读后续写：救救猫咪 讲义-2025届天域联考高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

练习(救救猫咪): 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sweat dripped from Callie’s face as she helped her big brother Briggs load hay bales(干草捆)onto the conveyor (输送机). She wasn't strong enough to lift them herself, but she could at least help drag them into place. The machine chattered noisily while it carried the bales up to the hayloft(干草棚), where Callie's dad stacked(码放) them. All was quiet when Callie went inside to feed the horses. But as she filled the water buckets, she thought she heard a faint meow from the hayloft. She climbed the steps to the loft and listened. The sound seemed to be coming from behind the bales. She ran to get her dad and Briggs. Briggs cocked his head. “It’s coming from outside,” he determined. “Just a bird in a tree.” Callies dad agreed. “How do you know for sure?” Callie said. “I guess we've just got better ears than you,” Briggs joked. But Callie wasn't convinced. She checked the hayloft again after supper. “Are you stuck in there, kitty?” she said, pressing an ear to the bales. “Meooow!” Callie raced back to the house. “I heard it again, Dad! Will you please listen once more?” “All right, Cal,” her dad said, turning off the TV. “I'll go check while you get ready for bed.” A few minutes later, Dad poked his head into Callie's room. “The only thing I heard out there was a screech owl,” he said. “So stop worrying.” “OK, Dad,” Callie said. “Thanks for checking.” But she woke in the night thinking about what she'd heard. What if a kitten was trapped behind the bales? She lay on her back, wondering what to do. Finally, she grabbed a flashlight and crept into the barn. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Once in the barn, she shined the flashlight's beam toward the ladder. Paragraph 2: Finally, Callie picked up the scared kitten from the corner of the hayloft. 课堂讲解(教师版): 【原文词汇】 汗水从Callie脸上滴下来 Sweat dripped from Callie’s face 机器吱吱作响 The machine chatter noisily 微弱的喵喵声 a faint meow 仰起头cock his head 探头poke his head 尖叫screech 蹑手蹑脚进谷仓crept into the barn 【段一】 1.环境描写 – 视觉 weather-beaten. adj 粗糙的，饱经风霜的 weathered. adj 风化的，斑驳的. ascend. v. 上升 eg. The path started to ascend more steeply./ Her heart was thumping as she ascended the stairs. descend. v. 下降；下来 光束穿透了黑暗的面纱，在通往干草棚的斑驳的木梯上投下微弱的光芒——这是未知喵喵叫生物的来源。 The beam pierced the veil of darkness, casting an amber glow on the weathered wooden ladder that ascended into the hayloft – the source of the unknown meow-creature. 2. 动作描写 + 听觉 creak and groan吱吱作响 tranquility .n. 宁静 Callie立刻爬上台阶，每一步都在她轻微的重量下吱吱作响，打破了之前的绝对宁静. Instantly Callie crept onto the steps, each step creaking and groaning under her slight weight, cutting through the previous absolute tranquility. 3. 嗅觉 + 情绪描写 The air was dense(浓密的) with earthy scent(泥土味) of dried hay and dust, along with the faintest hint of fear (一丝恐惧). However, that did not stop her. 4. 心理活动 distress. n. 痛苦；危难 eg: The newspaper article caused the actor considerable distress. He expressed concern that the ship might be in distress. propel. v. 推动，促使 eg: Fury propelled her into action. 想到一个无助的小生命仍然在困难中，(这)促使她就继续向前，坚定了她坚持使命的决心。 The thought of a helpless creature in distress propelled her forward, toughening her resolve to persevere in her mission. 5. 原文协同(听觉) + 段二段首呼应 startle.v. 使惊吓 Eventually(最终) as she reached the summit(顶端) of the ladder, a startled "meow"(惊恐的猫叫声) slipped into the night again, sharp and distinct(尖锐而清晰). “Kitten!” Callie responded in exhilaration(激动地). conceal. v. 掩盖，隐藏 带着一股强烈的同情，她在迷宫般草堆中穿行，双手轻柔地拨开了掩盖声音来源的障碍物。 With a surge of empathy, she navigated the maze of bales, her hands gently parting the barrier that concealed the source of the sound. 【段二】 1.小猫描写：情绪 residual .adj.残留的 Its tiny body quivered(发抖) with a blend of relief and residual terror(放松混合着残留的恐惧). 2.互动描写 The kitten's eyes, wide with shock, softened(变得柔和) as they met Callie's gentle gaze(温柔的凝视). 在那一刻，一种纽带被建立起来，一种对安全和舒适的无声承诺。 An that moment, a bond was forged, a silent promise of safety and comfort. 3. Callie动作描写 cradle.v. 轻抱 Callie把这个脆弱的小毛球抱在胸前，轻声说着安抚的话语，心中充满了成就感和无限的爱。 Callie cradled the fragile ball of fur close to her chest, whispering soothing words, her heart swelling with a sense of accomplishment and a love that knew no bounds. 