读后续写--80 岁父亲的散步风波与善意相助 讲义-湖南师大附中2024—2025学年高二上学期第一次大练习英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Many years ago, my father, who was 80 at that time, arrived for his regular two-week visit at my home in Karachi He lived with my elder brother in Lahore most of the time and for ten years had stuck to his habit of going for an-hour-long morning walk to keep fit, In Naturally, he was keen to continue his morning walk while with us in Karachi. Our preferred park is a 2km walk from my house and it has a 1km walking track. I could not drive him there every day as I had to leave for the office while at the same time he wanted to set out. Since there were hardly any footpaths in Karachi, my father said he was delighted to walk on the road as he was certain there wouldn’t be much traffic in the morning. Though I kept him informed that our house was near the park and was made of red bricks in case he got lost, I was still less confident so I suggested it would be safer if changed his walk time to the evening. That way I could take him to the park after work. However, my father — a determined person — said that he could not change his routine for just a few days and insisted that he would be leaving the house every day at 7 am and returning by 8 am. So one day when he had not returned by 8:30 am, my wife, Qaisa phoned me in a panic Worried, I immediately drove home, taking the same route that my father would have taken for his walk. Not spotting him anywhere, I drove back to the park, in the hone of discovering some trace, but in vain. Totally at a loss for what to do next, I returned home and waited impatiently, walking back and forth in the house. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At 10:35 am the doorbell rang and my father stood outside the door smiling accompanied by a young man. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of the young man’ s kindness. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 80 岁的父亲到作者位于卡拉奇的家中居住，他习惯每天早上散步一小时以保持健康。作者家离公园有 2 公里，且附近几乎没有人行道，父亲决定早上在路上走。作者虽担心但父亲坚持按自己的习惯，7 点出门 8 点回来。然而有一天父亲 8 点 30 分还未归，作者焦急寻找无果。文章中父亲的坚持散步习惯、作者对父亲安全的担忧以及提到房子特征等为后续情节发展埋下伏笔。 伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔 1：父亲的坚持散步习惯 · 续写回应：这导致他在不熟悉的环境中独自外出散步，从而有了迷路的可能性。在续写中，父亲正是在散步过程中遇到状况，被年轻人发现并送回，体现了他坚持习惯所带来的后续事件。 · 伏笔 2：作者对父亲安全的担忧及房子特征的告知 2. 续写回应：作者的担忧为父亲未按时归来时的焦急情绪做铺垫，而告知房子特征在后续父亲向年轻人求助并被送回时起到了关键作用，使得年轻人能够准确将父亲送回家，回应了前面的细节设定。 续写要点 （一）第一段 1. 描述父亲被年轻人送回来时的场景，包括父亲的状态和年轻人的解释。 2. 写出作者看到父亲时的情绪反应，如松了一口气、感激等。 3. 可以适当提及家人（如作者妻子）的表现，增加情节的丰富性。 （二）第二段 1. 详细叙述作者对年轻人的感谢方式和交流内容，体现作者的感激之情。 2. 讲述作者从这件事情中得到的启示，如对父亲照顾方式的反思、对社会善意的感受等。 3. 可以提及父亲后续的态度和行动变化，使故事有一个相对完整的结局。 情感线 文章开始作者对父亲独自外出散步有担忧，父亲未按时归来时转为焦急和恐慌，门铃响起看到父亲安全回来时变为欣慰和感激，对年轻人则充满了赞赏和谢意。情感的变化围绕父亲的行踪展开，推动故事发展。 故事线 以父亲在卡拉奇的散步经历为主线，从他坚持早上散步，到未按时归来引发作者的寻找和担忧，再到被年轻人送回，最后作者表达感激和反思，情节有起有伏，展现了一个关于亲情、担忧与善意的故事。 主旨升华句 1. Kindness is the light that brightens the darkest moments and warms the hearts of those in need.（善良是照亮最黑暗时刻的光，温暖着那些需要帮助的人的心。） 2. In a world full of uncertainties, the kindness of strangers can be a guiding star, leading us back to safety and hope.（在一个充满不确定性的世界里，陌生人的善良可以是一颗指路星，引领我们回到安全和希望之中。） 3. Every act of kindness, no matter how small, has the power to create a ripple effect of love and care in our society.（每一个善良的行为，无论多么微小，都有能力在我们的社会中产生爱和关怀的涟漪效应。） 4. The bond of family is strengthened when we face challenges together and are reminded of the importance of looking out for each other.（当我们一起面对挑战并被提醒相互照顾的重要性时，家庭的纽带会更加牢固。） 5. A simple act of kindness can turn a worrying situation into a heartwarming memory, teaching us the beauty of human connection.（一个简单的善良行为可以将一个令人担忧的情况转变为一个温暖人心的记忆，教会我们人类联系的美好。） 写作示范一 第一段 At 10:35 am the doorbell rang and my father stood outside the door smiling accompanied by a young man. I rushed to the door, my heart pounding with relief. My wife also came running, her face lighting up with joy. The young man explained that he had found my father standing on a corner, looking a bit lost and confused. My father had approached him and asked for directions to our house. The young man, being kind-hearted, decided to escort him back. I couldn't thank him enough for his kindness and thoughtfulness. My father seemed quite at ease, as if he had just had an interesting adventure. 第二段 After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of the young man’s kindness. I offered to give him a small reward as a token of my gratitude, but he refused politely. He said it was just a simple act that anyone would do in such a situation. I invited him to have lunch with us, but he declined again, saying he had other things to attend to. This incident made me realize how important it is to have a community where people look out for each other. It also made me more cautious about my father's safety. I decided to provide him with a mobile phone for emergencies and to have more detailed conversations with him about his walks. My father, too, promised to be more careful. From that day on, we were more aware of the kindness that exists in the world and the need to pay it forward. 写作示范二 第一段 At 10:35 am the doorbell rang and my father stood outside the door smiling accompanied by a young man. I was flooded with relief and gratitude. As I opened the door, my father introduced the young man to us. He said that he had lost his way and was getting a bit worried when this kind young man came to his rescue. The young man told us that he had noticed my father looking around uncertainly and when he asked, my father explained his situation. Without hesitation, the young man offered to help him find his way back home. I thanked the young man from the bottom of my heart, amazed at his kindness. 第二段 After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of the young man’s kindness. I asked for his contact information so that I could properly thank him in the future. He gave it to me with a smile and said it was really no big deal. I told my father that we needed to be more careful in the future and perhaps come up with a better plan for his walks. My father agreed, still impressed by the young man's act of kindness. This incident taught us both about the goodness that exists in people. It made us more trusting of the world around us and more determined to spread kindness whenever we could. We will always remember this day and the kind stranger who brought my father back safely, reminding us that a little kindness can go a long way in making someone's day and even changing their lives in a small but significant way. 参考答案 At 10:35 am the doorbell rang and my father stood outside the door smiling, accompanied by a young man. My father explained that he had gotten lost during his walk and ended up quite far from home. The young man, who had found my father wandering and looking confused, kindly offered to help. After listening to my father describe where he lived, the good fellow decided it was best to personally ensure his safe return rather than risk miscommunication over the phone or with directions. After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of the young man’s kindness. I thanked him genuinely, touched by his generosity and concern for an elderly stranger. We invited him in for tea, but he politely declined, stating that he was glad to have been able to assist and that he needed to get back to his own schedule. His selfless act reminded us of the goodness in people and reinforced the importance of community spirit. We saw the young man off, and I made sure to discuss with my father about carrying an emergency contact card during his future outings. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$