2025届高考英语读后续写专题之美好品质类 玻璃戒指背后的无价之爱 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “I wish my mother had a ring like those the ladies wear at the hotel,” said Hiram Green to himself one day. Hiram was the son of a fisherman, but the fisherman had died when Hiram was a little boy. Hiram’s mother took on sewing work to earn money to support herself and her son. He helped her when he could re out of school hours, and during vacation time. He had two uncles who had taught him how to catch shrimps. With the money he earned by selling them he could buy things for his own use or pleasure. He had a “bank” almost full of what he called his “shrimp money.” The sight of the flashing diamonds on the hands of some of the summer visitors at the fishing village in which he lived had added a new article to the list of beautiful things his mother would own someday. He had heard that just one single diamond was sometimes worth five hundred dollars or more. This had discouraged him very much. But one day, he happened to pass a shop in the neighboring town and saw a number of diamond rings displayed in the window. He stopped fascinated, and pressed his face against the glass eagerly to see if any prices were marked upon them. Imagine his surprise when he saw upon the largest one a tag marked $4.75. He looked again to see if he had made a mistake. Perhaps it was $475. But no, he knew enough about figures to see that he was right the first time. He went home as fast as he could, and ran up into his bedroom. Then, he opened his “bank” and counted its contents. “Three dollars and twenty-two cents!” he cried. “I’ll have that ring before another week.” Hiram worked early and late for the next few days. He caught more shrimps than he had ever caught in the same length of time, and sold them readily. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 Hiram 是一位渔夫的儿子，父亲早逝，母亲靠缝纫维持生计。Hiram 课余时间会帮忙，还跟着叔叔学会捕虾挣钱。看到村里夏日游客手上闪亮的钻戒后，他希望母亲也能有一枚。后来他在邻镇商店看到一枚标价仅 4.75 美元的钻戒，便努力捕虾攒钱，想要买下这枚戒指。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：Hiram 对母亲深厚的爱和想让母亲拥有戒指的愿望；他对钻石高昂价格的认知和看到便宜戒指时的惊讶；努力攒钱的情节。 · 回应：续写第一段写 Hiram 攒够钱买到戒指送给母亲，母亲因他的爱和付出而感动；第二段写多年后 Hiram 告知母亲戒指是玻璃的，母亲强调爱的价值高于物质，回应了前文关于爱的珍贵这一伏笔。 续写要点 情感线 第一段：Hiram 的兴奋激动和母亲收到戒指时的惊喜感动。第二段：Hiram 的忐忑不安和母亲的包容慈爱。 故事线 第一段：Hiram 攒够钱买到戒指并送给母亲。第二段：Hiram 得知戒指是玻璃的后向母亲坦白，母亲回应。 主旨升华句 1. Love is the most valuable gem that can turn an ordinary thing into a priceless treasure.（爱是最珍贵的宝石，能将平凡之物变为无价之宝。） 2. The essence of a gift lies not in its worth but in the love and effort it embodies.（礼物的精髓不在于其价值，而在于它所承载的爱与努力。） 3. True affection makes every token of love shine brightly, regardless of its material nature.（真挚的情感能让每一份爱的象征都闪耀光芒，无论其物质本质如何。） 4. What makes a present precious is the heart behind it, not the luxury of the object itself.（使礼物珍贵的是背后的心意，而不是物品本身的奢华。） 5. In the realm of love, the sentiment within a gift far outweighs its physical value.（在爱的领域里，礼物蕴含的情感远远超过其物质价值。） 写作示范 第一篇 At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. He rushed to the store, his heart pounding with excitement. When he got the ring, he felt like he was holding a piece of the moon. He ran home and presented it to his mother. Her face lit up with joy and she put the ring on. It was a moment of pure love and happiness as they hugged. Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother. He was hesitant at first. But when he told her, his mother's eyes softened. She said, "My son, your love is what makes this ring beautiful. It's more valuable than any diamond." 第二篇 At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. Eagerly, he entered the shop and bought the ring. On his way home, he could hardly contain his excitement. When he gave the ring to his mother, she was deeply touched. Tears welled up in her eyes as she thanked him. Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother. He told her with a hint of embarrassment. However, his mother just smiled and said, "Dear, this ring has always been a diamond in my heart because of your love. That's what truly matters." 官方范文： At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. Hurrying to the shop where he had seen the ring, before going inside he gave one swift, almost frightened look into the window. Could it be gone? No, there it was flashing and shining as before. That evening, he placed it on his mother’s finger. She looked at it in surprise. “It is yours, Mother,” he cried, proudly. “I bought it with my shrimp money.” “My dear boy,” said his mother, while something as bright as the shining stone flashed in her eyes, “not one of those ladies can value their rings as I shall value mine.” Years afterwards Hiram learned that what he had thought was a diamond was only a bit of glass. “Did you know it then, Mother?” he asked. His mother nodded. “And you never told me.” “It was brighter to me than any real diamond,” she said. “The brightness I saw flashing in it was the unselfish love of my boy.” Indeed, nothing in the world is more precious than a sincere heart. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$