2025届高考英语读后续写专题之遇险类---漂流危机：瓶子里的求救信号 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。 Rescue in a Bottle Curtis Whitson had rafted (v.乘筏) down the Arroyo Seco, a river in central California, several times before. This year, Curtis Whitson knew the water-fall was coming. He figured he would get out of his raft into the shallow water, get down the rocks along ropes on either side of the falls, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip. But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. And this year, instead of his friends, Whitson’s companions were his girlfriend, Krystal Ramirez, and his 13-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, Whitson could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narrowing canyon(峡谷) that they were in serious trouble. There was no way they’d be able to get down the rocks as planned. “The water was just roaring through there with tremendous force,” recalls Whitson, 45. They had no smart phone service, and they hadn’t seen a single person in the past three days. And Whitson knew that they’d be sharing the ground there with rattlesnakes and mountain lions. As he was thinking what to do, Whitson hit on a bit of luck---he heard voices coming from the other side of the falls. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out. “We have to get these people a message,” Whitson thought. He grabbed a stick and pulled out his pocketknife to carve “Help” in it. Then he tied a rope to it so the people would know it wasn’t just any stick. He tried throwing it over the falls, but it floated away in the wrong direction. “We’ve got to do something!” Whitson yelled to his son. “Have we got anything else?” Then he spotted his water bottle. Whitson grabbed it and carved “Help!”on it. Ramirez also reminded him that he had a pen and paper in his backpack. Whitson knew it was a slim hope. But he wrote “6-15 19:00 We are stuck here@ the waterfall. Get help please” and pushed the note into the bottle. This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect. “All right, that’s all we can do,” Whitson told Hunter. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:The next morning, the helicopter returned. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 Curtis Whitson 曾多次在加州中部的阿罗约塞科河乘筏漂流。这次他带着女友 Krystal Ramirez 和 13 岁的儿子 Hunter 前来，但因大雪和春雨，原本温和的瀑布变得凶险异常。他们无法按原计划沿着瀑布边的岩石下行，且没有手机信号，三天来未见到其他人，周围还有危险动物。Whitson 试图向瀑布另一侧的人求救，他先后用刻有 “Help” 的木棍和写有求救信息的水瓶尝试传递信息。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：恶劣的环境（瀑布凶险、无信号、有危险动物），多次求救尝试。 · 回应：第一段续写中他们回到午餐的海滩过夜等待救援，回应了艰难处境；第二段续写直升机救援成功，回应了求救信息成功传递这一伏笔。 续写要点 情感线 第一段：疲惫、担忧但仍抱有希望；第二段：看到直升机时的惊喜、获救后的欣慰。 故事线 第一段：他们回到上游海滩过夜；第二段：直升机前来救援。 主旨升华句 1. In the darkest moments, a glimmer of hope can be a lifeline.（在最黑暗的时刻，一丝希望也能成为救命稻草。） 2. Desperation can fuel creativity, leading to salvation.（绝望能激发创造力，带来救赎。） 3. When hope is put into action, miracles can happen even in dire situations.（当希望付诸行动，即使在绝境中也可能有奇迹发生。） 4. A simple message can bridge the gap between danger and safety.（一个简单的信息可以在危险与安全之间架起桥梁。） 5. In times of crisis, human will and a tiny chance can turn the tables.（在危机时刻，人类的意志和微小的机会可以扭转局势。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch. They were exhausted but still vigilant. Whitson built a fire to keep them warm and scare away potential predators. Hunter and Ramirez helped gather dry branches. They talked little, the anxiety palpable. Every sound from the forest made them start, yet they held onto the hope that their message would be found. Paragraph 2: The next morning, the helicopter returned. The loud noise of the propellers was like music to their ears. They jumped up and down, waving frantically. As the helicopter landed, they rushed towards it. Once inside, they felt an overwhelming sense of gratitude. Their ordeal had ended, thanks to that bottle and the note within. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch. They set up a makeshift shelter with branches and leaves. The night was cold and filled with unease. Whitson tried to comfort his son and girlfriend, but he himself was worried. They ate some of the remaining food, all the while listening intently for any sign of rescue. Paragraph 2: The next morning, the helicopter returned. Their hearts leaped with joy. They quickly gathered their things and ran towards the clearing. The rescuers helped them on board. Tears streamed down their faces as they realized they were safe. Their message in the bottle had truly been their salvation. 官方范文： Paragraph I: It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch. With no  expectation that their message in the bottle would find its way to anyone, they prepared to spend a safe night there. As the evening wore on, they decided they probably weren’t going to get rescued that night, so they pulled out their sleeping bags. Before turning in, Ramirez added wood to the fire to keep the mountain lions away. However, just after midnight, they heard a helicopter hovering above them. Wild with joy, they waved and yelled like crazy. Unfortunately, the darkness drowned everything. The helicopter circled and got back. The first rescue was in vain. Paragraph 2: The next morning, the helicopter returned. After the three were spotted, the helicopter lowered a crew member on a cable. The rescuers lifted them out of the mountain. It was not long before they were taken to safety. That was a moment of pure happiness as the three chatted with the rescue workers. Just at that time Whitson learned that a hiker spotted the bottle with the message asking for help. And it was exactly that bottle that saved them all! Together, they were amazed at the unlikelihood of it all. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$