读后续写个人成长篇课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

英语读后续写 (个人成长篇) 读后续写秘籍 5 要素（4W+H） 1 主旨 4 衔接 4 描写手法 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Oh no. Coach Cafferty just said my name. For that event. The two-hundred-metre breaststroke for the coming meet! Not the backstroke I had wished and practiced for so long! Beads of sweat popped out over my upper lip. Morgan pressed her elbow into my side, trying to offer me moral support. But it didn't help. My stomach sank to my knees like a brick in water. Morgan tried to convince me it would be fine. "Maybe Coach has more confidence in you than you think. Or maybe Coach Cafferty just want to give the rest a laugh when I sink to the bottom of the pool," I thought desperately. I walked towards Coach Cafferty and told her about my inability and my desire to quit this event. She frowned and asked if it was what I really wanted. I hesitated. Placing her hand on my shoulder, she started smiling and encouraged me to push myself outside of my comfort zone. 汗珠从我的上唇冒出来 The first practice was a disaster. I lost rhythm on my strokes. I messed up my turns. I even had to stop and catch my breath a few times. I felt everyone was laughing at me and my stomach twisted. How could I make it within just two weeks? But once I dragged myself out of the water, exhausted and frustrated, Coach Cafferty thumbed up to me, saying I did really well and just needed more confidence in myself and more time to practice. On the way back home, Morgan comforted me, "Dear, just ignore others. Race against yourself. Count your own strokes. Prove to yourself that you can do it." With these words said to me almost every day, before or after each practice, something gradually changed: both how I swam the breaststroke and how I felt about the event as well as myself. The meet finally came. I arrived at the pool hall, still a little bit worried. As each event clicked closer to mine, my knees shook. I bit my lip and looked out over the other swimmers. Morgan leaned forward. "Just swim your race. Remember, you can!" 随着每个比赛项目逐渐接近，我的膝盖不停地颤抖。 注意： 续写词数应为150左右； 请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： Then the two-hundred-milestone breaststroke was announced. Paragraph 2： There was only 50 meters to go. 分析文章 When Where Who What How 秘籍5144 之“5”要素 some day a breaststrike meet I, Coach Cafferty, Morgan ①I need attend a two-hundred-metre breastoke，which I wasn’t good at. ②Although I did a lot practice, I still felt anxious and worried. ③My couch and friend encouraged me to have confidence in myself. a anxious/ worried---persistent--delighted 克服挑战，突破自己 Embracing challenges with courage and determination, individuals must conquer their boundaries, ultimatey attaining personal growth and achievement. 秘籍5144 之“1”主旨 7 4 3 2 1 秘籍5144 之“4”衔接 Then the two-hundred-milestone breaststroke was announced. How would I react to the situation? like what kind of preparation... 第一段末尾 I met some problems, but the coach’s words pushed me forward. There was only 50 meters to go. How did I overcome the difficulty? My stomach sank to my knees like a brick in water. ；confidence； I lost rhythm on my strokes； exhausted and frustrated;Race against yourself; "Just swim your race. Remember, you can! .... 回扣文本 第一段：然后宣布了两百米蛙泳的比赛项目。听着这声音，我非常紧张，感到自己双膝发软，手心冒汗。于是我深吸了一口气，试图让自己镇定下来，但是不起作用。随着一声哨响，我与其他选手一起跳进了水中，努力往终点线游去。然而，意外发生了。由于过于紧张，我游泳的节奏被打乱。正当我身体开始慢慢下沉时，我想起了教练的话，“相信自己，我可以的”，带着这种信念，我鼓起勇气，再次调整呼吸和泳姿，成功地往前游去。此时，比赛已经过去了四分之三。 