读后续写--一双鞋的温暖：从失落少年到善良天使 讲义-安徽省2025届“皖南八校”高三第一次大联考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Frank Daily stared down at the frozen ground. He kicked chunks of snow with his new Nike shoes. He only pretended to listen to the chat of his friends Norm and Ed, as they all got on the number 10 bus after school. Frank and his friends sat down at the back of the bus along with several other high school boys, some from other schools. The bus headed west on Blue Mound Road. He still remembered another cold, gray day just a month ago in November when his world crashed down around him, as he read the team list, searching desperately for his name. It wasn’t there. The bus braked suddenly, and Frank naturally pressed his Nikes against the floor. “It must have been my size,” he thought, “Five-feet-four. Since I’m new at Marquette High, the coach must have taken one look at me and my shoes and decided I was too small to join the basketball team.” He had been a star athlete in all the sports in primary school. Now, it seemed he was a nothing. The bus stopped at the County Institutions grounds. Frank glanced up at the driver, who had a nickname “Kojak” because of his bald head. An elderly woman hung onto the handrail and slowly pulled herself onto the bus. As she sank into the seat behind the bus driver, her feet kicked up, and Frank saw that she was barefoot. As Kojak got the bus back into traffic, he yelled over his shoulder, “Where are your shoes, lady? It was below 10 degrees out there.” “I can’t afford shoes,” the woman answered. She pulled her worn-out coat collar around her neck. Some of the boys at the back exchanged glances and laughed.“I got on the bus just to get my feet warm,” the woman continued. “If you don’t mind, I’ll just ride around with you for a bit.” Kojak scratched his bald head and shouted, “Now just tell me how come you can’t afford shoes?” “My husband is badly ill in the hospital, so we only have money for food and necessities,” the woman said in a low voice. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 Frank 因没被校篮球队选中而心情低落，在乘坐公交车时，看到一位因丈夫重病没钱买鞋而光脚的老妇人，在与司机的对话中讲述了自己的艰难处境。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：Frank 对自己新耐克鞋的在意、他因没入选球队的失落、老妇人没鞋的可怜处境。 · 回应：续写中 Frank 想到把鞋给老妇人，下车前把鞋送给了她。 续写要点 情感线 从对老妇人的同情，到做出送鞋决定的坚定，最后送鞋时的善良和温暖。 故事线 第一段写 Frank 看着自己的鞋，决定送给老妇人；第二段写 Frank 走向车门准备下车并把鞋送给老妇人。 主旨升华句 1. True kindness is giving when you have little, yet see others' greater need.（真正的善良是当你拥有不多，却看到别人更需要时伸出援手。） 2. In the face of others' hardship, our possessions can bring them hope.（面对他人的艰难，我们的财物能给他们带来希望。） 3. Sometimes, a small act of giving can warm a cold world.（有时候，一个小小的给予行为能温暖寒冷的世界。） 4. Compassion makes us realize that our shoes can be a gift for those in need.（同情心让我们意识到我们的鞋子可以成为送给有需要的人的礼物。） 5. When we open our hearts, our belongings can become blessings for others.（当我们敞开心扉，我们的财物可以成为对他人的祝福。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. He felt a pang of guilt. Here he was, moping about not making the basketball team while this poor woman had no shoes. The shoes were brand new, and he remembered how excited he was when he got them. But now, he knew what he had to do. He took them off and held them in his hands. Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. He walked up to the old woman. “Ma’am,” he said softly, “you need these more than I do.” He placed the shoes at her feet. The woman looked up, tears in her eyes, and tried to thank him, but Frank just smiled and got off the bus. 第二篇 Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. His mind raced. These shoes that he had cherished so much seemed insignificant compared to the woman's need. He thought about his disappointment with the basketball team, but this situation made that seem trivial. He decided that he could part with his shoes to help someone in a much tougher spot. Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. With shoes in hand, he made his way to the elderly woman. “Here,” he said, handing her the shoes. “I hope this helps a little.” The bus fell silent. The woman's eyes widened in surprise and gratitude as she took the shoes. Frank stepped off the bus, feeling a sense of peace. 读后续写参考范文 Frank looked down at his new Nike basketball shoes. His feet were warm and cosy. When he glanced at the woman who was dressed in rags, a sense of sorrow swept over him. With a complicated mood, he slipped the shoes off under his seat. When the bus stopped, Frank waited until everyone else had got off. Then he reached under his seat and picked up his basketball shoes. He walked quickly up to the woman and handed them to her, looking down and saying, “Here, lady, you need these more than I do.” Then Frank hurried to the door and was about to step down. He heard the woman exclaim, “Look, they fit me just perfectly!” Then he heard Kojak said, “I’ve never seen anything like that in the 20 years I’ve been driving this bus.” The woman was crying. “Thank you, young man,” she said. He smiled at the woman. “It’s no big deal.” He hurried off after Norm and Ed. It seemed to him that the grayness had lifted. On the way home, hardly could he feel the cold beneath his feet at all. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$