2025届高考英语读后专题之亲情类--在摇马的影子里，追寻祖父的爱 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Walking down the bustling streets of Los Angeles with my two children, I spotted a small shop with a playful sign reading “Toy Swap.” As we neared the entrance, my eyes fell on a white wooden rocking horse near the door. It looked eerily similar to the one my grandfather had bought for me when I was little, before he passed away and our family moved, selling many old things, including that precious rocking horse. Drawn by a mix of nostalgia and curiosity, I walked into the shop, eager to look closer. However, as soon as we stepped inside, my children excitedly pulled me in different directions, their eyes lighting up at the shelves filled with toys. They stopped in front of a large LEGO set, pleading with eager eyes, “Mom, can we get this?” Smiling, I let them choose their prize, and once they had their treasure in hand, I led them back to where the white rocking horse stood. Seeing the rocking horse flooded me with memories. As a child, my parents were often busy, and my grandmother had passed early, so my grandfather became my constant companion. He filled my life with laughter and care, and one day, he brought home a beautiful white rocking horse, calling it my "dream horse." I spent hours riding it, imagining adventures as he watched with a warm smile. Those days were joyful, and I accidentally scratched its neck. My grandfather just laughed, saying the scratch gave it character. That small mark became a memory, a part of our story. As I grew older, those happy moments with him became treasures in my heart. His gentle presence, his laughter, and his love for me were constants in a world that sometimes felt too busy and overwhelming. He always knew how to make me feel safe and loved, no matter what was happening around us. But when I entered high school, my grandfather passed away. Soon after, we had to move, and with so many things to pack and little space for storage, the family had to sell some heavy items, including my beloved rocking horse. Letting it go had felt like letting go of a part of my childhood, a piece of my heart. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 第一段续写： Suddenly, I was back in the present, standing in that small shop.  第二段续写： With tears welling up, I bought the rocking horse. 文章大意 作者带着孩子在洛杉矶街头看到一家 “玩具交换” 店，门口的白色木制摇马让作者想起了小时候祖父给自己买的同款摇马。回忆中，祖父是作者的亲密伙伴，他带来的摇马承载着许多欢乐时光，作者曾不小心划伤摇马的脖子，祖父的温暖回应成为珍贵记忆。后来祖父去世，家庭搬迁时卖掉了摇马。如今在店里看到相似的摇马，勾起了作者深深的怀念之情。 伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔 1：对旧摇马的深刻记忆 · 续写回应：在续写中，作者看到摇马时陷入回忆，触景生情，这为后续决定购买摇马埋下情感基础。如在第一段续写中，作者回到现实后，对摇马的情感更加浓烈，向孩子讲述摇马的故事，体现了这份记忆的深远影响。 · 伏笔 2：祖父的爱与陪伴 2. 续写回应：祖父的关爱是作者心中的温暖力量，续写中作者购买摇马，象征着对祖父爱的延续和传承。在第二段续写中，作者带着泪水买下摇马，回家后放置在特殊位置，让摇马在新的家庭环境中继续承载情感，回应了祖父的爱对作者的深远意义。 续写要点 （一）第一段 1. 描述作者从回忆中回到现实的场景，包括对周围环境和孩子反应的描写。 2. 详细讲述作者向孩子解释关于自己小时候摇马的故事，传达出对祖父的怀念和摇马所承载情感的珍视。 3. 可以提及孩子对故事的反应，进一步衬托出这份情感的感染力。 （二）第二段 1. 写出作者决定购买摇马的心理活动，强调情感因素在决策中的主导作用。 2. 描述购买后带着摇马回家的过程以及到家后的安置情况，如将摇马放在客厅的特殊角落。 3. 阐述摇马在新环境中的意义，它不仅是对过去的怀念，更是家庭新记忆的创造者，体现情感的传承和延续。 情感线 文章情感以对祖父的怀念和对童年美好回忆的眷恋为主线。开始看到摇马时是好奇与怀旧的交织，回忆过程中充满温暖与思念，回到现实后决定购买摇马时情感变得坚定且带着感动，最后将摇马带回家安置，情感得到升华，体现了对亲情的传承和珍视。 故事线 从在街头看到摇马引发回忆，到店内与孩子的互动及向孩子讲述故事，再到决定购买摇马并带回家，形成一个完整的情节链条。故事围绕摇马展开，通过作者的情感变化，展现了过去与现在的联系，以及亲情在时间流转中的延续。 主旨升华句 1. Memories are the threads that weave the fabric of our lives, connecting past and present with love.（记忆是编织我们生活织物的线，用爱连接过去和现在。） 2. The love of our ancestors endures through the objects that hold their essence, lighting up our hearts across time.（祖先的爱通过承载他们本质的物品而持久，穿越时间照亮我们的心。） 3. In every cherished object lies a story of love, waiting to be passed down and cherished anew in every generation.（在每一个珍贵的物品中都有一个爱的故事，等待着在每一代中被传承和重新珍视。） 4. The past may be gone, but its echoes can be found in the simple things that bring back the warmth of forgotten days.（过去可能已经过去，但它的回声可以在那些带回被遗忘日子温暖的简单事物中找到。） 5. A single object can be a bridge between generations, carrying the love and memories that bind a family together forever.