Compare these two sentenses: Version 1 Monkey was bored with his Master. Version 2 With his eyebrows knitted together, Monkey shouted impatiently, “stop it”, covering his ears with both hands. 直抒胸臆类 脉脉含情类 ①听着这声音，我非常紧张，感到自己双膝发软，手心冒汗。 非谓语动词，主句，非谓语动词 Hearing the sound, I was overwhelmed with tension, feeling my knees soft and my palms sweating . ②于是我深吸了一口气，试图让自己镇定下来，但是不起作用。 Therefore, I took a deep breath, attempting to compose myself, but in vain. 主句，分词作伴随状语 ③随着一声哨响，我与其他选手一起跳进了水中，努力往终点线游去。 With的复合结构作状语 With the sound of a whistle echoing, I dived into the pool together with other competitors and made efforts to swim forward. ④正当我身体开始慢慢下沉时，我想起了同伴的话，“相信自己，我可以的”， be doing...when...正要...时，突然.... My body was sinking to the bottom of the pool when the coach’s words occurred to me, “swim your race. Remember, you can!" ⑤带着这种信念，我鼓起勇气，再次调整呼吸和泳姿，成功地往前游去。 动作链： 主语+ did A、did B and did C With this belief, I plucked my courage, adjusted my breath and stroke and swam towards the finishing line sucessfully. 第二段：只剩下50米了。我必须更加比之前要更努力了。尽管我这时候已经非常疲惫，我仍然拒绝放弃，并且坚信我肯定能完成比赛。相反，我更集中注意力于游泳本身，忽略了其他，身边只有一种声音围绕着，那就是，“与自己比赛，计算自己的划水次数”。最终，当我触碰到墙并望向得分版时，我的内心无比自豪和欣喜, 眼里流出了喜悦的泪水。我成功了，我真的成功了。通过这件事，我恍然大悟到，我们只要相信自己，走出舒适圈，一定能够做到任何事。 第二段：只剩下50米了。我必须更加比之前要更努力了。尽管我这时候已经非常疲惫，我仍然拒绝放弃。相反，我更集中注意力于游泳本身，忽略了其他。最终，当我触碰到墙并望向得分板上我的名字时，我的内心无比自豪和欣喜，眼里流出了喜悦的泪水。 我成功了。通过这件事，我恍然大悟到，我们只要相信自己，走出舒适圈，一定能够做到任何事。 I need swim faster than before. I still refused to give up. Exhausted as I was at that moment, Instead, I paid my whole attention to my stroke, ignoring angthing else. Eventually, I touching the wall and noticing the name on the scoreboard, my heart filled with pride and delight and my eyes were wet with tears of joy. I made it. From the race, it dawned on me that We were capable of anything if we just believed in ourselves and pushed ourselves outside of the confort zone. Then the two-hundred-milestone breaststroke was announced. Hearing the sound, I was overwhelmed with tension, feeling my knees soft and my palms sweating .Therefore, I took a deep breath, attempting to compose myself, but in vain. With the sound of a whistle echoing, I dived into the pool together with other competitors and made efforts to swim forward. However, something happened unexpectedly. Due to my anxiety, the rhythm was disturbed. My body was sinking to the bottom of the pool when the coach’s words occurred to me, “swim your race. Remember, you can!"With this belief, I plucked my courage, adjusted my breath and stroke and swam towards the finishing line sucessfully. At this point, three-quaters of the race had already passed. 试水作文 There was only 50 meters to go. I need swim faster than before. Exhausted and tired as I was at that moment, I still refused to give up, holding the firm belief that I definitely can finish the race. Instead, I paid my whole attention to my stroke, ignoring angthing else. there was only one sound surrounding me, that was, “Race against yourself. Count your own strokes.” Eventually, I touching the wall and noticing the name on the scoreboard, my heart filled with pride and delight and my eyes were also wet with tears of joy. I made it. I indeed make it. From the race, it dawned on me that we were capable of completing anything if we just believed in ourselves and pushed ourselves outside of the confort zone. 漂亮的书写 合理的逻辑 巧妙的衔接 高级的表达 满分作文 读后续写秘籍 5 要素（4W+H） 1 主旨 4 衔接 4 描写手法 Homework Correct your composition written in the test. Rewrite it in your exercise book, applying what we learned in this period. 24 THANK YOU $$