments 最激动人心的时刻 (10)behind the scenes 在后台,在幕后 (11)not to mention 更不用说,且不说 (12)do justice to 恰当处理(某人或某事);公平对待(某人或某事),给予公正的评价 (13)in addition to 除……以外(还) (14)pull up 停车,停止 3.常用句式 (1)开篇常用句型: The new Chinese TV series is making waves in China and abroad.There must be more stories behind the scenes.这部新的中国电视剧在国内外掀起了波澜,其幕后一定有更多故事。 (2)主体部分常用句型: ①He has great chemistry with Rush and Bonham Carter,whose characters are both very believable. 他与拉什和博纳姆·卡特之间关系很好,他们的角色都非常可信。 ②Based on a true story, the film is set in London in the 1930s.影片根据真实故事改编,背景设定在20世纪30年代的伦敦。 ③The film was adapted from a novel,which told that a couple adopted a flexible way to bring up their adopted son,who gradually adapted to his new family.这部电影是由一部小说改编来的,它讲述了一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子,使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭的故事。 ④This film tells us a story about how a common panda becomes a real dragon warrior. 这部电影为我们讲述了一个平凡的熊猫是怎样成为一个真正的龙武士的。 ⑤What I have to admit is that this movie is wonderful,such as its advanced digital video effect and the worry about the future of human beings. 我不得不承认的是这部电影很不错,比如它先进的数字视频特效和对于人类未来的担忧。 (3)结尾常用句型: The film is well worth seeing,as it carried the main idea that justice can always beat evil. 这部电影很值得观看,因为它主要告诉我们正义一定会战胜邪恶。 (2024·南通高一检测)假如你最近看了电影《泰坦尼克号》(Titanic),请根据以下内容写一篇评论。 影片 信息 影片于1997年在美国上映,由詹姆斯·卡梅隆(James Cameron)执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥(Leonardo DiCaprio)和凯特·温斯莱特(Kate Winslet)领衔主演杰克和露丝。 影片 主要 内容 影片讲述了一个感人的故事,杰克与露丝在巨轮上坠入爱河,但泰坦尼克号却撞上了冰山。在泰坦尼克号即将沉没的时候,杰克把生的机会留给了露丝。 你的 评价 …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.最近,我看了电影《泰坦尼克号》,这是一部根据真实事件改编的电影。 Recently,I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event.  2.这部电影由詹姆斯·卡梅隆执导,莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥和凯特·温斯莱特主演。 The film is directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.  3.当泰坦尼克号即将沉没时,杰克放弃了生存的机会,把它留给了露丝。 As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose.  4.在我看来,《泰坦尼克号》是一部集浪漫、悲剧和史诗于一体的杰作。 In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.  5.这是一部值得观看和记住的电影,它将永远是电影史上的经典之一。 It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema.  Step 3:衔接成篇 　　Recently, I watched the movie Titanic, which is a film adapted from a true event, directed by James Cameron and starring Leonardo DiCaprio and Kate Winslet.The film was released in the United States in 1997 and is still loved by many people. The film tells a deeply touching story.Jack and Rose met and fell in love on the Titanic, but the ship unfortunately collided with an iceberg.As the Titanic was about to sink, Jack gave up his chance to survive and left it to Rose. In my opinion, Titanic is a masterpiece that combines romance, tragedy, and epic proportions.It is a film that is worth watching and remembering, and it will always be one of the classics in the history of cinema. 1．请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。 1.动画电影《功夫熊猫》取材于中国文化。 2.情景:一个平凡的熊猫成为一个龙武士的故事。师傅起初不认为熊猫能成为龙武士,但是通过不断的努力,他最后得到了师傅的认可,并打败了他们的敌人——老虎。 3.主题:只要努力,每个人都能成功。 注意:词数80左右。 提示词:师傅master;龙武士 dragon warrior _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．根据电影《哈利·波特》的简介，写一篇英语短文。 1．根据英国作家J.K. Rowling的小说改编，由Chris Columbus执导。 2．哈利失去双亲，在姨母家受虐待，11岁生日时被邀请到Hogwarts魔法学校上学，这是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界。 3．在Hogwarts，哈利学习了魔法，经历了许多冒险和神奇的事，并交了一些好朋友，同时学会了怎样获得真正的友谊，学会了勇敢。 4．这是一部非常成功的电影，风靡全世界。通过这部电影，我们学会了相信自己和帮助别人。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人选择读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： 1．看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 2．读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3．你的看法及理由：…… 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：原著original work/book in the original Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．请根据下面的材料，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍电影《夜宴》。 Night Banquet《夜宴》 Stars(Cast)：Zhang Ziyi(章子怡)，Daniel Wu(吴彦祖)，Zhou Xun(周迅)，Ge You(葛优) Director：Feng Xiaogang(冯小刚) Plot：这部电影取材于莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《哈姆雷特》(Hamlet)。故事以五代十国为背景，通过争斗、舞蹈和讲故事的方式，讲述了宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事，最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去。 Review & comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．你班上周末观看了科幻电影《流浪地球》。请你根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的电影介绍。 1.根据中国当代科幻作家刘慈欣的小说改编。 2.即将消亡的太阳成为地球的主要威胁，人类拯救地球。 3.人们建造了一个巨大的引擎系统，把地球从即将消亡的太阳那里推开。 4.《流浪地球》被认为是一部表现中国人与家园紧密联系的电影。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。 A Film Review 片名（Name）：《ET外星人》(ET) 导演（Director）：史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg) 剧情梗概：外星人(ET)误留在地球上，Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友，分享痛苦与快乐，最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。 评价(Comment)：本片美丽而感人；告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。 注意：词数80个左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。内容包括： 1.电影的简单介绍； 2.你的评价。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 8．前段时间的热映电影《热辣滚烫》揭示出当代社会中的一种“喜闻乐见”的讨好型人格，请写一篇文章包括以下要点： 1. 讨好型人格的定义和特点。 2. 形成这种人格的可能原因。 3. 它可能带来的负面影响。 4. 如何克服这种人格并变得更加自信和独立。