读后续写--善良的传承：Sunshine 的爱心牛奶钱计划 讲义-新高考联盟2025届高三上学期阶段性检测（二）英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jackie Oelfke, a retired bank manager, pays great attention to developing children's independent financial awareness from an early age. She bought a piggy bank(存钱罐)for every child. She even passed on the good tradition to her granddaughter, Sunshine Oelfke. When Sunshine was just born, Jackie Oelfke bought her a large piggy bank. They used the piggy bank as a toy. Later, when Sunshine grew older, they would pour out coins and play games. When they had small change, they took the coins back and put them in the money storage tank, enjoying it tirelessly. What they lack is not money, but a good habit. The little girl has always believed in this concept: even if you are rich, you should be careful with your money. Two weeks ago, the 7-year-old girl emptied her piggy bank onto the living room floor after school and immediately started counting. Jackie thought she was playing as she carefully lined up the coins, but then she saw the girl put the coins into a plastic bag and place it in her backpack. Her mind was so busily engaged that she did not always know when she was silent. “That aroused my curiosity,” Jackie said. “Nobody messes with the piggy bank.” After observing Sunshine at work for a few minutes longer, Jackie decided to find out why the little girl broke into her savings. “What are you doing with that money?” Jackie asked her granddaughter with a smile. “I'm taking it to school,” Sunshine replied without looking. She seemed to struggle before talking to her grandma. The little girl finally stated the real reason why she needed the money. “I'm going to take it for milk money. My friend Layla doesn't get milk—her mum doesn't have milk money and I do.” As a special guest, Jackie once went to participate in activities organized at Sunshine's school. Sunshine's teacher, Rita Hausher, told her that many students in her class came from poor families, and she remembered having Layla. At that time, she had the idea of helping them, but she didn't know how to do it more appropriately. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Jackie's heart melted(融化)at Sunshine's words. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Jackie posted a tearful video online to explain her granddaughter's plan. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 退休银行经理 Jackie 注重培养孩子的理财意识，她给孙女 Sunshine 买了存钱罐，祖孙俩常玩与存钱罐相关的游戏。7 岁的 Sunshine 有天把存钱罐里的钱倒出来装在书包里，Jackie 询问后得知，Sunshine 要把钱带去学校给朋友 Layla 买牛奶，因为 Layla 的妈妈没钱给她买牛奶。Jackie 曾在 Sunshine 学校参加活动，了解到班上有很多贫困学生，当时就想帮忙却不知如何合适地做。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：Jackie 对培养孩子理财意识的重视，Sunshine 存钱的习惯，Sunshine 对金钱的观念，Jackie 知道学校有贫困生。 · 回应：续写中 Jackie 因 Sunshine 的善良而感动，拥抱并支持她，还把故事发在网上，引发更多人帮助贫困生。 续写要点 情感线 第一段从 Jackie 被 Sunshine 的话感动，体现出温暖、欣慰的情感；第二段是 Jackie 在网上讲述故事时的激动、自豪，以及引发大众共鸣的感动。 故事线 第一段写 Jackie 对 Sunshine 的支持，帮她数钱并添钱；第二段写 Jackie 把 Sunshine 的故事拍成视频发到网上，引发善举。 主旨升华句 1. True kindness shines brightest in the hearts of the young.（真正的善良在年轻人心中闪耀着最璀璨的光芒。） 2. A small act of a child can stir up a sea of love in the world.（一个孩子的小小举动能在世界上激起爱的海洋。） 3. Kindness is like a seed, sown by the young and blooming with the support of all.（善良就像一颗种子，由年轻人播种，在众人支持下盛开。） 4. In the innocence of a child's gesture lies the power to change the world.（在孩子纯真的举动中蕴含着改变世界的力量。） 5. The love from a child's heart can be the spark that ignites a community's compassion.（孩子心中的爱可以成为点燃社区同情心的火花。） 写作示范 第一篇 Jackie's heart melted (融化) at Sunshine's words. She felt a rush of warmth and pride. She gently held Sunshine's hands and said, "You're doing a wonderful thing, dear." Then they counted the money together, and Jackie added a few extra bills. "Let's make sure Layla has enough," she whispered. With a smile, she watched Sunshine pack the money, filled with admiration for her granddaughter's big heart. Jackie posted a tearful video online to explain her granddaughter's plan. In the video, her voice choked with emotion as she told the story. Soon, the video spread like wildfire. People from all over were touched. Messages of support and donations poured in. The school received an outpouring of love, all inspired by a little girl's kindness. 第二篇 Jackie's heart melted (融化) at Sunshine's words. Her eyes glistened with tears. She ruffled Sunshine's hair and said, "You're an angel, Sunshine." She joined Sunshine in sorting the money, making sure every coin was counted. She told Sunshine how proud she was. "This will make Layla very happy," she said. They put the money in a special envelope. Jackie posted a tearful video online to explain her granddaughter's plan. She shared every detail, her love for Sunshine and the beautiful intention behind the act. The video touched countless hearts. People were moved to help the school's poor students. The community united in kindness, all because of one little girl's selfless plan. 第三篇 Jackie's heart melted (融化) at Sunshine's words. She was deeply touched by her granddaughter's kindness and selflessness. She walked over to Sunshine, knelt down, and gave her a big hug. "You are such a sweet girl, Sunshine," she said. "I'm so proud of you." She helped Sunshine count the money again and added some more from her own purse. "Let's make sure Layla has enough milk for a long time," she told Sunshine with a warm smile. Jackie posted a tearful video online to explain her granddaughter's plan. In the video, she told the story of Sunshine and Layla, and how her granddaughter had decided to use her own savings to help her friend. The video quickly went viral, and people were deeply moved by the little girl's act of kindness. Many sent donations to the school, asking them to be given to Layla and other students in need. Jackie and Sunshine became an inspiration for everyone to show love and kindness. One possible version Jackie's heart melted(融化)at Sunshine's words, Choked with strong feelings, Jackie held her sweet granddaughter tightly in her arms, People must understand that actions speak louder than words, Last week. Jackie and Sunshine met with her teacher, Rita Hausher, and handed her the $ 30 the kindergartner had saved. There are 20 kids in Sunshine's class and about half don't get milk. It costs $0, 45 a carton, The total adds up to about $180 a month for every child in the class to have milk every day. Jackie posted a tearful video online to explain her granddaughter's plan. To her surprise, dozens of people offered to donate to the cause. Within a week, Jackie raised more than $1,000. Now every student in Sunshine's class can get free milk for the rest of the year, Jackie said Sunshine doesn't see her kind act as a big deal. She was just trying to look out for her friends, “She doesn't understand the effect she's brought about,”Jackie said, “But now she knows she can do whatever she puts her mind to." 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$