（一个单一的物体可以是几代人之间的桥梁，承载着将一个家庭永远联系在一起的爱和记忆。） 写作示范一 第一段 Suddenly, I was back in the present, standing in that small shop. The hustle and bustle of the outside world seemed to fade away as I stared at the rocking horse, my heart filled with a mixture of emotions. My children, sensing my stillness, looked up at me with questioning eyes. I took a deep breath and said, "Kids, this rocking horse reminds me of my own when I was your age. Grandpa gave it to me, and we had so many wonderful times together." Their faces lit up with interest as I recounted the stories of riding it, the adventures I imagined, and the special bond I had with my grandfather. The shop around us seemed to hold its breath, as if time had paused to listen to my memories. 第二段 With tears welling up, I bought the rocking horse. Carrying it out of the shop, I felt a weight of emotion in my heart, but also a sense of relief. When we got home, I placed it in a corner of the living room where it could catch the sunlight. My children immediately surrounded it, their eyes full of wonder. As they climbed onto it, I saw a new chapter beginning. This rocking horse was not just a toy from the past, but a symbol of love that would continue to live on in our family. It would remind us of the importance of family, the power of memories, and the never-ending cycle of love that passes from one generation to the next. In that moment, I knew that my grandfather's spirit was still with us, and this rocking horse would keep his memory alive. 写作示范二 第一段 Suddenly, I was back in the present, standing in that small shop. The sound of my children's chatter brought me back to the moment, but my gaze remained fixed on the rocking horse. I crouched down next to my kids and said softly, "This rocking horse is like a time capsule, taking me back to when Grandpa was here. He used to watch me ride it with so much love in his eyes." I told them about the days when I would pretend to be on a wild adventure, and Grandpa would be there, cheering me on. The children listened intently, their eyes wide with fascination. The shop seemed to transform into a place of memories, filled with the echo of laughter and the warmth of my grandfather's presence. 第二段 With tears welling up, I bought the rocking horse. As we walked home, I carried it carefully, as if it were a precious treasure. Once home, I placed it in a prominent place in the living room. That evening, as the sun set and cast a golden glow on the rocking horse, I sat beside it, lost in thought. It was more than just a toy; it was a connection to my past, a bridge to my grandfather's love. My children, drawn to its charm, came and sat with me. And in that moment, I realized that the rocking horse would continue to tell its story, passing on the love and memories to another generation. It was a reminder that no matter how much time passes, the bonds of family and the power of love are eternal, living on through the simple things that hold our hearts. 参考答案 第一段续写： Suddenly, I was back in the present, standing in that small shop. My hand rested on the familiar white wood of the horse, and a wave of recognition hit me. I leaned closer, my heart pounding. This was the rocking horse—my grandfather’s gift from so many years ago. The gentle curves, the small scratch on its left side from a childhood fall—everything matched. It was unmistakable. Somehow, through a twist of fate, my grandfather's gift had found its way back to me. 第二段续写 With tears welling up, I bought the rocking horse. Bringing the rocking horse home was more than remembering an old toy. It brought me back to a cherished piece of my childhood and the love that my grandfather had shared with me. That evening, as my children took turns riding it, their laughter filling the room, I could almost feel my grandfather’s presence nearby. Watching them, I sensed his gentle smile, as though he were here with us, sharing in the joy once again. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$