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Kung Fu Panda,a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June,2008. This film tells us a story about how an ordinary panda becomes a real dragon warrior. At the beginning, the master did not believe the panda can be a dragon warrior. But with the panda’s hard work, he wins the master’s acceptance. The master tries his best to train the panda into a real warrior. Finally, the panda defeated their biggest enemy, the tiger. This film shows that as long as we work hard, everyone can succeed. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(KungFuPanda)的影评。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 上映：released→ showed 尽他最大的努力做某事：tries his best to do→ makes his effort to do 最终：Finally→ In the end 打败：defeated→ beated 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Kung Fu Panda, a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June, 2008. 拓展句：Kung Fu Panda, which is a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements, was released in June, 2008. 【高分句型1】This film tells us a story about how an ordinary panda becomes a real dragon warrior.（运用了连接副词how引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】This film shows that as long as we work hard, everyone can succeed.（运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句以及as long as引导的条件状语从句。） 2．Harry Potter is a fairy tale which is based on the novel of the English writer J.K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus. In the movie, Harry, whose parents are dead, is badly treated at his aunt’s home.But fortunately, on his birthday of eleven, he is invited to go to Hogwarts, a magic school. It is a world full of magic and wonders, where Harry learns magic, has many adventurous and wonderful experiences and makes several good friends.He also learns how to get true friendship and how to be brave. The movie Harry Potter is a great success and it is popular with people all over the world.It’s well worth seeing.Through it, we learn to believe in ourselves and help others. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生根据电影《哈利·波特》的简介，写一篇英语短文。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 以……为基础：be based on→be on the basis of 值得做某事：be worth doing sth.→deserve to do sth. 充满：be full of→be filled with 帮助：help→assist 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：The movie Harry Potter is a great success and it is popular with people all over the world. It’s well worth seeing. 拓展句：The movie Harry Potter, which is well worth seeing, is a great success and it is popular with people all over the world. [高分句型1] In the movie, Harry, whose parents are dead, is badly treated at his aunt’s home.（运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Harry Potter is a fairy tale which is based on the novel of the English writer J.K. Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus.（运用了which引导限制性定语从句） 3．Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting，and it is easier to follow. However, some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally，I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own，and what's more，I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word，to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. 【要点详解】本文书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一篇英语短文。 第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇英语短文：当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人选择读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂；读原著：细节更多、语言优美；你的看法及理由：……。 第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：the opposite opinion（反对意见）；detailed information（详细信息）；in a situation of my own（在我自己的境况）；等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级词汇、短语和句子。The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.固定句式，that引导表语从句；They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.文中使用宾语从句；另外，Besides, However, Meanwhile, Personally，what's more，In a word，等的运用为文章增色添彩。 4．Night Banquet is a history and martial arts film. It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang. Zhang Ziyi, Zhou Xun,Ge You, and Daniel Wu star in the film. The plot of Night Banquet, which is based on Shakespeare’s Hamlet, is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. Through fighting, dancing and storytelling, it tells of a fight for rights and interests in the court between different people. Finally they died off at a night banquet. Feng Xiaogang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice. It is a masterpiece and worth seeing again and again, so I’d like to recommend it to you all. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据下面的材料，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍电影《夜宴》。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 最终：Finally→ At last 审视，检查：examine → inspect 令人兴奋的：exciting→ thrilling 杰作：masterpiece→ masterwork 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang. Zhang Ziyi, Zhou Xun,Ge You, and Daniel Wu star in the film. 拓展句：It is another masterpiece, which is directed by Feng Xiaogang. Zhang Ziyi, Zhou Xun,Ge You, and Daniel Wu star in the film. 【高分句型1】The plot of Night Banquet, which is based on Shakespeare’s Hamlet, is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Through fighting, dancing and storytelling, it tells of a fight for rights and interests in the court between different people.