4. 次要人物出场 + 互动 halo.v. 光环 As she descended(下来) down the ladder, she could hear the anxious voices of her father and Briggs calling out to her. “I’m here!” Callie emerged from the barn, the flashlight's glow enveloping her like a halo of angel (像天使的光环一样笼罩着她). "You made it, Callie," her father said with approval(赞许地). Briggs, his skepticism replaced by admiration(怀疑被钦佩所代替), reached out to touch the kitten gently. "You were right, Callie." he admitted, his tone filled with newfound respect (充满了新的尊重). 5. 总结事件+主旨升华 The night, which had begun with doubt and dismissal(怀疑和不理会), ended with a chorus of purrs(一阵呼噜声) and the quiet acknowledgment of Callie's tenacity.(对Callie的坚韧的无声的承认). canopy. n.顶棚，天棚 在马厩的寂静中，在浩瀚的星空下，一个家庭的纽带得到了加强，一条小生命得救了，这一切使因为一个小女孩的细心、同情、勇气，最重要的是，坚持不懈的品质。 n the stillness of the barn, under the vast canopy of stars, a family's bond was strengthened, and a small life was saved, all on account of a little girl’s carefulness, compassion, courage, and above all, the quality of perseverance. 课堂讲解(学生版): 【原文词汇】 【原文词汇】 汗水从Callie脸上滴下来 _________________________________ 机器吱吱作响 _________________________________ 微弱的喵喵声 _________________________________ 仰起头_________________________________ 探头_________________________________ 尖叫_________________________________ 蹑手蹑脚进谷仓_________________________________ 【段一】 1.环境描写 – 视觉 weather-beaten. adj_________________________________ weathered. adj_________________________________ ascend. v. _________________________________ eg. The path started to ascend more steeply./ Her heart was thumping as she ascended the stairs. descend. v. _________________________________ 光束穿透了黑暗的面纱，在通往干草棚的斑驳的木梯上投下微弱的光芒——这是未知喵喵叫生物的来源。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 动作描写 + 听觉 creak and groan_________________________ tranquility_________________________ Callie立刻爬上台阶，每一步都在她轻微的重量下吱吱作响，打破了之前的绝对宁静. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 嗅觉 + 情绪描写 The air was _________(浓密的) with ________________(泥土味) of dried hay and dust, along with _______________________ (一丝恐惧). However, that did not stop her. 4. 心理活动 distress. n. _______________________ eg: The newspaper article caused the actor considerable distress. He expressed concern that the ship might be in distress. propel. v. _______________________ eg: Fury propelled her into action. 想到一个无助的小生命仍然在困难中，(这)促使她就继续向前，坚定了她坚持使命的决心。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 5. 原文协同(听觉) + 段二段首呼应 startle.v. ________________________ ________________ (最终) as she reached the ________________ (顶端) of the ladder, __________________________(惊恐的猫叫声) slipped into the night again, _____________________(尖锐而清晰). “Kitty!” Callie responded _______________________ (激动地). conceal. v. ____________________ 带着一股强烈的同情，她在迷宫般草堆中穿行，双手轻柔地拨开了掩盖声音来源的障碍物。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【段二】 1.小猫描写：情绪 residual _____________ Its tiny body ________________(发抖) with ______________________________________ (放松混合着残留的恐惧). 2.互动描写 The kitten's eyes, wide with shock, __________________ (变得柔和) as they met Callie's _______________________(温柔的凝视). 在那一刻，一种纽带被建立起来，一种对安全和舒适的无声承诺。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. Callie动作描写 cradle.v. ____________________ 卡利把这个脆弱的小毛球抱在胸前，轻声说着安抚的话语，心中充满了成就感和无限的爱 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 次要人物出场 + 互动 halo.v. _______________________________ As she ______________ (下来) down the ladder, she could hear the anxious voices of her father and Briggs calling out to her. “I’m here!” Callie emerged from the barn, the flashlight's glow ___________________________________________ (像天使的光环一样笼罩着她). "You made it, Callie," her father said ________________________(赞许地). Briggs, his ________________________________ (怀疑被钦佩所代替), reached out to touch the kitten gently. "You were right, Callie." he admitted, his tone ________________________________ (充满了新的尊重). 5. 总结事件+主旨升华 The night, which had begun with ______________________ (怀疑和不理会), ended with __________________(一阵呼噜声) and _____________________________________.(对Callie的坚韧的无声的承认). canopy. n.顶棚，天棚 在马厩的寂静中，在浩瀚的星空下，一个家庭的纽带得到了加强，一条小生命得救了，这一切使因为一个小女孩的细心、同情、勇气，最重要的是，坚持不懈的品质。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$