（运用了介词Through后接动名词作句子的状语） 5．The film The Wandering Earth is adapted from a novel by Liu Cixin, China’s contemporary science fiction author. It tells a story in which the dying Sun becomes a major threat to the Earth, but the humans save the Earth without leaving it. People around the world who have a strong urge to survive build a huge engine system to push the Earth away from the dying Sun. The Wandering Earth is regarded as a film showing tight links between Chinese people and their homeland. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达为一篇说明文。要求学生根据提示写一篇关于《流浪地球》的介绍。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累： 主要的：major→main/prime 渴望：urge→desire/eagerness 被视为：be regarded as→be deemed as/be considered as 联系：link→relation/contact/connection 2.句式拓展： 原句：People around the world who have a strong urge to survive build a huge engine system to push the Earth away from the dying Sun. 拓展句：People having a strong urge to survive around the world build a huge engine system to push the Earth away from the dying Sun. 【高分句型1】 The Wandering Earth is regarded as a film showing tight links between Chinese people and their homeland.（运用了现在分词作定语。） 【高分句型2】 It tells a story in which the dying Sun becomes a major threat to the Earth, but the humans save the Earth without leaving it.（运用了介词+which引导定语从句。） 6．A Film Review ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg. It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. A boy called Elliott, acted by Henry Thomas, hides ET in his house to protect ET from the cold world of grown-ups. They become good friends, sharing sorrow and happiness and at last some children decide to take the risk of sending ET back to his planet. The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给关于电影《ET外星人》的简介，用英语写一篇电影评论。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 给……命名：call→name 决定做某事：decide to do sth.→determine to do sth. 感人的：moving→touching 重要的：important→significant 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg. 拓展句：ET is a film which is directed by Steven Spielberg. 【高分句型1】It is about a story that a creature, ET, is mistakenly left behind on the earth. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 【高分句型2】The film is moving and beautiful, which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句) 7．Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, a famous director from Hong Kong. Inspired by the evacuation of nearly 600 Chinese citizens from Yemen’s southern port of Aden during the Yemeni Civil War in late March of 2015, the director intends to show the bravery of the Chinese Navy. It tells the story of the Chinese Navy’s Jiaolong Assault Team, which is sent on a mission to rescue Chinese citizens and foreigners that eventually takes them to stop terrorists from gaining possession of nuclear materials to make dirty bombs. The characters’ bravery and kindness touched my heart deeply, making it appeal to people of all ages. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“我说电影”为主题的征文活动，请你针对自己喜欢的电影写一篇影评并投稿。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 著名的：famous→celebrated 最终：eventually→finally 感到：touch→move 吸引：appeal to→attract 2.句式拓展 原句：Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, a famous director from Hong Kong. 拓展句：Operation Red Sea is a thrilling Chinese war film directed by Dante Lam, who is a famous director from Hong Kong. 【高分句型1】Inspired by the evacuation of nearly 600 Chinese citizens from Yemen’s southern port of Aden during the Yemeni Civil War in late March of 2015, the director intends to show the bravery of the Chinese Navy.(运用了过去分词作状语) 【高分句型2】It tells the story of the Chinese Navy’s Jiaolong Assault Team, which is sent on a mission to rescue Chinese citizens and foreigners that eventually takes them to stop terrorists from gaining possession of nuclear materials to make dirty bombs.(运用了which引导定语从句，that引导定语从句，动名词作宾语和不定式作目的状语) 8．参考范文： The People-Pleasing Personality The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others. Its characteristics include being overly compliant and avoiding conflicts. Possible causes are childhood experiences and low self-esteem. Negative effects involve losing self-identity and causing stress. To overcome it, accept yourself, build self-esteem, learn to say no, and surround yourself with supportive people. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生围绕讨好型人格写一篇文章。 【要点详解】1. 词汇积累 特点：characteristic→feature 避免：avoid→escape 影响：effect→influence/impact 压力：stress→pressure 2. 句式拓展 单句改为复合句 原句：The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others. Its characteristics include being overly compliant and avoiding conflicts. 拓展句：The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others, whose characteristics include being overly compliant and avoiding conflicts. 【高分句型1】The people-pleasing personality means always pleasing others.(使用了动名词作宾语) 【高分句型2】To overcome it, accept yourself, build self-esteem, learn to say no, and surround yourself with supportive people. 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